2021高考英语读后续写

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yellow blouse
walked
Tom
helicopter Jane
climbed stream
lake
at a distance
to her great joy
Narration—6 elements
Who is the main character? Jane , Tom When did the story happen? one weekend in July Where did the story happen? in the forest What happened in the story? Jane was lost
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)
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where who What(v)/(n) How(a dj)
But… getting dark again
stream Tom
lake
Jane
at a distance
climbed walked yellow blouse
to her great joy
It was daybreak
helicopter
Why was the story caused? an unpleasant subject How was the story ended? came up
In what order is the story developed? One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
The usage of verbs
v-ing 作状语 she turned around, hoping to see the lake. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an with 的复合结构 With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time 被动语态 She suddenly realized that she was lost. hear的复合结构 She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere 倒装 Never in her life had she tasted anything better.
Design a mind mapping(outline) to show your discussion result
Climax
heard, took off, thinking that ...
hopeful no more helicopters
saw, drank, ate joyful
Para1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark
again feelings:regretful,disappointed
sleep in the forest
What did Jane do that night？
think about Tom
Focus on:
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top.
Analyze the given information &predict
the development
Jane ,Tom , lake ,walked, climbed, at a distance,
stream, to her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse
as night was beginning to fall
high place
Jane
rose at the break of day stream
Jane
But… getting dark again
was lost cried kept moving had to stop wanted
saw heard drank ate took off
According to the timeline fill in the blank
When
One weekend in July
where )who
in the forest by a lake
Jane Tom
What(v)
quarreled, walked away
How (adj)
angry
frightened regretful confused
joyful hopeful
It was daybreak
classify the underlined words
Jane ,Tom , lake ,walked, climbed, at a distance, stream, to her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse
it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for
me? A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. para1But no more helicopters came and it was dark. ______________________________ para2It was daybreak when Jane woke up. ___________________________________
New groups(recombine) ——课上生成新组
Each group’s No.1 Each group’s No.2 Each group’s No.3 Each group’s No.4 Each group’s No.5 Each group’s No.6
The new group1 The new group2 The new group3 The new group4 The new group5 The new group6
Continuation writing
读后续写要求：根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成 一个完整的故事。
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词 语。
Write your story
also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she
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wanted regretful
actions?
cried got lost frightened
feelings?
woke up
quarrelled angry
rescued
Beginning
Ending
Use rich languages in your story The usage of adjectives
Para2 It was daybreak when Jane woke up
to her great joy
Would Jane be rescued?
Discuss
What Jane did for survival? How would she react when seeing Tom ?
课前小组任务分配
role connector passage person plot predictor discussion leader language master presenter
group group1 group2 group3 group4 group5 group6
Reading Circle
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adj作伴随状语 Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty.
the more.....the more..... the farther she walked, the more confused she became.
so...that... Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night.
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