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高考英语作文真题训练50题含参考范文

高考英语作文真题训练50题含参考范文

高考英语写作真题训练50题含参考范文学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________一、概要写作1.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Hugging’s Evolutionary OriginsAfter long stretches of social isolation, many of us are longing for the warmth of a hug. Degges-White, a professor focused on social relationships, says that our need for a hug goes all the way back to the survival of our species. When we’re born, we can’t care for ourselves and we need to be comfortable with being held in order to survive. We’re rewarded with a rush of feel-good hormones that come from a nice embrace.When we hug, our brains release the oxytocin hormone, making us feel connected. This connection and sense of community has an important evolutionary role because for humans, the security of our small groups and later communities was crucial to survival. Close contact helped build civilization. We may not know what we are getting from greeting our friends and family with a hug; we just enjoy it. It isn’t until those experiences are taken away that we feel pain and sadness. An elbow bump or air greeting are not enough. Research published in the journal Psychological Science has shown that hugging has a “stress cushioning” effect that may even protect us from chronic illness and infections.When children don’t experience healthy touch, it can impact their development. Kids who didn’t grow up being held, miss out on that sense of safety and protection. They may act out or isolate themselves from those around them. In some cases, the opposite may also be true. Some children may show too much affection, eager for any form of positive attention that they didn’t get at home.Still, to hug or not to hug? That’s the question right now. According to Degges-White, if you’re both vaccinated, go for it; research has shown that the risk of transmission is extremely low. And if you’re vaccinated but you don’t know for sure whether the person you’re hugging has also been vaccinated, it’s still most likely safe.【答案】Hugging has an evolutionary origin. First, new-borns need hugging to survive, for it makes them feel comfortable. Besides, hugging means close contact, which helped to build civilization. When people hug, they feel more bonded. Additionally, hugging helps people feel less stressed and its absence can affect kids’ development negatively. Therefore, huggingis recommended for people who are vaccinated.【解析】【导语】本文是一篇说明文。

新高考英语作文写作指导和解读——高中英语应用文的训练思维(附高考英语写作提分四个训练步骤)

新高考英语作文写作指导和解读——高中英语应用文的训练思维(附高考英语写作提分四个训练步骤)

新高考英语作文写作指导和解读——高中英语应用文的训练思维(附高考英语写作提分四个训练步骤)新高考英语作文写作指导与解读——高中英语应用文的训练思维(附高考英语写作提分四个训练步骤)对于高一学生的写作指导,基本围绕两个方面:基本句型的准确运用;思维逻辑的初步训练。

先说句型,鉴于这节课的学生英语水平比较薄弱,所以强化常用的套话,譬如it句型,there be句型。

写作的顺序基本都从套话的模仿开始的。

再说思维,围绕:为什么,结果如何。

步骤:1.学生的作文错误分析归类2.实例指导板书实例指导这个指导过程也很有讲究的,因为我认为写作就是自然续写过程,遵守一般写作规律:列提纲和遣词造句。

写作水平的提高关键就是两步:提纲中的思维的科学性;遣词造句要符合体裁的得体性。

高级写作,还要关注写作的简洁性。

课堂实例的问题:1.选择一个专业原因是什么?(1.专业的有用;2.个人的兴趣;3.就业的需求)2.计算机专业的用处学生回答:方便人们工作和生活,促进发展:学生写:It makes people work conveniently.这个句子没有问题,但是我们思考一下convenient更常见的表达是:make it convenient for sb to do...3.介绍个人我掌握了计算机的知识,所以我很适合。

I know a lot about computer science, so I am fit for the major.措词上思考:掌握的常用表达;适合这里准确说是合格。

所以我们要考虑申请信的常用的表达是:be qualified for...所以润色后(擦掉初步的简易版本后板书)I believe a good knowledge of computer science qualifes me for the major.写作的教学遵守的模式非常多,无所谓高下,适合自己的风格就是最好的。

就我而言,我开始摒弃体裁写作教学法(即先给例子和语料,然后模仿。

备战高考英语作文满分突破真题讲解:中国传统节日春节话题词汇与演讲稿写作

备战高考英语作文满分突破真题讲解:中国传统节日春节话题词汇与演讲稿写作

春节是农历的第一个月的第一天。
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Step 3 Useful words and expressions
2. Dates of Festivals 阳历(国历)solar calendar
一月January 二月February 三月March 四月April 五月May 六月June 七月July 八月August 九月September 十月October 十一月November 十二月December 一月1日January 1(st) 5月5日 May 5(th) 7月7日July 7(th)
Fall on the first day of the first lunar month Celebrate, last
Date back to Date back/ date from Celebrate it in memory of
Step 2 Vocabularies reviewing
注意:国历日期的英式与美式写法以及读法略有不同:
1987年4月10日 英式:20th April, 1987; 读成:the twentieth of April, nineteen eighty-seven 美式:April 20(th),1987 读成:April the twentieth, nineteen eighty-seven
“421高中英语话题作文整体教学模式”新授课流程

高考英语作文满分突破24个话题真题讲解:第5期 话题10中国传统节日春节邀请信和询问信写作

高考英语作文满分突破24个话题真题讲解:第5期 话题10中国传统节日春节邀请信和询问信写作
1.演讲稿首段(自我介绍+演讲话题引入) My name is Li Hua, a senior student coming from Hongguang Middle School. It’s my
great honor to make a speech here. Today my topic is “The Spring Festival”. 2.演讲稿尾段(总结全文+致谢)
on New Year’s Eve, setting off fireworks, going to temple fairs and so on. Besides,
举例: you can also put on Spring Festival couplets on doors and put up paper cutouts on
and so on. I’d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.
by observing its traditional festivals with native people, so I’m writing to invite you to
主题句: 概括、抽象
my home and celebrate the traditional Chinese New Year. When you come, you will take part in various activities such as having a feast
养成良好的答题习惯,是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。做题前, 要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项,并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时,切忌 跟着感觉走,最好按照题目序号来做,不会的或存在疑问的,要做好标记,要 善于发现,找到题目的题眼所在,规范答题,书写工整;答题完毕时,要认真检 查,查漏补缺,纠正错误。总之,在最后的复习阶段,学生们不要加大练习量。 在这个时候,学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式,最重要的是以平常心去面 对考试。英语最后的复习要树立信心,考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”, 遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。越到最后,考生越要回归基础,单词最好再梳 理一遍,这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺 复习方法。

备战高考英语作文满分突破真题讲解:第11期 话题10 给外国友人介绍京剧和邀请参加京剧脸谱艺术展写作

备战高考英语作文满分突破真题讲解:第11期 话题10 给外国友人介绍京剧和邀请参加京剧脸谱艺术展写作

Para.2 活动内容(看展出,画脸谱……)
The highlight is that you can learn to paint Peking Opera facial make-up under professional guidance. By the way, bilingual service is available throughout the exhibition.
With a history of nearly 200 years is considered as the quintessence(精华) of Chinese culture Be originally formed in Beijing in the Qing Dynasty and gradually popular in the whole country Now it’s the representative of the modern Chinese Han opera as well as an opera of world-class. The performers in ornate(华丽的) costume perform various stories that happened in history to audience by singing, dancing and moving.
审题 话 题: 传统文化京剧脸谱 体 裁:应用文—邀请信 主体时态:一般将来时态 主要人称:第三人称 写信对象:外教Jim 显性要点:
1. 活动的时间和地点; 2. 活动内容(看展出,画脸谱……)
写作提纲 (显性+隐性要点) Para.1 问好+写信背景+写信目的; Para.2 1. 活动的时间和地点;

读后续写高分句型讲义 2023届高考英语作文备考

读后续写高分句型讲义 2023届高考英语作文备考

读后续写高分句型及练习建构维度1:独立主格01句型一主语+谓语……,主格名词+doing…先看个例子:He stood there, tears of gratitude welling up in his eyes.翻译:他站在那里,眼里涌出感激的泪水。

解析:该句使用了“主格名词+doing”的结构作伴随状语,这一结构也叫做“独立主格结构”,He是句子的主语,tears只能降级为主格,是非谓语动词welling动作的实施者,但不是整个句子的主语。

练习一下:常见类型1. 名词(代词)+ 现在分词The clock __________(敲) twelve, I went to bed. (表原因)答案:striking2. 名词(代词)+ 过去分词He lay there on his back, his teeth __________(咬紧牙关), his right hand clenched on his breast. (表伴随)答案:set3. 名词(代词)+ 形容词短语Her face ________(苍白) with anger, she rose to go away. (表原因)答案:pale4. 名词(代词)+ 介词短语Then, last night, I followed him here and climbed in, sword ___________(在手里). (表方式)答案:in hand5. 名词(代词)+ 副词短语__________________(夏天结束了), the students returned to school. (表原因)答案:Summer over03建构维度2:with的复合结构在作文中的运用01with + 宾语 + 形容词/副词/名词/介词短语/v-ing/v-ed/to do1.with + 宾语+ 副词The square looks more beautiful with __________________(所有的灯都亮时). 答案:the lights onWith _____________________(父母不在), Tom becomes more naughty.答案:his parents away2. with + 宾语+ 形容词With__________________________(门窗大开), the room was very cold.答案:the door and windows open wideWith ____________________(她父母死了), the girl had to leave school.答案:her parents dead3.with + 宾语+ 介词短语The teacher came in with____________________(手里拿着书走进来).答案: a book in his handThe girl looked up with _____________________(眼泪汪汪).答案:tears in her eyes4.with + 宾语+ 名词They set up a football team, with ____________________(汤姆当队长).答案:Tom their headWith _________________(有本地人当向导), we needn't be afraid to get lost. 答案:a native our guide5.with + 宾语+ 现在分词(表主动,表进行)With ____________________(老师站在旁边),she felt a bit uneasy .答案:the teacher standing besideWith __________________________________________ (随着冬天的到来)the weather is becoming colder and colder.答案:winter coming/approaching/drawing near/around the corner,6.with + 宾语+ 过去分词(表被动表完成)With ______________________(工作完成了), she felt greatly relieved.答案:the work doneWith __________________________________(他的注意力集中在他书上),he didn't notice me come .答案:his attention focused/fixed on his book句型结构暂时就写到这里,当然还有虚拟语气和倒装句等句型很不错现在要说说03构建维度3:情绪类句型01So+情绪adj.+部分倒装+that从句翻译1:他气得冲出教室。

高中英语作文专题讲解

作文第一,高考英语作文常用句形和常用词1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。

一些人认为……There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______. Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。

首先,……;其次,……。

更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。

Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。

它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,…… People‟s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

高考英语作文题讲解

高考英语作文题讲解The high school English exam essay question is often a source of anxiety for many students. It requires careful planning, clear writing, and critical thinking. Students need to be able to express their ideas and arguments effectively in order to score well on this part of the exam.One important thing to remember when writing the essayis to stay focused on the topic. It's easy to get sidetracked and start rambling on about unrelated issues. This can lead to a loss of coherence and can confuse the reader. So, it's important to keep the main topic in mind and stick to it throughout the essay.Another key aspect of a successful essay is the use of evidence to support your arguments. This can come in the form of examples, statistics, or expert opinions. It's important to use a variety of sources to back up yourpoints and to show that you have considered different perspectives on the issue.In addition, it's important to consider the structure of the essay. A well-organized essay will have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single point or idea and should be linked to the overall argument of the essay.Finally, it's important to proofread and edit your essay before submitting it. This will help to catch any spelling or grammar mistakes, as well as any inconsistencies or logical errors in your argument. It's also a good idea to have someone else read over your essay to get a fresh perspective and to catch any mistakes you might have missed.In conclusion, the high school English exam essay is a challenging but important part of the exam. By staying focused, using evidence effectively, organizing your essay well, and proofreading carefully, you can improve your chances of success. Good luck!。

高考英语作文讲解PPT课件


Li Hua
实例写作
( 全国Ⅱ) 假设你是李华,你的 笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现 需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告诉招聘信息。内容主要包括:
6、非谓语动词出错 3.开头语已为你写好,请将完整的回信写出来。
2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础)
Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital.
As he is seriously ill,
Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. (Seen)
学生英语作文中10种常见错误剖析
is
• 4、谓语动词用法出错
• He dressed in a new coat.
• Great changes have been taken place.
• When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.
2、谓语缺失 He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. She in the classroom yesterday. were
was
3、There be 句型出错 Five There are five students play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field.
school? Yesterday, we went there and water them. The tree you planted

2023届新高考英语作文训练1讲义

申请信(2023·全国卷I改编)假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。

请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。

注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;1.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。

Dear Sir or Madam,(说明工作信息提出申请)I'm a student taking summer courses in London now. Learning that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in先用现在分词作状语+被动句,说明信息内容,再用固定句式,表明自己your local art gallery, I can't wait to apply for the position.迫切的心情(详述个人优势和能做的事情)Firstly, my fluent English enables me to communicate smoothly with British painting lovers. Moreover, with a wide knowledge of Chinese painting, I can introduce the art form better. Better yet,利用介词短语说明自己的第二个优势I've participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience. 非限制性定语从句+高级表达,说明相关工作经验(表达决心,期待回复)If accepted, I will spare no effort to introduce those省略句式简洁明了,再次为文章添彩paintings on display and answer questions patiently. I'd appreciate it if you could consider my application.Yours,Li Hua1 enable sb. to do sth. 使某人能够做某事2 spare no effort 不遗余力3 on display 展出假定你是李华,正在伦敦交流学习。

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高考英语作文训练讲解作文训练评判作文的标准第一档:一塌糊涂(messy);第二档:糊里糊涂(cloudy);第三档:马马虎虎(common);第四档:清清楚楚(clear);第五档:漂漂亮亮(cool)。

20分以上作文踩点扣分18分以下作文踩点给分好作文的标准书写清晰明了,无填涂结构合情合理审题明确中心突出行文语言流畅准确不是单纯拼凑阅卷老师一目了然句式丰富使用较多的高中阶段学过的单词词组内容积极乐观情感饱满体现个人良好的价值观人生观作文书写态度决定高度attitudedeterminesaltitude传达两种思想:我很认真,我要拿高分五要:干净,整洁,压线,分三段,ghfyIs字母重点注意恰当的大小可以遮丑五不要:添涂,伞型,一逗到底,上蹦下蹿,随意,瘦小挤在一起,硕大无比注意:字母要善于辨认,字母之间有间隔单词之间不能隔太开忽大忽小大概一行十一到十三字开头结尾一个单词拼写也不能错开头结尾三到四行不能有语法错误作文结构开头总对提示语或图片进行解释阐明观点开门见山。

一针见血3~4行中间分提出问题解决问题办法结果情绪饱满10~12行结尾总总结观点收获前后呼应感情升华3~4行好单词老师偏爱“学得晚”的单词,因为使用学得比较晚的单词,可以体现一个人“学以致用”的意识。

(1)Adj.困难的黯然低分词:difficult闪光高分词:tough艰难的challenging?有挑战性的(2)Adj.重要的黯然低分词:important闪光高分词:vital?至关重要的;essential?必不可少的;significant?有重要意义的;(3)Adj.美丽的黯然低分词:beautiful闪光高分:appealing动人的;attractive?吸引人的;charming迷人的;fascinating?迷人的(4)adj.?不开心的黯然低分词:sad闪光高分词:discouraged气馁的;depressed沮丧的;downhearted垂头丧气的;low-spirited 意志消沉的;breakdown 在阅卷老师看来,活用短语是一个考生能力的体现。

因此,我们可以掌握一些将某些常见单词转化为短语的用法,如:(5)v.?参加黯然低分词:join闪光高分词:takepartin、participatein(6)v.?使用黯然低分词:use闪光高分词:makegooduseof、makethebestof(7)v.?拜访黯然低分词:visit闪光高分词:payavisitto(8)最常见的换词手段:形容词=of+同根名词黯然低分词:Important闪光高分词:beofimportance(9)v帮忙黯然低分词:help闪光高分词:cometoone’sassistance(10)adv黯然低分词:finally闪光高分词:atlength好词汇词组造句temporarysetback不要被暂时的困难所沮丧Don’tbecastdownbytemporarysetbacks.Makegreatprogress你越努力你取得的进步越大Theharderyouwork,themoreprogressyouwillmake.Beboundtodo/bedoomedtodo/becondemnedtodo除非我们不遗余力我们注定是一个失败Unlesswesparenoeffort,wearedoomedtobeafailure.Obstacle任何你遇到的困难将会让你更加坚强Whateverobstaclesyoumeetwithwillmakeyoustronger.英语写作中的句式选择,结合平时练习和所学短语及语法运用,总结如下:一改变时态例:?Thebellisringingnow.一般Theregoesthebell.特殊事例全部用过去式二改变语态例:Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(特殊)被动胜过主动,讲述理由时更加客观可信Ibelievewewillwin(一般)Iamfirmlyconvincedthatoureffortswillpayoff.(特殊)三改变结构不定式例:sheworkhardtorealizeherdream.(一般)Inordertorealizeherdream,sheworkedhard.(特殊)四使用过去分词Becauseshedevotedallherlifetostudying,shesucceeded.(一般)Devotedtostudying,shefinallymadeit.(特殊)·Iwasinspiredbyherwordsandmadeupmymindtoholdon.(一般)Inspiredbyherwords,Imadeupmymindtoholdon.(特殊)·Ifailedtheexamsmanytimesa ndalmostgaveup.(一般)Havingfailedtheexamsinarow,Ialmostgaveup.(特殊)五形容词作状语Irealizedtheimportanceofholdingonanddecidednottogiveup Awareoftheimportanceofholdingon,Ideterminednottogiveu pFinally,IarrivedatthedestinationAtlength,Iarrivedatthedestination,safeandsound/tiredbutsati sfied六使用v-ing1.Whenhearrived,hegavemeane-mail.(一般)Onarriving/whenarriving,hegavemeane-mail.(特殊)2.进入到重点大学是我一直想要的BeingadmittedtoakeyuniversityiswhatIamlongingfor3.每次看到这样的话语,我都忍不住想起小时候Everytime Isawthosewords,Icouldn’thelprecallingmymemor ywhenIwasyoung.七使用名词性从句1.Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.一般Thefactthathedidn’tturnup?disappointedeverybody.特殊2.heissurprisedthatthelittlegirlknows?somanythings.一般Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirl?knowssomanythings.特殊3.他做了他所能做的事帮我摆脱困境Hedidwhathecouldtogetmeoutoftrouble.4.从那以后,我不停反思我所做的事情Fromthenon,IneverstoppedreflectingonwhatIhaddone.八使用定语从句1.Thegirlisspokenhighlyof..Her?compositionwaswellwritten.一般Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.特殊2.Honesty,towhichteachersattachgreatimportance,playsasig nificantpartinourdailylife. 3Therewasatimewhen…4Thankstosb,withoutwhomIcouldn’thavegotthroughthehar dtimes九使用状语从句1.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.一般Nomatterwhathesay s,Iwon‘tbelieve.特殊十时间状语四个when/一…就Beabouttodowhenitoccurredtomethat原因状语thanksto/dueto/owingto让步状语nomatter+wh--/although/as/evenif条件状语aslongas/unless/onlyif结果、伴随状语thusdoing/onlytodo目的状语inorderto/inanattempttodo十一使用虚拟语气1.Theshipdidn‘tsinkwithallonboardbecausethereweretheeff ortsofthecaptain.(一般) Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunkwithallonbo ard.特殊Butforthefactthat/haditnotbeenforthefactthat…2.Itishightimethatsb.shoulddo十二使用倒装句型,强调句型(8个NO)1.ThoughI‘mweakI’llmaketheeffort.一般WeakasIam,I‘llmaketheeffort..特殊2.HefindsEnglishisdifficulttolearn.一般SodifficultdoeshefindittolearnEnglish.特殊3.Ihaveneverhadsuchanunforgettableexperienceinmylife.一般NeverhaveIhadamoreunforgettableexperienceinmylife.特殊4.Hishardworkmakesadifference.一般Itishishardworkthatmakesadifference.特殊十三插入语ToOne’s+n(delight,disappointment,surprise,relief)Tomakemattersworse/what’sworseWhat’smore,/inadditionInthelongrun/termFromnow(then)on/sincethenMeanwhile,therefore,whereas()Asaconsequence/atlengthInaword/inanutshell/tosumupfortunately/fromwhereIstandAsamatteroffact/believeitornotToputitinanotherway/inotherwords例文结合校园事例写英语作文Manyhandsmakelightwork.Cooperationissoimportantthatw ecanneveremphasizetheimporta nceofittoomuch.①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;④词数不少于120左右。

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