2011高考英语写作讲解与训练--如何写好情景写作(二)
2011年高考英语写作高分秘诀素材
2011年高考英语写作高分秘诀2011年高考英语写作高分秘诀1．句式要有变化：①复合句、并列句②倒装句〔1〕虚拟语气中if省略〔2〕only+状语置于句首〔3〕否定词置于句首〔4〕地点副词置于句首③强调句型It is ……that (who)…④非谓语动词。
⑤虚拟语气⑥固定句型结构1.too…to…2.so…that….3.such a…that…4.notonly…but..also… 6.neith er…nor…7.such as…8.not …until…9.so that…10.either…or…⑦直接引语与间接引语:多种时态，动名词、不定式，并列结构2．要使用高等级词汇及短语①使用高等级词汇②使用短语③使用谚语④使用表强调的词，如alone, just, single, only, not…at all; on theearth; the very; on earth等⑤使用修辞手法:明喻，暗喻，夸X，头韵，拟人等as busy as a bee; as proud as a peacock; as blind as a bat; as cool as a cucumber3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，一气呵成1〕用于按空间展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有：above before me here on theleft across below in the distance on the rightbeyond nearby opposite to over also further nextto on top ofup down close to beneath under around nearto along2) 用于按时间顺序展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有soon, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early, this morning /year, now, after, at present, later, afterwards finally, at last, all of a sudden , at noon , in the morning/afternoon/evening3) 用于按分析法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有first, second, etc. now for this purpose; but as aresult furthermore;finally at last moreoveralso therefore likewise;another for example next; yet for instance on the contraryonce in addition in summary;such in this case on the other handthen otherwise in conclusion thus4) 用于按比较法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有another moreover in addition (to)equally important too, also at the same timebesides then in the same way in fact like, similarly5) 用于按对比法展开的段落之中的连接词和过渡词有on the contrary different from on the other hand in contrast to despitein spite of, yet, but ,whereas, unlike nevertheless not only…butalso here…there years)one ago…today the former…the latterthen…now some…others one…the other once…nowon (the one hand…on the other hand(一方面…另一方面)6)逻辑关系递进: then(然后)， besides(还有)， furthermore(而且)， moreover(此外)转折: however(然而)， but(但是)， on the country(相反)， after all(毕竟)总结: finally(最后)， at last(最后)， in brief(总之)，in conclusion(最后)。
高考英语写作的基本技巧
浅谈高考英语写作的基本技巧摘要：高考英语写作即书面表达，是考察学生在“特定”的情景中自由表达思想或传递信息的能力，它是一种真正的创作性的学习过程。
高考英语写作的考查既需启动知识储备，又需构思立意，对词句和语言的准确性要求较高。
而英语写作的分值也占到了高考英语科目总分的近五分之一，可见它的重要性。
本文具体从高考英语写作的特点、步骤、技巧和方法四个方面进行阐述，以便提高高中英语写作水平。
关键词：高考英语写作，英语学习法，英语教学，教学策略一、高考英语写作特点不同于高考语文作文，英语写作一般有以下几个特点。
1.英语写作试题内容实用性越来越强，所选话题总是贴近学生生活，容易下笔。
2.试题类型也较稳定，多以指导性的给材料的写作为主（guided writing），便于考生在短时间内构思成文。
3.试题紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求，考查考生在特定的情景中运用语言的能力。
4.看图作文类型主要是考查考生是否能够运用所学知识解决实际问题的能力。
而学生在平时的写作和考试作文中普遍存在着以下几个问题：1.语法错误，主要是动词时态、语态和名词单复数的错误，以及主谓不一致、指代不清、成分不全、句子结构混乱等。
2.用汉式思维去编写英语句子，往往句意表达不清。
3.对英语文化缺乏了解，不符合英语语言表达习惯。
4.句式过于单调，缺乏变化。
5.语篇结构松散，布局零乱，缺乏合适的衔接和过渡。
二、英文写作的具体步骤高考的英语作文由于在时间上有一定的限制，一般只能限在15分钟左右完成作文。
具体步骤有以下几点。
1.学生在写作之前要分析题材、体裁、时态、人称。
2.要确立中心、筛选材料、要充分酝酿篇章结构。
3.一定要考虑好用哪几个句子，用哪些动词和词组等。
4.在草稿上边写边思考内容是否连贯性，语言和句子是否准确。
5.写作完成之后一定还要再细细检查一遍。
英语写作还需注意以下三点：1.注意语法方面。
英语书面表达一定要注意句子的完整，还要注意人称、时态和语态等的一致性和文章的连贯性等。
2011年高考英语满分作文八大经典万能通用模板
高考英语作文模版(一)：对比观点题型(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
①有一些人认为……;②另一些人认为……;③我的看法……。
The topic of ___________________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ___________________(支持A的理由一).What is more, ___________________(理由二). Moreover, ___________________ (理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,___________________(支持B的理由一).Secondly (Besides),___________________(理由二).Thirdly(Finally)___________________ (理由三).From my point of view, I think ___________________(我的观点). The reason is that ___________________ (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .(2)给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点。
Some people believe that ___________________(观点一). For example, they think ___________________(举例说明).And it will bring them___________________ (为他们带来的好处).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,___________________ (我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ___________________ (反对的理由之二).Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ___________________ (我对文章所讨论主题的看法).高考英语作文模板(二)：阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。
江苏英语高考作文(2011-15)
Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is tra lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. The message conveyed here is clear: "Actions speak louder than words." Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment. Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.
2011江苏高考英语作文
2011江苏高考英语作文As an AI, I don't have access to historical data or specific past exam papers unless provided with the details. However, I can certainly help you create a sample English essay thatcould fit the style and expectations of an Englishcomposition for a high school examination like the 2011 Jiangsu Gaokao. Here's a sample essay on a hypothetical topic:In the modern era, environmental protection has become atopic of paramount importance. With the rapid development of industry and technology, the environment has been severely impacted, leading to a myriad of problems such as air pollution, water contamination, and loss of biodiversity. Itis imperative that we, as a society, take proactive measuresto protect our environment.First and foremost, air pollution has become a significant issue in many urban areas. The emission of harmful gases from factories and vehicles has led to a decrease in air quality, posing serious health risks to the population. To combat this, governments should enforce stricter regulations on industrial emissions and promote the use of cleaner energy sources.Secondly, water contamination is another pressing concern.The improper disposal of industrial waste and agriculturalrunoff has resulted in the pollution of rivers and lakes, affecting both aquatic life and human health. It is crucial for industries to adopt better waste management practices and for communities to be educated on the importance of water conservation.Moreover, the loss of biodiversity is a silent crisis that receives less attention but is equally devastating. The destruction of natural habitats for urban development and agricultural expansion has led to the extinction of many species. Conservation efforts must be intensified to preserve the delicate balance of ecosystems.In conclusion, environmental protection is not just the responsibility of governments and corporations; it is a collective duty that each individual must embrace. By adopting eco-friendly practices in our daily lives, supporting sustainable development, and advocating for environmental policies, we can make a significant difference in preserving our planet for future generations.This essay touches upon several key issues related to environmental protection, which is a topic that could be relevant for a high school English exam. It provides a structured argument with clear points and a conclusion, which is typical of the essay format expected in such exams.。
2011年高考英语 作文最后押题预测范文二
2011年高考英语作文最后押题预测范文二1.作为中学生，你肯定经历过屡次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败。
请你根据提示内容，简要概述中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点。
要求：(1)题目自拟;(2)词数：100-120。
Failure is the mother of successWe middle school students have had many test s or exams. We have both achieved success and suffered from failure. Different students take different attitudes to failure.Some fall in low spirits when they don't do well in the exams. They usu ally lose heart and no longer study hard as before. But most students take an active attitude towards failure. They encourage themselves to be self-confident. They found out and analyze the causes so that they will no longer make similar mistakes.I agree with those with active attitudes. As we all know, failure is the mother of success. Even great men have failed many times beforet hey succeeded. So we must deal with our failure correctly.2.请细读以下这封信，根据信中提到的问题写一封回函。
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②审图：确定：
b) 结构：详略得当，主次分明，突出主题
★详写游学环节，学与游可以 同步进行或者分步进行
伦敦游学
②审图：注意：图中文字-图中人物-图中 数字-图中图-图角标示
3）表达技巧：
策当。
例：分步进行（P3/P4）： In the coming days, we spent lots of time in Westminster College listening to the introductions to colleges in London and attending lectures on the British culture, from which we really gained a lot. After days of study, we were shown around through the city. It was much too impressive to see the River Thames flow past the towering Big Ben and the London Eye, where I took countless photos of those famous signts. So if you are interested, come to me after class. By the way, I also bought some souvenirs for you guys.（注意交际性原则）
情景作文 写作
1、记叙类（四图/多图）
分类： 个人活动或集体活动； 一天活动或一周活动； 一次活动或多段活动； 过去活动、目前活动或将来活动； 命题活动或主题活动（“伦敦游学”）
人称： ★自己经历：第一人称 ★他人经历：第三人称
度米作文汇编之2011年高考作文技巧之英语作文高分“五招”
度米作文汇编之2011年高考作文技巧
之英语作文高分“五招”
1.表达精练简洁
表达不要啰嗦，若能用非谓语动词作定语或状语就不用定语从句或状语从句；
2.避免低级错误
避免语法和拼写等低级错误（特别是不要出现在段落开头的第一句),避免被扣印象分。
3.保证赏心悦目
注重书写美观，保证卷面整洁以提高印象分
1）切记涂涂抹抹；
2)保持单词之间的平均距离，一般为一个a字母的间隙；
3）错词用一条横线或斜线划掉，尽量不要重复涂写同一个字母
或单词；
4）每段前空格约4 个字母的位置；
4.句子错落有致
根据表达需要，交叉使用长短句、简单句与复合句。
5.句式多种多样
多样化句式，方能显出较强的语言功底，大大提高作文档次。
如：1）用it is/was...that 的强调句型；
2）用作状语的介词短语开头的完全倒装句或用以only in this
way 等开头的部分倒装句；
3）用with的复合结构（with+宾语+宾补）作状语或定语；
4）用非谓语动词；
5）用what 引导的名词性从句；
6）用独立主格结构；
7)恰当使用感叹句、被动句等；
8)适当使用however,in my opinion,fortunately,personally 等插入语；
9)尽量用短语代替单词来表达同样的意思；
10)恰当使用关联词语，做到过渡自然，结构紧凑，篇章连贯。
2011高考英语满分作文八大经典万能通用模板
2011高考英语满分作文八大经典万能通用模板高考英语满分作文八大经典万能通用模板高考英语作文模版（一）：对比观点题型（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
①有一些人认为……；②另一些人认为……；③我的看法……。
The topic of___________________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of___________________(支持A的理由一).What is more,___________________(理由二). Moreover,___________________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,___________________(支持B的理由一).Secondly (Besides),___________________(理由二).Thirdly(Finally）___________________ (理由三).From my point of view, I think___________________(我的观点). The reason is that___________________(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点。
高分高考英语作文的写作方法与技巧大全
高分高考英语作文的写作方法与技巧大全高考英语作文考核和体现的是考生对于英语整体的掌握程度，想要英语作文取得高分需要掌握哪些写作技巧呢？下面是为大家整理的关于高分高考英语作文的写作方法与技巧，欢迎大家来阅读。
高考英语作文容易高分的技巧一、结构要清晰结构清晰这点真的很重要，我们都知道，阅卷老师们要在规定的时间内批阅上千份作文，而清晰的结构，会让阅卷老师一目了然，自然就会喜欢你的作文。
什么结构好呢?那就是三段式。
第一段要开门见山，直接拿出主题。
给大家举个例子，比如，写我的妈妈，第一段直接就说My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明确自己的观点。
第二段就要说，她为什么是一个好妈妈。
1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 详细说出妈妈的优点。
第三段得出结论。
大家可以发表自己的观点，也可以提出建议和希望。
如，I love my mother. I love my family!二、时态要准确英语作文除了结构，还有一个是阅卷老师最敏感的，那就是时态，第1页共8页这也是一篇作文是否得高分的关键。
要明确文章的时态、同时人称要一致、数要一致、首尾要呼应。
再根据内容要求，现确定事情是过去已经发生还是未来即将发生，比如记叙一件事要用一般过去时;写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时;对于未来的憧憬要用一般将来时;过去的事情对现在造成的影响或过去延续到现在的状况都用现在完成时。
一定不能乱用乱配。
三、短语运用要灵活同学们在写作文的时候，要尽量使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。
当然，定语从句、宾语从句等句型，在关键的时候用上一两个，会增添你文章的文采。
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高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——如何写好情景写作（二）一. 教学内容：书面表达讲解与训练：如何写好情景写作写作体裁训练1）通知2）论说文如何写通知：通知写作要素1. 口头通知（Announcement）内容要包括时间、地点、事项、参加者。
口头通知不必说明通知时间和组织者。
语言要求灵活、简要、口语化。
2. 书面通知(Notice) 除内容要包括时间、地点、事项、参加者外,还要有组织者。
通知的日期写在左下角。
语言要求简练、用词贴切、书面化。
3. 通知要求开门见山、简明扼要、叙述清楚。
范文1.A NoticeStudents of Senior I will visit the Beijing Zoo on Saturday, April 15. The Beijing Zoo has a history of more than one hundred years. It is one of the biggest zoos in the world. There we can see all kinds of animals, such as pandas, elephants, lions, tigers and so on. In the morning we will be free to visit the different areas of the zoo and then have lunch on the small island; in the afternoon the zoo-keeper will give us a talk on how to protect wild animals. Please take your lunch and drinks with you. Wear strong shoes because we shall do a lot of walking. We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:00 on Saturday morning . The buses will start at 7:10 on time. Please don’t be late.范文2.Attention, please! I’ve something important to tell you. The English Corner is to take place on Saturday afternoon on the playground. It will start at four o’clock. You can talk freely with one another about your life and studies at school. You’re encouraged to speak as much English as possible.Tom, An American student studying at Nanjing University, will join us. He’s promised to tell us something about school education in the USA. I’m sure you’ll show interest in his talk.The English Corner has proved to be of great benefit to us in our English learning.Everyone will be welcome. Please come on time. That’s all. Thank you.常用通知用语1. Attention, please!May I have your attention, please?2. I have an announcement to make.I’ve something important to tell you.3. There is going to be a talk on history this afternoon.4. The meeting will be held in the auditorium at 2:00pm.this afternoon.5. The lecture will last about three hours.6. Everyone will be welcome .7. You are required to take notes during the lecture....8. Please be there on time.Be sure to attend on time.Please be present on time.9. The party will be held at 2:30 p.m. on Wednesday, October 10,2004.10. The meeting will be held in Room 202,on the second floor of Main Building.11. give a talk(a lecture, a concert)12. hold a meeting (a class, a celebration)13. attend a meeting(a sports meet, a lecture, a class)14. have a class(a meeting, a lecture, a discussion)15. make a trip / speak about /set up a...club/ set out(for)/ leave for/ arrive at/ show sb. around/ visit a place/ meet at the gate of.../go to a concert(a movie, the theatre, the cinema)/ form a group/ run a class/ join sb. in.../ take part in.../ talk about...16. Please sign your name/ fill in a...form(at the Service Room)17. Don’t forget to bring your gifts with you.18. Come to the great fun!19. The meeting will be put off until next week.高考书面表达(1994)提示：你校学生将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。
为使美国朋友听懂，请你用英语写一篇广播通知。
要点如下：宗旨：欢迎来访的美国朋友.组织者：学生会时间：8月15日(星期六) 晚7:30地点：主楼屋顶花园活动内容：音乐,跳舞,唱歌,游戏,交换礼品。
（请包装好,签名并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词）注意：（1）广播稿约为100词。
（2）应包括以上要点,但不要逐字翻译，要组织成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
（3）开头语已为你写好。
生词：交换礼品---to exchange gifts 学生会--- the Students UnionPossible version:May I have your attention, Please? I have an announcement to make. The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 p.m.. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchanges of gifts. Everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.Don’t forget 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There’s sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.高考书面表达（2000，春）为了丰富外国学生的生活，你校学生会将举办一次音乐周活动。
请你以组织者的身份写一个书面通知，有关内容如下：时间：5月第一周活动：1 演唱歌曲：流行歌曲。
2 器乐演奏：古典和民间音乐。
3 音乐比赛：听歌曲片段，然后猜出处。
地点：届时通知。
参加者请于4月20 日前报名。
注意：1. 书面通知应写成一篇连贯的短文。
2. 可以适当增减细节。
3. 词数100左右。
4. 通知格式已写好。
5. 生词：古典---classical 民间---folk 乐器---musical instruments比赛---contestPossible version:Dear students,The Students Union has decided to organize a music week. It will be held in the first week of May. The activities include singing pop songs and playing classical and folk music. Bring your own musical instruments, please. A music contest will be included, too. The students taking part in the contest will listen to part of a song or a piece of music, and then guess where it comes from. If you’d like to take part in the music week, please come and sign up for it before April 20th. The place for the activities will be announced later.Come to the great fun!Students Union如何写说明文说明文（通常它是对事物提供知识，解释与分析，表明观点的文章）这种文体已成为近年来高考书面表达常见的一种写作形式。