主题句议论文写作

1．议论文的格式：

议论文的格式应由三个部分组成：<1> 立论部分；<2> 论证部分；<3> 结论部分。一般说来，议论文可分三个基本段落来写：第一段引出话题；第二段立论且加以论证；第三段给出明确的结论。第二段是中心段落，应试者应将主要的内容放在第二段中，同时也要注意开篇及结尾段落的完整性，且应尽量做到首尾呼应，切忌前后矛盾。

一、写作要掌握的技巧：

1、注意篇章结构，合理布局

开始部分（opening paragraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。

正文部分（Body paragraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。

结尾部分（concluding paragraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。

2、主题句作文要确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。

写主题句应注意以下几点：

①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点

②提炼出一句具有概括性的话

③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。

二、写作中要巧用连接词

要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词。希望大家能将以下连词都背一下，将会起到提高作文分数的作用。

表示罗列增加

First，second，third，

First，then / next，after that / next，finally

For one thing … for another…，

On one hand…on the other hand，

Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / mor eover / another / also，Especially / In particular，

表示时间顺序

now，at present，recently，

after，afterwards，after that，after a while，in a few days，

at first，in the beginning，to begin with，

later，next，finally，

immediately，soon，suddenly，all of a sudden，at that moment，as soon as，the moment

from now on，from then on，

at the same time，meanwhile，

till，not…until，before，after，when，while，as during，

表示解释说明

now，in addition，for example，for instance，in this case，moreover furthermore，in fact，actually

表示转折关系

but，however，while，though，or，otherwise，on the contrary，on the other hand，in contrast，despite，in spite of，even though，except （for），instead，of course，after all，

表示并列关系

or，and，also，too，not only … but also，as well as，both… and，ei ther …or，neither …nor

表示因果关系

because，because of，since，now that，as，thanks to…，due to…，therefore，as a result （of），otherwise，so…that，such…that

表示条件关系

as （so）long as，on condition that，if，unless

表示让步关系

though，although，as，even if，even though，whether …or…，however，whoever，

whatever，whichever，wherever，whenever，no matter how （who，what，which，where，when，whom）

表示举例

for example，for instance，such as…，take… for example

表示比较

be similar to，similarly，the same as，in contrast，compared with （to）…just like，just as，

表示目的

for this reason，，for this purpose，so that，in order to，so as to，

表示强调

in deed，in fact，surely，certainly，no doubt，without any doubt，truly，obviously，above all，

表示概括归纳

in a word，in short，in brief，on the whole，generally speaking，in my opinion，as far as I know，As we all know，as has been stated，as I have shown，finally，at last，in summary，in conclusion

三、常用的句套子：

此类作文有一些常用的语篇句式可以借鉴：

开头时，我们常可以借鉴以下的句式：

1）There are different opinions as to… Some people suggest that…, while others hold that….I, personally, think…

2）….Some people prefer to… Others, however, like to…I am one of the former (latter), because…has many advantages.

谈论个人观点时，我们还可以借鉴以下句式：

1）Personally, I fully believe that…

2）For my part, I think…

3）As far as I am concerned, …

4）From a personal point of view, I find that…

5）Personally speaking, …

6）As I see it, …

中间拓展时可以借鉴的句式：

Different people have different views on…对于……, 不同的人有不同的见解。Some believe that…, others hold that…有些人认为……，其他人认为……（用于陈述两种不同观点）

As far as I am concerned, I approve of the latter. 就我来说, 我赞同后一种观点。

As a saying goes, 俗话说

The crucial point is that…关键的一点是……

It is… that…正是…（强调句型）

But others just claim that…但是其他人认为……

I believe that…我认为……

Most people think …大多数人认为……

It is hard to imagine that…很难想象……

…is actually a very serious problem in some places, and it has become a global problem ……是一些地区所存在的严重问题，并且已经成为一个全球问题。Something must be done to…我们必须做些什么以……

There is a natural tendency to …有一种……的自然发展趋势

Generally speaking 一般而言

It is my view that …我认为……

We do this for…not for…我们这样做是因为……而不是因为……

There are both good and bad points about …就……来说，既有好处又有弊端。For them, …as to me, …对于他们来说，……对于我来说，……（用于陈述两种不同观点）

…rather than…是……而不是……（两种观点的对比）

the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 优点大于缺点

Dear sir or Madam, 尊敬的先生或女士（书信用语）

I am sure that…我确信……

to express my heartfelt gratitude to …向……表达我最衷心的谢意

It is of great importance to………是非常重要的

The reason why… can be expressed as the following. 可以用如下原因对于……进行解释

I think it is better for me to…我认为自己最好……

For the purpose of…为了……的目的

It is out of question that…毫无疑问，……

but it must also be stressed that…但是还应该强调的是……

…can help not only…but also………不仅有助于……，还有助于……

There are many ways…有多种途径和方法来……

To me, …is a kind of study. 对于我来说，……是一种学习方式。

I will take advantage of every piece of chance to…我会抓住每一个机会来………is a good way.……是一种好方法。

Today, if you want to…,…is absolutely necessary. 如今，如果你想……，那么……是必需的。

By…, can…；and…, can…（某人）可以通过……来……,（某人）也可以通过……来……

From my point of view, it is an important chance for…我认为，……是一个非常重要的机会。

So please pay more attention to…, and you will see their advantages. 因此请多关

注……，你会发现其中的妙处。

In fact, …for emotional rather than economic reasons. 实际上，（人们做某事）是出于情感方面的原因而不是经济方面的

…is just a waste of time and resources（做某事）浪费时间和资源。

It is a shame that………是让人感到惭愧的。

Not to say…更不用说……

In my opinion, it is not wise or possible to forbid…since…我认为因为……而禁止……是不明智的，也是不可能的。

There are many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of…关于……的利与弊，人们的观点不一。

Some people think…and it…W hile, on the other hand…有些人认为……，并且……。然而，从另一个方面来看……

They say it can do nothing but…人们认为它只能……

As far as … are concerned, they can not only… but also…对于……来说，他们不仅能够……，还能够……

does more good than harm to 对于……的利大于弊

We must take a correct attitude towards…, taking full advantages of it and avoiding its disadvantages. 我们必须正确认识……，扬其长避其短。

四、四级写作：主题句议论文范文

题目：Craze for Civil Service Examinations

1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员

2. 引起此现象的原因

3. 你的看法

Craze for Civil Service Examinations

Every year more and more people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.

In the final analysis,this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors –ambitions and comforts.On one hand,many

ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a well stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.

Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. However, there are very few positions for which too many appliers struggle. The phenomenon must be thought over by heads of our governments who make policies. As for me, I believe one can realize his value in various walks of life.

点评：

文章分析大学生报考公务员这一社会现象，并分析产生这一现象的原因——两方面：一是学生想更上一层楼，使自身的各方面条件更加优越些；而是学生想要一份安稳的收入，享受五险一金的补助，老来无忧。最后一段总结自己的看法，即赞同考取公务员，因为国家需要补给新鲜的力量来更好地为人民服务。但是也表达了各行各业都可以实现人生的价值。

段首句作文的类型

段首句作文也称主题句作文或起始句作文。段首句作文除给出题目外，还将文章分成若干段落（多数分为三段），并且给出每一段的第一句或第一句的开头部分，要求续写并完成段落。段首句作文是四（六）级写作中常见的作文题型之一，是一种控制或指导性作文。

段首句作文的类型

三段式的段首句作文通常有三种类型：

（1）在每段的段首给出主题句。如下面的作文题：

Pleasures in Reading

1. I enjoy reading very much. ____________________________.

2. In the first place, reading can disperse loneliness. _____________.

3. Furthermore, reading can add fullness to my life. ______________.

（2）前两段的段首给出主题句，最后一段的段尾给出结论。如下面的作文题：

Chinese Women

1. Women in China have been liberated in many aspects. __________.

2. However, there still exist some problems. ______________.

3. _______________. In the future, we can expect a more promising prospect for the Chinese women.

（3）前两段的段首句是主题句，最后一段的段首给出短语或者过渡词。如下面的作文题：

Hope Project

1. Hope Project is an urgent measure that our government has taken to help poor children in China who cannot afford to go to school.___________________________________.

2. This project is of great importance to our country. ______________.

3. In my opinion, _____________.

英语四级段首句作文的写作要领

写好段首句作文必须注意审清题意，正确理解段首句、写好扩展句及注意连贯与呼应。

审清题意

段首句作文从题目、段首句可以很容易地判断出文章的体裁和写作的目的。审题时，应着重弄清题目与段首句之间的逻辑关系，明确题目和段首句所提示的写作范围、侧重点和方向，从而确定主题思想。比如，第一种段首句的作文题目是Pleasures in Reading（读书的乐趣），把它与三个段首句联系起来审题，就能确定文章的主题思想应围绕读书给人生带来的乐趣展开。

正确理解段首句

正确理解段首句的意旨是续写成败的关键，因为段首句可能代表一个段落的主题思想。作者必须在正确理解段首句的基础上续写、扩展各段。领会段首句时，要反复推敲其含义，找出句中的核心词，因为核心词凝聚着段落的内容，指明续写的方向。核心词有时是一个词，有时是一个短语。比如，Pleasures in Reading的第一段段首句“I enjoy reading very much.” 的核心词是“enjoy”（喜欢）；第二段段首句“In the first place, reading can disperse loneliness.”的核心词是“disperse loneliness”（消除寂寞）；第三段段首句“Furthermore, reading can add fullness to my life.”的核心词是“add fullness”（丰富生活）。展开各段时，应该重点突出、扩大、延伸这三个核心词所包含的内容。

2.2.3写好扩展句

扩展句的目的是阐明、展开、补充主题句，起着“论据”、“具体事例”、“详情解释”等作用，并使主题句内容具体化。也就是说，扩展句应回答“how and why”（怎么样和为什么）的问题。写好扩展句就要以核心词为起始点，紧扣主题思想，深化主题句内容。

2.2.4注意连贯与呼应

续写要注意各段之间内容的连贯与呼应。如果没有审清作文题和段落之间发展的必然联系，就匆忙下笔，生编硬套，势必造成各段内容松散，前后矛盾。段首句作文三个段落之间的关系一般是“并列”和“转折”。如Pleasures in Reading 的第二、三段段首句前的两个过渡词语“In the first place”和“Furthermore”表示并列关系。通过主题句，我们知道，第一段和第二、第三之间又存在着因果关系，因为第二、第三段解释我为什么喜欢读书。续写这两段，应注意它们之间以及全文的连贯与呼应。

以Pleasures in Reading这个段首句作文题为例。第一段的续写考虑到开头段的性质和作用（概括内容、点明主题、交代目的），应明确地阐述本文的中心论点。第二段的续写可以通过举例、摆事实来论述读书为什么能（why）和怎样才能（how）“消除寂寞”。第三段同样用举例论证法来论述读书为什么和怎样才能“丰富生活”。这样续写，读起来感到充分、有说服力。请看范文：

Pleasures in Reading

①I enjoy reading very much. ②Quite often I am so absorbed in a good book that for the time being I forget my surrounding and even myself. ③I think reading can offer me certain pleasures that real life cannot do.④In the first place, reading can disperse loneliness. ⑤In the pages of books I can talk and walk with the wise and the good of all lands and all times. ⑥The people I meet in books are always ready to give me friendship, sympathy, and encouragement, whereas my friends in reality cannot give me these when they leave me.⑦Furthermore, reading can add fullness to my life. ⑧By reading I can travel around the whole world, and lead varied lives. ⑨Through books the beauties of nature, the enjoyment of

f art, the triumphs of architecture, the marvels of engineering, are all open to my wonder and appreciation. ⑩It can be said those who cannot enjoy readin

g are poor men; those who enjoy reading most can obtain the greatest pleasure from it. ①主题

句②举例说明“我”很喜欢读书③结尾句/过渡句④主题句/乐趣一⑤⑥具体解释读书为什么能和怎样消除寂寞⑦主题句/乐趣二⑧⑨解释读书为什么能和怎样丰富生活⑩总结全文

再如，在以Chinese Women 为题的这篇段首句作文中，第一段的核心词是“liberated in many aspects”。因此，第一段应着重阐述中国妇女在哪些方面已获得了解放。第二段段首句的过渡词“However”，表示意思转折，与第一段内容形成对立关系，要求写妇女没有获得解放的方面。展开主题时，应注重事例要典型、突出。第三段给出的句子位于段尾，可视为结论句。其中“more”一词表示妇女现在的状况良好，将来会更好。该段的续写要简明扼要地指明妇女目前良好的总体状况，以便和最后一句自然衔接。请看范文：

Chinese Women

⑴Women in China have been liberated in many aspects. ⑵They enjoy the right to vote; they go to universities; they compete with men in any professional field on equal terms. ⑶They have shown that they are capable of being good leaders and of doing many important things. ⑷Practically, they are “holding up half the sky”.⑸However, there still exist some problems. ⑹Some people think women cannot hold many important posts as men do. ⑺For example, the female college students are often refused to enter into some professions where the male students have the priority.

⑻Besides, women are still treated as the inferior sex in some rural areas. ⑼Their only position is considered to raise children and do household chores.⑽Generally, with the rapid development of our economy, women have made enormous strides in their social status; they get equal position as men do. ⑾In the future, we can expect a more promising prospect for Chinese women. ⑴主题句⑵⑶举例说明妇女在哪些方面获得解放⑷结尾句/小结⑸主题句/指出还存在问题⑹问题一⑺举例证明问题一⑻问题二⑼具体论证问题二⑽总结妇女目前良好的总体状况⑾展望中国妇女未来的状况

最后，再看Hope Project这篇段首句作文题。根据所给材料和题目，这篇文章的主题思想是，“希望工程”对我国的建设具有重大的意义。第一段的段首句是“希望工程”的定义。要拓宽这个定义，续写内容应放在“希望工程”的作用、目的、意义上。第二段主题句的核心词是“important”。扩展句应从国家建设、教育的角度来论述“希望工程”的重大意义。第三段的段首给出“In my opinion”这一

介词短语，提醒我们这一段应阐述自己对“希望工程”的看法。但要注意紧扣主题思想，避免离题。请看下面的范文：

Hope Project

①Hope Project is an urgent measure that our government has taken to help poor children in China who cannot afford to go to school. ②The project aims at providing underprivileged children with tuition fees, setting up new primary schools, and supplying poorly equipped elementary schools with better teaching facilities.③This project is of great importance to our country. ④In the first place, it brings great hope to thousands of children who can now sit again in their classrooms and acquire knowledge, which will be very useful to their future. ⑤Secondly, as most children have access to education, it will lead to the enhancement of the intelligence level in our country. ⑥Thus the project will benefit the modernization of our country a lot.⑦In my opinion, the project has a far-reaching influence on the construction of our country. ⑧How well a country is developed is largely depends on how well its people are educated. ⑨Therefore, more work should be done to persuade our people throughout the country to make greater contributions to the “Hope Project”. ①“希望工程”的定义②“希望工程”的目的③主题句/重要性④理由一⑤理由二⑥小结/重申“希望工程”的重要性⑦我的意见/看法⑧证明我的看法⑨呼吁人们采取行动支持“希望工程”

段首句议论文范文：

题目（一）：Modernization of Family Life

1.With the rapid development of the society, family life is becoming

modernized._________.

2.The modernization of family life brings us convenience and

comfort._________________.

3.In spite of this, these modern facilities also bring us disadvantages.

__________________.

Modernization of Family Life

With the rapid development of the society, family life is becoming modernized. Years ago, people considered owing radios, sewing machines, watches and bicycles as being modernized. But in recent years, almost all families have TV sets, refrigerators

and washing machines. It is very common to see people ride motorcycles or even drive private cars and more and more families have telephones, computers and air-conditioners.

The modernization of family life brings us convenience and comfort. One may enjoy TV or radio programs, communicate with his friends through telephone or work with his computer while his washing machine, refrigerator and air-conditioners are running. And by car or motorcycle one can quickly reach wherever he wants to go.

In spite of this, these modern facilities also bring us disadvantages. For example, radiation from TV sets and computers is harmful to our health; improper driving of cars and motorcycles becomes the major cause of traffic accidents. The quietness of a family is often disturbed by a false dialing or unwelcome phone call. But it is believed that these disadvantages will be disposed of with the improvement of modernization and our life will be healthier and more comfortable.

题目（二）Health and Life

1. As the saying goes, you don’t know what happiness is until you lose it you don’t know what health is until you are ill._________________________________________________________.

2. How to keep fit is an eternal topic of diversity and controversy. __________________________.

3. In my opinion, ________________________________________________________________.

Health and Life

As the saying goes, you don’t know what happiness is until you lose it you don’t know what health is until you are ill. “Health is of vital importance to life”sounds like a cliche to everyone, but it is absolutely true. The negligence of the delicate balance of your body and soul, the harmful habits such as smoking, excessive drinking and burning mid-night oil will catch up with you someday. How many big plans are interrupted by bad health! Even a normal life is unimaginable without the guarantee of health.

How to keep fit is an eternal topic of diversity and controversy. Regardless of all the different suggestions poured from all kinds of sources, one should do at least two things for him/herself. First, hold an active and optimistic attitude toward life and

maintain a mental well-being. Second, live a regular life and keep a balanced diet. Anyway, a healthy life is within reach when you begin to adjust your mind and body.

In my opinion, health is essential to life. There is no doubt that life is meaningless without health. Therefore, as long as you have a healthy lifestyle and start exercising regularly you will have wonderful health and meaningful life.