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四年级上册Unit3写作
This is me
一、教学目标：
1．能力目标：通过本次作文练习提高口语表达能力。
2．知识目标：通过本次的写作提高学生的词汇量。
3．情感目标：增强学生之间的了解，提升生生之间的友谊。
二、教学重难点：引导学生使用一些基本的简单的句型来介绍自己。
教学用具: 黑板、纸
三、教学过程：
1.导入：今天班里来了一位新同学，你和他会展开怎样的
对话呢
2.课题呈现：
⑴今天我们就以introduce yourself为题来讨论一下这个
话题。
(2)现在请你们讨论一下我们在对话过程中可能涉及到哪
些话题呢？请同学来回答，师生共同总结可能遇到的
话题
a.Where are you from？
b.Do you like the weather?
c.What’s your parents?
d.
e.What fruit do you like?
（3）老师提示有可能遇到的词汇：China、America、
England、Singapore、sunny 、cloudy、snowy、
rainy、doctor、 nurse postman、 teacher、
watermelon、 kiwifruit、 apple banana、
orange、 friends等等
（4）请同学们和同桌就我们已经讨论并总结过的内容编一个小对话，要求把所有的内容都能够设计进
去。
（5）请同学们表演自己的对话，在表演的过程中其他同学注意他们是否出现错误，是否有漏掉的信息
点并且记下你不知道的词汇和句型。
3.评价最佳对话：在这里我们评出对话做的内容最丰富的，
词汇量最佳的一组，你觉得你从这一组中能学到
更多的词汇和句型对你的帮助最大。
4.习作练习。现在请你就你和你的同伴所编的小对话换一种
形式写出来也就是Introduce yourself.将对话中所涉
及的各种个人信息总结起来就是你自己的个人信
息我们来试着写一下。
5.挑选个别同学的作文进行讲解，指出优点和缺点并且再次
强调写作的方法和要求。
6.Homework:具体实践：
请你就今天你所学的到的相关信息写一篇作文
This is me.80词左右。
提示：①你的基本信息，姓名、年龄、等等
②你来自哪里
③你的父母是干什么的
④你喜欢吃什么水果等等。
四、课后小结
1.有部分学生词汇量不够，造成了一定的写作困难。
2.一些学生的中式思维句式，逻辑思维也比较乱。
3.口语表达能力不够，无法用英语来较好的表达。
五、今后措施
1.抓住作文的主题，要做到基本的句式正确，语句通顺。
2.增加词汇量，基本句型的背诵。
六、教学反思：本课从学生的实际设计，要求学生能够用英语做简
单的自我介绍，有一部分学生因为词汇量的干扰并不能很
好的完成本节课的任务，但是大部分学生还是可以的，以后要注意培养学生的口语表达能力，注意词汇的记忆以及基本句型的掌握，从而提高学生能够的写作能力。
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