“读后续写”缓解英语学习焦虑
“读后续写”缓解英语学习焦虑
作者：沈晓华吕利辉
来源：《东方教育》2013年第11期
【摘要】研究发现英语学习焦虑程度越高，学习者学习成绩越下降。
读后续写是结合阅读理解进行写作练习的一种方法。
训练“写”造成的心理压力要小得多，通过这个方法能够为学生营造一个轻松、愉快的课堂氛围，降低外语课堂焦虑对学生学习英语的负面影响，提高英语学习效率，降低学生口语表达焦虑。
【关键词】英语学习焦虑，读后续写，焦虑量表
一、什么是英语学习焦虑
Krashen认为，语言习得的唯一途径是学习者通过接受大量的可理解输入，他又指出学习者并不能接受所有的输入，由于焦虑、低动机、信心缺乏和尴尬等因素，有效的输入可能被阻碍或者屏蔽，这些因素被称为“情感过滤器”。
[1] 所以，二语习得中对焦虑展开了大量的研究。
Horwitz等（1986，2001）定义英语学习焦虑为“英语课堂学习中由独特的语言学习过程引起的自我感知、对外语学习的看法、学习英语的感觉和学习行为等特殊的心理活动”，[2] 即英语学习焦虑是一种特定的情景——英语学习，尤其是课堂英语学习时，产生的不安、紧张、忧虑、担心、自我怀疑等主观情绪，表现为学生对自己英语交际能力的过低评价。
二、英语学习焦虑产生的后果
Covington&Omelich（1987）的研究发现焦虑程度高的学习者的学习成绩普遍低于低焦虑者，还发现焦虑不仅抑制学习者对知识的输入，而且严重阻碍了知识的输出[3]。
在多年的教学实践中笔者发现大多学非英语专业大学生上英语课时感到焦虑，尤其是当着老师和同学的面说英语时，经常表现出结结巴巴，吐词不清，发音变调，不能把握重音和节奏，甚至会加入中文的语气词。
一些学生不主动引出话题，也不知道如何展开话题，交谈中经常处于被动的地位。
所以会选择坐在后面的位置，低着头，以免与教师的眼神交流。
有意避开各种语言实践活动，渐渐失去了英语表达的机会和愿望，最终导致英语课堂日渐沉闷，没有办法激起学生对英语的热情和兴趣。
Horwitz和Young[4]制定出FLCAS量表（Foreign Language Classroom Anxiety Scale）被众多的研究者应用于对二语习得的听力、口语、课堂活动等方面的研究中，他们得出了几乎相同的结论：焦虑程度与学习成绩呈显著的负相关。
三、什么是读后续写
我们可以采用读后续写的方式学外语，降低学习焦虑，尤其口语表达焦虑。
读后续写操作简便，通常的做法是从外语读物中截留一篇结尾缺失的材料，让学习者读后写全内容。
老师把
一个英语故事的后半部分抹掉，让学生用英语续写后面的情节。
在写作过程中，学生需要理解并不断参照截留部分的内容，甚至使用前面的语言表达式，仿照地道的语言结构来表达思想。
这样做，既可少犯一些语言错误，又有创造性，与故事及其语言的互动协同相当强。
[5]
读后续写是在王初明（2002）[6]写长法基础上更加完善一种方法，写长可以打开学习的情感通道，促进外语学习。
情感因素在外语学习过程中起着至关重要的作用。
学习态度、动机、自信、毅力、自我概念等情感因素决定外语学习最终是否取得成功。
外语学不好的一个重要原因，是这些因素未充分发挥积极的作用，或是学生出现了学习心理障碍，对自己的学习能力评价低，信心不足，导致半途而废。
以写为切入点易于克服心理障碍，使学生尽快进入英语学习状态。
在我国语言环境下，一般学习者使用英语口语的交际需要极少。
比较而言，训练“写”造成的心理压力要小得多。
写可以是个人行为，写的东西可以不必拿去和别人交流。
写在作文本上，教师可以控制评语和打分，尽量鼓励学生发挥才能，帮助他们改善自我形象，激发学习兴趣和动力。
“读后续写”法在激发大多数学生主动多用英语方面是个积极的尝试，每次课堂上都让学生在放松的状态下有用英语的业绩，打开了学生“只学不用”的被动局面，提供了较多用英语的机会并激发了大多数学生多用英语，主动用英语。
，降低学生的英语学习焦虑感，引导学生尝试体会用英语的成就感，增强自信心和兴趣。
当然读后续写结合组内合作讨论，以及续写之后再主动运用，这样效果会更好。
这样学生在有准备的情况下进行英文表达，无形中减低了焦虑情绪。
四、读后续写的好处
王初明（2012）[7]认为读后续写有很多的促学优势，此法用于外语学习，大致有以下优点：
1）创造性地模仿和使用语言，激发想象力。
2）与阅读材料及其作者互动。
3）适用于不同水平的外语学习者。
4）可以提高学习者的自我概念，降低学习焦虑。
学习者对自己外语学习能力的自我评价，我们不妨称之为外语学习自我概念。
外语学习自我概念不佳者，容易产生焦虑，不大可能有强烈的外语学习动机，也不大可能采取积极的学习态度。
读后续写对外语学习和教学几无负面作用。
坚持读后续写一两个学期，定能显著改善学习者的外语运用能力。
提高自我概念，缓解学习焦虑，增强口语表达自信。
五、结语
根据笔者初步的研究，读后续写这一学习方法让学生充分发挥想象力，具有提高外语学习效率，而且可以通过协同模仿，好像跟一本族语者进行交流，降低外语学习焦虑的作用。
读后续写要注意的是不要过多纠错，[8]学生犯错是进步的阶梯，是不可避免的。
通过大量接触语
言的正面输入，随着英语水平的不断提高，许多错误会自行消失。
这不是我们应该担心的问题。
学习外语最忌讳的，倒是一开始就苛求语言使用的准确性，致使学生望而却步，对学外语失去兴趣。
学生都不愿学了，花大量时间去帮他们改错，又有何用？其实，外语错误即使不表达出来，大脑中依然存在。
读后续写的一个好处，是让错误早点暴露出来，使学生意识到自己英语表达能力的差距，促进新知识的消化和吸收。
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基金项目：本文系江西省高等学校教学改革省级课题《口语焦虑对大学生口语学习的影响研究》论文之一，课题编号：JXJG-11-20-9。
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2.Everyone was in rapture by her narrow victory over her great rival in the tennis competition.在那次网球赛中险胜了她的强大对手，大家欣喜若狂。
3.And on his face is plastered a grin of purest exhilaration(excitement). 并且他的脸上挂着纯粹高兴的笑。
4.He beamed at me, his face glowing, eyes filled with pure delight.他容光焕发，开心得不得了。
5.A simile of pleasure and satisfaction blossomed on her rosy cheeks.她粉嫩的脸上绽开一个满足和愉悦的笑容6.“Aha! I catch you!” a trace of pleasure can be noticed in his voice. (语言之语调) 哈，我抓到你了，他声音中透着得意7.A smile lit up his face and his eyes were shining with great joy. (表情之眼睛)他脸上绽开笑容，双眼闪着喜悦8.His face cracked into a smile.他脸上绽开笑容9.His mouth curved into a radiant smile. (表情之嘴巴)他嘴角上扬，露出一个灿烂的笑容二、愤怒：indignation; anger; fury; rage; resentment（憎恨）1.My voice sounds like a growling（咆哮）, angry bear.我的声音愤怒得像一头咆哮的熊2.She could feel the anger growing, bubbling up inside her.(如气泡一般变大 )她感到愤怒在心中集聚，如同一个个气泡。
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做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
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一、心理活动（一）My mind was in a whirlwind of conflicting emotions, like a storm raging within.我的思绪如旋风般涌动着矛盾的情绪，就像一场内心的暴风雨。
A surge of exhilaration washed over me, filling my heart with a radiant glow of happiness.一阵欣喜涌上心头，让我的内心充满了幸福的明亮光芒。
Anxiety gnawed at the edges of my mind, like a persistent itch I couldn't eliminate.焦虑在我脑海中蠢蠢欲动，就像一种无法摆脱的痒感。
My thoughts danced and weaved, forming intricate patterns of ideas and possibilities.我的思绪起舞飞扬，交织成错综复杂的思想和可能性。
A sense of elation pulsed through me, as if every cell in my body was electrified with excitement.一种令人兴奋的感觉在我体内流动，仿佛身体的每个细胞都被兴奋点燃了电流。
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读后续写背诵段落—心理描写读后续写微技能--心理描写之激动与兴奋On the journey to the lake, a wide excitement took hold of Mom. Mom insisted that we go camping in the next village, her eyes twinkling with excitement. When we arrived at the camping place, Mom couldn't wait to storm out and excitedly urged us to put up the tent. Then, Mom walked towards the lake, and then came a scream of excitement. Enjoying the beautiful view, Mom could hardly contain her excitement. Certainly, as it was the first time that we had helped fathercook food outdoors, my brother and I also felt thrilled. Breathing the fresh air and smelling the delicious food, we jumped up and down with excitement.读后续写微技能--心理描写之感激与感动Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passer-by pushed him to safety. With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”It was very moving to see how much strangers could care for each other. Hesmiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy. Touched deeply, the crowd clapped violently. Later, knowing what had happened, his mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.读后续写微技能--心理描写之愤怒Tom's recent behaviour made Mr Smith burst into anger. Finding his homework was unfinished again，Mr Smith let out a cry of anger, with his eyes shining with annoyance. Mr Smith，whose patience had worn thin, called Tom's father. Learning his son had been so badly-behaved，Tom's father felt so angry that he turned around and glared at Tom, “You'd better explain what's going on ！”However, Tom hung his head and said nothing, which made him frown. He pulled a long face in anger. Eventually, unable to contain his anger, he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.读后续写微技能--心理描写之开心She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching. Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children's laughter floated in the air. 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Suddenly, Anne let out a cry of regret，“I'm so silly.”Then she dashed out before I could say a word, leaving me dumb with deep regret. I froze there, with regretful tears in my eyes. If only I had not quarreled withAnne! Finally, with guilt and regret flowing in my mind, Irushed out to apologize to Anne.读后续写微技能--心理描写之焦虑与担忧Lost in the mountain, they had nothing to do but wait for rescue anxiously. As the evening wore on, they grew increasingly/more and more worried. Worse still/Even worse, fog began creeping into the forest. Everything around them was swallowed by the darkness, undoubtedly leaving them even more helpless. Tony stood there helplessly, frowning. Mary was close to crying with anxiety and fear.。
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2024届高考英语读后续写素材积累——情绪描写3焦虑、恐惧、安心1. As if trapped in a labyrinth of worries, she navigatedthrough the day, desperately seeking an escape.（仿佛被困在忧虑的迷宫中，她度过一天，拼命寻找出口。
）2. With unease gripping his heart, he recoiled from social interactions, fearing the judgment of others.（心中充满不安，他回避社交，担心别人的评判。
）3. Unable to silence the incessant whispers of doubt in her mind, she was haunted by a constant sense of apprehension.（无法消除心中持续不断的疑虑，她被持续的担忧所困扰。
）4. With every passing moment, his anxiety intensified, fracturing his posure and leaving him breathless.（随着时间的流逝，他的焦虑加剧，打破了他的镇定，让他喘不过气来。
）5. In the depths of her soul, a storm brewed, engulfing her in a whirlwind of anxious thoughts and overwhelming emotions.（她灵魂的深处汹涌着一场风暴，将她卷入怀揣焦虑的思绪和无法承受的情感中。
）6. Like a captive to her own worries, she was ensnared in a web of selfdoubt, struggling to find a way out.（就像被自己的担忧所困住的囚犯，她陷入了自我怀疑的网中，挣扎着寻找出路。
我国高中英语读后续写研究述评与启示
我国高中英语读后续写研究述评与启示摘要：随着读后续写纳入高考题型，国内相关研究呈现急速增长趋势。
本文深入梳理了当前高中英语读后续写研究取得的进展，发现研究主要集中在三方面，即读后续写的促学作用、教学策略和此类测试对英语教学的反拨作用。
当前研究肯定了读后续写对学生英语写作技能和心理素质的积极影响，也从教学实践和语言学理论两方面提供了教学策略。
研究同时反映了当前读后续写教学中存在的问题，很多师生把提高读后续写的高考分数作为首要目标，在教学和学习方法上存在应试导向，违背了读后续写作为高效外语学习方法的初衷。
当前研究较少涉及读后续写测试的效度与信度，教学策略的深度与广度也有待拓展。
关键词：读后续写；促学作用；教学策略；反拨作用一、引言读后续写最初由王初明（2012；2015）教授作为一种有效的外语促学方法提出。
此后的系列研究证实，该方法有助于发挥学习者的想象力和创造力，可以显著提高外语学习者写作中的语言准确性和复杂性，读后续写文本中的词汇、句法结构和语篇连贯等特征都表现出明显的协同效应（如姜琳、陈锦，2015；张晓鹏，2016）。
这些实证研究多以大学阶段的外语学习者为研究对象。
高中英语学习者的学习动机和学习环境与大学的外语学习者存在较大差异，针对高中英语学习者的读后续写仍然有很大研究空间。
读后续写2016年应用于浙江英语高考，取代了传统的写作方式，并将在全国范围内推广。
读后续写成为中学英语教学研究领域的热点之一，相关研究呈现急速增长趋势。
以“读后续写”为主题，篇名中含“高中”或“高考”为条件，在中国知网数据库中检索发现，2016年只有4篇论文，2017年增至16篇，2018年24篇，2019年、2020年分别增至32和40篇，知网的大数据预计2021年会有更多聚焦此主题的论文。
各高中英语辅导网站和机构也纷纷发出读后续写的应试策略。
面对骤然出现的大量信息，梳理当前高中英语读后续写研究取得的进展，找出该领域有待解决的问题，能最大限度发挥读后续写在高中英语教学中的作用。
高中英语2024届高考读后续写素材(犹豫+紧张+悲伤+愤怒)
高考英语读后续写素材1.犹豫John paced in the room anxiously, weighing the pros and cons in his mind. He was stuck in indecision, wrestling with his options. Today was the deadline to accept his university offer, but he was in two minds about it, on the fence and having second thoughts.约翰焦虑地在房间里踱步,心中权衡利弊。
他陷入了犹豫之中,与选择挣扎着。
今天是确定是否接受大学录取的最后期限,但他心存疑虑,立场摇摆,再三犹豫。
Part of him had always dreamed of attending his first-choice university, finally tasting freedom and debating big ideas late into the night. But the tuition fees gave him pause - his parents had already sacrificed so much. Could he justify putting them under further financial strain? He struggled over the choices to choose from.他一部分内心长久以来都梦想着进入他首选的大学,终于体验自由,夜深人静时激烈讨论重大课题。
但是高昂的学费使他踌躇——他的父母已经作出了那么多牺牲。
他能够再让父母承受更大的经济压力吗?他痛苦地在选择之间挣扎。
Consumed by conflicting emotions,he stared blankly at the acceptance letter, pen hesitating over the response form as his leg bounced uncontrollably. He was in a state of deliberation, second-guessing himself as he went back and forth. Looking at the phone, he longed to call his parents yet felt ashamed of his doubts.困扰的矛盾情感笼罩约翰,他呆呆地盯着面前的录取通知书,笔尖在回复表格上方徘徊,双腿不受控制地上下晃动。
超实用高考英复习读后续写主题语境完成句子：救人有关的实施救援的过程,事件报道的描写
救人有关的实施救援的过程，事件报道的描写距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。
以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
1. 救人有关的实施救援的过程的描写(1) “帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。
“Help me get Simmons out of the car!” Norwood __________________, who were left in a panic.(2) 诺伍德和朋友们把西蒙斯从车里拉了出来，把他放在一个安全并且离车有点远的地方。
Norwood as well as his friends pulled Simmons out of the car and _________________________, a little far from the car(3) 尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。
高中英语读后续写范文克服困难
高中英语读后续写范文克服困难Overcoming Challenges in High School English Reading and WritingHigh school is a crucial stage in a student's academic journey, where they face a multitude of challenges, both academic and personal. One of the most significant hurdles students often encounter is the task of mastering the English language, particularly in the areas of reading and writing. This essay aims to explore the strategies and techniques that can be employed to overcome these difficulties and achieve success in high school English.One of the primary challenges in high school English is the increasing complexity of the reading material. As students progress through their academic years, the texts they are required to comprehend become more sophisticated, with intricate vocabulary, complex sentence structures, and deeper thematic elements. This can be daunting for many students, who may struggle to keep up with the pace of the curriculum and grasp the nuances of the content.To overcome this challenge, students must develop effective reading strategies. One such strategy is active reading, which involves actively engaging with the text by annotating, highlighting, andtaking notes as they read. This not only helps students better understand the material but also encourages them to think critically about the information presented. Additionally, students can benefit from seeking out supplementary resources, such as study guides or online summaries, to reinforce their understanding of the reading material.Another significant obstacle in high school English is the demand for well-written, coherent essays and compositions. Students are often expected to produce lengthy, sophisticated pieces of writing that demonstrate a deep understanding of the subject matter, as well as strong analytical and critical thinking skills. This can be particularly challenging for students who may struggle with organization, grammar, or the ability to effectively convey their ideas in writing.To address this challenge, students must develop a robust set of writing skills. This includes mastering the fundamentals of grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure, as well as learning how to construct a well-organized and persuasive essay. Students can also benefit from practicing their writing on a regular basis, whether through in-class assignments or independent writing exercises. Additionally, seeking feedback from teachers or peers can be invaluable in identifying areas for improvement and refining their writing skills.Alongside the academic challenges, high school students may also face personal obstacles that can hinder their progress in English. Factors such as time management, study habits, and motivation can all play a significant role in a student's success. For example, students who struggle with time management may find it difficult to balance their academic responsibilities with extracurricular activities or personal commitments, leading to a lack of focus and decreased productivity.To overcome these personal challenges, students must develop effective strategies for managing their time and maintaining a healthy balance in their lives. This may involve creating a daily or weekly schedule, prioritizing tasks, and learning to manage distractions. Additionally, fostering a strong support system, whether it's through study groups, tutoring, or counseling, can be immensely helpful in maintaining motivation and overcoming personal obstacles.In conclusion, the challenges faced by high school students in English reading and writing can be significant, but they are not insurmountable. By developing effective strategies for comprehending complex texts, crafting well-written essays, and managing personal obstacles, students can overcome these hurdles and achieve success in their high school English studies. With dedication, perseverance, and a willingness to seek out resourcesand support, students can not only improve their English skills but also cultivate a deeper appreciation for the power of language and the written word.。
超实用高中英语读后续写素材知识清单2——情绪篇(2)
高中英语读后续写素材积累2——情绪篇（2）焦虑1.With every ticking second, the anxiety within me grows, like a vine slowlycreeping up my heart.随着时间的流逝，我心中的焦虑如同藤蔓般慢慢爬上心头。
2.The thought of facing the unknown future fills me with a sense of dread, as if adark cloud is looming over my head.一想到要面对未知的未来，我就感到一种恐惧，仿佛头顶笼罩着一层乌云。
3.It's the silent moments before the storm that my anxiety whispers its loudest,painting scenarios of worst-case outcomes.在暴风雨前的寂静时刻，我的焦虑情绪最为高涨，它在我耳边低语，描绘出最坏的结果。
4.Anxiety, like a shadow, looms over me, whispering doubts and fears that refuse tofade away.焦虑如同阴影般笼罩着我，低语着挥之不去的疑惑和恐惧。
5.Were I not burdened by this constant worry, I could enjoy life's simple pleasureswith ease.如果我不是被这种持续的担忧所困扰，我就能轻松地享受生活的简单乐趣。
6.The weight of expectation, coupled with the fear of failure, hangs heavy in the air,suffocating my every breath.期望的重担，加上对失败的恐惧，悬在空中，让我每一次呼吸都感到窒息。
新高考英语读后续写深度描写技能攻略：健“心”导行
• Taking a deep breath, Mary pushed open the door and stepped inside. 玛丽深吸了一口气，推开门走了进去。
心理活动描写
• Mary felt her spirits sink even lower. 玛丽觉得她的情绪更低落了。
• Mary felt a wave of anger sweep over her.
玛丽感到一阵愤怒。
神态描写
• Mary felt her cheeks flush.
玛丽感到面颊发红。
• I said nervously, my voice __tr_e_m__b_l_in_g__ (tremble) a bit.
• With _a___ p_o__u_n_d_i_n_g _h_e_a_r_t_ (砰砰跳的心脏) and __c_o_ld___, _m__o_is_t__ __p_a_l_m_s__ (
my heart beating wildly. (感到心跳加速)
普通版：He was angry.
No.4 愤怒
进阶版：
动作描写：
1. He stamped his foot in anger (气得直跺脚) and
ran out of the room in a burst of anger.
• When he saw the light from Mary’s candle, his eyes widened even