英语作文道歉信公开课
英语作文道歉信公开课
英语作文道歉信公开课复习上一节课学过的道歉信写作方法及常用表达方式。
提问学生：如果你写了一封不礼貌的信给朋友，你会怎么道歉？引导学生思考并讨论道歉的几种方式，如：直接道歉、解释原因、提出建议等。
介绍道歉信的几个关键部分：开头、正文和结尾。
带领学生分析范文，并讲解每个部分的具体写作方法。
抽几个学生作品进行展示，并让全班同学一起点评。
针对学生的作品进行点评，指出优点和不足之处，并引导他们进行改进。
分组：将全班学生分成若干小组，每组5-6人。
任务：每个小组编写一封道歉信，要求包括开头、正文和结尾三个部分，并尽量使用本节课学到的写作技巧和方法。
时间：给定30分钟时间，让学生完成编写任务。
展示：每个小组选派一名代表，将小组作品展示给全班同学。
点评：全班同学一起点评每个小组的作品，并给出建议和意见。
强调道歉信在人际交往中的重要性，希望学生在日常生活中能够运用所学知识，写出更加得体的道歉信。
布置课后作业：要求学生回家后重新写一封道歉信，将之前写的那封不礼貌的信进行改进。
在当今全球化的社会中，英语作为一门国际性的语言，在日常生活和工作中占据了重要的地位。
因此，对于中国的考生来说，英语作文的写作能力是高考英语考试中的重要部分。
为了帮助学生们提高英语作文的写作水平，我们特别举办了这次“经典高考英语作文公开课”。
公开课将于本月下旬在我们的多媒体教室举行，旨在通过系统的讲解和实战的演练，使学生们掌握英语作文的基本写作技巧和策略。
我们邀请了经验丰富的英语老师担任主讲，他们将根据历年高考英语作文的命题趋势，为学生们提供实用的写作建议。
在公开课中，我们将涵盖以下几个方面：我们将介绍英语作文的基本架构和写作技巧，包括段落构造、句子结构、时态使用等。
我们将分析历年高考英语作文的优秀范文，让学生们了解高分的要素和写作手法。
我们将进行实战演练，让学生们在实际写作中运用所学的知识和技巧。
我们希望通过这次公开课，学生们能够更好地理解英语作文的写作技巧和评分标准，从而在高考中取得优异的成绩。
2024届高考英文致歉信课件
Yours, Li Hua
time? Would it be convenient for you…?
假设你是李华，你校的外教Green先生打算本周五在 他的公寓举办一个晚会，并邀请你参加。但是你有 其他事情，无法参加。请给Green 先生写一封信表 示歉意。内容包括：
1. 对无法参加晚会表示歉意； 2. 解释不能参加晚会的原因。
, which is quite out of my
expectation, and that conflicts with your .
Therefore I am forced to adjust my schedule and cannot
make my presence on your . I sincerely hope that
I do hope you can understand me and excuse me for my absence. I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation. My aunt will come to visit us on Friday evening and we haven’t seen each other for a long time, so I can’t make any excuse to be absent.
Yours sincerely,
道歉信 开头常用句式
I am writing to apologize (to you) for (my failing to…) 我写这封信是对（未能做到）…而向你道歉
高考英语应用文专题训练怎么写道歉信公开课PPT课件
9. delay 推迟 n.&v.
10. absence 缺席 n.
11. pity/shame n. 遗憾
12. trouble 麻烦 n.
13. make an apology 道歉
14. apologize to sb. for sth. 因某事某人道歉
15. owe sb. an apology 欠某人一个道歉
I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it. I would appreciate your allowing me to _____. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. (再 次希望对方接受道歉，提出补救措施
怎么写道歉信
高考英语应用文专题复习
一、文体概述 道歉信是因为自己的过失或疏忽给别人带来了
麻烦或损失，发觉后给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。 道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽，道歉的 语言应该简练诚恳，并且希望收信人能够原谅自己 的过失或疏忽。
一般包括： 1.开门见山，表明写信目的（歉意） 2.解释原因+提出补救的措施 3.再次致歉，请求原谅（希望得到理解）
Family emergencies and work emergencies are two common reasons.
Where people can't continue to blame you after hearing them.
【好句朗诵】
1. I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time. 十分 抱歉我不能及时回复您的邮件。 2. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. 我十分抱歉没有及时回信。 3. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. 我再次为我的错 误真诚地道歉。 4. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. 错过了在一起的机会，我感到很遗憾。
高考英语作文道歉信 ppt课件(推荐)
Skill 2 for High Marks:
advanced words, expressions and sentences
高级词汇, 短语,句子和不同语法结构
1.I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have
caused.
定语从句
2.The reason is that I caught a bad cold last week and
I was too weak to go to school. 表语从句
3.I wonder if I could hand it in next week . I sincerely hope you can forgive me and accept my apology. 宾语从句
句式升级
The reason why I can’t keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon. That is quite beyond my expectation.
或：我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去 年出国深造的(further education)。他让我和他父母 一起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了 。所以我真的不能拒绝他。
第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释
我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一个重
要的班会(a class meeting) 。那是我没有预料到的
3. It is mainly because I caught a bad cold last week, which is quite out of my expectation.
高考英语书面表达之道歉信公开课展示课件
/under_t_a_k_e__th__e_r_e_s_p_o_n__si_b_i_l_it_y__
14. 难以接受的后果
an unacce_p_t_a_b_l_e_r_e_s_u_l_t_/Biblioteka _o_n__s_e_q_u_e_nce
15. 下不为例
n_e_v_e_r_l_e_t_i_t_h__a_p_p_e_n__a_g_a_i_n
your wishes. 4. Would it be fine with you if I... 5. I wish you could give me a chance to make up
for my fault.
写作模板
Dear Bob, I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that _________（道
10. 更加小心
_b_e__m_o__re__c_a_r_e_f_u_l______
常用语块
11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误
m_a_k_e__s_u_c_h__a__s_tu__p_id__m__i_s_take 12. 应当受到责备 _b__e_t_o__b_la__m_e___________
13. 承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder
Would it be fine with you if I____( 解 决 方 案 ). I would appreciate it if you can forgive me and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Let's take actions! Write an a letter of apology in 15
高中英语写作之道歉信课件(17张)
2. 格式指导
讲解公司道歉信的标准格式，包括开头、 正文和结尾部分，以及如何使用敬语和称 呼。
3. 专业用语
提供一些常用的专业用语和表达方式，帮 助学生写出更正式和专业的道歉信。
1. 背景知识
介绍公司道歉信的常见情境 和目的，如产品缺陷、服务
不满意等。
4. 案例分析
展示一封成功的公司道歉信案例，让学生 分析其优点和特色，并讨论如何改进自己 的写作。
Writing Techniques
The letter uses neutral language and is highly structured. It emphasizes accountability and transparency.
04
CHAPTER
Exhibition and Review of Student Apology Letters
5. 学生实践
要求学生根据所给情境，撰写一封公共机构道歉信，强 调语气、风格、责任和承诺等方面的要求。
THANKS
谢谢
Apology Letters • Practice and improvement
01
CHAPTER
Writing Techniques for Apology Letters
Uy letters
Begin with a formal salutation
Institution's Situation
A public institution has failed to fulfill its duties, leading to public dissatisfaction.
Content Analysis
英语道歉信(5篇) (2)
英语道歉信(5篇)英语道歉信1i am writing this letter to express my apology that xxxxxx.i feel terribly sorry about this. once again, i am very sorry for any inconvenience caused. i will be really appreciated if you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerelyxxxx亲爱的xx，(对方姓名)我写这封信以表达我的道歉xxxxxx(道歉原因)。
对此我深感抱歉。
我再次对给您造成的.任何不便深感歉意，希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。
谨启xxxx(自己姓名)英语道歉信2Dear Prof. Patent,I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago. For the past few days I have been in hospital with a continuous fever, which has thus prevented me from any academic activity.I hereby submit the doctor’s note.I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better.Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.Yours faithfully,Li Ming英语道歉信3Dear Mr Minister,On behalf of the United States Government, I now outline steps to resolve this issue.Both President Bush and Secretary of State Powell have expressed their sincere regret over your missing pilot and aircraft. Please convey to the Chinese people and to the family of pilot Wang Wei that we are very sorry for their loss. Although the full picture of what transpired is still unclear, according to our information, our severely crippled aircraft made an emergency landing after following international emergency procedures. We are very sorry the entering of China's airspace and the landing did not have verbal clearance, but very pleased the crew landed safely.We appreciate China's efforts to see to the well-being of our crew. In view of the tragic incident and based on my discussions with your representatives, we have agreed to the following actions: Both sides agree to hold a meeting to discuss the incident. My government understands and expects that our air crew will be permitted to depart China as soon as possible.The meeting would be April 18, 20xx.The meeting agenda would include discussions of the causes of the incident, possible recommendations whereby such collisions could be avoided in the future, development of a plan for prompt return of the EP-3 aircraft, and other related issues. We acknowledge your government's intention to raise U.S. reconnaissance missions near China in the meeting.SincerelyJoseph W. Prueher英语道歉信4Dear Bob,I am writing to express my apology to you. Several days ago, I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house. Unfortunately, after I came back from Canada, I found it in my luggage. I was in such a hurry that I forgot to return it to you .I will send it to you by post or express as soon Sincerely yours,Li Ming英语道歉信5As you are reading this letter, I bet that you have seen/heard about what happened earlier in our country.Tourists were hostages of a policeman here, Rolando Mendoza. After a few hours of the horrible crime, some of the victims were dead including the hostage-taker.I wrote this letter not just to apologize but also to let everyone know that we Filipinos are not all like Mendoza. We are loving and good-hearted people.For so many years, our country has been standing tall and surpassing every dilemma; be it small or big. Years ago (back when I wasn’t born yet), you have watched us fight for what we think is right. We fought for the democracy of our nation.. The EDSA revolution. But that’s just one out of many.Second. We Filipinos have been serving other countries for our families and we treat you as our own as well. With all due respect, I thank you all for giving us the trust through the years. For helping us to become what we are now.The Philippines is more than just a group of islands. We are a nation of strong and remarkable people. A country of beauty and love known to be hospitable and well-valued. I humbly apologize for what happened tonight. No one in this world would want something like that to happenfor life should be valued.I politely ask the attention of the world. Please do not judge and mistreat us justbecause of what happened tonight. I have been searching the net and found terrible things. Hong Kong advices to avoid travels here, China and HK bans Filipinos and that Philippines is the worst place to go.I can’t blame you for what you have decided but I hope that you could understand. Our country is now in a sea of problems. And I know for sure that we helped you in a way or another. Let peace and understanding reign this time.I know that this letter will just be trash but I wish that you would understand. On behalf of the Philippine population.. WE ARE SORRY.As a song puts it…And I believe that in my life I will see an end to hopelessness, giving-up and suffering. And we all stand together this one time then no one will get left behind. Stand up for life. STAND UP FOR LOVE Sincerely yours,Reigno Jose Dilao【以下为推荐内容，可自行删改！】【推荐一：《给导师的道歉信8篇》】给导师的道歉信1尊敬的导师，您好！请允许我以这种方式与您交流。
英语道歉信作文课件
英语道歉信作文课件Subject: Apology Letter。
Dear [Recipient's Name],。
I am writing this letter to express my sincereapologies for the inconvenience and trouble I have caused you recently. I am truly sorry for my actions and I hopethat you can find it in your heart to forgive me.I understand that my behavior has caused you a great deal of stress and frustration, and for that, I am deeply regretful. I take full responsibility for my actions and I want you to know that I am committed to making things right.I realize that my behavior was unacceptable and I am truly sorry for any pain or discomfort I may have caused you. I assure you that it was never my intention to hurtyou in any way.I understand that words alone cannot undo the damage I have caused, but I want you to know that I am willing to do whatever it takes to make amends. I am committed to making things right and I hope that you can find it in your heart to forgive me.I value our relationship and I hope that we can move past this and continue to build a positive and healthy connection. I promise to be more mindful of my actions in the future and to do everything in my power to regain your trust.Once again, I am truly sorry for my behavior and I hope that we can find a way to move forward from this.Sincerely,。
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Upgrade your writing
★ structure结构 ★ content内容 ★ language语言
★ structure 结构 道歉信写作“三步曲”：
◇表示歉意；
Para.1 Para.2
◇说明具体原因
提出补救办法；
◇再次致歉
希望得到理解。
Para.3
★ content内容 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3.另约时间见面。
书信（求助）
书信（申请）
书信（询问） 书信（咨询）
书信（约稿）
We have learned to write…
a letter of thanks (感谢信) a letter of application(申请信) a letter of inquiry(咨询信) a letter of asking for help(求助信) a letter of suggestions(建议信) a letter of apology(道歉信) a letter of complaint(投诉信) a letter of congratulations(祝贺信) a letter of recommendation(推荐信) …
15分
upgrade
21-25分
What makes a good piece of writing?
Good first impression 1.neat writing书写 Well orthly developed required No Chinglish included No Grammatical mistakes 2. structure结构 Exactly used words and 3. content内容 relatively changed sentence patterns 4. language语言
Yours truly, Mary
A piece of student’s work(学生作品） Dear Helen, I am writing to tell you my apoligize. I am sorry about that I couldn’t take part in your birthday party. Because I must deal with something important at home. I hope you can forgive me. I’m very disappointed and unhappy for can not to join your birthday party, so I decide to have a meal with you next weekend. Do you agree my idea? If you can, please reply me quickly. Thanks. Finally, I want to say sorry again and tell you “Happy birthday!” Yours truly, Mary
书面表达评讲: 道歉信书信文体
To upgrade your writing
你的写作
近年高考英语全国卷 I 书面表达
年份 主题 2010 邀请外籍教师当英语演讲比赛评 委 2011 向学校语言辅导中心寻求帮助 2012 向国际中学生组织申请参加夏令 营 2013 询问朋友是否方便为自己的叔叔 接机 2014 询问旅游广告信息（外国学校暑 假课程）完整性 2015 向外国朋友给本校英文报约稿 文体 书信（邀请）
◇叙述逻辑性差，解释欠说服力
C: Because I am ill. You know I am poor in health . I need to go to see the doctor so I have no time. D: Yesterday, on my way home I was caught in a heavy rain. As a 英语段落的三个基本特质： result, I have caught a bad cold. Although I have taken some ◇围绕一个中心（Unity）； medicine, it doesn’t help much. The doctor asked me to stay at home ◇句间联系紧密、过渡自然、合乎逻辑 (Coherence) ； for a few days. Therefore, I have to be absent from your birthday party. I am really sorry about that. ◇发展充分 （Well-developedness）。
书面表达评讲: A letter of apology (道歉信)
假设你是光明中学的学生Mary，你答应了要去参加 你好朋友Helen周末的生日聚会，但你因故不能赴约。请 根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件： 1.表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 另约时间见面。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Helen,
Task: Compare the “explanation” given by student A and B, C and D and decide which one is better. Why?
◇过于粗略，欠诚挚
A: Because I must deal with something important. B: This morning, I was informed that this weekend, I, together with my teammates, would represent our school to take part in a basketball match in Guangzhou. You know playing basketball is my dream, and chances like this are rare. So I hope you can understand my situation.