夹叙夹议写作教案

夹叙夹议类英语写作教案教案设计：周玲俐Teaching aims：1. Help students know how to choose a right story2. Help students know how to write a story right3. Help students know how to express ideas right4. Help students form the strategy of semi-open writingsDifficult and important points:1.Help students know how to write a story right2.Help students know how to express ideas rightTeaching methods:1.Task-based Language Teaching2.DiscussionTeaching procedures:Step 1. 【Task 1】. What do the writings of Hunan Province have in common?【学生反馈1】Similarities: Both of them include TWO aspects:One is ________________________.The other is ___________________.【设计思路】列出近几年高考书面表达题，让学生阅读并找出共同点，引出本课教学重点。

参考答案：One is to write/describe a story/ event .The other is to express your idea/ feeling.Step 2. How to choose a right story【Task 2】The following are two compositions written by the students in the NMET of Hunan Province. Please carefully compare the stories the students choose and try to find the differences between them.Passage A :In our daily life, everyone may have something lost or been stolen. Some may be found again quickly, but something may always be gone. So we should save what we have now.I have been lost something important to me. It was a book. It was sent by my father. I still remember that day. When I got home, I was doing my homework like usual. After finishing my work, I took the book from my desk. The book is about a girl faces difficult brave, and at the end of the book, the girl beat the difficulty. I know why my father sent it to me at my birthday party. I like it very much. Then my mother asked me to have dinner, I took the book on the desk, Whenever I came to my room, I find the book was missing. I was worried. Three days ago, I found it behind the door. It was my cat that did it.From this thing, I realized we should save the things around ourselves, like the love of your parents, the friendship between you and friends and so on. If I do that, I will be not regret to the lost things. (15分)Passage B:I do remember it was on a summer holiday that I lost a ticket of my favorite singer’s concert on my way home. To get one ticket, I queued in the sun about 2 hours, which almost drove me crazy. You can never imagine how delighted I felt when getting one ticket and how worried as well as disappointed I was when finding it lost. I was so upset that I couldn’t eat and sleep well.The next day, I put up a note in order to inform the person who happened to pick the ticket, feeling hopeless. However, to my surprise, that afternoon, a girl came to see me with one ticket in her hand. She said she picked it up in the street and she was also fond of the singer She alsowanted to get a ticket, but to her disappointment, there’s none left. She even wondered to keep the ticket at first. But she decided to give it back when seeing the note.She could have gone to the concert with the ticket. Instead, she returned the ticket to me. What she brought to me is not only the ticket, but also warmth in my heart. It is a ticket I lost and it is warmth that I gained. （24分）【学生反馈2】1. What do you think of the story the student used in passage A?____________________________________________________2. What do you think of the story the students used in passage B?_____________________________________________________3.Conclusion: The principles of choosing a right story are:_____________________________________________________【设计思路】学生在选择story时, 常出现的问题是off the point，或者是记流水账，或者是主次不分，通过对比、讨论两篇真实高考作文，学生可以找到选择合适story/ event的原则：concrete, typical.Step 3. How to write a story rightReview: What are the elements of a good story? (Unit 1, Module 3)①Setting ②Development ③Climax ④Ending【Task 3】Please mark the different elements of the following three passages written by the students in the NMET of Hunan Province.Passage C:Honesty is to us what water is to fish., and one can never emphasize the significance of honesty too much. As for me, the experience of losing my cellphone and finding it then makes me learn a lesson that it is honesty that helps remove the gap between people.It was a cold and dark night. I reached home after class, exhausted and hungry. I could hardly wait to have a nice dinner. However, when I entered my room to do my homework, I found that my cellphone was nowhere to be found. I was so anxious that I began to cry helplessly.Luckily, the next day when I got to the classroom, one of my classmates gave it to me and told me that she found it when she was cleaning the classroom. I could never express how appreciated I was then though we didn’t get along well before that.…Passage D:I used to be a negative boy and I didn’t believe the trust between strangers. But it was a little girl who proved that I was wrong.I still remember it was a sunny afternoon. After I walked around the playground and returned to my classroom, I found my wallet was gone. How careless I was! I searched all my pockets and my desks, but the wallet was nowhere to be seen. Maybe it was on the playground. I ran to the playground and looked for it. All my money and ID card were in the wallet and now they were lost. As I was buried in sadness, a little girl walked to me and showed me a wallet. “Is this yours? I have seen your photo on the card.” The girl said with a big smile. But when I was to thank her, the girl ran away quickly.…Passage EOne can never be too careful when faced with something important. Being careless may make your life a real mess.I remembered I lost something significant to me years ago, my ID card. It was a cloudy day and an important exam was coming, in which I had to use my ID card! I searched everywhere for it, my bedroom, the living room, even the bathroom. However, it seemed that my ID card was nowhere to be seen. To make the things worse, I missed the exam.Upset and sad, I sat down near my desk and felt like crying. Then I noticed it was there, lying in silence next to my textbook. After reading the words on a note, I knew that I dropped it on my way home and a nice guy picked and tried to find my parents. I just didn’t know it.…【学生反馈3】The elements of Passage C : ____________________________________ The elements of Passage D : ____________________________________The elements of Passage E : ____________________________________【设计思路】这三篇文章都是高考中的优秀作文。