基础写作——人物介绍
人物传记类写作指导
高中英语基础写作：人物传记人物传记也是记叙文体的一种，但人物传记主要是写名人或伟人的生平、事迹。
因此，写人物传记时，要抓住其出生年月、主要事迹、人们的评论等进行叙述。
人物传记的写作模式：总：总体介绍人物（姓名，身份，地位，主要成就（尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺）Eg. 1.Einstein, who discovered the “Relativity Theory”, is well known in the world.2.Howard Carter is one of the most famous explorers (that) the world has ever known.3.ShakesPeare, who was a son from a poor family, a man of little education, write plays and poems that are read allover the world.4.Tomas Edison, born in America, was a great scientist and inventor.Practice:1) Born in ______ on __________, ________ is a ________________.2) ___________, the son of a _____ family, was born in ______ on ____________.3) XXX ,______________________________, is a beautiful girl/ handsome boy.分:按时间顺序介绍人物一生,用议论性的语言刻画人物成长经历，教育情况，兴趣爱好，性格品质，工作经历，感人事迹，突出成绩，功过是非总：总结评价人物：影响，启示sb. Still live in one’s heartsb. Set a good example for …sb be regarded by everyonePeople sing high praise for sbPeople think highly of sbsb. Be regarded asremember sb for everlet us realize that….…have a great effect on sbsb. teach us that….参考范文1.Helen Keller is considered as the most famous disabled woman in the world due to her strength and perseverance.She was born a beautiful and intelligent girl but when she was 19 months old, a terrible disaster happened to her and led to her deafness and blindness forever. But she tried her best to learn speaking and finally she realized her dream to be an excellent speaker. From where I stand, life is very unfair to her but she never gives up to the difficulties she meets. She never bends her head but always hold it high. That is why I admire her so much.Helen teaches me that we should never give up and never complain. So we should learn not to cry no matter what hurt and sorrow we face in our life.参考范文2.请根据以下提示，用英语给“中国日报”写一篇简讯介绍我国著名的跨栏运动员--刘翔，内容要点如下：刘翔中国第一个男子奥运田径冠军(track champion)籍贯：生日上海；1983最值得骄傲的事1）雅典奥运会平世界纪录2）2006年瑞士洛桑田径超级大奖赛冠军（a super grand prix in Lausanne, Switzerland），打破沉睡13年之久英国运动员保持的世界纪录下一个目标2008北京奥运会夺冠，为国争光注意：1）要有标题。
人物介绍
Hobbies
*love / like / enjoy / be fond of (doing)
sth., like … the best, feel like doing sth.,
Born into a rich family on November
2,1910, he passed away due to disease
in Beijing on April 24, 2005.
钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最 伟大的医生之一.
Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 概况: 尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文 章简洁，通顺
我很善长口语，计算机是我的强项。
I’m good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 在他的业余时间里她大都听音乐读小说.
In her spare time she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.
二、常用词汇和句型： 1概况age, sex, birth-place, background *…was born on… / in… *…is 15 (years old) & a boy of 15 & a 15-
基础写作之-人物介绍
选取具有代表性和典型性的事件和经历，展示历 03 史人物的形象和特点，同时注意史实的准确性和
客观性。
文学作品中的人物介绍
01 分析文学作品的主题和情节，确定人物在作品中 的地位和作用，如主角、配角、反派等。
选取具有代表性和感人至深的 事件和经历，展现人物的品质 和精神风貌，激发读者的共鸣 和关注。
虚构人物介绍
根据创作需求和故事情节，构思 虚构人物的基本信息和背景，包 括姓名、年龄、性别、职业等。
设定虚构人物的性格特点和行为 习惯，以及其与其他人物的关系
和互动方式。
通过虚构人物的语言、行为、心 理等方面的描写，刻画出独特、 鲜明的人物形象，为故事情节的
实事求是
在介绍人物时，要遵循实 事求是的原则，不夸大其 词也不歪曲事实。
客观评价
对人物的评价要保持客观 公正的态度，避免主观臆 断和情感色彩过浓。
全面展现
在介绍人物时，要尽量全 面展现其各个方面的特点 和经历，使读者对人物有 一个全面的了解。
不同类型人物介绍的写作要
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历史人物介绍
确定历史人物的时代背景和身份地位，包括其政 01 治、经济、文化等方面的成就和贡献。
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引入权威人士或专家学者的观点和评价，提升新闻报道的权威
性和可信度。
文学创作中的人物塑造
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塑造个性鲜明的人物
通过人物介绍，展现人物的独特性格、行为习惯、 价值观念等，使人物形象更加立体、生动。
推动情节发展
人物介绍在文学作品中常作为情节发展的铺垫， 通过介绍人物之间的关系、矛盾冲突等，为故事 展开打下基础。
人物地点介绍(基础写作)
Possible version: The first African-American president Barack Hussein Obama, whose father is from Kenya and mother is a white American, was born on August 4, 1961. In 1983, he graduated from Columbia University, after which he obtained the doctor’s degree of law department in Harvard University in 1991. From 1991 to 1996, he served as a civil rights lawyer and then was elected to be a senator of Illinois in 1997. In 2005, he became the senator of the U.S. and on November 5, 2008 he eventually won the presidential election. Married in 1992, he is now a kind father of two daughters.
Dear Tom, In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our national Stadium---the Bird’s nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you. The Bird’s nest, which looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches and can hold about 90,000 spectators, is located in the north of Beijing and covers an area of 58,000 square meters. It was built from December, 2003 and was completed in December, 2007. During the Olympic Games, we will host the track and field events as well as soccer matches there and after the Games it well be used for large entertainment performances and sports events. The Bird’s Nest is thought highly of by many people. Kofi Annan gave the thumbs-up to its design and said that it would be a wonder in architecture in the history of the global games. I hope that my introduction will satisfy you. Yours faithfully, Li Ming
人物介绍英语作文专题
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评价（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短 语/词组）
1）裴继升给我们作出了榜样, 大家都赞扬他。 Pei Jishengs_e_t_s__u_s__a_g__o_o_d__e_x_a_m__p_l_e___,so all
the people ___t_h_i_n_k__h_ig_h__ly__o_f_________him. 2）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,并且将会作
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基础写作: 众所周知, 刘翔以世界飞人而出名,
在男子110米栏方面, 他是我们中国, 甚至 是亚洲的骄傲. 写作内容:
请根据所列内容, 向世界介绍刘翔. 写作要求:
用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容.
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姓名:刘翔 出生年月:１９８３年７月１３日 性别:男 出生地:上海 身高: 1.８９米 教练：孙海平 偶像：Jordon 专项：１１０栏 成就： ２００２年瑞士洛桑以１３秒１２破亚洲记录 ２００４年雅典以１２秒９１夺冠，平了世界记录． ２００６年７月１２日在瑞士洛桑以１２秒８８破世
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华实高二期中考试基础写作兼人物介绍之基础写作讲解
XXX is a very capable monitor.
Wang Haijun (Liu Xintong) has got a forgiving heart. / is tolerant. Wu Zun is very popular w
Character introduction Structure 人物介绍之基本结构
Title标题
基本信息 Basic information
经历和成就 Experiences and achievements
影响和评价 Influence and evaluation
如何写好描写人物的记叙文:
Lin Qiaoyu is majoring in music at Zhongshan University.
相关短语
1.be born into a poor family出生贫穷家庭 2. attend school 上学 3.at the age of 17=aged 17 在17岁时 4.during his childhood 在他童年时
• 温家宝总是举止得体。
Wen Jiabao always behaves himself / well.
• 李泳不但很有天赋而且很勤奋。
Li Yong is not only gifted but also diligent.
• XXX是个很有能力的班长。 • 王海军有一颗宽容的心。 • 吴尊很受年轻人的欢迎。
9. She is always ready to help her fellow classmates improve their reading.她总是 乐于帮助同学提高他们的阅读。 10. She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to her country.她为科研献出了一切, 对国家 作出了巨大贡献。
社会理论的基础——科尔曼
二、理性行动理论的目标 1、提供一种以个人理性为基础的社会行动理论，以此将社 会学的微观理论和宏观理论结合起来。 任何以个人行动为基础，阐述系统行动的理论都由三个 部分组成： （1）说明宏观到微观的转变。这类命题由表达社会特征的 自变量和表达个人特征的因变量组成。 （2）说明微观水平的个人行动和人际互动。这类命题由表 达个人特征的自变量和因变量组成。 （3）说明微观到宏观的转变。这类命题由表达个人特征的 自变量和表达社会特征的因变量组成。这样，理论体系 的起点和终点都在宏观水平，而推理过程中却降到了个 人水平。
三、理性行动理论的基本概念 与其侧重宏观与微观相联系的主旨相应，科尔曼的概念在 基本行动和系统行动两个分析层次上展开。 基本行动是指两个行动者相互依赖的行动。与这一层次相 联系的基本概念是：行动者、资源、行动者的利益、简单 社会关系（权威关系、信任关系）。 系统行动包括三方或更多的行动者，与此相联系的基本概 念是：复杂关系（权威结构、信任结构）、社会规范和社 会资本、法人行动。
最基本的行动是两个行动者交换资源，以此来满足双方的 利益，这也是人际互动或行动者相互依赖的起因。 基本行动是系统行动的基础。 行动者 A1 事件 E1 行动者 A1
A2
E2 最基本的行动系统
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（2）社会均衡、社会最优状态 行动者之间的交换是使双方都获利而又不受损失，如果 这些交换稳定在某种状态而不再改变形式或交换比率， 那么社会就达到了某种均衡状态。 ‚社会均衡‛是在多次交换过程中逐渐实现的。社会 均衡是一种相对状态。一般来说，处于均衡状态的交换 比起交换之前的资源分配所达到的利益满足程度要高。 ‚社会最优状态‛是在一定系统中最佳的社会均衡状态。
分析模式：‚系统行为的内部分析‛
2、理论倾向 （1）‚理性人‛假设 不同于帕森斯的‚社会人‛假设，认为‚社会人‛假设把 社会规范作为理论的出发点，人只是被动地按照规范行动。 ‚理性人‛假设是指‚对于行动者而言，不同的行动有不 同的‘效益’，而行动者的行动原则可以表述为最大限度 地获取效益‛。 但这里的‚效益‛并不局限于狭窄的经济含义，还可以是 社会、文化、情感、政治等方面的‚效益‛。因此，‚理 性人‛不同于‚经济人‛。 （2）理性行动 理性行动是为达到一定目的而通过人际交往或社会交换所 表现出来的社会性行动，这种行动需要理性地考虑（或计 算）对其目的有影响的各种因素。 理性行动不包括不具有目的性的情感行动和不具有社会性 的私人行动。
中职语文基础上册《写作：记叙文 人物描写(篇章)》课件
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例：汗水淋漓不止。黑色的汗水，带着带着黑
色的煤尘，沿着铜黑的脸膛，渗如了黑色的纹沟;
乌黑的大手攥着油黑发亮的车把;黑色的躯体，拉
着黑色的煤车
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这是一位普普通通的送煤老汉……(陈军《生
活的浪花》)
第十三页，共38页。
“他正在厨房里，紫色的圆脸，头戴
少年
一顶小毡帽，颈上套一个明晃晃的
闰土
银项圈.”
他身材增加了一倍；先前的紫色的圆
脸，已经变作灰黄，而且加上了很深的 皱纹；眼睛也像他父亲一样，周围都肿 中年 得通红. ……他头上是一顶破毡帽，身上只 闰土
一件极薄的棉衣，浑身瑟索着；手里提着 一个纸包和一支长烟管，那手也不是我所 记得的红活圆实的手，却又粗又笨而且开 裂，像是松树皮了。
第十四页，共38页。
• 3、展示人物性格：
白手巾，身上是白小布衫深蓝裤，脚上穿着半旧
的硬鞋至少也有半斤重。(赵树理《老杨同志》)
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孔乙己是站着喝酒而穿长衫的唯一的人。他
身材很高大;青白脸色，皱纹时常夹些伤痕;一部乱
蓬蓬的花白的胡子。穿的虽然是长衫，可是又脏
又破，似乎十多年没有补，也没有洗。
第十六页，共38页。
鲁迅
他的面孔黄里带白， 瘦得叫人担心，好像 大病新愈的人，但是 精神很好，没有一点 颓唐的样子。头发约 莫一寸长，显然好久 没剪了，却一根一根 精神抖擞地竖着。胡 须很打眼，好像浓墨 写的隶体“一”字.
有两片完全相同的树叶，更没有两个完全相同的人，
要把人物写活，写真，须写出他有别于他人的个性
来。
第三页，共38页。
猜猜他是谁?
• 有这样一个人:
• 个子不高不矮，
• 身体不胖不瘦， • 脸色不黑不白， • 眼睛不大不小，
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人物介绍人物简介: 注意掌握并背诵一些有用的表达和句型,并能够灵活运用.A. 【介绍出生:】1.出生于某地某时间: be born in swh in/on sometime2.钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一个富裕之家.Quan Xuesen was born in a wealthy family in Hangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911.3. 钱学森于1911年12月11日出生于浙江杭州一个富裕之家, 他是我国航天事业的先驱.Quan Xuesen was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911 and he was the pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry. (并列句)Quan Xuesen , the pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry,was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911. (同位语)Quan Xuesen, who was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, was the pioneer of a pioneer of China’s Astronomyindustry. (定语从句)Quan Xuesen , born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, was the pioneer of a pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry.(非谓语作定语)B. 【介绍年龄身高:】1. 17岁的女孩: a 17-year-old girl, a girl of seventeen,2. 在17岁时: at the age of 17, aged 173. 白云, 年龄27岁, 在24岁时毕业于哈佛大学.BaiYun, who is at the age of 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24. (定语从句)BaiYun, aged 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24. (非谓语作定语)BaiYun, a woman of 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24.(同位语)4.1.80 metres tall / in height, …with a weight / height of …他1米8的个头，体重70公斤。
他很受同伴的欢迎，因为他很乐观、外向、自信，乐于助人。
He is very popular with his fellow students, as he is optimistic, out-going, confidentand always ready to help others, with a height of 1.80 meters and a weight of 70 kilos.C. 【介绍人物性格爱好】ambitious 有雄心壮志的competent 能胜任的confident 有信心的considerate 体贴的cooperative 有合作精神的devoted 有献身精神的efficient 有效率的energetic 精力充沛的enthusiastic 充满热情的hard-working/diligent 勤劳的 intelligent 理解力强的 modest 谦虚的 qualified 合格的 independent 有主见的/独立的 selfless 无私的strong-willed/ determined 意志坚强的 well-educated 受过良好教育的patient 耐心的 with endurance有耐力的, with perseverance有毅力对….有兴趣: be interested in …./ show interest in …..在…方面有天赋: have a gif t/ talent for…..1.他有很强的合作精神. 他很圆满地组织了这次活动.He is so cooperative that he organized the activity perfectly.So cooperative is he that he organized the activity perfectly. (So放句首的倒装句) Such a cooperative man is he that he organized the activity perfectly. (Such放句首的倒装句)2.他受过良好的教育,而且理解力强. 他很快地就完成了这项任务.He is so well-educated and intelligent that he accomplished the task quickly.(so…that …句型)Well-educated and intelligent, he accomplished the task quickly. (adj表伴随动作).3.他不但对科学极有兴趣,而且在音乐方面有天赋.He not only shows interest in science, but also he has a gift for musicNot only does he show interest in science, but also he has a gift for music. (Not only 放句首的倒装句)D. 【介绍教育】1.考上…大学… be admitted into …University2.毕业于哈佛大学 graduated from Harvard University.3.毕业于…学校的…系graduated from….department of …university4.主修…. major in geology5.去….深造…./去…继续接受教育 go to swh for further education6.获得学士/硕士/博士学位: get/gain a bachelor’s master’s / doctor’s degree.7. Linder, 主修政治学, 毕业于华南师范大学.Linda, whose major is politics, graduated from South China Normal University.(定语从句)Linda, majoring in politics, graduated from South China Normal University.(非谓语作定语)8. 李平从…大学毕业之后, 就投身于科研事业当中了.After graduating from…University, LinPin devoted himself to the scientific research. (介词+Ving)Having graduated from…University, LinPin devoted himself to the scientific research. (非谓语作状语表时间,有先后顺序)9. 毕业后,他去了美国深造,并在那里获得了博士学位.Having graduated from…University, he went to America for further education and gained a doctor’s degree.Having graduated from…University, he went to study in America, where he gained a doctor’s degree. (定语从句)E. 【介绍生事迹】be interested in… /be fond of…在…感兴趣/喜爱2）work hard at…在…工作努力3）serve as…作为…4）devote his lifetime/oneself to…将一生投入到…5）concentrate oneself on…集中某人注意力做…6）do research about/ into…做关于…的研究7）make up one’s mind to do sth.下定决定做某事8）do sth with great determination and perseverance凭着巨大的决心和毅力去做9）be strict in sth.在…严格要求10）have a …way of doing sth在做某事方面有着…的方式11）try on e’s best to do sth.尽全力去做某事12）encourage sb to do鼓励某人做某事13）fight for/ give up one’s life for sb/sth为…而奋斗/为某人/某事放弃自己的生命14）win a prize/the first prize in …competition在比赛中获得奖励/获得第一名15)receive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize for…因…而获得了诺贝尔奖16)be good at… .do well in…在…做得好17)be crazy about… / enjoy …对…着迷/享受…18)make rapid progress in …在…做出进步19)set a new world record of …创造一项新的世界纪录20)equal/break the world record平/打破世界纪录21)win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal获得金牌/银牌/铜牌22）win the xxth place获得第几名23)be selected to/ become a member of…被选为… /成为…的一员24)study hard / train hard学习努力/训练努力25)go through hardship经历困难/挫折26)have a gift/ talent for …(language)对… (语言)有天份27)realize one’s dream实现梦想28)overcome many difficulties克服很多困难F. 【介绍评估】1)one of the best/ most important …是最重要的/最佳之一2)set a good example for…为…作了好榜样3)a model teacher/worker一个模范教师/员工4)be respected by everyone被所有人尊敬5)speak/ think highly of…高度评价6)be honored as (an excellent athlete)被誉为（优秀运动员）7)his hard work brought him great success 他的努力工作为他带来了巨大的成功8)he is the pride of China.他是中国的骄傲9)His heroic story spread all over the city他的英雄事迹传遍整个城市10)make great contributions to…为…作出巨大贡献11)Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success.坚持是成功的秘诀12)be famous/known as be regarded as因…著名/被称为…13)become a world champion at …Championships…成为世界冠军14)remember sb forever…永垂不朽15)a new chapter of history has been turned将翻开历史新的一页16)Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.雷锋以他的共产主义精神被赞扬语法，句法高分tipsA. 概况 :尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山１９４１年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.B.外貌,性格:巧用with做定语译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.C. 教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼1）Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.D．生平：尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.E．评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组2）He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.练习：1.高锟，1933年11月4日出生于上海一个富裕家庭，从小对做不同的试验产生浓厚兴趣。