雅思A类小作文范文 Aging Population 线图类
The graph shows the percentage of people aged over 60 in Canada, Finland and Korea between 1950 and 2050.
Summarise the information in the charts and make comparisons where appropriate.
Answer
The graph shows the percentage of people aged 60 and over in Canada, Finland and Korea between 1950 and 2050.
The number of people aged above 60 in Canada and Finland follows a remarkably similar trend. In 1950 both countries had 7-9% of their population aged 60 or above and the percentage increased steadily until 2050 when both countries are expected to have around 25% of their population aged 60 or above.
In contrast, Korea had only 5% of its population aged 60 or over in 1950. This number dropped slightly in the subsequent years and only recovered to the?original level of 5% in 2000. Between 2000 and 2020 the number of people aged 60 or over in Korea increased more rapidly and is expected to reach 9% in 2020. After 2020 the aged population is expected to increase very rapidly
overtaking Canada and Finland in around 2035 and reaching 30% by 2050.
The lower initial aged population of Korea can be attributed to the lower development of Korea in the early part of the 20th century, but rapid development and healthy diets in the second half of the 20th century are probably the cause of the increased longevity in Korea.
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表格图001 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. model answer: This table clearly presents and compares favorable pastimes in eight different countries. The pastimes, across the top of the table, are analyzed in relation to each country. As can be seen, about 60% of Canadians, Australians and Americans like watching television. On the other hand, this figure is quite low for China where only 15% of people watch television. Predictably, Americans like music at 23%, whereas only 2 to 5% of people in the other countries feel the same way. 20% of people in England enjoy sleeping as a pastime whereas in Canada and the USA, for example, the figure is only 2%. Interestingly, the Chinese like hobbies the most at 50%, as opposed to only 20% in France. It isn't surprising that the highest percentage of beach-lovers is in Australia and the USA at 30%. It seems that pastimes of people of different nationalities may be influenced by a number of
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线图： 例：Direction: You should spend no more than 20 minutes on this task. The graph contains information about the price in US dollars of a barrel of oil from 1995 with predictions to 2015. Summarize the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 开头段：转述原题+时态永远是一般现在时 ?改变关键词的词性 ?改变关键词的位置 ?同义词替代 ?灵活加入图表中的其它文字信息 The graph provides information about the changes of crude oil price per barrel in US dollars since 1995 and predicts the tendency of the oil price till 2015. 开头段常用词汇： ?The graph / the chart / the line graph shows … ?The graph give past and future data concerning… ?The graph demonstrates trends in/ an overview of/ trends in …Shows: indicates/ unfolds/ displays/ reveals/ reflects/ relates/ illustrates/ demonstrates/ describes/ depicts/ portray/ outlines/ provide an overview of…例：The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Britain’s universities. The graphs provide information about the proportions of overseas students and local students enrolled in Britain’s Universities from 1989 to 1999. 主体部分1+X句：第一句总结总体趋势，之后分步描述（起点，极值，终点）。总体趋势： Overall, oil prices increased by nearly four hundred percent from 1995 to