雅思写作语料库--职业成功感的源泉

What are the factors that contribute to the job satisfaction?
How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction of all workers? Include reasons and relevant examples of your own knowledge and experience. 何种因素可以带来工作的成就感，是否容易获得工作的成就感?
题目点评：本题不属于4类经典的雅思提问角度，写作的时候就是完成任务指令。

头脑风暴：如果谈及理想的工作，这份工作最好就是少干活，多赚钱，不干活，也赚钱，睡觉睡到自然醒，数钱数到手抽筋，一年有365天的假期，这该是很多人“理想”的工作。

但是，这种工作也仅仅是一种理想。

人们对于工作的期待是不同的，因此，人们从工作中获得幸福感的源泉也是不同的。

【思路拓展】
职业成就感和快乐的源泉：
1. 专业上成长的机会：对于很多职场新人而言，精进专业才华比赚钱具有更加重要的战略性眼光。

因此，很多人可能选择一份低薪和辛苦的工作，但是，专业上的学习和成长机会却给他们的心灵带来巨大的满足感，因为在企业中的锻炼代表着他们有无限的未来和希望。

2. 良好的工作氛围：企业中，职员要和老板和同事打交道，因此，是否对于团队有归属感，是否对于企业主有认同感也会影响职员的幸福指数。

和喜欢的人在
一起工作，可以结实志同道合的好友，和敬重的管理者在一起工作，可以激发工作的热情。

3. 企业的薪水和福利：很多人工作的目的是为了赚钱养家，提高生活的质量，因此，一份优厚的薪水代表了企业对于员工的重视程度，同样，良好的福利(例如带薪年假和企业股份)，也是现代人从职业中获得快乐的源泉。

职业成就感是否容易获得：
很多人渴望在职场中获得快乐和满足，但是，有时候，很多工作带来却是职业的倦怠和不满，因为很多人为了谋生不得不做一些自己不喜欢，和专业无关或者和不适合自己个性的工作，因此，职业成就感对于多数人而言，是不容易获得的。

【原创写作语料库】
1. Modern people usually spend great amounts of time in their work, hence，job satisfaction is indeed important for every individual’s happiness. 现代人在工作中投入了大量的时间，因此，职业满足感对于个人幸福而言，十分重要。

2. There are so many factors can contribute to one’s the sense of fulfillment deriving from a career 很多的因素可以帮助一个人感受来自事业的成就感。

解析：derive from v来自于……
3. A great many ambitious young adults are willing to take up some
low-paid jobs when they could benefit from their enterprises, both professionally and spiritually. Therefore，the chance of personal growth is a significant source of happiness. 当企业可以使人在精神和专业上成长的时候，很多年轻人愿意接受低薪的工作。

因此，专业成长的机会是快乐的源泉。

4. If the enterprises can provide the employees with the best welfare and satisfying salary, then, workers are more likely to feel the sense of satisfaction. 如果企业可以给员工提供最好的福利以及令人满意的薪水，职员们更有可能获得职业满足感。

5. If one could work with many like-minded colleagues or enterprising business leaders，then，he or she is liable to be satisfied with the job. 如果一个人可以和志同道合的同事或者有魄力的企业主一起共事，他更容易对于工作感到满足。

6. For most people，they always associate career satisfaction with their remuneration because they may take their salary as an indication of how much they are valued by the enterprises they work for. 对于很多人来说，他们总是把职业成功感和薪酬的多少联系起来，因为他们会把薪水当做一种象征，即，企业有多么重视他们的象征。

解析：indicate v 暗示;indication n象征
7. A number of ambitious young people are eager to work for a new venture even at substantially reduced remuneration because it offers more possibilities for entrepreneurship and career satisfaction. 许多心怀梦想的青年不辞薪酬低下,宁愿为新创的企业效力,因为后者有更广阔的开拓前景,而工作所得的满足感也更大。

解析：at substantially reduced remuneration 以极少的酬劳
解析：possibilities for entrepreneurship n增强企业家能力的机会
8. Also, the job contentment may come from the fulfillment of the task. For example, the rescue team came home tired and dirty, but they can feel the maximum satisfaction of a well-done job. 职业的满足感来自于任务完成的本身，例如，救护队员回到家时又脏又累，但因为他们做了一件有价值的工作，所以可以感受到最多的职业满足感。

9. The realization of self-value and the contribution to the society could multiply one’s sense of happiness. 自我价值和社会价值的实现也可以增强人的幸福感。

解析：multiply v增加……
10. It is possible that people can taste the sense of happiness if a job can provide more flexible hours because they have more freedom to do what
their hearts desire. 如果一份工作可以提供更多灵活的时间，一个人品味职业成就感的机会就会更多, 因为人们可以做自己喜欢的事情。

11. However，the sad story is that most jobs are either repetitive or boring 然而，大部分的工作或是重复的，或是令人感到枯燥的。

12. Some people have no alterative but to embark on some jobs that are not suitable for their characters or educational background. What they do is just to make a living and sustain the family. 很多人选择的工作不适合自己的个性或者教育背景，他们工作仅仅是为了谋生和养家。

解析：have no alternative but to do sth 没有选择只能做……
13. Even worse，the labour relationship in many companies leaves much to be desired. More precisely, workers sometimes have to overwork without extra pay. In this case, the sense of weariness and insecurity grows. 更加糟糕的是，很多企业的劳动关系远非令人满意，具体而言，有时候，职员不得不加班工作又没有薪酬，这种情况下，人感受的是职业倦怠和不安全感。

解析：leave much to be desired 远非令人满意
14. It is not an easy task to acquire the satisfaction we desire in every job 在每一份工作中获得职业满足感并非容易的事情。

15. Sometimes，we have to make sacrifice temporally in order to ready ourselves for our dream careers. 有时候，我们不得不暂时做出牺牲才能为找到梦想的事业做好准备。