环球雅思写作强化讲义
雅思写作强化时间：一个小时，无法超时上午九点考试，写作往往是11点开始考。
一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。
雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个，比托福等都长。
图表作文只占了1/3的分数，那议论文就占了2/3。
G类也要按A类要求去做。
Academic writing 的特殊要求1.Some teachers don't know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写，凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手，专业选手必须要用，do not.. Shouldn't 也是错的，特别提醒大家，cannot 中间没有空格。
如果你不相信我说的话，我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6，一个缩写你都找不到。
2.Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。
其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇，可以用numerous或者a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词。
A great deal of 不可数。
3.The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语，-se 结尾的都是英式英语，而这里的neighbourhood 是英式英语，而neighborhood是美式英语，有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢？不是这样的，在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式，但两者不能混合使用。
我建议大家-our -se 是英式的，-or -ze 是美式的，这两者的区别是最常见的，其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。
4.Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢。
More and more ,给大家推荐一个词，increasingly.5.Serious crimes harm people's lives. 雅思针对的母语是非英语的人，大家看考官的作文也不是很难。
但这里serious 高中词汇，crime harm 初中词汇，people 和life 就是小学词汇了，给大家推荐一个severe, criminal act, damage destroy, impair people's health, human being 这个词太大，不建议使用，individual6.The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.其中more than 换成outweigh7.Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to advertisements. 简单句不适用，中间加个连词即可。
8.The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it. 因果关系，加because 就很一般了哈，加个therefore.9.So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem! So 换成therefore,大家在写作中，千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈，好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的，所以，感叹号去掉，还有，must 换成should.10.We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, "treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated."不能出现宗教语言。
大作文，40分钟，最低要求240字，要求考高分的同学，建议270-280，7分以上的同学，我建议300字以上。
大家刚看了雅思真题库，不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分。
但是如果没有素材的话，你再好的基础都无法体现出来。
TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and familiesLanguage and cultureTechnology and the mediaDevelopment and globalizationCrimeAnimalsEnvironmental problems雅思不会出时事类的话题，只出争议比较大的话题。
常见的词汇，常见的句式都可以通用。
推荐大家掌握思考方法A.分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?老房子可以分成要拆的，和不要拆的。
这样子就有四段。
这样子词汇可以成倍增加。
开头用模板主题两段不要写一样长，一段可以多写一个理由，这样子你的倾向比较明显。
Some high school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to univ ersity. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?分成文科类，理科类的B. 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagree?形容词最高级/ only / stop（ban）存在漏洞替代法飞机很伟大，但存在争议，主体第一段先让步，写两个理由，好处飞机的。
主体第二段可以举电脑，手机，举三个反例Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?主体第一段可以先让步，效率很高，政府的投入很少第二段可以举三个反例，行人，警察，设施，只管司机是不够的，还要管其他的。
Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree?主体第一段，残忍，传播疾病第二段，医学，制药工业，航天技术，心理学的研究。
不用动物用人的话更残忍。
现阶段无法禁止，只能尽量少用。
C.裸奔法TM STREEC （真正的裸奔是streaker 音译啊）$Technology & efficiencyMind soulSociety crimeTime spaceRights responsibilitiesEnvironment healthEmployment competitionCulture populationMoney fun任何一个词汇都可以套用以上的词汇问题写作中可以引用的16句名人名言Education1 “A child miseducated is a child lost." - -John F. Kennedy2 "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire." -- W. B. Yeats3 “Technology is just a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together and motivating them, The teacher is the most important." --- Bill Gates. Technology“ The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think likepeople, but that people will begin to think like machines.”―― Albert Einstein 5“As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make reallybig differences in how people live and work." ---Sergey BrinMedia6“He who controls the media, controls the mind. “---Rupert Murdock Government7“Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will alwaysallocate resources better than any centralized government." – Ronald Reagan Tourism8“The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.”Saint AugustineWomen and Families9“The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joyineach other’s life.” Richard BachLanguage10“To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.”–CharlemagneCulture11“Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.”– Ruth BenedictGlobalization12“ Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is theeconomic equivalent of a force of nature—like wind or water.”---Bill ClintonCrime13“He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. “---Roman philosopherSenecaAnimals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way itsanimalsare treated. ----GandhiEnvironment15“Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastatethe forests.” --- quoted in Newsweek16“Don’t blow it -- good planets are hard to find.” quoted in Time magazine第三讲正确理解7种句子成分雅思需要的语法不是范围很宽，也不是很深，但对熟练度有要求。
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真题示范：1．Tourism is becoming good source of revenue for many countries. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of exploiting this resource.2．What is your opinion about the advantages and disadvantages of fast food?(2002,10;2003,1;2004,4)3．In 1995,an Englishman killed a burglar who broke into his house. He was sentenced. Do you think he should be sentenced ? How can we protect our property?4．With the development of a market economy. Advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry, despite the rich information brought by television. There still exists strong criticism against television advertisement. Write an article analyzing the positive and negative effects of television advertisement.5．作业：version:000121(2005年G类新题)Some people think that visitors to other countries imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree.They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views and give your own opinion.主体和方向例文讲解：真题重现：1．Some people think that people at the age of 55 and over should be encouraged to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation. Do you agree or disagree?2．A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Give the reasons for this and a proposal for a solution.(2003)主体相似方向不同：3．Computers are widely used for education and some people think that teachers will not play important role in the classroom. Disagree or agree?4．People use computers when they work, go banking and so on, but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?5．Some people think that traditional techniques and modern technology are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6．Oriental session7．Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what should government do?8．Is it possible for a woman to be a good mother and a successful career woman at the same time? some people agree that government should pay some money to women so that they can stay at home to look after their children. Do you agree or disagree?9．Modern technology, such as fertilizer and machinery has changed our world so much. What are the advantages and disadvantages? Discuss10．There have been many technological developments in the 20th century. For example, computer and electric power. Choose either of them, describe the change it has brought about and discuss whether all the changes are positive.11．作业：What are the purposes of places, such as museums and how should they be funded?审题和构思后如何展开段落题目重现：首段展开1．电视对儿童的影响？正面还是负面？你的观点A．Television is the most popular form of entertainment in the modern household.(引入话题)people of all ages use this medium to entertain themselves for an average of four hours a day.(发展话题)thus,television has had a tremendous influence on its viewers, especially children.(缩小话题范围指电视对孩子的影响)scientists now say that children can be negatively effected by constantly watchingtelevision.(继续缩小范围至电视对孩子的负面影响)。
雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义
雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义有效避免7种语法错误有效避免7种语法错误1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employer.2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency.2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years.2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics.2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar.3 Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers.4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create.4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives.7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.高分范文讲解范文讲解In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer.Example 2 Band 8One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models.Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs.A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax in comes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well.The government can no longer afford to support all the old peoples.Another way of solving the problem is to give back the responsibility to the individual, which means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the live after their retirement. This seems to be not a very fair model because there will certainly be people who can’t afford to save part of their salary; therefore, the government would have to care for them.A last solution is to go back to the old model of the “big family who cares for all their members. I do not think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have changed.To sum up, I have to admit that I cannot find a really good solution for this problem. All models have both advantages and disadvantages. Certainly we have to think about this topic much more in the future.雅思考官9分范文Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to reduce the amount of rubbish produced?It is true that in almost every country today each family produces a large amount of waste every week. Most of the rubbish comes from the packaging of the things we buy, such as processed food. However, even if we buy food without packaging, we still produce rubbish from the plastic bags that are used everywhere.The first reason why we have so much packaging is that we consume so much more every day than families did in the past. Also, convenience is very important in modern life; therefore, we buy packaged food that can be transported over long distances and store it until we need it, at first in the supermarket, then at home.Further, the amount of waste produced is also a result of our habit of using something once and throw it away. We forget that even the cheapest plastic bag has used valuable resources and energy. Above all, we also forget that it is a source of pollution and difficult to deal with.Therefore, I think that governments need to raise this awareness in the general public. Children should be educated about environmental issues at school while adults need to take action. Governments can encourage such action by collecting taxes on packaging, such as plastic bags and fining families and shops that do not try to recycle their waste.。
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PART II 论证法与主题分类结合真题详解7分范文(2011.1.22A&G)There are an increasing number of anti-social behaviors in recent years; People generally believe that the society is to blame. What do you think the cause s are and who is responsible for this.（反社会，犯罪）The rise of anti-social behavior has aroused wide concern throughout the world. And views divide over who should be responsible for this phenomenon.Among many factors, perhaps the most important one is that people have not got proper education about obeying social order. Usually, students in schools are taught theoretical knowledge and they are encouraged to study hard so in future they can find a decent job. Our education has neglected the teaching of respect to others and the society. The lack of education will have serious influence on people’s social behavior.On the other hand, the widening income gap can also be regarded as one of the main causes leading to the rise of anti-social behaviors. The economic gap has made some people become socially underprivileged and even cannot survive. Unfortunately, the government often forgets the existence of these people and does not provide any help. As a result, some people decide to do some illegal things for a better life.As for who should be responsible for this phenomenon, views vary among different people. At first, government should take the responsibility to deal with the problem. That is because the government should give citizens a peaceful and secure living environment.For another,the society also plays a part because social environment is usually the key role influencing people’s values and behaviors.In the meantime,schools cannot escape the responsibility. After all, the rise of this phenomenon is largely associated with lack of proper education. Of course, citizens themselves should also improve their own quality and law awareness.明确一个理念，社会犯罪的增加，固然有社会的原因，但是从主观角度来说，犯罪主体也是有很大的责任的。
雅思强化写作精讲班第8讲讲义--(B)IELTS 写作 34 个基础句型
雅思强化写作精讲班第 8 讲讲义34个基础句型(B)IELTS 写作 34 个基础句型前进类1 benefit from惊人的People who look for information can benefit from the amazing development of the Internet.2 invest inThe medical facilities in the rural area are still not very developed; therefore, the government should invest more money in these facilities.3 promote the development of…The widespread use of English has promoted the development of English training schools in China.4 It is obvious that…It is obvious that a DVD can hold more information than a book. More importantly, it is more entertaining.5 play a key role inOne’s job and age play a key role in deciding what one wears.6 enrich one’s experience…Working for a period before going to university can greatly enrich students’ experience and make them more capable in university.7 keep society safe and stableHarmony can keep society safe and stable, while clashes make a country unlivable.8 relax their bodies and ease their mindsEven though on holiday students spend less time studying, holidays relax students’ bodies and ease their minds.9 have a duty to do …National sports teams represent(代表) their country; therefore, the government has a duty to invest in these teams.10 afford people entertainment and pleasureOverall, computer games afford people entertainment and pleasure than trouble.11 create employment opportunitiesInternational business can create employment opportunities. On the other hand, it may damage cultural heritage of a nation.12 is less time-consuming and more economicalAdvertising makes our shopping experience less time-consuming and more economical.13 broaden one’s horizonsNot only can traveling broaden one’s horizons, it can relax one’s body and soul as well.14 fulfill one’s potentialWorking under pressure can help employees fulfill their potential.15 remove the barrier forMachine translation has removed the barrier for people who do not speak the same language.16 promote the cultural communication and interaction between… and…Multi-cultured societies promote the cultural communication and interaction betweendifferent ethnic groups17 curb the proliferation of…The government should take immediate measures to curb the proliferation of pollution.18 raise people’s awareness of…The media should raise the public awareness of the significance of preserving the ecosystem.倒退类1 live a stressful lifeIt seems that the people in developing countries live a more stressful life than the people in industrial countries.2 lead to crimesThe widespread violence and pornography on TV often lead to youngsters’ crimes.3 the competition is stiffThe competition in modern society is increasingly stiff, which makes many people cold and cruel.4 avoid…To avoid making mistakes, we should be very careful in answering IELTS questions.5 suffer fromNowadays, many citizens of Beijing suffer from mental illnesses because the competition is very stiff.6 stem fromGenerally speaking, children’s bad behavior stems from imitating their parents’.7 is a threat to…In terms of employment opportunities, WTO is a threat to many Chinese automakers.8 have detrimental influence uponObviously, long-distance flights have detrimental influence upon the environment.9 be monotonous and unmotivatingMany students find the schooling in traditional schools monotonous and unmotivating.10 cope with= deal withThe governments must take measures to cope with the serious terrorism worldwide.11 There is a definite link between A and BThere is a definite link between the adult crime rate and the crime rate of youngsters.12 spin out of controlThe situation in the Middle East is spinning out of any control.13 create tension and conflicts between…Cultural differences between the tourists and local residents(居民) may create tension and conflicts between them.14 be overly dependent on…Technology has successfully made many individuals overly dependent on it.15 stifle creativityThe traditional education in some Asian countries seriously stifles creativity.16 the population is boomingWithout effective control, the population boom will result in the lack of resources.。
雅思精讲写作班精讲班第1讲讲义
第一章 第一章 写作概述
60 分钟
Task 1 150w G: letter A:graph 1/3
Task 2 250w Essay
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评分标准（四要素作文法）
Task
Grganization
Idea
Language
第二章 第二章 议论文----概述
一、字数、时间 250-300 words 35-40m
As one of the most important inventions of the past century, TV is playing a more and more important role in modern life. However, some people are starting to worry about its negative effects on traditional families. I am convinced that the existence of TV has brought about alienation among family members.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.
雅思强化写作精讲班第3讲讲义
雅思强化写作精讲班第3讲讲义正确理解7种句子成分A正确理解7种句子成分1.Smoking is just a personal choice rather than a moral issue.2.Nowadays,more and more people agree that gambling is an unhealthy hobby.3.Junk food impairs people’s health4.In recent years,the Internet has been gaining in popularity at an amazing rate.5.Outdoor activities can greatly improve our health.6.Shopping,an necessary activity in everyday life,is far more convenient in the city than in the country.7.I found the employment situation disappointing.正确使用四种特殊句式B正确使用四种特殊句式a状语提前Obviously,if elderly people live at home,their children can take care of them and theyfeel less lonely.Overall,the function of a building is more important to a building than its appearance.I am fond of the Western culture.Specifically,I think the French culture is really second to none.Mostimportantly,thegovernmentshouldmakesurethatcitizenscanimprovethei rlives.In terms of attitude,Teddy Bear is a very good teacher.To reduce traffic jams,the government should encourage people to take the subway.Living in poverty,these people do not even have money to buy enough food. Without an IELTS score,one cannot get a visa from the embassy.b倒装句Not only should the parents spend more time with their children,they should also try to communicate with their children more often.Only in this way can this issue be effectively solved.c强调句It is the slits that make a chi-pao really special.It is the traditions in Beijing that attract many foreign tourists.d虚拟语气If this were not true,then we would find it impossible to predict how the stock marketwould develop.The schools would seem very impersonal were all the computers to replace human teachers.。
雅思强化写作精讲班第7讲讲义 (2)
雅思强化写作精讲班第7讲讲义复杂句的六种内在关系如何写复杂句（A）IELTS作文复杂句的六种内在关系1cause and effect因果关系标志词1）表示原因的as,since;due to,owing to2）表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此)As a consequence,…（作为结果）As a result,…（作为结果）Consequently…（作为结果）3）thereby(以此达到……的目的)1The ecological problems are being aggravated;hence,it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment.2The government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation,thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment.2exemplification举例关系标志词Take…for example.(以……为例)for instance,（比如……）To illustrate,…(例如…..)As an apt illustration,…（作为例证,……）Consider,for example…(以……为例)1The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate.Take China for example,when youngsters go to the movies,it is common for them to choose Hollywood blockbusters over domestic films.2Animals are humans’companions.To illustrate,dolphins often rescue sailors from sinking ships.3comparison and contrast对比关系标志词while…/whilst…/whereas…By contrast,…1While/Whilst modern man leads a stressful life,our ancestors could often perform their business in a leisurely fashion.2The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced.In contrast,their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.4Concession让步关系标志词Despite/In spite of/Notwithstanding…(尽管…)Nonetheless/Nevertheless，(尽管如此)Even though…(尽管)=Although1In spite of the disadvantages animal experimentation can bring about, many scientists insist on continuing this practice.2The government plays a crucial role in scientific research;nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.5Supposition假设论证标志词provided that…（如果）If…1Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals,animal experimentation should be continued.2If large companies are moved to the countryside,the traffic congestion in cities will be alleviated substantially.6Modification修饰关系标志词that,who,which1In this day and age,we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly like the buildings our ancestors built.2Today,teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies,which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.。
雅思写作强化加冲刺讲义
高赛雅思写作高分讲义（强化+冲刺）Writing20‟+40‟2种写法：段首顶格,段与段间隔一行(better) / 段首空4个英文字符段与段不空行Task 120分钟内写完分清什么图----找研究对象----2大审题方法Picture常考：A. Line graph / Curve chart 曲线图Bar chart / Column diagram 柱形/条形图Pie chart 饼图B. Flow chart 流程图一般分3段，尽可能用被动语态，不用第一人称A时态：Part 1 Simple Present（现在所见的）Part 2 Simple past （the changes itself in the past）Part 3 Simple present (现在所看到的趋势)Basic Pattern:连接手段必须有“如图所示”；四大要素，首段末句点题Part 1 4 major factors: pictures, objects, time, and dataPart 2 4 changes (textual level) + 6 comparisons (sentence level)Part 3 小结+趋势(上升或下降)4 changes: 升降波平6 comparisons:分比；比率；倍；分（1/3）；数值；排位place, positionBFlow chart: 一般现在时，中间多用被动语态Part 1 2-3 major factors: pictures, objects, given conditions, (materials given)Part 2 Process described: Passive被动（with connectives: step / stage）Part 3 Result indicated两大审题方法：切割分析法就明显的曲线形状进行切割分段（2条线不在一条直线上，2条线不属于同类变化）；迅速标上段号和点号，点>段（如下图，4点3段）1 2 3 4简易图示法如：3块饼图，每块有ABCD4个对象，则分别对这4个对象进行分析，看其各在1-2，2-3图中的变化趋势（上升或下降）Writing 写作模板最好不要全部照搬，有能力自己做点修改，使其个性化很大程度上：to a large extent, in a great/large degree, for the most part很小程度上：to some extent, in some degree, for some part/partly/in partTask 1除流程图外：As can be seen from the picture(table/figure/diagram/ line graph/bar chart/pie chart), it illustrated (shown) explicitly (obviously) X (that X covers the years/months from … to …).According to / In accordance with the figures / data (dada无复数) given in the picture, X significantly (greatly/ dramatically/ noticeably) fell from … to … in 19.. to in 19.., whereas. Also / Moreover / Furthermore from the picture it can be seen that there was a sharp decline / increase from…, while…. Based upon / Relying on the figures / data given in the picture, it started / had its starting point at … in 19.., reached the highest point / peaked at … in 19.. and gave its finishing point / finished at …in 19..; on the contrary, …. In addition to / What is more what has previously been referred to , the remaining / rest of all the figures (the other figures) did not indicate/ display/ show a noticeable increase or decrease; on the other hand/ in contrast,…From not only what was demonstrated in the picture but also what has been mentioned/specified or described earlier in the passage, it can be seen very clearly that there is (seems/appears to be用seem/appear不能用clearly) a tendency which is on the (gradual/ remarkable) increase/ decline (of object)….流程图：As can be seen/ shown from the picture/ flow chart, it illustrates/ shows explicitly/obviously X. There are some conditions/materials given in the picture…. The general process which concerns/ involves several/some cycles will be described/ conveyed as follows.In the first stage,…Next is the second stage in which…After that we have the third stage where…Finally in Stage Four…From not only what was demonstrated/showed in the picture but also what has been mentioned earlier in the passage, it can be seen very clearly that only in this way or by this kind of process can (subject: Oil)… be made or produced.Task 2 40分钟完成高分词汇：AA，AB重现；连字符词语: win-win situation; 名词化短语；一词多义的单词：bridge n. / vt. Brave adj. / vt. 勇敢面对六大结构：后置定语；排比句not only… but also…等；同位语；名词性从句；虚拟语气；否定兼倒装：Only in this way can we…; Not only verb + subjectFirst and Last注意首句和末句；首段和末段；每段的首句和末句五种题型：(1side一分写法，正或反面选其一；2side两分写法，正反面都要写，易拿高分)Do you agree /disagree? What is your opinion? (1/2-side)观点性辩论文To what extent do you agree or disagree? (1/2-side)Discuss both sides… (2-side)现象/说明性论述文Problem-Solution (Why-Because, Causes-Effects) (2-side)General-Particular (2-side)1 辩论文（一分法/二分法）一分法完全赞成/反对Part 1 我同/反间接或直接点题Part 2 同/反1同/反2 理由，举例Part 3 我同/反二分法7-8分1 2 3Part 1 我同/反/中立间接点题Part 2 同同反反反同Part 3 我同/我反/中立我同我反3种写法：势均力敌同=反先扬后抑同>反先抑后扬同<反第一种“同=反”比较难写，不要轻易尝试Part 1 首段末句必须中立点题Part 2 中间部分必须互反：利弊，迟早，新旧，今昔对比互反Part 3 末段首句必须明确表态（赞成/反对）2．论述文Question-Answer PatternPart 1 WhatPart 2 Why1Why2Part 3 How常考话题：新技术，电脑代替传统的工具等；教育；环境资源；家庭；交通；政府资助最新雅思大作文不变应万变语篇通式Mighty Writing[Chinese Version]:[English Version]:Task 2:1 - Side:There, nowadays/ at the present/ currently, exists a heated/ hotly debated discussion on …(Title).Some people maintained the idea that,…Unfortunately, other people hold the opinion that… I back/support/side with/take the side of/ do (dis)agree with the idea that…(直接)/ I share the idea with the former/latter, which is that…(间接).One (dis)advantage which can be clear/obvious/explicit to everyone is that…In fact…Let us take one example/ for example/instance… Let us have another example…. Let us give/ render/ present/ illustrate/ demonstrate/ show still another example…Explicitly/ clearly/ apparently/ indeed/ undoubtedly….Another negative/positive side which must be considered/ given consideration to is that…As a matter of fact… For example….Take the as another example… Take it as a case in point…It is self-evident that…. One /The first/ The main reason which can be clear/obvious/explicit to everyone is that… Another/ The second factor which must be given consideration to is that…. Still another/ the third rationale which we must attach importance/attention to is that….2 - Side:At present there is a hot topic which never ever fails to provoke a heated discussion on….Some are firmly in favor of the opinion or notion that…does great harm to …. Yet others/ other people are firmly assured/fully convinced that…Before my opinion is given or presented it would be better for me to discuss/have a detailed discussion on both sides as follows.We should highlight the notion that…since there are several reasons for us to say that. Onereason.... Another reason… (Facts stated/ Example given可以参照前面一分法的模板斜体字部分) From what has been mentioned before/previously/initially, it can be seen explicitly that…Seemingly/ Unfortunately, we should rethink the idea that……… (Facts stated/ Examples given). So it can be seen explicitly or self-evident that…Personally I am strongly in support of the idea or the circumstance that… (Solution: It is about time that…did …. Only in this way can …)Problem – Solution Pattern:首段末段与1/2分法类似，中间两段陈述理由，举例，如：One/ the first/main reason that can be clear/obvious/explicit to everyone is …. To start/begin with …In addition …Furthermore/What is more….(Let us take one example…Let us have another example…….) It is clear/evident that ….Another/the second reason that must be considered/given consideration to is… In the first place …. In the second place/next place …. Then … Finally… From what has been mentioned previously, we can see very clearly/explicitly that….写作真题实战演练We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can’t trust the journalist. What‟s your opinion? And what do you think is the important qualities that a journalist should have?The recent figure of crimes committed by the young people is increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss what the possible reasons for this problem are and how to solve it.Leisure is a growing industry. Nowadays, more modern technology used in entertainment. This may lead people to less creative. Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays people perform the everyday task such as banking, shopping as well as business transaction, without meeting person face to face. What are the possible social effects upon the individual and society as a whole?It is generally believed that education is of vital important to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions?The pressure upon the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to work too hard for their young age. Do you think it is positive or negative for their development?The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue tooutweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think that the government should pay for health care and education, but other people think that it is nor government‟s responsibility. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem?雅思经典写作话题分类A. Classification of Topic Area s—社会是一个更加概括的词，表示的也许是在一个国家的人民及他们相互间的关系。
雅思强化写作精讲班第14讲讲义--图表作文(二)
雅思强化写作精讲班第 14 讲讲义图表作文（二）You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.199621,8771,1671,90524,949199723,6611,5592,22727,447199824,5191,8232,48628,828You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the number of people at a London underground station from 6:00 to 22:00.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.You should write at least 150 words.Sample Essay 2The line graph illustrates the data about people at a London subway station from 6am to 10pm.As we can see from the line graph, the number of people using this station fluctuates over these 16 hours. More specifically, at first, at 6am the number of people at the station stands at only 100. Then, the number shoots up over the next two hours, peaking at 400 at 8am. After that, the number declines rapidly for two hours, bottoming out at 180 at 10am. The period between 10 o’clock and 12 o’clock experiences a slight growth in thenumber of people in the station, with the number reaching 280 at midday. Numbers in the following two hours level off at just under 300 people. From this point onwards, the number plunges to only 100 from 2pm to 4pm. The next two hours experiences a sharp rise again, with 6 pm arriving at 380 people. After 6pm,the number falls again, reaching the lowest point of 130 at 8pm. The period from 8pm to 10pm sees a slight rise, but finally the number of people declines again from 180 at 9pm to 135 at 10pm.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the line graph that the most people use the subway station during the rush hours in the early morning and the early evening.图表题的规律表示“分别”的副词respectivelyIn the 2004 Olympics, China and Chile won X and Y gold medals, respectively.表示“大约”的副词或者词组about ,around , approximately , roughly , just over , just underThe graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.Radio and television audiences in the UK, October – December 1992Sample Essay 3The line graph indicates the data of radio and TV audiences in 24 hours ( 6am to 6am the next day) in 1992.As can be seen from the line graph, there was a slight rise in the number of audiences from around 3% at 6am to about 7% at 8am. Then, from 8am to noon, it remained stable. After that, the number of audiences rose sharply until 8pm, peaking at just over 40%. From this point onwards, the number declined fast to around 4% at 6am the next morning.from 6am( 4%) to 8 am, reaching the highest point at 30%. Then, in the next 22 hours, the number decreased gradually, with a slight rise from 4 pm to 5pm and around 11pm.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the line graph that before 2pm, the number of people who listened tothe radio was larger than the number of people watching TV. After that, more UK residents chose to watchTV instead of listening to the radio. Overall, in these 24 hours, the TV audiences were larger than the radio audiences.The diagram below shows how The Australian Bureau of Meteorology Y collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.You should write at least 150 words.The diagram shows in four stages how the Australian Bureau of Meterlogy gets its weather information.In the first stage there is the “incoming information”. Raw data is collected from outer space, on land, or at sea, using satellite, radar, and drifting buoy respectively. Next, this data is analyzed and forecasted by experts. At this stage experts study satellite photos, radar screens, and synoptic charts to determine weather conditions. Stage three of the process is when the information is prepared for broadcast. This is done through computer which sends all necessary data to the fourth stage. At this point the weather data is broadcasted to the general public via TV, radio and telephone (recorded announcement).Thus, the process diagram shows how weather data is collected, studied, prepared, and finally broadcast.。
雅思环球雅思强化写作范文笔记
4.in the international spectrum=all over the world
3.significant=critical 3.chief=main
4.utilize=get use of lions of =many
5 destroy=lead to a disaster to 5.the excess of=too many/too much
副词：dramatically, exactly, comprehensively, accordingly, seriously
复合词：空
范文评语：
1. 复合词处为空，降低范文的总评印象，指标未完成。
2. 范文内替换为空，作者行文过程没有自主替换意识，相同概念全部避开，虽然词汇绕开了重复的可能，但variety由于该组空缺，不尽完美。
范文内替换（作者实力） 自身替换（读者实力）
1．Be poised on the brink of=face 1.contribute a lot to=lead to
2.growing population=more an d more people 2.the largest wave of=large
强化写作范文笔记
词法篇（五类技术指标）
第一篇：单边支持第一宝-八股文
题目：强化讲义8页some people claim that the increasingly frequent business and cultural communications are positive whereas others hold a different opinion. Discuss.