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中考英语复习：写作指导 (共19张PPT)
句式富于变化
3. I was careless. I lost a bag on the ground. (good ) ---I was careless and lost a bag on the ground. (better) ---I was so careless that I lost a bag on the ground. (best)
做题步骤
审
• 找: 表达的中心。 • 圈：要点 • 定:体裁、时态、人称等细节
列
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章 要点。
加
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总 分结构，开头或结尾的句子 注意简洁，漂亮。
如何写开头
1.开头常用词语： as far as we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知 at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说
中考指导：
English writing
中考评标准：
作文一律按档给分。 影响作文分数的因素：
1 题目要求、内容要点；
2 句子准确、通顺； 3 层次结构清晰； 4 拼写、语法等错误； 5 卷面整洁度；
作文一般框架：三段式
1）综述(总）：概括性强，最多2-3句话引入主题； 2）正文（主要内容）（分）：层次性强，一定要有过 渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话； 3）结尾（总）：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。
如何添加过渡句、连接词
• 补充说明 for example, besides， What’s worse! What’s more! • 转折 however, yet, but • 原因 thanks to, because of • 结果 so ，so· · · that
2020届中考英语一轮复习---作文教学策略教学课件 (共19张PPT)
范文
The Internet is changing the world.It is becoming an important part of our lives.
The Internet makes our lives more interesting. We can get all kinds of information on the Internet and share it with others. We can make friends and share our ideas and feelings with each other by sending emails or chatting online. We can also do shopping, study, listen to music and watch movies. This helps make life easier.
The Internet can change our lives for the better, but we should use it carefully.
当今社会，互联网对我们越来越重要，它改变了人们的生活。许
多中学生使用手机或是电脑上网，父母亲对此很担忧。请你从学生的角
度来辩证的对待互联网，告诉同学们应该如何正确的对待和使用网络，
你写对了吗？
1. We work . 主+谓
2. I like basketball. 主+谓+宾 3.They are studen主t+s系.+表 4.She bought me a pen.主+谓+间宾+直宾
主+谓+宾+宾补
中考英语一轮复习---作文专题复习教学指导课件(共17张PPT)
Tip2: 使用不同表达,使句式多样化
We _________work hard .We _______improve our ways of study.We _______________make a plan for our study in order to keep a balance between study and rest …….
英语中用于句与句之间、段与段之间常见的衔接词 或短语有： ① 表示时间顺序：above all,at first, secondly,thirdly,then, later,finally,recently, in the end,as soon as, After a while,little by little… ② 表示空间顺序：near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side… ③ 表示转折关系:but, yet, however ,though… ④ 表示因果关系：thanks to,so, because, for, therefore, thus… ⑤ 表示目的: in order to(that), so as to, so that… ⑥ 表示列举:for example, such as… ⑦ 表示总结性：in all, in a word, in short… ⑧ 表示观点：As for me,in my opinion, in my eyes, I think, I’m sure… ⑨表示并列关系：What’s more, in addition, as well, besides,moreover,…
中考英语作文专题复习
Learning aims:
1. 掌握写作的四步骤(一审二列三连四查)。 2. 能够根据要求列出关键词,学会连词成句 、成段、成篇。 3. 能够运用一些技巧使文章出彩。
We _________work hard .We _______improve our ways of study.We _______________make a plan for our study in order to keep a balance between study and rest …….
英语中用于句与句之间、段与段之间常见的衔接词 或短语有： ① 表示时间顺序：above all,at first, secondly,thirdly,then, later,finally,recently, in the end,as soon as, After a while,little by little… ② 表示空间顺序：near, next to, far from, in front of, on the left, on one side… ③ 表示转折关系:but, yet, however ,though… ④ 表示因果关系：thanks to,so, because, for, therefore, thus… ⑤ 表示目的: in order to(that), so as to, so that… ⑥ 表示列举:for example, such as… ⑦ 表示总结性：in all, in a word, in short… ⑧ 表示观点：As for me,in my opinion, in my eyes, I think, I’m sure… ⑨表示并列关系：What’s more, in addition, as well, besides,moreover,…
中考英语作文专题复习
Learning aims:
1. 掌握写作的四步骤(一审二列三连四查)。 2. 能够根据要求列出关键词,学会连词成句 、成段、成篇。 3. 能够运用一些技巧使文章出彩。
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
well work well. （the ending）
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
美(beautify)
• mHooswt pdeoopeleopclheoosspeentdo trhaevierl vtaocgaettion? We awmayadferoam stuhrevebyusaynwdohrledreduirsinogurthreeport.(the hoblidegayinsn. ing) • A lot of people travel.
中考英语写作指导
学学习习目目标标：：
1.了解中考作文要求及命题特点。 2.学习如何组织作文。 3.如何有效地使用连词。
1. 中考作文要求及命题特点
要求：要求学生在15-20分钟内，根据所给提
示，写一篇语言正确、内容完整，语句连贯的 短文。词数控制在80个左右。
特点：1.贴近生活，贴近时代，有充分的思维
加谚语(Proverb)
集中注意力于学习
We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies...
中考英语写作指导课件(共41张PPT)
• A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home.
Some other people visit friends or parents. A few
people work.
(th and enjoy your vacation. People who relax
初三英语总复习英语写作指导ppt课件
会，并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
• 提示词：family, lots of housework, learn to do, help, parents, feel proud of
举例 审清主题
• 人称：第一人称 • 时态：一般现在时，一般将来时
（个别使用一般过去时也可。） • 主题：做家务 • 文体：记叙文
teacher at school ,and so do I. My favorite teacher, Miss Lu, is a 30year-old young lady of medium height, with big eyes and long straight hair. She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes. And a big smile can always be found on her round face.
举例 初写文章
Summer vacation is coming, I want to learn how to cook. I want to cook for them. I think they will feel proud of me.
人物故事类的一些句子感受
• She wears glasses and often gets dressed in different styles of clothes.
大作文—复习策略 选题
人物故事 自己，家人，朋友，老师… 学习提高 学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦… 健康生活 疾病和卫生，食品健康… 计划愿望 暑假计划，学习计划…
大作文—复习策略 选题
最新中考英语复习---英语写作指导教学课件 (共40张ppt)
范文
A Visit to a Farm
Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. We enjoyed ourselves. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.
Key points： visited a farm had a picnic danced· · · sang Time order:
met · · · bus played chess told jokes· · · stories
Today· · · early in the morning · · · then· · ·at noon · · · After a short rest· · · the time passed quickly· · ·
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
2025年中考英语写作复习课课件(共25张PPT)
Write your story about growth according to your story line.
__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
correctly. • I write my story in 3 parts.
Homework
1. Finish writing the composition. 2. Polish your writing according to the checklist.
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第四步：巧用经典句型
一、开头句型。ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
It goes without saying that... It can be said with certainty that... As the proverb says It has to be noticed that... It`s generally recognized that...
(Have a discussion!)
第一步：都要认真审题，明确写作体
裁、要求和提示要点
具体做法：用笔勾画
• 假如你是李明，你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电 子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。
Hello Li Ming, I'm going to China as an exchange student this
——主题句 第一段（开头）
——扩展句
第二段 （正文）
——主题句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句 ——扩展句
（要视内容而决定扩 展句 的多少,并且加
上关联词）
第三段（结尾）
——主题句 —— 结尾句
How can we write a good
composition(作文)?
How can we write a good composition?
英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家
总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期 训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。 需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是 10句，很多考生的高分作文（100字左右） 的句子数量都在10至12句之间（以句子长 短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平 均10-12个单词计算，用10-12个句子便能完 成一篇要求在100词左右的作文。其基本模 式为：
keep quite while eating or drinking wait for the elder people to eat first give gifts to important people
第三步：使用关联词
1)表层次: to begin with, then, finally; to start with, in addition, last but not least; each/one coin has two sides. On one hand ....on the other hand, 2)表转折；but, however, though, although, after all, in spite of， fortunately， unfortunately，at the same time… 3)因果 thanks to, due to,for, since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thus 4)例证 for example, for instance, such as 5)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb; affect; have an effect on sb.; 6)表示喜爱的：be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; 7)总结 As I see, As for me ,As we all know, in general, generally speaking, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up, in my opinion
中考作文指导
Writing
Learning aims:
1. 学会作文审题，根据所给要点构建文章结构。
2. 能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。 3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会 组句成篇。
中考英语写作评分标准
一档文（17-20分）
写出全部内容要点，层次清楚， 语言流畅，有句式变化， 有复杂结构，至少2-3个， 基本无语法错误，只有1-2个， 或有少量由于使用复杂结构 而引起的语法或拼写错误， 但不影响意义理解。
Write soon.
• 假如你是李明，你的英国笔友mike给你发了一封电 子邮件，请认真阅读并用英语回复。
Hello Li Ming, I'm going to China as an exchange student this
September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. What is a Mid-Autumn Festival? How do you celebrate it? What table manners should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them?
Write soon.
要求：1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 须回复所有问题（问题1两点；问题2 和问题3各三点），并适当发挥
3. 词数100词左右（开头与结尾已给出， 不计入总数）
4. 不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名。
第二步：
列出写作提纲（Outline）。
不要遗漏要
具体做法：
点！
根据段落整理写作要点
Write an Outline 可以用英文或中文
Introduction
September 15th, family members get together
Main body
have a big dinner, enjoy the full moon, guess the riddles
Conclusion
September. I will spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family. What is a Mid-Autumn Festival? How do you celebrate it? What table manners should I pay attention to when I have dinner with them?