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2025届高三英语专项复习 读后续写 课件(共22张PPT)
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The car haWd choym(eretaosaonn)
unexpectedly stopped
IWfohuantd(eBveecnkti)hadn't
come home.
While-reading
Task2:Read for plot
Climax
Rising action
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was dragging a car stopped
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told me a her home
woman
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The voice on the other end began to reflect my own panic.
Over the next forty-five minutes I alternated between lying in pray and pacing the floor
in anxiety.
The darkness was gathering as she wobbled (颤颤颤颤巍巍巍巍) i)ninhihgihghheheeleslaslaolnogngthe
sthideesoidfethoef thhieghhwigahyw. Tayh.eTchaer chardhcaodmceotmoeatnouannexupnecxtpeedctsetodps,toanpd, alnikdeliakneoarmal
2025届高考专题复习 读后续写入门课件(共15张PPT)
to cheer up someone who was sad or worn out after visiting a patient
our community
to perform kind acts
Read for conflict & solution:
Kids were disappointed _________________________________________________. And I also wondered whether_____________________________, or ___________________________.
1.How did my friend see our Post-it note?
What is this?What do you use it for?
Lead-in:
Post-it note
to write down some important knowledge points/to remind us of something
Read for comprehension:
hand out food to the homelesssay thank you to them share a smile and conversation with the patientsleave notes with positive messages on the windshields of cars
What's the potential conflict?
they didn't see the reactions of the people they were helping
2024届高考英语读后续写The lost gold piece课件
_A_c_Bti_oa_nr_ts_o: _ne_xl_po_loa_ki_ne_ed_da_/ht_u_Cg_lg_ine_dt_o/_hn_ebl_d_lah_ni_sk_hl_ya_(n_茫d_s_然__地__).______________ _F_ee_l_in_g_s_:_f_o_r_g_iv_i_n_g_/r_e_li_e_v_e_d______________________________ Settings: the tough time
Continuation Writing The Lost Gold Piece
The key elements(要素)of a story
A story always involves in different settings.
ongoing actions and feelings
A story
Paragraph 1 A few years later, Clinton made some changes in his house. He spotted the gold coin, buried in dirt under the wood floor in the dining room.Clinton immediately realized that Barton was innocent. Hurrying to Barton's humble home, he told him of the amazing discovery of the coin and apologized to him sincerely for having suspected him. “But,”he asked with confusion, “you knew that the gold piece was not on your person, but why did you refuse to be searched then?”
Continuation Writing The Lost Gold Piece
The key elements(要素)of a story
A story always involves in different settings.
ongoing actions and feelings
A story
Paragraph 1 A few years later, Clinton made some changes in his house. He spotted the gold coin, buried in dirt under the wood floor in the dining room.Clinton immediately realized that Barton was innocent. Hurrying to Barton's humble home, he told him of the amazing discovery of the coin and apologized to him sincerely for having suspected him. “But,”he asked with confusion, “you knew that the gold piece was not on your person, but why did you refuse to be searched then?”
读后续写专题(1)ppt课件
以读助写·以写促写
读后续写
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读后续写的具体内容
提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据 该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词 进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给 定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
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第五档： 21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档： 11-15 第二档： 6-10 第一档： 1-5
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续写步骤：第一步：审题（读）
2.理清写作思路（“顺藤摸瓜” ） 吵架→出走→迷路→失联→自救→思念→寻路
→直升机→获救/？ 段1首句dark again：Jane又得在荒野度过黑夜。
可考虑描写环境及Jane的心理活动，如后悔？ 想念？期待？坚持？夜里会不会遇到野兽？这 一夜又是怎么度过的？ 段2首句woke up：上段应有Jane入睡的情节。 醒来后发生什么？自救成功还是被人所救？抑 或遇难？直升机有无再回来并发现她？
first place，in the beginning，to begin with…，to start with… 表“最近、现在”：at present，currently，lately， recently，presently 表“总说”：generally，generally speaking 其他：it is clear that … ，it is self-evident that…， there is no doubt that …，there is some evidence that …
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ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
确保语言连贯流畅的手段：转
用于表达语气的转折
表“让步”：although，despite，in spite of， nevertheless，regardless of
读后续写
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读后续写的具体内容
提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据 该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词 进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给 定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
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第五档： 21-25 第四档： 16-20 第三档： 11-15 第二档： 6-10 第一档： 1-5
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续写步骤：第一步：审题（读）
2.理清写作思路（“顺藤摸瓜” ） 吵架→出走→迷路→失联→自救→思念→寻路
→直升机→获救/？ 段1首句dark again：Jane又得在荒野度过黑夜。
可考虑描写环境及Jane的心理活动，如后悔？ 想念？期待？坚持？夜里会不会遇到野兽？这 一夜又是怎么度过的？ 段2首句woke up：上段应有Jane入睡的情节。 醒来后发生什么？自救成功还是被人所救？抑 或遇难？直升机有无再回来并发现她？
first place，in the beginning，to begin with…，to start with… 表“最近、现在”：at present，currently，lately， recently，presently 表“总说”：generally，generally speaking 其他：it is clear that … ，it is self-evident that…， there is no doubt that …，there is some evidence that …
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ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
确保语言连贯流畅的手段：转
用于表达语气的转折
表“让步”：although，despite，in spite of， nevertheless，regardless of
高一读后续写练习PPT课件一等奖新名师优质课获奖比赛公开课
Para.1 When I was a little girl, every time my dad was repairing something, he would ask me to hold the hammer, and meanwhile, have a conversation with me. I never saw my dad drinking or taking a night out. All he did after work was taking care of his family.
• 参照词汇： • pass away, die(vi), dead(adj.), lose sb. • regret doing sth.懊悔做过某事， • find sb.lying on the bed, • burst into tears, burst out crying, • only then did I realize ... • get over the illness, recover from the illness, • my heart is broken. selfless, • be worried about, be concerned about
Main idea: One Sunday morning came a call saying my father was in hospital.
Para.4
Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasions to have a talk with my dad. when I got to the hospital......
• 参照词汇： • pass away, die(vi), dead(adj.), lose sb. • regret doing sth.懊悔做过某事， • find sb.lying on the bed, • burst into tears, burst out crying, • only then did I realize ... • get over the illness, recover from the illness, • my heart is broken. selfless, • be worried about, be concerned about
Main idea: One Sunday morning came a call saying my father was in hospital.
Para.4
Immediately I bought a ticket for a flight and on my way I was thinking about all the missed occasions to have a talk with my dad. when I got to the hospital......
读后续写(以浙江高考题为例)(共25张PPT)
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02
content
WHO Arthur, a young man
WHEN One day when Arthur was on the way to work.
WHERE Park Avenue near the First National Bank
WHAT WHY
Arthur helped a young man to carry a suitcase; A bank robbery happened; Arthur thought the young woman mistook him as the bank thief and started to run.
The young man couldn’t get the car moving; a bank robbery just happened and he was carrying a suitcase.
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Classify the 10 underlined words and phrases.
目录
contents
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01
材料
350词以内
体裁
记叙文故事类 逻辑性较强
字数
续写内容为150 词左右
要求
1.原文提供10处左右的标有下 划线的关键词语，所续写内容 应使用5处以上这些词语。 2.两段，每段的开头语已经给出
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融洽度高
衔接合理 5个以上 关键词
语法&词汇 结构紧凑 150字左右 丰富&准确
Focus on the given
Tip 1
sentence of para2
first. Because some
读后续写语篇练习水中遇难课件16张PPT-2023届高三英语二轮复习
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Part 4 努力方向
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高级结构
高级结构
三连动 名词性从句 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语
定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语 非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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低头是题海，抬头是前途。 终将上岸，阳光万里! 祝大家前程似锦!
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Putting down the phone, Sara sighed. Tomorrow was her husband Tony’s birthday. She had planned to cook him a nice meal and then surprise him with the new mountain bike she’d bought for him. If she went to her mother’s house, Tony wouldn’t get his present for days.
高考英语读后续写语篇练习
——水中遇难
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读后续写2
Part 1 题目呈现
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续写原文
“It’s not looking too good, darling. I think you’d better pack a few things and go to your mother’s place. And you’d better take Rosie and Monty with you.”
The water was already up to her knees. Rosie was swimming beside her. Knowing the water would soon be much deeper, Sara ran to the car and opened the doors. She threw the cat basket onto the roof of the car and pushed Rosie up beside it. Using the car seat as a step she climbed first onto the front of the car and then onto the roof. James, safely attached to her back, made no sound at all. Sara stared down at the water which was rushing past the car. It was already half way up the doors, and still rising.
Part 4 努力方向
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高级结构
高级结构
三连动 名词性从句 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语
定语从句
状语从句
（包含倒装句）
强调句
副词做状语 非谓语
（包括独立主格）
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低头是题海，抬头是前途。 终将上岸，阳光万里! 祝大家前程似锦!
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Putting down the phone, Sara sighed. Tomorrow was her husband Tony’s birthday. She had planned to cook him a nice meal and then surprise him with the new mountain bike she’d bought for him. If she went to her mother’s house, Tony wouldn’t get his present for days.
高考英语读后续写语篇练习
——水中遇难
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读后续写2
Part 1 题目呈现
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续写原文
“It’s not looking too good, darling. I think you’d better pack a few things and go to your mother’s place. And you’d better take Rosie and Monty with you.”
The water was already up to her knees. Rosie was swimming beside her. Knowing the water would soon be much deeper, Sara ran to the car and opened the doors. She threw the cat basket onto the roof of the car and pushed Rosie up beside it. Using the car seat as a step she climbed first onto the front of the car and then onto the roof. James, safely attached to her back, made no sound at all. Sara stared down at the water which was rushing past the car. It was already half way up the doors, and still rising.
2025届高考英语二轮复习之感知读后续写课件(共36张PPT)
— 内容比较丰富。 — 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、
准确，可能有些许错误，但不影
响意义表达。
— 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接 成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
档次
描述
— 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所 提供各段落开头语有一定程度的
衔接。
第三档 — 写出了若干有关内容。 (11—15) — 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科 考试试题
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构 成一个完整的故事。续写的词数应为150左右。
准确，可能有些许错误，但不影
响意义表达。
— 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接 成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
档次
描述
— 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所 提供各段落开头语有一定程度的
衔接。
第三档 — 写出了若干有关内容。 (11—15) — 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科 考试试题
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写, 使之构 成一个完整的故事。续写的词数应为150左右。
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A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. ...
a happy ending
Step 1. Read for basic information
2. Language characteristics: (s语im言ple特(简征单) ): ?
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词 语。
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些 错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短 文结构紧凑。
两个要弄明白的问题：
原文有什么用？
原文
素 材
续写要写什么？ 理解 模仿
续写文
情节 基调
核心 矛盾
潜素伏 信材息
故事 框架
Para1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man
shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”
Para2:
The taxi stopped in front o_f_Wt_h_he_aP_t oislice Station
and Arthur...
碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人钱的小偷，最后到警局 传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在 Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
路遇一个路人帮人搬运装满钱的行李箱，而Arthur 错把路人当劫犯，最后澄清消除误会
错把普通小偷当劫犯，最后帮助抓到该小偷 错把路人当劫犯（即结尾2） 碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人东西的小偷，最后到警 局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在 Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
start my car.”
Conversation---direct speech(直接引语)
Step 1. Read for basic information
2. Language characteristics: vivid (生动)
Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. ....
可能情节发展
1
thief
the young man
2
not thief
Money
3
thief
another man
4
not thief
5
thief
the young man
6
not thief
7
Other things
another man
8
thief not thief
碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1） 碰巧把刚从银行取钱赶路的人当劫犯，最后到警局 传来抓到劫犯消息
Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
新高考考试说明
读后续写:
提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据 材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一 篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语 衔接合理。
第五档 (21-25)
made himself a suspect of the bank robbery.
the bank robbery.
How: How will the story develop?
Step 2. Read for plot development clues
(情节发展线索)
Find out the key clues(线索) based on the beginnings:
3. content (内容: plot development --- “W&H”) WPahsseang:e Aonme daaiynly tells: WhereO:anloendgaPya,rAkrAtvheunruehenlepaerdthae yFoirusnt Ng amtiaonnacl aBrarnyk Wahsou:itcAarstehuorn&PaarykouAnvgemnuane near the First WNhaattio: nAartlhBurahnekl,pebduatymouandgemhaimn scealrfryaassuusiptceacsteobfut
Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. ...
Step 1. Read for basic information
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
inside the
suitcase?
Step 3. Predict possible plot development
In a group predict how the story will develop:
money
other things
(tone: funny→ a happy ending) The underlined words:
语言 设定
高融洽度
tone (情节基调) language characteristics(语言特征) content (内容: plot development -- “W & H”)
Step 1. Read for basic information
1. tone (情节基调): ?funny
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. ...
Story narration (故事旁白)
...“It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said. “I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t
Park Avenue, the young man, suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, the bank, robbery, the shouts, people, the bank thief
箱子里 所属人
Young man身 份
a happy ending
Step 1. Read for basic information
2. Language characteristics: (s语im言ple特(简征单) ): ?
内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词 语。
所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些 错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短 文结构紧凑。
两个要弄明白的问题：
原文有什么用？
原文
素 材
续写要写什么？ 理解 模仿
续写文
情节 基调
核心 矛盾
潜素伏 信材息
故事 框架
Para1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man
shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”
Para2:
The taxi stopped in front o_f_Wt_h_he_aP_t oislice Station
and Arthur...
碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人钱的小偷，最后到警局 传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在 Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
路遇一个路人帮人搬运装满钱的行李箱，而Arthur 错把路人当劫犯，最后澄清消除误会
错把普通小偷当劫犯，最后帮助抓到该小偷 错把路人当劫犯（即结尾2） 碰巧碰到一个刚偷了其他人东西的小偷，最后到警 局传来抓到劫犯并找回银行失钱的消息，最后在 Arthur帮助下抓到另一个小偷
start my car.”
Conversation---direct speech(直接引语)
Step 1. Read for basic information
2. Language characteristics: vivid (生动)
Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. ....
可能情节发展
1
thief
the young man
2
not thief
Money
3
thief
another man
4
not thief
5
thief
the young man
6
not thief
7
Other things
another man
8
thief not thief
碰巧抓住抢劫犯（即结尾1） 碰巧把刚从银行取钱赶路的人当劫犯，最后到警局 传来抓到劫犯消息
Continuation Writing
（读后续写）
新高考考试说明
读后续写:
提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据 材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一 篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分）
评分原则
本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分
与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语 衔接合理。
第五档 (21-25)
made himself a suspect of the bank robbery.
the bank robbery.
How: How will the story develop?
Step 2. Read for plot development clues
(情节发展线索)
Find out the key clues(线索) based on the beginnings:
3. content (内容: plot development --- “W&H”) WPahsseang:e Aonme daaiynly tells: WhereO:anloendgaPya,rAkrAtvheunruehenlepaerdthae yFoirusnt Ng amtiaonnacl aBrarnyk Wahsou:itcAarstehuorn&PaarykouAnvgemnuane near the First WNhaattio: nAartlhBurahnekl,pebduatymouandgemhaimn scealrfryaassuusiptceacsteobfut
Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. ...
Step 1. Read for basic information
ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ
inside the
suitcase?
Step 3. Predict possible plot development
In a group predict how the story will develop:
money
other things
(tone: funny→ a happy ending) The underlined words:
语言 设定
高融洽度
tone (情节基调) language characteristics(语言特征) content (内容: plot development -- “W & H”)
Step 1. Read for basic information
1. tone (情节基调): ?funny
A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. ...
Story narration (故事旁白)
...“It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said. “I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t
Park Avenue, the young man, suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, the bank, robbery, the shouts, people, the bank thief
箱子里 所属人
Young man身 份