写作语料库

基本语料库：

1. teachers = instructors = educators n 老师

2. professionally well-trained adj 专业上训练有素的

3. highly qualified adj 合格的

4. knowledgeable = learned adj 博学的

5. traditional classroom teaching =conventional education = conventional teaching n 传统课堂教育

6. distance learning n 远程学习

7. distance education = tele-education n 远程教育

8. on-line education n 在线教育

9. impart knowledge into one’s mind v 教授知识

10. disseminate knowledge = pass onknowledge = convey knowledge v 传播知识

核心观点句语料库：

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1. Some top educational institutions have chosen to deliver an internet-based program and thus geographical barriers have been lifted. 一些名校提供网络教育，因此学习不再受地域的限制。

2. On-line education brings huge convenience to those who are eager to update knowledge but are hard-pressed for time, therefore, it is more attractive to busy modern people. 在线教育给时间有限的学习者提供了便利，因此，对于繁忙的学习者极有吸引力。

点评：bring huge convenience to sb

点评：update knowledge v 充电 (在这个短语前也加汉字)

3. Having the benefits of obtaining a higher qualification without going to the university campus is attractive to many students, especially those sick or disabled learners. 对于很多人而言，尤其残疾学习者或者生病的学生，不必亲临学校即可获得学位极有吸引力。

4. Conventional teaching usually means greater cost, while on-line educational programs are affordable, flexible and time-saving. 传统教育费用较高，相反，在线教育价格低廉，灵活省时。

5. Whether at home or at work, on-line learners can endeavor to achieve their academic qualifications without causing too much disruption to their career or family lives. 无论在家或者职场，在不干扰生活和事业的前提下，远程教育者可以通过努力获得学历。

6. Apart from affordable, flexible classes and greater convenience, self-learners also have access to the on-line learning resources of many of the world’s top educational institutions. 除了学费低廉，时间灵活，极度方便，自学者可以获得世界名校的优质在线资源。

7. A number of prestigious universities offer a range of online programs that are highly respected 许多顶尖名校提供多种在线学习项目，而这些网络课程得到大众认同。

8. Tele-education perfectly fits for adult learners who need to combine their studies with a working life.很多人需要平衡学业和家庭，因此，远程教育适合他们。

9. A humorous and learned teacher could impart knowled ge into the learners’ minds more vividly and efficiently, which is the most obvious merit of traditional classroom education. 老师幽默博学，传播知识生动高效，这是传统教育最明显的利好。

10. It is easy for students to resolve their academic problems and dispel their worries by means of resorting to teachers for help or having face-to-face communication. 通过面对面交流以及及时求助于老师，学习者很容易解决学业烦恼。

11. It is those highly qualified teachers that stimulate the students’ study motivation and assist them fostering sensible learning habit and efficient

self-study method. 优秀教师激发人的学习动力，培养他们理性的学习习惯以及高效的学习方法。

点评：it is …… that ……强调句

12. It must be stressed out that consolation and encouragement from the teachers could positively help the students nurture optimistic life outlook, for they have a pool of life experience that could share with their students. 老师的鼓励安慰帮助学习者培养乐观人生观，因为老师可以分享人生经验。

点评：consolation n 安慰

13. Compared with the tele-education,professionally well-trained teachers know better about the common sense of education, they excel in the specialized knowledge and could summarize the core of knowledge. 对比网络教育，优秀教师了解教育常识，精通专业知识，总结学科精华。

14. Traditional classroom education not only serves the academic purpose, but also involves moral instructions and the students’ character-training. 传统教育不仅仅是传播知识，还关注学生的道德教育和性格培养。

15. It is as clear as crystal that those only teachers could enable the students to receive the custom-tailored education. 只有老师才能帮助学生获得因材施教的教育。

16. The competitive atmosphere and the pressure from the peers could help those who are poor at self-discipline to apply themselves to academic study. 竞争的氛围，来之同龄人的压力可以帮助没有自律性的学习者专注于学习。

点评：focus on learning = concentrate on study = apply oneself to academic study v 专注于学习

17. The group discussion and the efficient class interaction could stimulate the learners’ st udy motivation. 小组讨论和课堂互动激发人的学习动力。

18. Home learners tend to be socially inadequate and lack the necessary interpersonal skills because they are unable to cultivate teamwork spirit, cooperation and competitive consciousness.

网络学习者会变得社交方面力不从心，缺乏必要的人际交往技能，因为他们不能培养团队精神，合作竞争意识。

19. The merits of traditional classroom education prevail over the convenience of the on-line education.传统教育的利好超越了在线教育的便利。

20. Tele-education is an effective supplementary tool to the conventional teaching. 远程教育是传统教育的有效的辅助工具。

1. So fierce is the competition that a lot of young adults have no choice but to fully apply themselves to career development. 竞争激励，很多年轻人没有选择只能专注发展事业。

2. It is conceivable that if a new employee slackens his or her efforts at

self-improvement, he or she is doomed to bee liminated by the hot competition. 可以想象，如果新职员放松在工作上的努力，他们注定会被激励的竞争淘汰。

3. Modern young workers are more enterprising and ambitious in comparison with the counterparts of the past. 比之过去，现在的很多年轻人更加富有进取心和雄心。

点评：counterparts n 对应的人或者是物

4. Many youngsters desire to outshine others in their career. To excel professionally, one has to focus on work.Hence, the more time one spends on careers, the less time one might allocate too ther activities such as family life, health management or personal hobbies. 如果在专业上训练有素，如何想在事业发展中出类拔萃，一个要专注于工作，因此，一个人在工作中花费的时间多，一个可以分配给家庭生活，健康管理和个人爱好的时间就少。

5. A sensible man knows how to strike a proper balance between work and life. 明智的人会在生活和事业之间找到一种平衡。

6. No matter how occupied one might be, one should always bear in mind that family life tops all and he or she should never brings outstanding working tasks to home. 无论多么繁忙，一个人应该记住家庭生活是最重要的，他不该把没有完成的工作带回家。

解析： tops all ……是最重要的

解析：outstanding adj 没有完成的;杰出的

7. As for the relevant enterprises,measures to reduce the excessive workload and create healthy work style should be given to their employees. 对于相关的企业来说，他们应该采取措施，帮助员工减轻工作的负荷以及创造健康的工作方式

8. Virtually, to advocate and popularize a kind of healthy way of work not only brings merry mood to the working staff but also enhances the efficiency of work. 实际上，提倡和普及一种健康的工作方式不仅仅是可以给员工带来愉悦心情也相应地提高了企业工作效率。

9. It is no easy task to keep the appropriate balance between career and life at times. 有时候，在事业和生活中达到一种平衡是很困难的。

解析：at times adv 有时候

10. However, one should get a clear perspective that achievement in career will never be the sole purpose of life,to work diligently is to create and savor more wonderful life. 然而，人应该有清晰的认识，事业的成功不是人生的唯一的目的，去努力工作是为了去创造更加美好的人生。

词汇：savor v 尽情享受……