高考英语写作提升专题 polish Your Writing Language课件(共29张PPT)
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高考英语议论文写作提高精品PPT课件 图文
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(1)讨论调查型
［点明讨论主题］The students in our class had a discussion about whether the only way for senior high students to succeed is to go to college, which in fact is a hot topic nowadays. The result is as follows:
3. The higher education fairness has drawn attention of the public. 高等教育公 平问题已经引起公众的普遍关注。
4. There is no denying the fact that private cars do bring convenience to our life. 无可 否认，私家车确实给我们的生活带来了方 便。
(2)观点论证型 ［提出论点］No one can avoid being influenced by advertisements. ［列举论据］On one hand, advertising greatly promotes sales. On the other hand, in their efforts to tell people about products and events, advertisers provide us with great amount of the latest information. Therefore, it has become part of our daily life. Meanwhile, to make an advertisement, a lot of people will work together on it. So with the development of advertising, a lot of jobs are being provided.
高考英语写作公开课课件(共25张PPT)
Step3. Combining the sentences into a passage
【连句成篇】 Dear Editor, I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation, while they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely ,which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic. In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs, Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others, Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries, more importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act, only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well. yours, LiHua
高考英语写作技巧(63张PPT)
有效地使 用了语句 间的连接 成分
上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性
语言地道， 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言 准确性的一个方面， 评分时，应视其对交 际的影响程度予以考 虑。
4、词数少于100和多于 140的，从总分中减去2 分。
5、如书写较差，以至影 响交际，将分数降低一 个档次。
Which composition feels more attractive, why?
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books. Books are free for the students there.
5. As a result the plan was a failure. The plan turned out to be a failure.
6、 定语从句 In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place
where we can find much useful information.
Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library.
2.We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him .
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me.
7、 各种名词性从句 That’s what I should do. We should do a favor to whoever needs help
高三英语二轮复习polish writing 读后续写 课件_共17张_
(1) The computer is playing an ___in__cr_e_a_s_i_n_g_ly__ (越来 越)important role in people’s life.
(2) Living conditions have improved __c_o_n_s_id_e_r_a_b_l_y_(大 大地) over the past few years.
常用的写作高级副词
considerably; thoroughly; extremely; occasionally; slightly; severely; definitely; actually; increasingly; exactly; unexpectedly; surprisingly; absolutely; rarely ;effectively; eventually; similarly; undoubtedly; obviously; particularly; regularly; sincerely; sharply
A short break from routine is __b_e_n_e_f_i_ci_a_l_t_o our study. 4. They are not satisfied with their academic results.
Their academic results are far froms_a_ti_s_fa_c_t_o_r_y__. Their academic results fail to reach their __s_a_ti_s_fa_c_t_io_n_.
affect stress(重视)
have an effect/ influence/ impact on
(2) Living conditions have improved __c_o_n_s_id_e_r_a_b_l_y_(大 大地) over the past few years.
常用的写作高级副词
considerably; thoroughly; extremely; occasionally; slightly; severely; definitely; actually; increasingly; exactly; unexpectedly; surprisingly; absolutely; rarely ;effectively; eventually; similarly; undoubtedly; obviously; particularly; regularly; sincerely; sharply
A short break from routine is __b_e_n_e_f_i_ci_a_l_t_o our study. 4. They are not satisfied with their academic results.
Their academic results are far froms_a_ti_s_fa_c_t_o_r_y__. Their academic results fail to reach their __s_a_ti_s_fa_c_t_io_n_.
affect stress(重视)
have an effect/ influence/ impact on
高考英语短文写作专题复习课件(共22张PPT)
小写及标点符号） 6.完善誊写。
短文写作需要的时间
专家建议： 形成初稿： 复查修改： 完善誊抄：
10分钟 5分钟 6分钟
（一）、 高考作文中的不足之处：
1. 语法问题最突出。具体表现为： A、常有句不能成句的现象。很难用简单句、复合句、 特殊句式等来归类。
B、主谓常常有不一致的情况。 C、想要使用高级表达结果适得其反，弄巧成拙。 D、单词和词组常写错。如：writing写成writting、 correct写成corret、there和these不分、written写成 writen，has become写成has became等极其简单的错 误。
• 4. 过度词的使用收到了画龙点睛的作用。
• 5. 漂亮清爽整洁的卷面绝对会留下好的第一印象。
• 对比文章中的好与坏，让我感觉差文的原因就像不幸 的家庭一样千差万别；美文就像幸福的家庭好得相同， 即内容到位、句式多变、表达高级、字迹美观、卷面 整洁！
2011向英国学校辅导中心请求帮助 2012向新加坡一个国际中学生组织申请参加夏
• 10.Being an honest man， Tom worked very hard. • Being an honest man， Tom never tells a lie.句子
缺乏统一性
• 标点符号误用标点符号是一种变相文字，是书 面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解 标点符号的用途以及英汉标点的差异，结果出 现错误。
• 3. 亮点表达吸引眼球。我还是写几句优秀句子来说明。 如：1、I'll appreciate it if you can give me some advice and correct my resume. 2、It's a good chance to broad my horizons.
短文写作需要的时间
专家建议： 形成初稿： 复查修改： 完善誊抄：
10分钟 5分钟 6分钟
（一）、 高考作文中的不足之处：
1. 语法问题最突出。具体表现为： A、常有句不能成句的现象。很难用简单句、复合句、 特殊句式等来归类。
B、主谓常常有不一致的情况。 C、想要使用高级表达结果适得其反，弄巧成拙。 D、单词和词组常写错。如：writing写成writting、 correct写成corret、there和these不分、written写成 writen，has become写成has became等极其简单的错 误。
• 4. 过度词的使用收到了画龙点睛的作用。
• 5. 漂亮清爽整洁的卷面绝对会留下好的第一印象。
• 对比文章中的好与坏，让我感觉差文的原因就像不幸 的家庭一样千差万别；美文就像幸福的家庭好得相同， 即内容到位、句式多变、表达高级、字迹美观、卷面 整洁！
2011向英国学校辅导中心请求帮助 2012向新加坡一个国际中学生组织申请参加夏
• 10.Being an honest man， Tom worked very hard. • Being an honest man， Tom never tells a lie.句子
缺乏统一性
• 标点符号误用标点符号是一种变相文字，是书 面表达不可缺少的重要手段，很多学生不了解 标点符号的用途以及英汉标点的差异，结果出 现错误。
• 3. 亮点表达吸引眼球。我还是写几句优秀句子来说明。 如：1、I'll appreciate it if you can give me some advice and correct my resume. 2、It's a good chance to broad my horizons.
人教版高中英语高考复习 如何提高英语写作能力 (共31)张PPT文档共33页
人教版高中英语高考复习 如何提高英 语写作能力 (共31)张
36、如果我们国家的法律中只有某种 神灵， 而不是 殚精竭 虑将神 灵揉进 宪法， 总体上 来说， 法律就会更好 。—— 马克·吐 温 37、纲纪废弃之日，便是暴政兴起之 时。— —威·皮 物特
38、若是没有公众舆论的支持，法律 是丝毫 没有力 量的。 ——菲 力普斯 39、一个判例造出另一个判例，它们 迅速累 聚，进 而变成 法律。 ——朱 尼厄斯
25、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。——乌申斯基
谢谢！
40、人类法律，事物有规律，这是不 容忽视 的。— —爱献 生
21、要知道对好事的称颂过于夸大，也会招来人们的反感轻蔑和嫉妒。——培根 22、业精于勤，荒于嬉；行成于思，毁于随。——韩愈
23、一切节省，归根到底都归结为时间的节省。——马克思 24、意志命运往往背道而驰，决心到最后会全部推倒。——莎士比亚
36、如果我们国家的法律中只有某种 神灵， 而不是 殚精竭 虑将神 灵揉进 宪法， 总体上 来说， 法律就会更好 。—— 马克·吐 温 37、纲纪废弃之日，便是暴政兴起之 时。— —威·皮 物特
38、若是没有公众舆论的支持，法律 是丝毫 没有力 量的。 ——菲 力普斯 39、一个判例造出另一个判例，它们 迅速累 聚，进 而变成 法律。 ——朱 尼厄斯
25、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动。——乌申斯基
谢谢！
40、人类法律，事物有规律，这是不 容忽视 的。— —爱献 生
21、要知道对好事的称颂过于夸大，也会招来人们的反感轻蔑和嫉妒。——培根 22、业精于勤，荒于嬉；行成于思，毁于随。——韩愈
23、一切节省，归根到底都归结为时间的节省。——马克思 24、意志命运往往背道而驰，决心到最后会全部推倒。——莎士比亚
专题08 书面表达：如何提高作文的颜值-高中英语优质公开课精选课件(共37张PPT)
English newspaper.
定语从句
The “BFeogreiingnniCnugltures” section in our newspaper is very
popular a(mpounrgpoussest)udents. It carries articlelsinwkihnigchwaorrdes
appropriate？
appropriate ？
appropriate ？
Competition & challenge
1 Level 1 2 Level 2 3 Level 3 4 Level 4
6. 我写信是想咨询你关于夏令营的信息。 I’m writing to ask for the information about the summer camp. （改为宾语从句）
has been included. ④ ⑤ ⑥
⑤ Besides,we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and
4.稿件长度：约400 词汇 ⑦
5.交稿日期：6月28
(内容完整） festivals, as well as the life of American high
school’s English newspaper.
② The “Foreign Cultures” section in our
2.“外国文化”栏目 newspaper is very popular among us students. ③
介绍: ② ③
It carries articles which are written by foreign
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要
点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点
－应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
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The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.
Thank you.
5. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
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要
点 全
如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点
－应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇,句型 （高级）和
语法多样化（较复杂）
连 接 词
－有效地使用了语句间的 连接成分，使全文结构紧 凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。
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The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it.
Thank you.
5. You can find my house easily.
You’ll have no trouble finding my house.
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Language Polishment Guidelines
S1: By using complex sentence Tip 1: Vary your sentence S2: By using inversion or emphatic sentence
S3: By using participle phrase Language
S1: Try to use some high-level words Tip 2: Select Effective Words S2: Try to use some explicit words
S3: Try to use expressive phrases or transitional word
S1: By using complex sentence Tip 1: Vary your sentence S2: By using inversion or emphatic sentence
S3: By using participle phrase Language
S1: Try to use some high-level words Tip 2: Select Effective Words S2: Try to use some explicit words
•Group one/Para 1: With the soaring of house prices, the topic that renting or purchasing a house has provoked a fierce controversy among many people. From my opinion, it is more advisable to rent a house for us than to buy a house. •Group two/Para 2:Purchasing a house is unrealistic for the majority due to the high price of house. Most people can’t afford the house price and it will be a burden for their whole family if they firmly decide to buy a house.
Language Polishment Guidelines
S1: By using complex sentence Tip 1: Vary your sentence S2: By using inversion or emphatic sentence
S3: By using participle phrase Language
• Language Polishment Guidelines
S1: By using complex sentence Tip 1: Vary your sentence S2: By using inversion or emphatic sentence
S3: By using participle phrase Language
• Group four/Para4: On the whole, renting a house is temporary. Now, we are just a student and we haven’t the enough ability to purchase a house. However, if we study hard, we can realize the unattainable dream in the long run.
• Language Polishment Guidelines
S1: By using complex sentence Tip 1: Vary your sentence S2: By using inversion or emphatic sentence
S3: By using participle phrase Language
S3: Try to use expressive phrases or transitional word
Tip 1: Vary your sentence
• Suggestion 1: By using complex sentence
What entitles me to purchase a house is the solid economic base of my parents.
• Suggestion 2:By using inversion or emphatic sentence
Not only does a house mean a harmonious family nowadays, but it also brings a huge stress to the adults who want to get married.
S1: Try to use some high-level words Tip 2: Select Effective Words S2: Try to use some explicit words
S3: Try to use expressive phrases or transitional word
Suggestion 3: By using participle phrase.
Serving as a private dwelling where we live in our own lifestyle, house isn’t just a concrete building to sleep in every night.
Tip 2: Select Effective Words
• Suggestion 1: Try to use some high-level words.
insist, maintain, suppose, claim
more advantageous/beneficial/rewarding than
S3: By using participle phrase Language
S1: Try to use some high-level words Tip 2: Select Effective Words S2: Try to use some explicit words
S3: Try to use expressive phrases or transitional word
Polish Your Writing Language
Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
S1: Try to use some high-level words Tip 2: Select Effective Words S2: Try to use some explicit words
S3: Try to use expressive phrases or transitional word Avoid mistakes in punctuation, spelling and grammar ! ! !
S1: Try to use some high-level words Tip 2: Select Effective Words S2: Try to use some explicit words
S3: Try to use expressive phrases or transitional word
Suggestion 2: Try to use some explicit words.
the spare money
create a sense of security, freedom and coziness
Language Polishment Guidelines
S1: By using complex sentence Tip 1: Vary your sentence S2: By using inversion or emphatic sentence
Language Polishment Guidelines
S1: By using complex sentence Tip 1: Vary your sentence S2: By using inversion or emphatic sentence
S3: By using participle phrase Language
• Group three/Para3: What’s more, there are many advantages for us to rent a house. Not only can we try all kinds of houses with various decoration styles but also we are not limited by the location of our school. It is because of renting a house that allows us to change our residence anytime and anywhere and live where we like.
• To begin with, For instance/example, • On one hand… on the other hand… • Apart from this, … • Above all…