2015年_高三英_语备考写作突破复习课件(8)开放式作文
2015高考英语作文-公开课
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虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖 所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足 任务的要求。
语法结构或词汇方面应用基 本准确，些许错误主要是因尝
试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
应用简单的语句间的连接成 分，使全文结构紧凑。
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2015年全国卷1 作文题目
• 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登 介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友 彼得写信约稿。
第15页，共21页。
I am writing to invite you to write an article for the English newspaper of my school. Recently, we set up a novel column-"Foreign Culture" to introduce foreign cultures since my fellow students are really interested in the diversity of festivals and customs. Considering that you are distinguished for writing, I desire that you write an article to introduce American festivals and customs. It would be better if you could show us your colorful campus life. I think it is proper for you to write about four hundred words. If you are willing to accept my invitation, please call me back and post your article to me before June, 28th.
高三英语作文专题指导 开放作文
开放作文专题指导根据下面英文提示写一篇短文，词数不少于50。
练习一：Traffic jams are a very serious problem in Beijing. The streets are full of cars, buses and bikes almost every day. To make matters worse, some people do not follow the traffic rules.Suppose you are discussing this problem in your English class. Please make two or threesuggestions on how to improve the traffic in Beijing.练习二：请根据下面的漫画，写一篇短文。
词数不少于50。
提示：电子琴electronic piano 画板：drawing boardLook at this picture. Here is a family of five.___________________________________练习三：In your English class, the teacher shows this picture of a little boy looking into a mirror, andasks the class to discuss it. Y our classmates have different understandings.Look at the picture carefully and tell the class how you understand the picture. Write what youwould say on the next page.练习四：Mr. Li is the manager of a large company. He went back home late as usual one night. He found a note written by his only son, saying that he would leave home …Y ou know the boy and tell us why:练习五：On a sunny morning, Xiao Hong from Orange Town was on her way to her friend’ s house in Green Hill, a small town she had never been to before. At a crossroads, she found the signpost （路标）showing the directions had fallen over. She got lost.How could she find out which way to go? Consider two or three different ways ofworking out the problem.第二节，开放作文 One Possible version ： 练习一：To improve the traffic in Beijing, I think, first, we should widen or build more roads to provide better traffic conditions. Second, the government should encourage more people to use public transport and bicycles so as to ease the traffic flow. Third, everyone in Beijing, especially those who drive or walk on the street, should follow the traffic rules. 练习二：The youngest child looks like a king. He is sitting on his father ’s back. The grandpa of him is holding an umbrella for him to make him feel cool. His mother helps him take the bags and something he likes. His grandma is not strong enough to take the electronic piano and the drawing board. The only thing she can do is to try her best to take the things for her grandson. Every family has only one child. It is not good to treat him like a king. Letting him do something he can is to help the child. (12分)Look at the little boy. How happy he is!. His mother is cooking for him, his father is playing with him, and his grandparents are taking care of him. But what is he doing? Oh, he is just playing with his toys. Should parents do everything for their children? Absolutely not! If a child could not do the things that is easy enough, what would happen? A child have his own life. Parents should teach their children how to live a wonderful life, but not to do everything for their children. (12分)Look at this picture. Here is a family of five. They are grandfather, grandmother, father, mother and son. The grandmother helps the son to take a drawing board. The grandfather protects the son from sunshine. The son is sitting on the father and themother helps him to take an electronic piano. The son is very happy. But other people of the family are not happy. They are so tired and hot. How selfish the child is! （9分） 开放性作文（15）练习二： What Will the Child Become?Look at this picture. Here is a family of five. The only child is riding his “horse ”— his father. What a proud“king” he looks! His grandfather is holding an umbrella over him and cooling him with a fan. His mother is carrying his schoolbag and lots of other things for him. What is his grandmother doing behind? S he is walking hard carrying an electronic piano and adrawing board. But what will the child become in the future? He’ll think of himself more important than anyone else. He’ll be unable to do anything without help. He’ll become no good for the world. 练习三：开放作文第一档：（13-15）1. In my opinion, the picture shows that everyone has a dream in his mind. As a child, he is always thinking about what he will be when growing up, or rather what he wants to be twenty or thirty years later.It’s the dream that gives us power to get close to success. With the dream deep inside, we will spare no effort to realize it despite the trouble we are faced with.2. Maybe the little boy just failed in an exam. How disappointed the boy is! Looking into the mirror, he find a very strong man in front of him, it’s his father. His father looks very pound of himself and very handsome. The little boy knows his father is couraging him and tell him he would be as strong as his father. The boy feels better ad nods. He rebuilds his confidence. This is what our teacher wants to tell us: “”Never lose heart!”3. In my opinion, the picture tells us the little boy’s wish. Looking into the mirror, the little boy finds himself stronger and older. It’s his wish that growing up as soon as possible, so that he can do a lot of thing by himself.Nowadays, parents are so careful with their children that the children don’t have enough change to practice. Children don’t want parents to help them with everything. So I hope this picture can let parents know what their children think.第二档（9—12分）(1) When the little boy look into the mirror, it seems that he is stronger. But in fact, he is only the one what he used to be.I think, one person should know himself clearly. Y ou must not do what you don’t, then you will be successful. If not, you will do nothing correctly. This is how I understand the picture.(2) Through the mirror, I think, we can see the future of the little boy. He may want to be a strong and warm-hearted man. Then he can do a lot of things for people around him. What a good boy he is! He can see his future through the mirror.第三档（4—8分）The little boy looking into the mirror. He look at a person who is the man he wanted to be. In my opinion he wanted to grow up so that he can do many things which he wanted when he was young. I also want I can grow up so that I will work to earn money for my parents. They should retired and livea easy life.(2) I think the little boy that can look his father. Through his mirror he can look his father too. Which made him felt very sadly. He learn in the classroom while his father working hard in suns. Although he was tired, he didn't’t stop working. Because his father must afford him to go to school and make their family changed more beautiful.第四档：（1—3分）I look at the picture carefully and find a man in a mirror. I don’t know why a little boy like a man in this mirror. Why a little boy turn to a man in this mirror. Although in the mirror’s man isn’t a little boy. He is the old people. Why a little boy turn tall in the mirror. This is my understand. (2) I think is nessary for us to learn this picture. The most important reason is that when we do everything was wrong, we will lose our heart, we can see the picture, and we will have it and do everything easy. It has become a must to people. In a word we mustn’t lose our heart every time.(3) the mirror like our live, it reflect all about us. when we was happily, you can spend a wonderful time, but when we was sadly, you can spend a badly time, so we love my life.第二节开放作文（15分）One possible version:练习三范文：We can see in the picture a little boy standing in front of a mirror. He’s letting his imagination fly. What he sees in the mirror is not his physical self but what he will be like in twenty years. Although he is small and short now, he believes he will grow up to be a tall and strong young man like Y ao Ming, who he admires. I think this picture tries to tell us that we should always look into the future with hope and confidence.练习四范文：The boy is my classmate whose name is Li Ming. His parents got divorced and his mother remarried. His father is always busy with his work and seldom cares about his son. Though Li Ming lives a comfortable life, he feels lonely. He left home just to escape from his boring life at home.The boy is my classmate whose name is Li Ming. His parents got divorced and his mother remarried. His father is always busy with his work and seldom cares about his son. Though Li Ming lives a comfortable life, he feels lonely. He left home just to escape from his boring life at home.练习五范文：First of all, Xiao Hong could ask a passer-by for directions. Since it was a sunny day, she could also use the position of the sun to tell the directions. And finally she could also replace the signpost so that it correctly named the direction she had come from. Then it would be correct for all the other directions.开放作文存在问题一、审题失误1．人称、时态不对Xiao Hong don’t worry. I’ll give you some advice. First, you will look for a person who will can take you to your friends home. If nobody, you can look at the sun, which can tell you the direction.2．不知所云On a sunny morning, Xiao Hong from Orange Town was on her way to her friend is house in Green Hill, she found the signpost showing the directions had fallen over. So she decided to made it to stand at a crossroads. Because she thought that she finished it, many people could find way. Though she was late for it, she felt very well. Because she did a good thing.二、写作过程中存在的问题1．句式混乱，结构不清。
超实用高考英语复习：说明文概要写作课件-高三英语二轮复习
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2015年高三英语第二阶段复习备考建议
2015年高三第二阶段复习备考建议汕头市高中英语教师工作室陈璇(汕头一中)仔细阅读2015年《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语考试大纲》以及广东省考试院有关英语科考试大纲的说明，我们不难发现，高考的命题思路和设计仍然会体现选拔性考试的本质特征和中学英语课程标准的理念，检测考生对英语语言基础知识和基本技能的掌握，重点考查考生在特定语言环境中综合运用英语语言知识的能力。
因此，在二轮备考时可以从以下几个方面来考虑课堂教学的设计：1、在题型复习的不同层面上渗透语篇意识，注重文本解读、语言知识复习和英语技能强化的有机结合。
在阅读训练、完型填空的复习时要引导学生根据语境来理解和使用语言，关注逻辑语义联系、语篇连贯性和语境线索，提升学生借助这三者理解文本的敏感度。
2、关注语言理解的准确性。
在进行阅读理解板块复习时，除了进一步提升学生寻找主题句、猜词和分析长难句等阅读微机能以外，我们还应该强化学生归纳和推断能力以提升其准确理解文本意思的能力。
3、夯实基础知识和技能，注重答题规范。
要让学生重视词形变化、单词拼写、书写、时态使用等的训练，并为强化运用这些基本技能和基础知识创设有意义的语境。
4、在写作复习时应引导学生提升信息整合的合理性、语言使用的得体性和体裁判断的准确性，凸显文体特征；引导学生重视语言表达句式的积累，丰富表达的多样性。
5、解题技巧训练时不能忽视基础性知识的复现和巩固，要引导学生通过纵向、横向对比，进行常错点归类、归因，举一反三。
总之，现阶段的复习要从提升学生语篇把握能力的角度出发，不简单地重复，不面面俱到，不走马观花。
汕头市高中英语教师工作室何文芳（汕头市实验学校）在二轮复习前我们一定要反思总结一轮复习效果，努力找出新的增分点和弱势所在，然后制定出行之有效的学习方案。
努力把基础知识融入到做题中是这一阶段的重点，阅读、词汇和写作应兼顾。
考纲词的复习要注意筛选、积累、反复、语境和搭配。
在分类训练中进行语法的巩固。
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高中英语写作专项之半开放作文 2015
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高二写作专项之半开放作文
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Friends, Similar or Different?
• 人们结交的朋友通常有两种：与自己志趣相似的 或不同的。两种朋友各有特点。请你以“Friends, Similar or Different? ”为题，按照以下的英文提示写 一篇英语短文。 • Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why? • 注意：词数120左右，文章的题目和开头已给出 （不计词数）。
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2015高考英语写作及范文
2015写作真题：(2015·全国新课标Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。
请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：21教育网1. 栏目介绍；2. 稿件内容；3. 稿件长度：约400 词；4. 交稿日期：6 月28 日前。
注意：1. 词数100 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so lon g as it’s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?I’m looking forward to hearing from you.或者I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua这篇作文还可以用这么个句型：I’d appreciate it if you could.......(2015·全国新课标Ⅱ卷)假设你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院〔nursing home〕陪老人们过重阳节〔the Double Ninth Festival〕。
高三英语书面表达训练--开放作文
书面表达系列训练开放作文随着高考英语改革进程的不断深入，开放作文将成为今后英语高考命题改革的主要趋势和高考书面表达测试的主要方向。
一．开放作文的特点1.形式多样。
开放作文有别于传统意义上的书面表达，属于非控制性写作，即主要以文字提示、图画展示等形式设题，留有相当大的空间由考生去自由发挥，因此考生写出来的作文特点各异。
2.能力要求更高。
开放作文对考生的要求更高,考查也更全面.它不仅考查考生的语言表达能力、语言组织能力，而且还考查考生的逻辑思维能力、想象力以与多角度考虑、分析和解决问题的能力。
3．体裁是记叙文或议论文。
记叙文常给出一段材料，然后要求开放作文的写作充分发挥想象力，拓展原材料内容，运用逻辑推理达到方法，沿着材料的纵横方向延伸，添加开头、结尾与主体局部。
议论文要求考生灵活处理所给材料，做到综合分析，辨证思维，提炼观点，力求论点合理，论据充分，论证严谨。
二．开放作文的写作思路1．认真审题，领会要求，把握题目中的关键词和关键句，梳理文章脉络。
2．准确定位人称、时态，遣词造句、布局某篇要扬长避短。
下面结合一道典例谈谈开放作文的写作步骤：So far you have expected over ten years school life.During the long period, you must have had some unhappy experiences in your school life. But your teacher helped a lot to deal with your problems successfully. Try to give us example how your teacher helped you.考生认真审题后可以看出本文的想象空间很大。
提示语中的关键词是unhappy experiences和关键句your teacher helped a lot to deal with your problems successfully. Try to give us example how your teacher helped you.1.体裁记叙文〔注意在表示之后应参加自己吸取的教训〕2．时态；一般过去时为主3．人称：第一人称4．要点：1〕表示发生的事：我考试作弊被抓住后要辍学，教师家访并跟我谈心2〕经验教训：要用于承认错误并改正5．文采修饰1〕连接词：when；so...that; which;and等2〕高级词汇与短语：be caught cheating; look down upon; so...that;in person; overcome; recognize one’s mistake等 3〕高级词汇和结构：现在分词作补语；动名词短语作主语；时间状语从句；结果状语从句；非限制性定语从句等。
高考英语写作分类训练：开放式作文
开放性作文1．学校英语校刊准备举办一个关于中国学生寒假的征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
要点如下：1．介绍中国学生的寒假：2．介绍你寒假时的活动。
注意：1．词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2．请你以谚语“有志者，事竟成(Nothing is impossible to a willing heart)”为题，写一篇演讲稿，参加学校英语演讲活动。
内容包括：1.谚语意义；2.具体事例；3.个人感悟。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目已为你写好。
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________3．中华传统文化崇尚以和为贵，重视人际和善、邻里和谐、家庭和睦，这些理念深深影响着中国人的思想和行为，也影响着国家和社会治理方式。
备战高考 名校高考英语冲刺 精品专题强化训练课件：书面表达(3)(半)开放式作文ppt课件
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持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请 你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一 篇100～120个词的短文。要求如下： • 1．从以上两种做法中选择一种； • 2．以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。 • 注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名 等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。
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birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it.However，it was harder than expected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more practice，I did better and better.Looking back，I feel had I lost heart I wouldn't be able to ride a bike. Actually，we can't succeed in everything we try.What's important is that we should stick a语的理解； • 2．你的相关经历； • 3．恰当的结尾。 • 注意： • 1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； • 2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息； • 3．词数：120左右。