[英语读后续写]读后续写好句积累88句

读后续写好句积累

1. She tried to hide her anger.

她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。

(hide your disappointment/anger...掩饰...)

2. She laughed to hide her nervousness.

她笑了笑以掩饰自己的紧张。

3. The treatment offers a ray of hope for cancer sufferers

这种治疗方法给癌症患者一线希望。

(a ray of hope/light 一线希望/光明)

4. Rays of light filtered through the trees.

一束束光线透过树丛照射下来。(透过?f?lt?)

5. His statement was greeted with cries of astonishment and anger.

他的这番话被报以一片叫喊声，有震惊，也有愤怒。（be greeted with /by sth被报以...)

6. Complete silence greeted us as we entered the room.

走进房间，迎接我们的是一片沉默。

7. I felt a rush of excitement when she arrived.

她来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。(a rush of anger / excitement / gratitude...一阵...)

8. A rush of jealousy swept through(over) her.

她心中突然涌起一阵嫉妒。(妒忌?d?el?si)

9. The smoke hung in the air.

烟在空中缭绕。(mist/smoke/smell hangs in the air在空中缭绕)

10. A thick mist hung over the town.

小镇笼罩在浓浓的雾霭中。

11. Joe's been ill for weeks now - it's really dragging him down. 乔已经病了几个星期了，这使他很沮丧。(drag sb down 使人感到不愉快) 12. Forester stared at his car, trembling with rage.

福里斯特盯着他的汽车，气得浑身发抖。(trembling / shaking with rage 气得浑身发抖)

13. Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital.

卡罗尔气得呜呜哭，被送往医院。

14. His face was red with rage.

他气得满脸通红。

15. The child was quivering(trembling) in her arms.

那孩子在她怀里发抖。 (抖动?kw?v?)

16. Her mouth quivered slightly as she turned away.

她嘴唇微微哆嗦着，转过头去。

17. I lay there quivering with fear.

我躺在那儿，害怕得直发抖。

18. His voice was quivering with rage.

他气得声音都打战了。

19. Luck had come her way at the very last moment.

好运在最后时刻降临到她头上。(sth come sb's way意外地落在某人头上) 20. She was aware of a tall dark figure watching her.

她发现有个高高的黑影在注视着她。(be aware of...注意到;察觉到...)

21. He was aware of the wind in his face.

他感到风在他脸上吹拂。

22. Bill became aware that he was still holding his glass.

比尔意识到他手里还握着杯子。(be/become aware that从句注意到;察觉到...)

23. He had time to reflect on his successes and failures.

他有时间反思他的成功和失败。(reflect on...反思；仔细思考...)

24. Environmentalists are alarmed by the increase in pollution. 不断加重的污染引起环保人士的担忧。(be alarmed at/by...对...感到担忧；惊慌)

25. He was alarmed to discover that his car was gone.

他惊慌地发现自己的车不见了。（be alarmed to see /hear...惊慌地看到;听到...）

26. Tim was a clumsy boy, always bumping into the furniture.

蒂姆是个笨手笨脚的孩子，老是撞到家具上。(bump into sb/sth撞到...)

27. I dragged myself out of bed and into the bathroom.

我吃力地下床走进浴室。 (drag yourself to /into /out of...费力地走到/进/出某处)

28. He paused for breath, then continued up the hill.

他停下来歇口气，然后继续上山。

29. "No," he replied, without pausing for thought.

"不是的。" 他不假思索地答道。

30. Charles was overcome with grief.

查尔斯悲痛欲绝。

31. His eyes fell on her bag. "Are you going somewhere?"

他的目光落在她的包上。"你是不是要去什么地方？"(sb's eyes / gaze / glance fall(s) on sth 某人的目光落在某物上)

32. Only one man tried to help us, the rest just looked on in silence.

只有一个人尽力帮助我们，其余的人都只是一声不吭地袖手旁观。

33. He sprang to his feet and rushed after her.

他腾地站起身，冲过去追她。(spring to one's feet一跃而起)

34. Tears rolled down her cheeks.

泪珠顺着她的脸颊滚落。

35. Thunder rolled in the distance.

远处雷声隆隆。

36. Lucy rolled her eyes as Tom sat down beside her.

汤姆在露西身旁坐下，露西翻了个白眼。

37. The red tip of his cigarette was glowing in the dark.

他那红红的烟头在黑暗中幽幽发光。

38. She looked exceptionally well, glowing with health .

她气色特别好，满面红光。

39. She gazed up at him, glowing with happiness.

她抬头凝望着他，脸上洋溢着幸福。

(glow with pride / joy / pleasure由于自豪/高兴等而容光焕发）

40. "Well, there's nothing we can do about it now," she sighed. "唉，我们现在对此无能为力。" 她叹口气说。

41. Frankie stared out of the window and sighed deeply(heavily). 弗朗基凝望着窗外，深深地叹了口气。

42. He sighed with despair at the thought of all the opportunities he had missed.

想到自己错过的一个个机会，他绝望地叹了口气。(sigh with despair 绝望地叹了口气)

43. He took a firm grip of my arm and marched me towards the door.

他紧紧抓着我的手臂，快步往门口走去。(take a firm grip /hold /grasp of...紧抓;紧握...紧握，抓牢gr?p)

44. A look of pure hatred flashed across her face.

她脸上闪过十足的仇恨表情。

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