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2014年广东省广州市第一次模拟考试英语科写作部分答案

2014年广东省广州市第一次模拟考试英语科写作部分答案

2014年广东省广州市第一次模拟考试英语科写作部分答案基础写作:White Tea/Baicha, which gets its name from its silver-white color, is regarded as one of the six major Chinese tea types//one of the six major types of Chinese tea, gets its name from its silver-white color. First discovered/recorded in the Northern Song Dynasty//Dating back to the Beisong Dynasty, White Tea has/enjoys a long history and it is mainly grown/produced in Fujian and Taiwan. White Tea is famous/famed/renowned for its beautiful silver-needle-like shape, its sweet taste and its medicinal effects. The longer it is preserved/kept, the better effect it has. White Tea is good for health if drunk frequently and can be used in preventing diseases//protecting people from diseases like high blood pressure and helping relieve the pain of toothache and fever.读写任务:Version 1In the passage, the writer describes how he forgot his family’s thrifty tradition and eventually met with financial difficulty. This helped him realize the importance of thriftiness and start to practice thriftiness again.To me, being thrifty means valuing money, making the most of what I have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things.Thrift is an old and dated concept to many young people. As life has become a lot easier, people tend to indulge in a luxurious lifestyle. That’s why I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before.Actually, to be thrifty can be really simple. Most of the time, it’s simply a matter of being more thoughtful in our everyday life: turning off lights when leaving the room, not using the air-conditioners unless necessary, bringing our water bottle from home rather than spending money on soft drinks, using public transports to avoid needless driving and parking, ordering just enough food when eating out, and so forth. To do these might mean doing things others won’t do and controlling our desires. But remember, a smart person is not one who always tries to impress others by showing off their wealth, but one who spares no effort to save for the future and for others.Version 2The writer recalls the stress and economic problems he had after moving to a big city, forgetting the thrifty habits of his youth and wasting all his money. At last, however, he learned his lesson and became thrifty once more.I think a thrifty person is someone who uses only what they need and avoids wastes. Being thrifty can save us money, but more importantly, it is necessary if we want to save our planet. In the face of growing environmental problems, I believe it is more necessary than ever to reduce the amount of rubbish and pollution each individual produces. If we fail to control the amount of waste we produce, our society and our planet are doomed and this concern must outweigh any short-term satisfaction we get from buying and consuming more.It is for this reason that I buy as much fresh food as possible, rather than packaged food, which requires much more energy to produce and adds to our pollution problems. I also try tocycle or walk everywhere I go, or at least use public transport rather than getting a taxi or depending on a private car. Actions like these keep me fit and healthy, help the environment and leave me with more money in my pocket! Why don’t you try these too? You might really enjoy the results.。

2014年广州一模作文较好之例文

2014年广州一模作文较好之例文

敬衣者,人恒敬之高三(19)班曹天丽50/47=50.5古人有云:衣乃人之貌也。

一个人的容貌如何,观其衣便可略知一二。

但由于时空的反差,人的观念甚异。

对待校服,有的学生当作画板,有的当做签名本,更有的当作草纸。

本身,校服乃学生身份的象征,作为一名学生,连自己的校服都不珍视,想必为人也如此不过。

因为敬重自己的衣服,就如敬重自己一般,方能得到他人的尊敬。

衣乃人身份的象征,敬衣应从自我做起。

追溯到几千年前,古人何尝不是如此。

身为朝廷重臣,位高权重高,一人之下万人之上的李斯,他在朝廷中叱咤风云,但就算在朝外都会端庄威严。

回家时虽有侍从帮宽衣解带,却总会亲自将官衣小心翼翼地放入柜中,锁好。

每有贪欲之心或非分之想,他都会拿出官衣,放在高台上对着它思过。

他对官衣的敬重,是他对自己身份的敬重,让他与贪欲划清界限,从而让清廉的他成为始皇帝的心腹之臣,让他得到了百官的敬佩。

官衣,是官人身份的象征,他们都如此敬衣,我们是否该有所反思呢?衣乃人身肩的使命,敬衣者,人恒敬之。

一衣一容,一件衣服,肩负了保家卫国的使命,肩负了拯救世人的使命……正是身着军衣,让一个瘦骨嶙峋的身躯肩负起了保家卫国的使命。

军人对军衣的敬重就是对自己使命的敬重。

尽管烈日炎炎,尽管风吹雨打,尽管枪林弹雨,他们依然身着军人的全力奋进,只因为他们身上的军衣。

我们对军人的敬重犹如对国旗的敬重一般庄严、敬爱,因为他们让我们的国家和平和安定。

怀揣着对军人崇高的敬意,让我们举起坚定的右手向他们传达最真挚的敬爱吧。

反观日常生活,学生们对校服乱涂乱画,难道他们忘了这校服的含义?校服乃学生的象征,校服乃青春拼搏的象征。

身着校服就应当肩负起好好学习,报效祖国的使命,身着校服就应当履行学生的责任!对校服的不敬重可以从另一个侧面反应出学生责任意识的薄弱。

责任意识的淡薄就是对自己身肩的众人忘乎所以。

这是现在社会普遍存在的一个现象,若继续演变下去,后果不堪设想。

这才需要我们强化对衣服的敬重,对自己身份的敬重的观念。

广一模英语基础写作分析2014

广一模英语基础写作分析2014
2014年广州一模英语基础写作分析
中山市濠头中学 陈杰华 梁志明
一、答卷中的筛选,灵
活运用词汇、语法和简单的语篇等知识对命题所提供的信息和要点进而组
词造句,写出符合语法、词法以及习惯表达的句子,最后形成一篇“句子
结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯”的英语短文。如下面两篇佳作:
应改为:…it is called White Tea because it looks like… 3) If you always drinks it, it’s good for your healthy.(错处:人称不一致,句子 结构错乱) 应改为:It’s good for your health if you drink it frequently.
佳作一:
佳作二:
2、能熟练使用学过的词汇和句型有效表达,如使用同位语、定语从句、 比较级、介词短语等。例如: 1) White Tea has been long considered/regarded as one of the six tea types in China. 2) Its history dates back to = can be traced back to Beisong Dynasty. 3) It has been mainly produced in Fujian and Taiwan since it first appeared in Beisong Dynasty. 4) It looks like / is shaped like / is in the shape of the needle/…with elegant shape of needle. 5) … keep us away from / reduce the risk of high blood pressure. 6) It can not only prevent from suffering from… but also contribute to…

2012广一模英语作文范文

2012广一模英语作文范文

2012广一模基础写作:Recently we surveyed 368 middle school students on how they spent the 2012 Spring Festival. 30% said they spent most of their time with their parents visiting relatives and friends while 25% went traveling with classmates or parents. 45% of all those surveyed indicated that they just stayed at home to do homework. When asked how they felt about the Spring Festival, most said they enjoyed it because of the holiday and lucky money they got, but some felt unhappy because the amount of homework they were given left little time for fun activities. Many students expressed the hope that next year they will have less homework and more free time.读写任务:Dear mum,I’ve just received your email expressing your concern that I am being distracted from my studies because of my many after-school activities and the consequences of this for my future.(或I’ve just received your email expressing your concern about my participation in so many after-school activities, the effect of this on my study performance and its consequences for my future.)I appreciate what you say and am sorry to have caused you so much worry. I’m also touched that you understand my reasons for being attracted to such activities.It’s true that I have been spending a lot of time with these groups but please don’t worry. I find that these groups help me to relax, develop my thinking and actually improve my school performance, although my teacher is right that I do sometimes feel tired in class.For this reason, and to also relieve you of your worry, I have decided to limit my participation to only two groups this term. This way I can still enjoy the outside activities without affecting either you or my study performance.。

2014年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试广州一模语文_Word版含答案

2014年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试广州一模语文_Word版含答案

试卷类型:A 2014年广州市普通高中毕业班综合测试(一)语文2014.3 本试卷共8页,24小题,满分为150分。

考试用时150分钟。

注意事项:1.答卷前,考生务必用2B铅笔在‚考生号‛处填涂考生号。

用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔将自己所在的市、县/区、学校以及自己的姓名和考生号、试室号、座位号填写在答题卡上。

用2B铅笔将试卷类型(A)填涂在答题卡相应位置上。

2.选择题每小题选出答案后,用2B铅笔把答题卡上对应题目选项的答案信息点涂黑;如需改动,用橡皮擦干净后,再选涂其他答案。

答案不能答在试卷上。

3.非选择题必须用黑色字迹的钢笔或签字笔作答,答案必须写在答题卡各题目指定区域内的相应位置上;如需改动,先划掉原来的答案,然后再写上新的答案;不准使用铅笔和涂改液。

不按以上要求作答的答案无效。

一、本大题4小题,每题3分,共12分。

1.下列词语中加点的字,每对读音都不相同....的一组是A.箴.言/斟.酌国粹./仓猝.复辟./开天辟.地B.撰.写/编纂.贬谪./嫡.系冠.名/冠.冕堂皇C.对峙./嗜.好竣.工/疏浚.提.防/提.心吊胆D.清澈./掣.肘粗犷./旷.达识.别/博闻强识.2.下面语段中画线的词语,使用不恰当...的一项是近几年,国内许多风景名胜区实行‚一票制‛,将景区内多个景点门票捆绑搭售。

这种做法引起了人们的置疑和不满,许多游客认为这是变相涨价。

一个知名景区要可持续发展,首先必须赢得游客的口碑,如果过分依赖‚门票经济‛做‚一锤子买卖‛,对游客的意见充耳不闻,一意孤行,一旦引起游客的反感乃至抵触,就可能造成难以挽回的损失。

A.置疑 B.一锤子买卖 C.充耳不闻 D.乃至3.下列句子中,没有语病....的一句是A.著名作家村上春树连续五年排在诺贝尔文学奖获奖预测名单榜首,却年年与该奖无缘,可以堪称诺贝尔文学奖史上“最悲壮的入围者”。

B.广州恒大足球队首次参加“世俱杯”比赛,与非洲、欧洲和南美洲的冠军同场竞技,在收获自信的同时也看到了与世界强队的差距。

14年广东高考作文范文

14年广东高考作文范文

14年广东高考作文范文篇一:2014高考全国新课标卷I满分作文全国新课标卷I 以“两人过独木桥”为材料作文(新课标I卷适用于河北、河南、山西、陕西考区) 真题再现阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800宇的文章。

(60分)“山羊过独木桥”是为民学校传统的团体比赛项目。

规则是,双方队员两两对决,同时相向而行,走上仅容一人通行的低矮独木桥,能突破对方阻拦成功过桥者获胜,最后以全队通过人数多少决定胜负。

因此习惯上,双方相通时,会像山羊抵角一样,尽力使对方落下桥,自己通过。

不过,令年预赛中出现了新况:有一组比赛,双方选手相遇时,互相抱住,转身换位,全都顺利过了桥。

这种做法当场就引发了观众、运动员和裁判员的激烈争论。

事后,相关的思考还在继续。

要求:选好角度,确定立意,明确文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含意的范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。

专家解析一、命题传承2009-2013年近四年新课标卷均为新材料作文,2009年以几个高中生对待小女孩的不同看法为材料,2010年以三则故事引出关于人才成长规律的讨论为材料,2011年以中国的变化为材料,2012年以油漆工修补船洞为材料,2013新课标卷I以切割钻石为材料。

今年仍然沿袭新材料作文形式,以“山羊过独木桥”团体赛出现新情况引起争论为材料。

从命题形式看,新课标卷一直稳定为新材料作文,材料内容的变化又使每年作文都有了新意,今年的材料更贴近考生生活,更加生活化、情趣化,材料的主要意思不只在伦理道德的层面,更具有了理性思辨色彩。

二、试题特点贴近考生生活实际。

所选材料为学校的体育团体比赛,这与青春年少的高三考生喜欢体育、喜欢竞技的特点相吻合,考生对体育比赛中的规则、输赢、公平、合作等平时就关注、思考比较多,因此这一材料拉近了与考生的距离,使考生有话可说,有文可写。

具有理性思辨色彩。

材料中“山羊过独木桥”的规则是学生从两边同时上桥,相遇时力量强大者将力量弱小者挤下桥,顺利通过的强大者获胜,材料中的“不过”引出新情况,“双方选手相遇时,互相抱住,转身换位,全都顺利过了桥”,选手的做法引起多方争论,判赢还是判输,如果判赢那么原定比赛规则怎么讲,如果判输但是事实是双方合作后都过了独木桥,因此材料就有了思辨色彩:人们总是在共同认定的规则中游戏,同时人们的行为又在改变着游戏规则,而且改变规则又是游戏的一个合理部分。

2012年广东高考语文作文试题及范文

2012年广东高考语文作文试题及范文

评语
• 这篇作文是在作文题所给材料的基础上,谈文化与时代关 系的议论文。全文围绕着"每个时代每个地方都会有属于 自己的独特文化"这一主题展开严谨周密的论证。作者思 维活跃,视野开阔,全文充满思辨,从春秋到近代的血泪 交融的中国文化,从古希腊到文艺复兴的西方文化,字里 行间既有对各国各时代所呈现出的纷繁多样的文化形态的 体认和向往,也有对文化发展的曲折与艰辛的深切关怀和 反思。 整篇文章结构周密,短短千字之内,作者高屋建瓴, 在把握文化和时代的辩证关系的论述上,处处显示作者独 具匠心的认识,对于高中生来说,这点难能可贵。 作者的语言表达能力很强,文字简洁从容,尤其是文 章开头和结尾,前后呼应,画龙点睛,寥寥数笔,精当点 题。
4、关注人生态度。文中提到的四位人物,无论是盛 赞过去,向往未来,还是直面现实,都是一个人 生态度的话题,因此从大的层面讲这个作文题目 可以写人生、创造、歌颂、回归、等常规话题。 5、题目引导学生多读书,培养自己的思考能力。 这个作文题目要写成功关键在于多读书,积累大 量的文化素材,同时要有对于人生和世界,以及 影响人类文化的重要思想的理解能力,从而形成 自己的人生价值观,形成自己对于人类文明的认 识。只有读书多,并且内化了传统思想的同学才 能将作文写深刻。

人们时常感到生不逢时,期望回到 或飞越到某个时空的过去或未来,但 不曾想,每个时代自有它得天独厚, 不可比拟的机缘巧合,从而衍生了不 可复制描摹的独特,春秋战国如此, 中国近代亦如此。

近代中国饱受外国列强的侵略,知识分 子的民族责任感与高远目光,造就了新文 化运动中“新文学”的无比震撼。中西文 化相互融合,白话文小说如《阿Q正传》等 新式文学作品,让人震耳发聩,唤醒了国 人麻木的灵魂与涣散的斗争意志,我们亦 会赞扬这个时代,钦佩这些爱国者,或者 向往这血与泪交融而出的文化结晶。

语文广一模作文

语文广一模作文

语文广一模作文Growing up, I've always had a love-hate relationship with Chinese class. On one hand, I appreciate the beauty and richness of the language, its long history and deep cultural significance. But on the other hand, I often struggle with the complexities of Chinese grammar, the endless list of characters to memorize, and the pressure to excel in exams.成长过程中,我一直对语文课有着爱恨交加的感情。

一方面,我欣赏这门语言的美丽和丰富性,它悠久的历史和深远的文化意义。

但另一方面,我经常苦于中文语法的复杂性,要记忆的一大堆汉字,以及在考试中取得出色成绩的压力。

As a student, I often find myself torn between the desire to excel in Chinese class and the frustration of not being able to meet the high expectations set by teachers and parents. The pressure to perform well in exams can be overwhelming at times, leading to stress and anxiety. It's a constant battle between wanting to do well in Chinese and feeling overwhelmed by the demands of the subject.作为一名学生,我经常发现自己在渴望在语文课上表现出色和无法达到老师和父母设定的高期望之间犹豫不决。

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