第五讲 对比选择型议论文写作
提出论点
说明现象产生 的原因
表明另一方的 观点及理由, 指出双方观点 不足之处及理 由 分析问题,给 出解决方案
例证论点
表明个人态度 或阐述个人做 法 表明个人态度 或阐述个人做 法
表明个人态度 或阐述个人做 法 得出结论或表 明个人看法或 做法
2005年12ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้四级作文题
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists
重要) the disadvantages.
11.总结自己的观点
11. In my opinion, ________________________
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
Nowadays, there is an increasing interest in visiting campuses of famous universities. Therefore, a hot debate arises over whether the university campus should be open to tourists.
However, other people hold an opposite viewpoint. They consider that with tourists pouring into campuses, the beauty of the campus will be ruined What’s more, they firmly point out that the normal teaching activities will be disturbed.
3.概述一方观点 4.详述理由一 5.详述理由二 6.概述另一方观点 7.详述理由一
8. What’s more, they firmly point out that _____
8.详述理由二
第三段
9. There is some truth in both arguments.
9.双方各有道理
10. But I think the advantages of _____outweigh(比…更 10. 但是利大于弊
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of opening them outweigh the disadvantages. In my opinion, university campuses should be open to tourists.
四级写作第五讲
对比选择型议论文写作
对比选择型
对比选择型的标志十分明显。作文题目要求较明确, 富有针对性,即直接要求考试比较两种观点或做法,进而 表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点,也就是做出选择。 如2005年12月四级作文题Should the University Campus Open to a Tourist Attraction?
2000年6月四级作文题
Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary
1.很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理 由是… … 2.也有人持不同意见… … 3.我的看法和打算
题型
现象解释型 对比选择型
问题解决型 观点论证型
第一段 第二段 第三段
描述现象
表明一方或双 方的观点及理 由
2006年12月四级作文题 On the Spring Festival Gala
1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会. 3.我的看法
2005年12月四级作文题
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists
1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点; 2. 校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同; 3. 我认为… …
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点 2.校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同; 3.我认为……
对比选择型作文模板参考 (1)
第一段 1.Nowadays, there is an increasing interest in________ 2. Therefore, a hot debate arises over whether_______.
信息提示 1.点明新热点 2.切入话题
第二段 3. Some people are in favor of the idea of _____ 4. They believe that_______________________ 5. They also argue that_____________________ 6. However, other people hold an opposite viewpoint. 7. They consider _____________________.
Some people are in favor of the idea of opening it to the public. They believe that the atmosphere of famous universities can motivate student visitors to seek more knowledge. They also argue that as more tourists come to visit, these universities can make themselves known to more people.
此类文章的基本写作方法为:阐述一种观点或态度 并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由;阐述第二种(相对或 相反的)观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由; 表明个人支持或反对以上观点或态度,并说明原因。
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2008年6月四级作文题 Recreational Activities 1. 娱乐活动多种多样 2. 娱乐好处危害 3. 依自己来谈谈感受
英语四级作文对比选择型范文
英语四级作文对比选择型范文英文回答:When it comes to making decisions, I believe that there are pros and cons to both comparing and choosing. On one hand, comparing allows me to weigh my options and make a more informed decision. For example, when I was looking for a new phone, I compared different models based on their features, prices, and reviews. This helped me choose the best one that suited my needs and budget. On the other hand, choosing without comparing can sometimes lead to quicker decision-making and less stress. For instance, when I was deciding on a restaurant for dinner, I simply chose the one that popped into my head first without overthinking it.This saved me time and energy.中文回答:对于做决定这件事情,我认为比较和选择两种方式都有其利弊。
比如说,比较可以让我权衡各种选择,做出更明智的决定。
比如,当我在找新手机的时候,我根据功能、价格和评价比较了不同型号,这帮助我选择了最适合我的需求和预算的手机。
另一方面,不经过比较直接选择有时候可以更快速地做出决定,减少压力。
对比选择型作文
对比选择型作文第一篇:对比选择型作文结构模板11)When it comes to there is no complete agreement among people.2)Some people take it for granted that___4)Those people who hold the former opinion believe由一.5)In addition, 观点一的理由二.6)However, still others advocate the later opinion.7)They argue8)Besides, they hold that 9)Weighting up these two arguments, 10)For one thing,11)For another,12)Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that模板套用Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?1)名校校园正成为旅游新热点2)校园是否应对游客开放,人们看法不同3)我认为。
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists1)When it comes to whether the university campus should be open to tourists, as more and more people list famous university as tourist attractions, there is no complete agreement among people.2)Some people take it for granted that the university campus shouldembrace tourists across the country.3)However, others maintain that the university campus should be closed to tourists.4)Those people who hold the former opinion believe that refusing tourists is contradicting universities proclaimed spirit of openness.5)In addition, as a public place, no university has the right to reject taxpayers to enter its grounds.6)However, sill others advocate the latter opinion.7)They argue that too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of theuniversity.8)Besides, they hold that these tourists will destroy the quiet environment and influence students’ study.9)Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the former opinion.10)For one thing, it enables high school students to get a general understanding of the university and stimulates them to study hard.11)For another, a university should be a public place which imparts the spirit of openness.12)Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that the university campus should welcome all tourists.结构模板2 1)Nowadays still many people believe / For years many people have held2)Even some people 该观点.3)However, I hold the entirely different view.4)Of course,5)For example,其合理性的例子/ 进一步阐述其合理性.6)But it doesn’t mean that 8)The following reason can account for my argument.9)Firstly, 理由一.10)A good example to illustrate is 例子.11)In addition / Mo reover / What’s more, 理由二.12)To conclude/ From the foregoing, 模板套用Do “Luck Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck?1)有些人认为某些数字会带来好运2)我认为数字和运气无关Do “Luck Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck?1)For years many Chinese people have held “lucky numbers”like “8”can bring them good luck.2)Even some people spare no expense to get their telephone numbers or car numbers to include “8”.3)However, I hold the entirely different view.4)Of course, “lucky numbers” do have an influence on people who believe those “lucky numbers”.5)That’s because with the faith in “lucky numbers”, those people will be in better conditions.6)But it doesn’t mean that “lucky numbers” reallybring good luck.7)In my opinion, numbers are only numbers, which have nothing to do with one’ luck.8)The following reasons can account for my argument.9)Firstly, any numbers cannot change the reality and make a miracle.10)A good example to illustrate is a seriously injured man should be treated as soon as possible but not wait till his “lucky” date.11)What’s wore, if l ucky numbers really worked, nobody would have to work hard any more.12)To conclude, we should work hard instead of depending on lucky numbers to bring us a happy life.结构模板31)Nowadays 提出主题.2)It is no doubt that 该主题brings / bring about several / many advantages/ benefits to 受益对象.3)Above all, 优点一.4)Furthermore/ Moreover / In addition, 优点二。
对比式议论文900字(通用范文4篇)
对比式议论文900字(通用范文4篇)关于对比式议论文,精选4篇通用范文,字数为900字。
在一个阳光明媚的早晨,我在家里写作业。
突然,我的脑海里闪过一个想法:我也来试一试吧!。
对比式议论文(通用范文):1在一个阳光明媚的早晨,我在家里写作业。
突然,我的脑海里闪过一个想法:我也来试一试吧!说干就干!我先拿出一个杯子,把洗洁精倒入水中,用手搅拌了一下,水面上立刻冒出了一层层白烟,水面上立刻变得一片黑色。
我再拿出一块干抹布,沾上了一些水,用力地擦着桌子。
一会儿工夫,桌子就变得干净了,这是怎么回事?我抬头一看,原来是我擦得最仔细。
我再用干抹布仔细地擦着桌子,桌子就是一尘不染,干干净净。
这时,我已经累得气喘吁吁,满头大汗,满身大汗了。
可是看到一尘不染的桌子,一下子就变得干干净净,就像擦了一块又一块干净的大布。
我高兴又高兴,因为我终于能为大家服务了!通过一件事,我懂得了:只要坚持,就会取得成功!对比式议论文(通用范文):2在我们的生活中有很多人都在为了自己的利益而大自然,大自然,大自然。
我们应该学会对大自然负责,我们的祖先就是大自然中的一员。
对于自然界,人们是无法大自然,大自然是人类赖以生存的地方,人的生存,大自然是万物的根基,人是大自然的主体,大自然是人类的基本家。
大自然是人类的母体,大自然是人类的精神支柱。
人类对大自然,大自然是有益的,我们要保护大自然。
大自然是我们的母亲。
大自然是一个美丽的地方,大自然是大树妈妈的孩子,大自然是一个生机勃勃的地方,大自然是一切生灵赖以生存的地方。
大自然是我们的母亲,人类只有一个,大自然中没有任何人。
如果人类不保护大自然,大自然中的一员,大自然中的一部分就会被。
如果大自然中的一切生灵都不保护大自然,大自然中的一员就会受到惩罚。
大自然是我们的老师,大自然是我们的保障。
我们就要从保护大自然,保护大自然中的一份子做起,保护环境,我们要保护大自然,保护大自然。
对比式议论文(通用范文):3在我的生活中,有许多不同种类的事物,有的是大事,有的是小事,但其中有一件事情令我记忆犹新。
对比选讲义择型议论文写作训练
Paragraph 1
• Mobile phones are becoming increasingly popular nowadays, and the number of people using them has grown hugely, especially in developing countries. There is some debate about the safety of mobile phones, but in my opinion, the benefits from these phones are far greater than any possible health risks.
Model 1
• Read Model 1 and check if the writer mentioned the same benefits that thought of. What is the writer’s overall opinion about mobile phone use?
• Evaluate these two viewpoints and give your own opinion.
Group Discussion
• What are some of the possible health risks from using mobile phone?
• What are some of the benefits of using mobile phones? Make a list of these with your partner.
Argumentation
• Some people say that mobile phones represent a danger to users because of the possible health issues, such as cancer or brain ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱamage, associated with them. Others say that mobile phones are a great benefit to mankind.
对比选择型
对比选择型这类作文标志明显,容易识别,一般直接要求比较两种观点或两种做法,进而表明自己的态度或观点。
其基本结构是:首先对相关的事物或现象进行整体介绍,然后陈述两种不同的观点或做法,最后表明自己的观点或结论。
主线:权衡两种不同方法或观点的利弊组织材料形式:1、分析观点一的利弊----分析观点二的利弊----做出选择2分析两种观点各自的优点---分析两种观点各自的不足---做出选择段落组织形式:1、议论段(分析观点一的利弊)----议论段(分析观点二的利弊)----议论段(做出选择)2、议论段(分析两种观点各自的优点)---议论段(分析两种观点各自的不足)---议论段(做出选择)例:00-06 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?1)很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是…2)也有人持不同意见…3)我的看法和打算1、There is a general discussion nowadays on the problem of….Some argue/hold that ….,but others set forth a totally different argument about the issue.如今,…问题引起了广泛讨论。
有些人认为….但是其他人则对此持有完全相反的观点。
2、In reaction to the phenomenon/in answer to the problem/in response to the on-going social change, some people believe…. In their minds, ….Others maintain ….In their eyes,….对于这种现象/对于解决该问题/对于社会变化,一些人认为…其他人则认为…在他们看来…….3、Personally, I side with the former/latter opinion.就我个人而言,我支持前/后一种观点。
议论文写作系列指导之五——对比论证
议论文写作系列指导之五——对比论证教学目标:1.了解议论文中对比论证的内涵及效果。
2.掌握对比论证的一般模式。
3.培养学生形成运用对比论证分析事理的良好思维品质。
教学重难点:1.掌握对比论证的一般模式。
2.引导学生在“对比”之后,注意结合对比点进行分析。
教学方法:探究法讲授法练习法教具准备:多媒体教学课时:1课时教学过程一.导入:1. 对比高露洁防蛀牙膏广告(比较贝壳)(A与B)杜甫:“朱门酒肉臭,路有冻死骨。
”(A与B)契诃夫《变色龙》在短短的几分钟内,奥楚蔑洛夫的五变。
(A A A A A)前面展示的三个片段,表现形式各异,但共同地都使用了一种手法--------对比。
对比可以是相对相反的两个事物之间的“横比”,也可以是同一事物不同方面的“纵比”。
2. 对比的效果:突出,鲜明,深刻。
3. 将对比的手法运用到议论文的写作中,就成为了一种常用的论证手法——对比论证。
二.对比论证学生分析导学单中的示例,找出其中运用了对比论证的部分,回答下面的问题:1.对比论证是一种怎样的论证手法?2.使用对比论证有什么好处?3. 通过分析上面的六个示例,你能归纳出对比论证的一般模式吗?4. 分析下面的示例并联系你平时的写作实践,你觉得运用对比论证需注意什么。
教师适时点拨,重点讲解。
前两个问题较简单,学生自己归纳分析。
3题4题学生讨论完成。
明确:1. 对比论证是一种怎样的论证手法?用相反或相对的两方面事实或道理论证论点的论证方法。
2.为什么要使用对比论证?(即使用对比论证的好处)在议论文写作时,运用对比论证,就是把两种对立的事物或同一事物的互相矛盾的两个方面进行对照比较,肯定什么,否定什么,提倡什么,反对什么,就显得格外分明。
具体地说,就是在论证过程中既要正面说理,又要反面阐述;在对比分析中,表明正确的观点,从而达到写作的目的。
“有比较才有鉴别”。
真与假的对比,可以去伪存真;善与恶的对比,可以抑恶扬善;是与非的对比,可以拨乱反正。
对比选择型作文写作思路
HOW TO WRITE写作思路第一段:开门见山,指出人们对某事物存在不同的观点;提出观点一;阐述观点一的理由一;阐述观点一的理由二。
第二段:指明自己所青睐的一种观点;简单阐述理由;最后进行全文总结。
第三段:承上启下的过渡句,引出观点二;阐述观点二的理由一;阐述观点二的理由二;模板分析03MODELThe 1st para.1. When it comes to + 讨论对象,people’s ideas\views\notions\opinions vary from person to person\from one to another.当谈论到...,不同的人有不同的观点2.Some people take it for granted that+观点一.一些人认为...3.They argue that+选择观点一的理由.在他们看来....4.Besides,选择观点一的理由二.除此之外....The 2nd para.5.However,others hold the opposite opinion\adopt a totally different view\take an opposite side.然而,其他人持有相反的观点\采取了完全不同的观点\站在相反面。
6.They maintain that+选择观点二的理由一;他们觉得....7.In addition,they hold the perspective that+选择观点二的理由二.除此之外...The 3rd para.8. Weighing up these two arguments, were it left to me to decide whether we should +中心观点,I should not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter\the former.衡量了这两个观点之后,如果我来决定我们是否应该…,我会毫不犹豫地倾向于后者\前者。
第五讲 议论文中如何运用论据证明论点
第五讲运用论据证明论点第一节如何运用论据选择恰当的论据来证明论点,有两个难点需要突破:1.难以选择真实的论据,影响证明的可信度。
如有的同学一用论据,就自己编造,不是小明怎样,就是小刚如何,方便顺手,可是不难看出,小明小刚都是假造的人物,他们的事迹也就靠不住了。
要突破这个难点,可运用从课文采珠的办法,即在课本中寻求论据,包括语文、政治、历史等各种课本,甚至理科课本,其中的论据都是真实的,人们用来也都熟悉,可信度就会大大增强。
2.难以选用新鲜的论据,影响证明的说服力。
如有的同学一用论据,不是张海迪就是雷锋,不是鲁迅就是华罗庚,他们的事迹虽然也都是真实的,也很典型,但他们的事迹距离今天至少有十多年了,你用他用我用,未免显得有些陈旧,更不能把他们当做万能论据。
要突破这一难点,可采取两种办法:一是用新近发生的人和事为例,这就要留心近期的报刊和影视,吸取其中的有效信息,为我所用;二是即使想用一些陈旧的人和事,也要更新角度,或选用那些名人鲜为人知的事迹来做证,同样可以产生避陈就新的效果,例如华罗庚习惯方面的事迹,鲁迅与人友谊方面的例子,就比较新颖了。
例子作文题目:成功来自勤奋唐代大文学家韩愈说:“业精于勤,荒于嬉。
”的确如此,每个人的成功都是勤奋的结果。
(提示1:以名人名言点明宗旨,开门见山。
)李时珍是大家熟悉的著名医学家。
他一生奔波于祖国的大江南北,耗尽毕生精力才著出对世界医学有极大贡献的《本草纲目》。
数学家陈景润攀登数学峰巅欲摘取皇冠明珠的事迹,已在人们中间广为传颂。
他的诱人成就不也是靠勤奋吗?那整整六麻袋的稿纸就是他勤奋的最有力的见证。
世界著名的女科学家居里夫人两次获得诺贝尔奖这一殊荣,来自她在简陋的实验室里几十年如一日的勤奋工作。
莫泊桑从20岁就开始写作,直到30岁,习作草稿已堆得与书桌一样高时才发表了震动整个法国和西欧文坛的短篇小说《羊脂球》。
这无数事实不容置疑地证明了成功来自勤奋。
(提示2:用李时珍、陈景润、居里夫人和莫泊桑的事迹论证中心。
对比选择型作文
结构模板:
①When it comes to 事物/问题 , different people will offer different opinions.② Some people take it for granted that 观点一. ③In their opinion,理由一. ④Besides, 理由二. ⑤However, others hold 观点二. ⑥ They maintain, 理由一. ⑦ And 理由二. ⑧ Weighing up these two arguments, “我”的观点. ⑨ For one thing, 理由一. ⑩For another, 理由二. ⑾Therefore, as stated above, 总结全文。
例如: Is the Spirit of Lei Feng Out of Date?
1)很多人认为雷锋精神已经过时,理由是...... 2)也有人持不同意见 3)我的看法及理由
范文:Is the Spirit of Lei Feng Out of Date?
When it comes to Lei Feng’s spirit, different people will offer different opinions. Some people take it for granted that Lei Feng’s spirit has gone out of style in today’s society. In their opinion, in the modern society of commodity economy people should seek more practical things, such as fame, money and the comfortable life. Besides, they believe that there is no longer such a thing as selflessness, for nothing is more important to them than those material things. However, others hold that the Spirit of Lei Feng will never be out of date. They maintain that the great soldier’s story has such a strong influence on people’s ideas of values and ways of life that in every field there are countless “living Lei Fengs”. And indeed there are so many people who are following the example of Lei Feng and serving the people heart and soul.
比较选择类作文
比较选择类作文第一篇:比较选择类作文一、比较选择类作文A Better Way to Get Information----InternetIt is said that the 21 century is the “century of information”.The ways for people to get information are varied.Between two main sources, internet and printed materials, I hold that internet is an obviously superior choice to printed books.My belief that internet is a better way to get information than printed books is based on the following two reasons.The first reason is that internet can provide us with information more conveniently.Just getting on the line, finding the right web-site and typing in the key words we want to search for, in several seconds, we can get thousands of pieces of relevant information.Sometimes, we can even get the exact message we want.But by reading books, we have to spend much time finding the right books, the right chapters, and then the right pages.The second reason for my preference for internet is that it can transmit the newest information much faster than printed materials.Internet can tell us what is happening throughout the world in few minutes.But if you want to get the same information in printed materials like newspapers or magazines, you have to wait until they are published.According to the above mentioned reasons, we can easily draw the conclusion that, compared with the printed materials, internet is for sure superior in conveying information.Which to Choose: to Further Study or to Find a Job?A survey says that in recent years more students enter for postgraduate entrance examination.But many people argue against the tendency.They hold that to find a good job soon aftergraduation is more practical.Actually, different people have different opinions as to the question whether we should further study in graduate school or we should begin work, because both have their advantages and disadvantages.Many people appreciate the bright future a master’s degree may bring to them.Three years’ accumulation of knowledge is more likely to enable them to solve more challenging problems.And it is a fact that in many cases a graduate has more chances to get a promotion, and to have high salary than an undergraduate.But a promising job after college graduation is also attractive, especially when the job hunting competition becomes more and more fierce.A job in hand is worth two in the future.Another three years’ study means a delay but more heated competition with others later.However, both of them have their own problems.Academic study in graduate school may be difficult fir a freshman from college who has no practical experience, which may be also a problem when they search for a job three years later.Those without a master’s experience may come across many problems too, like special knowledge inefficiency, and research ability inadequacy.As far as I am concerned, I want to be more knowledgeable and capable through postgraduate study.So , given me the chance, I would choose to further study in graduate school.二、意义、重要性、危害性说明类作文A Major Advantage of Advertising on TVSome people complain abut the interference of TV adds in their enjoying excellent performances.Many others even turn to other channels when TV ads are released.They believe that TV ads mislead customers especially youngsters to have unreasonable consuming concepts.In spite of such hostile attitudes, we must admit that TV advertising is beneficial to us invarious ways.The major advantage is to promote advertising promotes consumption for, firstly, it is an efficient way for manufacturers to publicize their is a medium, through which information can be spread quickly, vividly, and in a large scale.When WaHaHa, a kind of children’s drink, is released on TV, the song is imitated by children all over the nation nearly overnight.Along with its release the sales of the drink increases greatly.Without TV adds, a product would get a longer time to be acknowledged by a limited number of advertising promotes consumption for, secondly, it provides a good way for consumers to learn the products.This is a time when information is too excessive to be processed.Without TV adds, customers will spend large quantity of time looking for goods they want, and choosing from the adds give them much information about products, the manufacturers, the places they can purchase or enjoy, and the possible effects.From the above reasoning, we can easily see the consumption promoting function of TV adds.We hope that TV ad agencies will give us more colorful and more trustworthy advertisements.The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood Competition is one of the traits of this society.Heated competition in career and education has exerted great pressure on people, which brings about many physical illness and mental problems.In my opinion, a good mood is critically important for us under whatever situations.The importance can be show in the follow two aspects.For one thing, a good mood is beneficial to our health, both physically and mentally.People who are always gloomy, according to the Chinese traditional medicine, have more chance to suffer from physical illness such as kidney pains.On the contrary, keeping a good mood ,we can makeourselves relaxed and therefore can keep calm and optimistic in difficulties.Therefore , a good mood keeps doctors(including mental healing)away.For another, with a good, we are likely to work efficiently.The reason is that in a good mood we are more willing to cooperate with others, and are more willing to listen to others’ advice.With such relaxation, it is easy for all the people to cooperate to figure out solutions to the problems.Therefore it is not exaggerating to say that keeping a good mood is the precondition of working efficiency.From the reason we have presented above, we can surely come to the conclusion that keeping a good mood, we will be healthier, and in a good mood ,we are more likely to succeed in our career.Being Indulged in Computer Games Is HarmfulAn excellent college student flunked because he could not concentrate on the study for being too indulged in computer games.He spent nearly all the money on games, which was earned by his father’s selling blood.When his father knelt down to beg him to return school, he was too much to show any regret.When computers’ entertaining function is highly spoken of, such a problem does deserve our serious concern.The most serious harm of computer games comes from their contents, which a ffect children’s mental health.Many games involve violence, such as fighting killing.To win or kill their opponents, children are permitted to use all various turn of mind is developed and rooted in them, which may induce future violent behaviors in their real life.Being indulged in computer games also does harm to children’s health.The computer can arouse many uncomfortable feeling , like a headache , poor eye sight and even losing hair.Being lack of sleep and dinner, children are more likely to get irritable and suffer from severe malnutrition.Of course, itis not the end of the story.Being indulged in computer games also affect children’s study, and their communication with others.All these facts show that it is time for us to manage computer games by the whole society.三,观点论证类作文My View on Man-Made BeautyThe Chinese traditional saying “Close make a person” reflects the importance of “appearance”.nowadays such a belief has its new content.Many people, especially young girls or ladies, are not content.with getting more beautiful by clothes.They turn to a more challenging practice of physiological reform to make them man-made beauties.I don’t think this practice should be advocated.The desire for beautiful appearance is one of human nature.The operations may really mean something to some people.At last they turn more beautiful.But a coin has two side, and so does the man-made beauty practice for two following reasons.Firstly, one’s appearance is the God’s blessing, and has been one part of our life.The reform of the original physiological structure may bring great harm to our body.After breast enlargement surgery ,many women look sexier than before.However many of them are found mammary gland disease.The more serious effect is that they risk being unable to breast feed.Secondly, the advocating for such a practice will mislead people in the judgment of true beauty.The concept of beauty is quite rich in its content.I should include many virtues like honesty, diligence, etc, which should be the real mainstream of our spiritual life.The practice and some contest about man-made beauty will confuse those who are to develop correct concept of beauty.Concerning the above possible harms the practice may bring about, we are strongly against it and advocate seeking true and natural beauty.四,现象解释类作文Why do College Student Have Difficulty in Finding Jobs?In recent years college graduates are facing greater challenge in job markets.T o avoid such an embarrassment, many students even choose to further their study to wait for another there years for a possible job opportunity.The reasons for the employment difficulties lie in the following three aspects.Firstly, the enlarged college enrollment supplies more than enough graduates with a certain specialty.There has been an overabundance of executive secretaries, lawyers, etc.therefore in the contest for a single position by tens of hundreds of graduate, most will suffer the failure.Secondly, job-finding difficulty also comes from the curricula design of many colleges.They have not adjusted their majors and subjects to meet the demand of modern society, so that students can’t find a position in the market to apply their knowledge in practice.Thirdly, I believe the difficulty also come from graduate themselves.The job demand are quite unbalanced between developed areas and underdeveloped areas.A large number of graduate would rather stay jobless in big cities than take position in small or underdeveloped cities.Taking all these reasons into account, we’d like to suggest that the should h ave a micromanagement in college enrollment and major design, and students have a bboader and more reasonable vivd about caReer.五,提出建议,解决问题类作文。
