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Today people are so fond of travelling that tourism has become one of the developing industries in China. People are so interested in tourism that tourism in China is developing fast. People’s great interest in tourism leads to / account for the development of tourism in China. As more people enjoy travelling, ……
time consuming
expensive
Travelling
crowded (scenic spots)
environmentally unfriendly (booking tickets ) inconvenient
overcrowded (bus or train)
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※一定要留有时间进行检查,避免小语法错误扣印 象大分; ※ 注重字体的美化,卷面的整洁。
Homework assignment
• Exchange your writing with your partner and find out as many mistakes as possible. • Correct some possible mistakes together with your partner. • Polish your writing and then hand in.
However, travelling may cause some problems. It may be inconvenient for you to book tickets. The overcrowded bus or train may make us tired. And what’s more, travelling costs much time and money. So it is clear that travelling also has its disadvantages. Personally, I think tourism will play a more and more important role in our life and the government should put forward more policies to support and protect the development of tourism.
Step 1. Grasp the main idea
It is exciting to visit different places. ( benefits)
Today people are so fond of travelling that tourism has become one of the developing industries in China. Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible.
Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. Some underlying factors contribute to the development of tourism.
Travelling can bring us a lot of benefits, which in turn promotes the development of tourism in China. The author also find out some underlying factors contributing to the development of tourism. (32 words)
抢记练习1: Travelling benefits people a lot.
When travelling, we can visit some scenic spots and historic places. We will meet different people and perhaps make friends with some of them. We may taste food with strong local flavor and see some strange things. Through travelling, we can get relaxed, enrich our knowledge, broaden our views and will love our motherland more deeply. daboxki t.exe
Travelling can bring us a lot of benefits, which in turn promotes the development of tourism in China. The author also find out some underlying factors contributing to the development of tourism. Travelling benefits people a lot. When travelling, we can visit some scenic spots and historic places. We will meet different people and perhaps make friends with some of them.We may taste food with strong local flavor and see some strange things. Through travelling, we can get relaxed, enrich our knowledge, broaden our views and will love our motherland more deeply.
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Steps to write a good summary
Underline / circle to grasp the main idea 1.__________________________ Sum up by rewriting or paraphrasing 2.__________________________ Combine and check to avoid copying 3.__________________________
relaxation,
a good mood friends food with local flavor
Travelling
patriotism tourism
local customs
views / horizons
knowledge
disadvantages of travelling
tiring / exhausting boring / dull
放松身心 观光景点 参观历史名胜 品尝当地美食 了解当地文化 风俗 丰富知识 开阔视野 广交朋友 爱国 发展旅游业
relax oneself physically and mentally tour some scenic spots visit some historic places taste some food with local flavor know about some local culture and customs enrich one’s knowledge broaden one’s views / horizons make many friends (and earn friendship) to be patriotic / love one’s country develop tourism
Discussion
Do you like travelling？
Please make a list of the advantages and disadvantages of travelling.
Advantages of travelling
scenic spots historic places
An outline(提纲）
Short but precise Title _____________ Summary • ______________ (about 30 words)
Body / (Argumentation / narration ) • _________________________________
Attention !!! Summary 部分要有层次
1、记叙文：时间顺序 2、夹叙夹议：先叙后议 3、议论文：逻辑顺序
客观转述，not your own opinions.
布局谋篇--演绎法
主题句 topic sentence
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扩展句 Supporting details
段落
paragraph
抢记练习2:
However, travelling may cause some problems. It may be inconvenient to book the tickets. The overcrowded bus or train may make us tired. And what’s more, travelling costs much time and money. So it is clear that travelling also has its disadvantages.