江苏省扬州市邗江区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达(含解析)

江苏省扬州市邗江区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年江苏省扬州市邗江区中考一模英语试卷

写作（计20分）

76.近年来，在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象。为此，国家提出了把劳动教育（Labor Education）纳入中小学国家课程的方案。现在你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育发起征文。请你以“Developing Labor Education in Our School”为题，写一篇100词左右的短文参赛。

内容包括:1.What’sthe importance of Labor Education?

（Learning study skills、forming good habits……）

2.What housework do you usually do at home?

3.What is your advice on Developing Labor Education in your School?

(for example: grow vegetables ; have some DIY competitions…)

4. What’s your opinion?

要求:

1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和所在学校的名称。

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Developing Labor Education in Our School

It’s reported that Labor Education has been included in the education of schools in China.

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96. “双减(Double reduction)”意在减轻学生过重的学业负担，并非降低学习质量，相反对“自律(self-discipline)”提出了更高要求。假如你是第一中学九年级学生李勇，请根据以下提示，写一篇短文关于“双减”后学习上发生的变化以及这些变化带来的结果。

提示如下：practical work (实践性作业) assign (布置) classroom efficiency (课堂效率)

2.词数100个左右；

3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名

My name is Li Yong. I’m a student in Grade 9, No. 1 Middle School.

“Double reduction” policy hopes to reduce students’ learning burden by reducing homework and after-school classes. After “double reduction”, great changes have taken place in our study. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________

2021年江苏省扬州市邗江区中考一模英语试卷

101. 假设你是Tom，想要给美国的笔友Linda介绍一下中国饮食文化的变化，请根据提示写一篇英语短文。内容如下：

要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；

3. 词数100个字左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。

Dear Linda,

I am writing to tell you something about the changes in Chinese food culture.

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Yours faithfully

Tom

答案：

2023年江苏省扬州市邗江区中考一模英语试卷

76．例文：

Developing Labor Education in Our School

It’s reported that Labor Education has been included in the education of schools in China.

Through labor we can exercise and develop our abilities. Besides we will not be afraid of difficulties. We can also learn to depend on ourselves. Only in this way can we understand our parents better and value what we’ve got. Many students hate doing housework, but I like to do. I usually sweep the floor, clean the table, wash clothes, even cook. I almost do housework every day.

I think we can receive labor education by growing vegetables, having some DIY competitions, taking part in some volunteer activities and so on in our school.

As teenagers, we are not only flowers but also hope of country, even humans. So we need to be stronger and have more abilities to bear the responsibility. So I think it is not only meaningful but also necessary for us to receive labor education.

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

① 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；

① 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏所给内容要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出话题——劳动教育；

第二步，具体阐述劳动教育的必要性和自己的做法以及对学校劳动教育的建议；

第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。

[亮点词汇]

①be afraid of害怕

①depend on依靠

①take part in参加

①not only...but also不但……而且

[高分句型]

①Only in this way can we understand our parents better and value what we’ve got. (what引导的宾语从句)

①So we need to be stronger and have more abilities to bear the responsibility. (运用形容词比较级)

2022年江苏省扬州市邗江区中考一模英语试卷

【答案】例文：

My name is Li Yong. I’m a student in Grade 9, No. 1 Middle School.

“Double reduction” policy hopes to reduce students’ learning burden by reducing homework and after-school classes. After “double reduction”, great changes have taken place in our study.

First of all, there has been a marked reduction in our homework. It allows us to have more time for extracurricular activities, such as dancing, playing balls and so on. Next, teachers are taking their teaching more seriously. We have the opportunity to do experiments and can learn from real life. Last but not the least, there are fewer exams because of “double reduction”. Exams enable us to understand our progress and shortcomings and make us work harder. However, it is also a good thing that we have to be more “disciplined” without exams.

I believe we can study happily and have fun at school because of the “double reduction” policy.【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，介绍关于“双减”后学习上发生的变化以及这些变化带来的结果。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍双减”后，更少的作业，更高的课堂效率和更少的课外辅导课这些变化以及带来的后果，并表达我的观点；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。

2021年江苏省扬州市邗江区中考一模英语试卷

【答案】参考范文：

Dear Linda,

I am writing to tell you something about the changes in Chinese food culture.

In the past, too much food was ordered when we ate at restaurants. We liked to get together to

have meals with chopsticks. But nowadays, we just order what we need. We don’t waste food any more. Some people prefer to choose forks and knives to have meals in individual portions.

Various foods can be seen (can be available) in our lives today. We pay more attention to a healthy diet instead of eating more meat. For example, parents encourage their children to eat more fruit and vegetables.

People used to make a loud noise while eating. However, it is polite of us to keep our voice down in public today. On the other hand, I think children should avoid looking at (staring at) their mobile phones for long when eating.

I wish you can come to China and have a taste of all the delicious food here.

Yours faithfully

Tom 【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是写一封信，开头已给出。要求根据表格信息提示给美国的笔友Linda介绍一下中国饮食文化的变化，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称来描述过去和现在的饮食变化，用第三人称来证明这种变化；描述过去的饮食习惯，时态采用一般过去时，描述现在的饮食习惯，时态采用一般现在时；描述饮食变化时，应描写细致；信件需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。