读后续写微技能——形容词作状语

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读后续写之情绪描写微技能课件

读后续写之情绪描写微技能课件

Emotional nouns anger; rage
sadness; sorrow; pain disappointment;desperation
frustration; depression confusion; puzzlement
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Emotional words ( Negative emotions )
Emotional words ( Positive emotions )
Emotional adjectives
喜悦 happy; delighted; pleased; cheerful; joyful
激动
excited; thrilled
惊讶 surprised; amazed; astonished; shocked
焦虑 无助 害怕、恐惧 羞愧、尴尬 后悔;内疚 疲惫 不情愿
Emotional adjectives anxious helpless
afraid; scared; frightened; ashamed; embarrassed regretful; guilty tired; exhausted unwilling; reluctant
control.
① with + 情绪n.
2. With a_n_g_e_r__/ _ra_g_e_(怒气冲冲地), he rushed into my room.
3. Smiling in _r_e_l_ie_f_(宽慰地), m②y mionth+er情hu绪ggne.d me gently.
4. When the flood broke out, the villagers fled in p_a_n_i_c_(恐慌地

读后续写高分句型及例句

读后续写高分句型及例句

读后续写高分句型及例句一、V-ing和V-ed作状语1.“Dad, sorry, it was such a mess.” Jeff murmured, lowering his head in shame“对不起,爸爸,太乱了,”Jeff小声说道,惭愧地低着头。

2.“Jump out of the car and ran to me!” Joe yelled and got off the truck, waiting for my action.“从车里出来,跑到我身边!”Joe大叫着下了卡车,等待我的行动。

3.“My egg bounced out,” she explained, pointing to a broken shell in the grass.“我的鸡蛋掉了,”她指着玻璃上的碎蛋壳解释道。

4.“Surprise! Happy Mother’s Day, mummy!” they said, throwing their arms into the air.“给你一个惊喜!妈妈。

母亲节快乐!”他们说着,在空中挥舞着胳膊。

5. Bubbling with overwhelming ecstasy, Hunter couldn’t help bouncing ups and downs.Hunter欣喜若狂,情不自禁地蹦蹦跳跳。

6. Filled with fright, I dragged my exhausted body inching forward.我拖着疲惫的身躯向前挪动,内心充满恐惧。

7. Following him, I arrived at home safe and sound finally.跟着他,我最终安全无恙地回家了。

8. I murmured sorry, reflecting that I should have taken his warning seriously.我低声道歉,反思自己应该认真对待他的警告。

读后续写新题08:人与动物类:学企鹅取暖(2024广东一模英语)-【冲刺2024高考

读后续写新题08:人与动物类:学企鹅取暖(2024广东一模英语)-【冲刺2024高考

【冲刺2024高考】高中英语读后续写(创新话题命题类)新题速递08原文解读+情节构建+下水文&范文及解读+语言赏析总结2024年3月广东一模高三英语读后续写创新点:人与动物类、学企鹅取暖阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。

When Mary entered the South Pole Penguin Research Lab, she saw her friend Tom gently stroking(轻抚) a penguin in his arms. As children of the lab scientists, Mary and Tom often observed the emperor penguins that were studied to understand how they adapted to extreme temperatures—insights that could aid human survival.“ We’re thirteen, Tom. It’s time to grow up and stop playing with the lab penguins,” said Mary as she started cleaning. “They’re research animals, not pets.”“But the birds listen to me!” insisted Tom, his breath forming a cloud in the freezing air. “You’re just trying to be a penguin whisperer again,” Mary replied, shaking her head with a gentle smile. The penguins seemed playful as they walked, dove, swam and chased their live fish for sport before eating.Suddenly, an alarm rang out and red lights flashed, signaling a problem. The kids rushed over to look into it. “It’s colder than before—there’s ice forming on the water,” noted Tom. Though always cold, Mary had never seen ice here before. She checked the habitat monitor and found that the temperature had gone down a lot. “The heater must be broken!”Mary quickly sent a message to their parents’ research team, who were conducting outdoor studies. With the adults away, the kids would have to deal with the freezing conditions until help arrived.Time dragged as Mary and Tom anxiously waited. The increasing cold caused them to shake. “I wonder what emperor penguins do in extreme cold, since they stay in the Pole all winter instead of going somewhere warmer,” asked Mary. “They huddle (挤作一团),” Tom answered. “They huddle together tightly so that the birds inthe middle will be warm enough.” “What about the ones on the edge?” Mary asked. “They push their way towards the center, and then move back out to the edge, and struggle back again. Scientists in the early 21st century recorded it.” He replied as he stared at the large crowd of the penguins in the lab.注意:1. 续写词数应为150 左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

高考英语读后续写课程No.01(teacher)

高考英语读后续写课程No.01(teacher)

读后续写课程No.01Part1: 初识读后续写一、读后续写题型解读(1)题型简介:读后续写题型的构成为一段350词以内的语言材料和所要续写段落的段落开头语,要求学生依据该材料内容及所给段落开头语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

(2)分值:25分高考改卷流程:先定档(5个档次),再调分。

评分时,先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次,然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。

【具体解释】评分时,主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑。

◆续写内容的质量、完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度;◆所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性;◆上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性评分时还应注意:◆词数少于120的,酌情扣分;◆书写较差以致影响交际的,酌情扣分;◆单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面,评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑,英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

(3)建议用时:35分钟左右二、续写课程介绍Part1: 认识题型Part2: 续写微技能(内容+句式)❖各类描写:情绪描写;动作描写;语言描写;环境描写;衔接表达;主旨表达❖高级语法现象:形容词作状语;非谓语作状语;副词;名词性从句;多样化主语;特殊句式;词类活用Part3:实战演练(按话题分类练习)【前期每节课重点在Part2,后期重点在Part3】三、续写练习讲解过程Step1: 准确理解材料,梳理前文情节Step2: 利用问题导向法,确定两段情节的大致走向Step3: 根据段落开头语,搭建续写框架,每段设计3-4个微情节Step4: 完成读后续写Part2:续写微技能——描写分类一、情绪描写1. 直接情绪描写(第一人称:我/全篇都是第三人称)万能句式1:“……的情绪席卷了某人”❖ A flush of + 情绪名词+ surged through/overwhelmed/swept over sb❖ A surge of + 情绪名词+ took hold of sb❖Sb be overwhelmed/overflowing with + 情绪名词练习:当妈妈训斥她的时候,她非常难过。

新教材高中英语 Unit 6 Earth first 读后续写 微技能之害怕与恐

新教材高中英语 Unit 6 Earth first 读后续写 微技能之害怕与恐

四、完成句子 1.你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们是多么恐惧。 You cannot imagine __h_o_w__ __f_r_ig_h_t_e_n_ed__ ___w__e__ ___w__e_re___ ___a_t_____ __th_e___ _a_p_p_r_o_a_ch__ ___o_f__ __t_h_e__ __p_o_l_a_r _ __b_e_a_r___.(形容词) 2.惊恐之下,我觉得我两腿发抖,手心冒汗。 _E_x_t_r_em__e_ly_ ___f_ri_g_h_te_n_e_d__,I felt my legs were trembling and my palms were sweating.(形容词作状语)
读后续写 微技能之害怕与恐惧
Unit 6
英语
一、词汇积累
名词/动词 scare,frighten,fear,fright,terror 形容词 afraid,scared,scary,frightened,frightening,fearful,terrified,terrifying 二、词块必记 1.scare sb.to death吓死某人 2.stand still站着不动 3.a flood of fear恐惧万分 4.frighten sb./sth.away把某人/某物吓跑
三、佳句背诵
1.People have always been scared of sharks,but Jaws made things worse. 人们本就害怕鲨鱼,而电影《大白鲨》加深了这种恶劣印象。 2.It made people frightened of sharks,especially of the great white shark. 让人们对鲨鱼,特别是大白鲨,心生恐惧。 3.Scared and nervous,she was frozen to the spot.她又害怕又紧张,吓呆了。 4.Fear/Tension flooded over him.恐惧/紧张淹没了他。 5.Some people stopped swimming in the sea,afraid of the horrible creature from the film. 由于害怕遇上电影里描绘的这种可怕生物,有些人再也不去海里游泳了。

读后续写微技能-句式与修辞(1)

读后续写微技能-句式与修辞(1)
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句式2 主+谓..., doing/done...
1.He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes. 他惊呆了,睁大眼睛盯着我。 2.He listened with close attention, biting his lips and holding his breath. 他仔细听着,咬着嘴唇,屏住呼吸。 3.Her father was lying on his back, trapped under the truck. 她父亲仰面躺着,被困在卡车下面。 4.He was on pins and needles, waiting for the test results. 他如坐针毡,焦急地等待着考试结果。
【即学即练】 1. 就在那一瞬间她改变了主意。
It was at that moment that she changed her mind.
2. 是他的主意拯救了我们大家。 It was his idea that saved us all.
句式7 倒装句
1.Only then did he know what had happened. 到那时他才知道发生了什么事。 2.Not until then did he know he chose the wrong route. 直到那时他才知道他选择了错误的路线。 3.So desperate was she that she was on the verge of tears. 她如此绝望以至于眼泪快要流下来了。 4.At the front door stood her husband, Tom, who suffered great anxiety when she was missing. 她的丈夫汤姆站在前门,当她不见时,他非常焦虑。

外研版高中英语学案必修第一册 Unit 1 A new start 读后续写 微技能之紧张与害怕


单句写作
1.看到她所做的事,他惊恐地睁大了眼睛。 His eyes __w_i_d_e_n_e_d_ ___w__it_h___ __h_o_rr_o_r_/t_e_rr_o_r_/f_e_a_r_ at what she had done.(过 去分词短语) 2.感到恐惧,她猛烈地砰砰地敲着门。 _S_h_o_c_k_e_d_/F__ri_g_h_te_n_e_d_/_S_c_a_re_d_/_T_e_rr_i_fi_e_d___,she pounded the door fiercely.(形容 词作状语) 3.珍妮深呼吸,嘴里的舌头感到又厚又沉。 Jenny took long breaths, ___h_e_r ____ ___to_n_g_u_e__ __t_h_ic_k____ ___a_n_d____ __h_e_a_v_y___ ___in______ ___h_e_r____ __m__o_u_th___ .(独立主格结构)
5.My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office. 我走进她的办公室时,紧张得心都到嗓子眼了。 6.I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak. 我感到如此害怕,以至于嗓子发紧,膝盖发软。
佳句背诵
1.In a way,I suppose I’m frightened of failing. 在某种程度上我想我有点惧怕失败。 2.His heart was pounding,and he was frightened. 他的心怦怦跳,他被吓坏了。 3.I got scared and I ran and left her all alone. 我一害怕就跑了,把她一个人扔下了。 4.My brain is blank.I just want to leave this horrible place. 我大脑一片空白,只想离开这个恐怖的地方。

高中英语2024届新高考读后续写加分句式汇总(共6种)

新高考英语读后续写加分句式汇总一、形容词作状语1.Unable to answer the teacher’s question, all the students kept silent.2.On my way home, I saw a middle-aged man lying by the roadside, dead drunk.3.Afraid of being scolded, Eric thought of playing truant.4.He was lying in bed, awake, listening to the roaring wind.5.Flushed and breathless, Mary rushed in through the gate.6.Jack paced up and down in his room, deep in thought.7.With the help of the helicopter, Mary got out of the forest and saw her husband, safe and sound.8.Trapped in the dense mist, I could do nothing but burst into tears, helpless and disappointed.9.They agreed never to quarrel again, determined to live the life to the fullest.10.I turned over and faced her, ready to let her see the anger and disappointment in my eyes.11.“Sorry,” apologized Lucy, shame-faced and self-condemned.12.Desperate and exhausted, Jane knelt down, with tears rolling down her cheeks.13.Lucy hesitated, uncertain of how to combine honesty and diplomacy in her answer.14.They listened in silence, aware that any attempt to calm her would only increase her annoyance.15.Curious to know what the crowd in the shop was staring at, Harry edged his way inside and squeezed in.【参考翻译】1.回答不出老师的问题,学生们都保持沉默。

读后续写微技能——形容词作状语--英语作文复习专项课件

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三是找准学科增分点 认真研究本省、本市、本校近年来的高考数据,细化到每一个知识点的得
失分情况,找准突破点和增分点,有目的进行专项训练和突破提升。英语的阅 读理解和小作文、语文的古文分析和作文、理科的做题速度、文科的答题思路 等,都要制定详细的训练方案和突破的方法策略,在实践中调整提升,打破制 约瓶颈,找到质量提升的突破口。
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作 attract others’ attention. 状 2. 他抓住我的双手,说不出话来。 语 3H. e她g失rab望be了d ,my回h到an家ds,,un不ab断le地to对sa自y a己ny生th气ing。.

写 She got disappointed and returned home, continuously angry 作 at herself. 中 4. 珍妮坐在那里,惊愕得说不出话来。

高中英语说课式备课-读后续写

读后续写
读后续写
开课班级: 开课时间:
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复习 写作微技能:如何表达悲伤

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作业讲评
复习:热考话题(二) 冲突类
第一步: 冲突构造(犯错、内疚、伤心、生气等) 冲突原因大致有:疏于陪伴、理念不合 (代沟)、误会等。 1.犯错:她和母亲争吵,生气地离家出走 She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily.
9. broke down 崩溃
10. in low spirits 情绪低落
11. in a bad mood 心情很糟
(二)佳句
1. He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站在那里,泪流满面。 2. I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness. 我觉得我沉浸在悲伤的海洋。 3. My eyes were filled with tears.
事件梳理
●珍妮跟母亲吵架,离家出走,街上游 荡几个钟后,感觉饥饿。
●好心人给她一碗面吃,她感动 流泪。
●这位陌生人告诉她,母亲将她养大, 给她做了无数次饭菜,应当感谢她的 母亲。
●珍妮意识到自己错了,决定回家 向妈妈道歉。
语言特色
1.分词短语作状语 (1)Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. (2)She stood beside a stand for a while, watching the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. (3)Hearing the words, the seller smiled…
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四人一组,任选其中一个片段,合作完成。注意使用形容词作状语
片 1.Tom参加英语演讲比赛获第一名。(赛前,赛中,赛后) 段 2.Peter考试不及格,回家告知父亲结果。 描 3.Alice参加毕业典礼,看到同学在炫耀自己的毕业礼物,她 写 却没有。
4.Mary在超市遇到许多年未见的小学同学。
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1.Tom参加英语演讲比赛获第一名。(赛前,赛中,赛后)
Thinking that her classmates would consider her to be a lazy girl, Meg sat on the floor, hopeless and worried. 5. Oliver went up to the master, with his bowl in his hand. He felt very frightened, but also desperate with hunger. Oliver, frightened and desperate with hunger, went up to the master, with his bowl in his hand.


容 5.她低下头,不知道该如何回答。
词 She hung her head, not sure how to reply. 作 6.简绝望地跪了下来,眼泪顺着脸颊流下来。 状 Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down
语 her face. 在 7.回答不出老师的问题,学生们都保持沉默。 写 Unable to answer the teacher's question, all the students kept 作 silent. 中 8.饥寒交迫,那个小女孩不住地哭泣。 的 Cold and hungry, the little girl kept crying.

容 1. 她急切而兴奋地挥动着她的黄色上衣,想引起别人的注意。
词 Eager and excited, she flagged her yellow blouse, trying to
作 attract others’ attention.
状 2. 他抓住我的双手,说不出话来。 语 He grabbed my hands, unable to say anything.
二、形容词或形容词短语可以作状语,表示行为方式 或伴随状况,其逻辑主语是句子的主语。例如:
He was lying in bed, awake, listening to the music. 他躺在床上,毫无睡意,静静听着音乐。 Inevitably you arrived at your destination almost exhausted. 一旦抵达目的地,你总是疲惫不堪。
3. In the evening, the children returned home. They were tired and hungry. In the evening, the children returned home, tired and hungry.
4. Meg thought that her classmates would consider her to be a lazy girl. She sat on the floor. She felt hopeless and worried.
德黑兰的一个年轻人由于对睡地板感到厌倦,于是积蓄多年买了 一张真正床。(表原因)
一、形容词或形容词短语可以作状语,表示原因。 这种状 语一般位于句首,有时也可位于句中。
Overjoyed, he rushed out of the house. Much interested, he agreed to give it a try. Afraid of difficulties, they prefer to take the easy road. Unable to afford the time, I had to give up the plan.
四、形容词或形容词短语可以作让步状语。这种状语常由连词 and 或or 连接的两个或两个以上的并列形容词构成相,一般位于句首, 有时也可位于句中。例如:
Pupils of the school, old and new, will be sending him a present to mark the occasion.
用 happened.
1. For a few moments I just stood there. I was confused. For a few moments I just stood there, confused.
2. And then he ran off to play and wasn’t aware of the impact he’d had on me. And then he ran off to play, unaware of the impact he’d had on me.
片 段 描 写
2.Peter考试不及格,回家告知父亲结果。
片 段 描 写
3.Alice参加毕业典礼,看到同学在炫耀自己的毕业礼物, 她却没有。
片 段 描 写
4.Mary在超市遇到许多年未见的小学同学。
片 段 描 写
句 4. Afraid of being caught, the thief hid himself under a bed. 中 的 5. Lin Tao, glad to accept the suggestion, nodded his agreement. 作 6. She just stood there, unable to believe what had just


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形容词作状语



概述
形容词作状语的情况,表示 原因、方式、伴随等,相 当于非谓语动词being + adj.省略being。例如:
Tired of sleeping on the floor (=Being tired of sleeping on the floor), a young man in Teheran saved up for years to buy a real bed.
三、形容词或形容词短语可以作状语,表示时间或条件相当于时间或 条件状语从句。这种状语通常位于句首,也可位于句末。例如:
Ripe, these apples are sweet.
=When / If these apples are ripe, they are sweet.
这些苹果熟了,味道很甜。 Enthusiastic, they are quite cooperative. =When / If they are enthusiastic, they are cooperative. 他们热心时是很愿意合作的。
在 3. 她失望了,回到家,不断地对自己生气。 写 She got disappointed and returned home, continuously angry 作 at herself. 中 4. 珍妮坐在那里,惊愕得说不出话来。

运 Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock.
为了纪念这个日子,学校的学生—— 无论老同学还是新同学 — —将送他一件礼物
Wet or fine, he got up at six and took a walk in the park. = Whether it was wet or fine, he got up at six and took a walk in the park. 不管是晴天还是下雨天,他总是六点钟起床,并到公园里散 散步。
形 容 1. Frightened and frustrated, she began sobbing.
词 2. “Why is the boy crying?”repeated the other man, puzzled.
在 3. His mind went blank, and he fell to the ground, unconscious.
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