大学英语高级写作

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Recruitment

October 10, 2011
Dear fellow students,
I am writing on behalf of the Students' Union to notify you about the time and place of our recruitment drive. We will conduct our first round of interviews at seven p.m. on Monday in the Students Centre. No specific requirements are stipulated but those who have relevant experience in organizing events are preferred. Moreover, since we are recruiting two web designers, candidates applying for this position must demonstrate their graphic design skills.
Mary
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1. The recruitment will be conducted in the Students' Centre tomorrow evening at seven.
2. For the liaison officer, an outgoing personality and interpersonal skills are required.
3. Please be on time for the interview.
4. Only freshmen are eligible for this round of recruitment.
5. In order to enhance the Union's efficiency, our sole requirement is that you have to be a team player.
Example Note 2
Saturday, April 17th
Recruitment Drive
Dear fellow students,
The Students' Union is the official organisation that represents your concerns and views about life on the campus. It is very much in your interest to be part of this organisation and have your voice heard. The Union is conducting a recruitment drive over the coming week and we urge all students who haven't already joined, to consider the many benefits of membership. Any full- or part-time student on campus is eligible to join the Union.
Mary
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1. The recruitment drive will be conducted over the coming week at stands around the university.
2. The Student Union is your voice in helping improve facilities on campus.
3. Union membership offers many benefits for full-time and part-time students.
4. The recruitment drive is aimed at any students who haven't yet joined.
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Computer Games Are a Form of Escapism
Are computer games a boon in terms of helping students relax after a long day's work at school? Or are they detrimental to pupils' future development since they can become easily addicted to the virtual world? Personally, I am in sympathy with the latter.
Admittedly, computer games furnish entertainment when students only spend a moderate amount of time on them. It might even be beneficial since pupils can combine study with pleasure and therefore achieve high efficiency. However, the hard truth is that droves of students end up being obsessed with computer games and view them as a way to escape from reality. As a result, academic study is inevitably neglected. And a vicious circle is created—the more frustrated students are about study, the more addicted they become to the virtual world. Furthermore, not only pupils' academic performance may suffer from playing computer games, the violence featured in such games may also exert an impact on impressionable teenagers. When the dividing line between the virtual and the real wor

ld is blurred, students may resort to violence in order to solve issues—as they do in games. Authoritative reports have confirmed that the increasing rate of violent incidents is ascribable to the prevalent trend of playing computer games. In sum, the demerits of computer games far outweigh their few merits because of the tendency for students to neglect academic study and because some students may become more violent. (238 words)
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1. Students tend to spend an inordinate amount of time on computer games.
2. It is undeniable that playing computers for a long time will put a strain on pupils' health as well.
3. Granted, computer games can be utilized to yield beneficial results. Yet, a balance has to be drawn in order to achieve this objective.
4. In some cases, pupils' creativity can be stimulated by computer games.
.5. Students who submerge themselves into the virtual world oftentimes confuse the games with reality.