读写任务型写作训练共34页文档
读写任务训练
三、评分标准
• ◆概括部分
• 1. 完全不理解，照抄原文(0分) • 2. 死板机械地抄，不改变原文顺序(1分) • 3. 改变主语或宾语的抄为主(2分) (灵活地 抄) • 4. 稍为改动总体的抄(3分) • 5. 改变句子、用词，重新排列组织(4—5 分) (字数不特别要求)
◆自主写作部分(120字)
• 当然，不是说每个故事概要都包含how 或 why，有时两者选其一即可。下文是课堂 训练的一个例子：
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I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years ago. It was really a huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eyes. Later on, unlike other girls, I volunteered to go water-skiing alone. I put on the life jacket, got on the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possible.
2. 如何提建议
• 首先，我们要确定建议的内容；其次，写 一句主题句总领下文；再次，我们要确定 几个建议的中心词，尽量将最重要的信息 放在第一句，以避免泛泛而谈或重复。此 外，在写的过程中我们还要注意各点建议 之间的逻辑关系。主题句与分点之间的关 系有“总分总”“总分”和“分总”等， 而点与点之间的关系有“并列”和“递进” 两种。
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• The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so thrilled(激动) to enjoy my trip among the mountains and waters that I sped my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found myself in the middle of the endless lake. A sudden fear came around me. I didn’t know where I was or even how far I had gone from the shore. What was worse, it began to rain and it became very cold and foggy. I rode everywhere but couldn’t find my way back.
读写任务训练——议论文
读写任务写作训练—议论文写作（2）一、阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
There are two factors which determine an individual’s intelligence. The first is sort of brain he is born with. Human brains differ considerable, some being more capable than others. But no matter how good a brain he has to begin with, an individual will have a low intelligence unless he has opportunities to learn. So the second factor is what happens to the individual—the sort of the environment in which he is brought up. If an individual is handicapped(受阻碍) environmentally, it is likely that his brain will stop to develop and he will never attain the level of intelligence of which he is capable.The importance of environment in determining an individual’s intelligence can be proved by the identical twins, Peter and John. When the twins were three months old, their parents died, and they were placed in separate foster(寄养) homes. Peter was reared by parents of low intelligence in an isolated community with poor educational opportunities. John, however, was educated in the home well-to-do parents who had been to college. This environmental difference continued until the twins were in their late teens, when they were given tests to measure their intelligence. John’s IQ was 125, twenty-five points higher than the average and fully forty points higher than his brother.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点；2)然后以约120个词就“环境与人的智力发展”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：a)你是否赞同“环境决定智力的发展”这一观点？为什么？b)请举出具体事例说明你的观点；c)你认为如何才能最大限度地发展智力？[写作指导](1)扼要概括（Summary）：2）根据上面的基本要素，用自己的话转述。
读写任务型作文
高考书面表达新题型训练（整合）解读：《2014年江苏高考考试说明》中书面表达示例部分多了读写任务型作文，这一作文类型在往年的考试说明上是没有的，将阅读与写作有机地结合,通过阅读所给材料的有关信息,进而对比信息进行加工,并结合平时积累的相关信息知识,按照任务要求谋篇布局,完成指定的写作任务。
（《2014年江苏高考考试说明》在考试形式、试卷难易比例以及试卷整体结构、题型、分值、时间分布等方面没有变化。
建议考生好好研究考试说明和往年真题，细细品味。
）【复习建议】对《2014年江苏省高考说明》中的词汇进行梳理，找出高考英语中常考的词，比较异同，创设情境等，在真实语言环境下训练词汇的使用。
以阅读为中心，不仅要好好阅读课文教材，而且要保持一定量的课外阅读，注意阅读速度和理解的准确率，同时训练对阅读文章的概括及缩写。
注意对《2014年江苏省高考说明》中提到的例题加以学习和研究，特别是读写任务型的作文，更应该引起重视。
“读写任务”议论文写作导练阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Scientists find that hard-working people live longer than average men and women. Career women are healthier than housewives. Evidence shows that the jobless are in poorer health than the job-holders. A study shows that whenever the employment rate increases by 1%, the death rate increase correspondingly(相应地) by 2%. All this comes down to one point: work is helpful to health.Why is work good for health? It is because work keeps people busy, away from loneliness. Researches show that people feel unhappy, worried and lonely when they have nothing to do. Instead, the happiest are those who are busy. Work serves as a bridge between man and reality. By work, people come into contact with each other. By collective activities, they find friendship and warmth. This is helpful to health. The loss of work means the loss of everything. It affects man spiritually and makes him likely to disease.Besides, work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement. Work makes one feel his value and status in society. When a writer finishes his writing or teacher sees his students grow, they are happy beyond words.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点；2)然后以约120个词就“努力学习，快乐生活”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：a)你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗？为什么？ b)举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的？c)简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活？[写作指导](1)拟定标题：根据议论的主题及写作内容确定标题：Study hard and enjoy yourselves。
读写任务训练二
读写任务训练二过渡句（summary 和第二段的衔接；引出事例的过渡句）1. On reading this speech, my mind began its search for another story aboutdishonesty.2. From these stories, I acquire a deeper understanding of the lesson that honesty is the best policy.3. I once read a similar story about honesty.4. What I can learn from the story is that honesty is of great importance to human beings.5. After reading the story above, I was much convinced of the fact that honesty is the best policy.6. The story reminded me of one of my experiences.7. After reading this passage, it dawned on me that the importance of honesty cannot be emphasized too much.8. From what has been discussed above, we can reasonably draw a conclusion that honesty is the best policy.第二节读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. This is Li Hua from Senior Three. I’m here today to share with you a good lesson from an overseas Chinese student living in Germany. It is a true story.After years of hard work, this Chinese student graduated with amazing academic achievements. Everyone thought he was going to get a good job easily and have a bright future. But to his disappointment, he was not even allowed the chance for an interview! The third time he w as turned down, he couldn’t help telephoning the company to ask why they didn’t want him. The answer was simple. “We don’t hire dishonest people in Germany.”What was wrong you might wonder? The truth is, shortly after he arrived in Germany, this clever student found that it was easy to skip buying subway tickets. So, to save money, he often went without a ticket. As a result, he had been caught without a ticket in the subway three times.From this story, we learn that we may get short-term benefits by dishonest means, but the truth will come out sooner or later and the cost is high. So remember: honesty is the best policy.That’s all for my speech. Thank you!【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括这篇演讲稿的主要内容；2.然后以约120个词写一篇读后感，说明“诚信的重要性”，内容包括：（1）你读后的感受；（2）以你或他人的经历说明；（3）谈谈你从中悟出的道理。
读写任务说明文写作导练
读写任务说明文写作导练一．说明文概要模板a. 现象揭示类：This article points out the common phenomenon -----…（主题), which…..（补充解释）.b. 利弊对比类：The article compares the disadvantages/ benefits of A and B. A…while B…The passage discusses the impact(影响)of sth. On the positive side…, but it may also….c. 研究显示类：The study reveals(揭露) that…The purpose of the report is to show that…二．说明文的概括方法：主题概括法/ 段意合并法写作方法：抓住关键句：文章第一段和各段第一句。
（所谓关键句主要是一些主题句即中心句）对现象分析型说明文，要找出“现象”“造成这种现象的原因”“解决这种现象或问题的措施或建议”。
例1：The article points out the common phenomenon---Internet shopping, which offers great convenience. People can buy many things on the Internet including common products, information products and even services.例2：The passage mainly tells us what table manners are. By showing readers some different table manners in different countries, the passage reminds people to value table manners.例3：The passage shows that nowadays boys tend to perform worse than girls in all aspects in school, which is known as the ―boy crisis‖. Experts suggest that same-sex schooling may be a possible solution to the problem.三．实战演练（1）You may not be very familiar with”ecotourism”--- a new term in today’s tourism industry--- but in an area of growing environmental consciousness, it is not too difficult for us to imagine and work out the meaning of this new form of holiday.Ecotourism is typically defined as travel to places where the unique flowers, plants, animals and the cultural heritage are the primary attractions. It is considered as a kind of responsible tourism which seriously takes ecology and culture into consideration. Therefore, programs involving the conservation and preservation of some natural and cultural sites also form a part of ecotourism.Ecotourism is developing at great speed. According to a report by the World Tourism Organization, ecotourism in recent years has enjoyed an annual growth of about 5% worldwide. Over 80 activities have been listed for education, such as bird watching, hiking, diving, photography, mountaineering and participating in various kinds of local cultural events.Although big cities are still the major places that absorb tourists in our society today, it looks like some smaller towns and rural areas rich in ecological, cultural and historical resources may well become the new destinations for people to visit tomorrow.Find out the topic and expositions in the passage:Summary:（2）Eye care is an important factor in all of our lives. Without eyes, we seem to be able to do nothing. But, what can we do to take care of eyes? Firstly, we should eat healthy foods. Secondly, don’t sit before a computer screen or TV for too long time and take regular rest at intervals so as to relax the eye muscles. Thirdly, having enough sleep is the best rest for eyes.Besides those notices, you should be aware of some threats to eyes in daily lives. Excessive exposure to bright sunlight is harmful to eyes, therefore, when going out, especially in summer time, put on a pair of qualified sunglasses. Stay away from smoking. Some ingredients in cigarettes are carcinogenesis(致癌的).Last but not least, take regular medical examines to check out the potential eye disease and prevent its deterioration(退化). Eyes are the most important sense organs and one should use proper eye care products to avoid further irritations (刺激)and ensure longevity at ease.四．2013广州二模读写任务阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
读写任务型-材料概括型作文-写作训练-高三英语
“读写任务式作文”写作训练Focus: 30词的摘要怎么写？（限时训练十五作文）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
As we all know, the “(passenger) transport during the Spring Festival period” has been a hot phrase all through the China land.The volume of passenger traffic(客运量) reaches its climax before and after the Spring Festival. Especially, the number of those who decide to go back to their hometown by train is increasing rapidly, so it promotes the short of the tickets of passenger train. Luckily, the Ministry of Railways(铁道部) has come up with solutions. For instance, it arranges extra trains during the peak time for passenger transport as well as opens 24-hour ticket sales windows for passengers in order to ease the traffic pressure. Moreover, it helps to deliver train tickets to the doorsteps, providing convenience for passengers.One thing that has to be mentioned this year is about start of selling tickets on-line this year. For one thing, it to some degree shortens the time of purchasing tickets. However, most of the passengers are migrant workers returning home for Spring Festival. They are not familiar with the process of buying tickets and as a result cannot buy the tickets on time. What is worse, many computers selling tickets broke down under too much pressure of operation. Therefore, many people blame such a method in that it doesn’t suit nowadays’ situation.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
读写结合型任务驱动型作文
读写结合型任务驱动型作文
哎哟，这雨后的空气真是清新啊！地上都是水坑，孩子们踩得
可欢了，边踩边笑，开心得不行。
那棵老梧桐树，叶子绿得跟翡翠
似的，看着就舒服。
在图书馆里，我翻着书，感觉时间都静止了似的。
阳光照进来，书桌上的光影真好看，让人心里特宁静。
篮球场那边，小伙子们一个个生龙活虎的，打球打得满头大汗。
看他们那劲头，感觉整个世界都是他们的舞台。
晚上去了公园，灯光暖暖的，大家都出来散步、聊天。
湖面上
倒映着星星，真美啊，看得我都陶醉了。
回到家里，厨房里飘出饭菜的香味，饿得我都流口水了。
看着
妈妈炒菜的样子，心里觉得特别温暖，这就是家的味道啊。
任务型读写
任务型读写（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）（2008江苏卷）请认真阅读下列短文，并根据所读内容在文章后表格中的空格里填入一个最恰当的单词。
注意：每个空格只填1个单词。
请将答案写在答题卡上相应题号的横线上。
Teamwork is just as important in science as it is on the playing field or in the gym. Scientific investigations(调查) are almost always carried out by teams of people working together. Ideas are shared, experiments are designed, data are analyzed, and results are evaluated and shared with other investigators. Group work is necessary, and is usually more productive than working alone.Several times throughout the year you may be asked to work with one or more of your classmates. Whatever the task your group is assigned, a few rules need to be followed to ensure a productive and successful experience.What comes first is to keep an open mind, because everyo ne‟s ideas deserve consideration and each group member can make his or her own contribution. Secondly, it makes a job easier to divide the group task among all group members. Choose a role on the team that is best suited to your particular strengths. Thirdly, always work together, take turns, and encourage each other by listening, clarifying, and trusting one another. Mutual support and trust often make a great difference.Activities like investigations are most effective when done by small groups. Here are some more suggestions for effective team performance during these activities: Make sure each group member understands and agrees to the task given to him or her, and everyone knows exactly when, why and what to do take turns doing various tasks during similar and repeated activities; be aware of where other group members are and what they are doing so as to ensure safety; be responsible for your own learning, though it is by no means unwise to compare your observations with those of other group members.When there is research to be done, divide the topic into several areas, and this can explore the issue in a very detailed way. You are encouraged to keep records of the sources used by each person, which helps you trace back to the origin of the problems that may happen unexpectedly.A format for exchanging information (e.g., photocopies of notes, oral discussion, etc.) is also important, for a well-chosen method not only strengthens what you present but also makes yourself easily understood. When the time comes to make a decision and take a position on an issue, allow for the contributions of each member of the group. Most important of all, it is always wise to make decisions by compromise and agreement.After you‟ve completed a task with your team, make an evaluation of the team‟s effectiveness — the strengths and weaknesses, opportunities and challenges.3 阅读短文，根据所读内容在文章后图标中的表格里填入最恰当的单词（每空1词）。