第七组 写作组合规范练7

写作组合规范练7[短文改错＋书面表达]
Ⅰ.短文改错
(2020·安徽黄山质检)
A big poster in our school reminded us of that the annual Earth Day was around the corner.It called upon us to join in the actions.
Our class comes up with the idea to make the most of using materials.After class，we settled down to our work as it had planned.We brought to our classrooms worn-out clothes，piece of cardboard，and empty bottles，and turned them into dolls，handbags and small vases.That weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to people here.All were extreme happy with those gifts，especially the little kids and elderly people.And we were invited to a meeting，that we shared our experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of us and believe we can do more for the better world.
答案
A big poster in our school reminded us of that the annual Earth Day was around the corner.It called upon us to join in the actions.
Our class comes
came up with the idea to make the most of
using
used materials.After class，we settled
down to our work as it had
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been planned.We brought to our classrooms worn-out clothes，
piece
pieces
of cardboard，and empty bottles，and turned them into dolls，handbags and small vases.That
weekend，we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to people here
there.All were
extreme
extremely happy with those gifts，especially the little kids and elderly people.And we were invited
to a meeting，
that
where we shared our experience with all the students of our school.
We are very proud of
us
ourselves and believe we can do more for
the
a better world.
第一处：考查固定搭配。

固定搭配：remind sb.of sth.“提醒某人某事”。

此处“the annual Earth Day was around the corner”是一个完整的句子，所以remind后面是宾语从句。

故去掉of。

第二处：考查时态。

根据语境可知是在描述过去的事，此处用一般过去时，故把comes改成came。

第三处：考查过去分词。

此处use和materials之间是被动关系，是过去分词作前置定语，故
把using 改成used。

第四处：考查被动语态。

此处it指work，和plan之间是被动关系，所以句子用过去完成时的被动语态。

故在planned 前面加been。

第五处：考查名词复数。

句意为：我们把破旧的衣服、几片纸板和空瓶子带到教室里，把它们做成玩偶、手袋和小花瓶。

结合句意piece应该用名词复数形式。

故把piece改成pieces。

第六处：考查here和there的用法。

句意为：那个周末，我们去了附近的一个社区，把它们送给那里的人。

此处指“附近社区的人”，所以应该是“那里”。

故把here 改成there。

第七处：考查副词。

此处happy是形容词，由副词修饰，故把extreme改成extremely。

第八处：考查定语从句。

句意为：我们被邀请参加一个会议，在那里我们与我们学校的所有学生分享我们的经验。

此处meeting是先行词，在后面的定语从句中作地点状语，所以用关系副词。

故把that 改成where。

第九处：考查反身代词。

句意为：我们为自己感到骄傲，相信我们可以为一个更好的世界做更多的事情。

根据句意，此处指为“我们自己”，所以句子用反身代词，故把us改成ourselves。

第十处：考查冠词。

句意为：我们为自己感到骄傲，相信我们可以为一个更好的世界做更多的事情。

此处指“一个更好的世界”，故把the改成a。

Ⅱ.书面表达
(2020·福建三明质检)
假设你是李华，你的意大利笔友Nicola了解到中国的新冠肺炎疫情防控已经取得了积极的成效，于是特地给你发来了一封电子邮件。

他在邮件中对目前意大利的新冠肺炎疫情形势表达了担忧，并向你征求防止病毒感染的建议。

请你就此给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1．表达关切，并强调加强疫情防控的重要性；
2．介绍防止病毒感染的具体举措；
3．表达祝愿。

注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：新型冠状病毒novel coronavirus；疫情防控epidemic prevention and control
Dear Nicola，
How’s everything going? I’m sorry to hear that the novel coronavirus is hitting Italy.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Nicola，
How’s everything going? I’m sorry to hear that the novel coronavirus is hitting Italy.It is a horrible virus that has caused many deaths，so you must take it seriously.But please don’t panic.If you do as the follows，you can protect yourself from the infection of the virus and protect your family and other people around as well.
Firstly，never go to the crowded places，but stay indoors as much as possible.When you go out，you must wear a surgical mask.Secondly，wash your hands often and correctly with soap and running water for at least 15 seconds before eating，using the toilet or returning home from the outside，and keep the shared places always having fresh st but not least，exercise regularly while staying at home，for exercise helps you strengthen your immune system and stay away from any infection.
I do hope these suggestions can be helpful for you，and I believe with the efforts of the whole Italian people，you’re sure to win the battle of epidemic prevention and control.
Best wishes!
Li Hua。