讨论型作文

4. The young man didn’t enjoy his old ’ job. _________(相反 ) he finds the new 相反 job very interesting. But/yet/while
转折
However, On the contrary,
5. __________(总之 we should make good use of 总之), 总之
因为
Due to Owing to
2.More roads will have to be built with more cars, __________（所以）we’ll have less field to grow rice. （所以） ’
so therefore
结果
thus as a result/consequence
my opinion
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. People react to this problem in different ways.
四、使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句， 使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句， 能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。 能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。
3.The rent is reasonable, __________, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。 moreover/furthermore
另外 (递进） 递进） 递进
what’s more ’ besides in addition
注意： 词数 词数100-120 注意：1.词数
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 可以适当增加细节
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
3. It is raining heavily. It is raining cats and dogs. 4. The PRC was founded in the year 1949. The year 1949 saw the foundation of the PRC.
二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词。 1.I like reading while he likes playing football. I like reading while he enjoys playing football. 2. When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night is getting shorter and shorter. When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night shorter and shorter.
computer.
In short/brief In a word/all in all
总结
In general Generally speaking
6.______________(我认为) , students had (我认为) better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things. I think/believe
1. have different views on sth / The summer holiday is coming. Our class have beginning had a discussion about what to do during the 2. react to sth in different ways. holiday. 3. differ in their attitudes towards sth.
时间型：now，just now，just then，afterwards， soon，five minutes later，before long，shortly after that，to this day，soon after supper等； 强调型：above all，indeed，surely，certainly， of course，after all，at least，at most，first of all，等； 归纳总结型：in conclusion，in a word，in the end，at last，finally，to sum up, in short, in general, generally speaking, in all, in a word等；
书面表达(满分 分 书面表达 满分30分) 满分 1.暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了 暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划， 暑假即将来临 不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文， 不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文， 并谈谈你的看法。 年陕西卷） 并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷） 年陕西卷 待在家中 外出旅游 优点 缺点 花费少， 花费少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界 花费多， 增长知识， 增长知识，开阔眼 花费多，旅途不便 界（horizon/view） ） 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。 短文必须包括表中所列要点。 短文必须包括表中所列要点
因果型：because（of），since，as，therefore， so，as a result，thanks to，thus，owing to， seeing that等； 让步型：though，although，in spite of, despite, regardless of等； 时序型：first…next…and then…finally，at the same time，meanwhile，first…then…after that…finally等； 并列型：and，or，also，as well as等；
如何算是一篇好文章？ 要 如何算是一篇好文章？ 点 1.覆盖了所有的要点 覆盖了所有的要点 覆盖了所有的 全 2. 应用了较多的语法结构 和词汇 词汇 句型 , 词汇,句型
语法多样化
连 接 词
3. 有效地使用了语句间的 连接 his help, I finished the work at 因为 last. Because of /with As a result of Thanks to
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home,I can do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel.
三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或 可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、 感叹句,可以为文意的表达增添一点新意 可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。 感叹句 可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。
1. The girl was hardworking and careful, and she passed the test. Hardworking and careful, the girl passed the test. 2. I hit him in the face. It’s I who hit him in the face. 3. I am glad that you have made so much progress. How glad I’m that you have made so much progress.
Writing beautiful sentences
一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词， 适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词， 以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。 以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。 1.A new building is being built in our school. A new building is under construction in our school. 2. He pretended not to see the pretty girl. hear what I said. He turned a blind eye to the pretty girl. a deaf ear to what I said.
1. convenient and comfortable cost less / save money 不能亲身了解外界 lose the chance of getting to know the outside world (外出旅游 外出旅游) 外出旅游 2.(外出旅游 增长 外出旅游)增长 外出旅游 ’ 知识， 知识，开阔眼界 others 2. increase one’s knowledge and broaden one’s ’ horizons/views money and meet spend more 花费多， 花费多，旅途不便 some difficulties 1.(待在家中 花费 (待在家中 待在家中) 待在家中)花费 待在家中 待在家中 some 少，舒适方便 conclusion