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图表、图片分析型 图表作文的命题形式是根据图片或者图表，要求考生用简洁、生动的语言把图表中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来。然后进行分析和评论，并得出合乎逻辑的结论。图表作文是一种信息的转换。也就是说，写图表作文时，首先要以题目中的要求为指导，审慎读图，准确把握图表传达的信息，将其扩展成文。图表作文往往是以说明为主，图表中的数据是为了说明某个问题而提供的，只要问题能阐释清楚，就不必面面俱到地把所有数据都在文章中引用出来。考生要切忌毫无目的地引用图表中的数据。引用数据过多的同学往往得分很低。 二、图表作文的段落设计 1. 开头段—--说明该图表反映的概况，选择能充分说明主题的典型数据进行概述； 2. 中间段—--对数据进行仔细地分析比较，归纳出增减速率，找出产生变化的原因； 3. 结尾段—--写出看完图表后的想法或评论，得出自己的结论。 Structure From the graph ( table, chart ), we can clearly see the increase ( decrease ) of _______. It added up to ( decreased ) ___________ in 19____, while it increased ( decreased ,were ,was ) to _____in 19____. Therefore, it can be predicated that ________ is ( are ) to be on the rise ( on the decrease) in the future. There are chiefly _______ reasons for the increase ( decline ). In the first place, owing to ______, _______have realized the importance of _______. Secondly, with the development of ( with the growth of, with the increase of , with the improvement of ), ________ have adopted more active and effective methods. In spite of what’s mentioned above, there are some problems. The graph indicates that _______ was ( were ) fluctuated ( 波动 ) . Hence, the situation is still serious and how to improve ________ is still a challenging task. 图表作文模板 ①As can be clearly seen from the graph/table/chart, great changed have taken place in _________ ①图表显示的情况 Or: As is shown in the table/figure, . ②The __________ have/has skyrocketed/jumped from _____ to _____. ② 描述变化 ③When it comes to the reasons for the changes, different people give different explanations. Here I shall just give a few. ③概述原因 ④To begin with, . ④ 原因之一 ⑤What’s more, . ⑤原因之二 ⑥Last but not least, . ⑥ 原因之三 ⑦While it is desirable that ___________, there are still some problems and difficulties for __________ ⑦话题转移 ⑧Firstly, __________ ⑧要点一 ⑨In addition, __________ ⑨要点二 ⑩In a word, __________ ⑩总结

Changes in People Diet Outline: state the changes in people’s diet in the past five years give possible reasons for the changes draw your own conclusion

From the graph, we can clearly see that great changes have been taking place in people’s diet over the period from 1992 to 1996. The consumption of grain is decreasing year by year, while that of some high energy food, such as milk and meat, is increasing steadily. There are two major reasons. In the first place, with the improvement in the living standard, people can afford to buy much more expensive food with better nutrition. Secondly, people now pay more attention to the quality of it, because they know it is of great benefit to their health to diet in a scientific way. Therefore, they try their best to improve the structure of their food. From the above, we can see that people’s living level has been rising markedly in the past five years. And it can be concluded that there will be a more prosperous future waiting for us.

图表分析型 (1) As is shown in the bar chart above, we can see that college students are now spending much more time on the computer, from one hour to four hours per week from 1990 to 1995. (2)It is self-evident that it sharply increases to twenty hours in the year of 2000. (3) And still, the time that college students spend in using computers is on the rise. (4) Three possible reasons contribute to this phenomenon.(4) One reason is that most college students now can afford a personal computer due to the sharp decline in its price. (5) Another reason is that they find the computer a wonderful thing to have fun with. For instance, they can chat through QQ or playing games online. (6) What’s more, from Internet, they can learn things much more quickly than simply from reading books so that they can secure a good job in the future. (7) All these lead to much more time spent in using computers. (8) However, in my opinion, there are some complaints from both teachers and students. (9) For one thing, students complain about the less availability of computers and slow speed of the network. (10) For another, some teachers worry that the much more time spent playing computer games or surfing online will lead students to ignore their studies and even do cheating instead of doing research by their own. (11) To sum up, in spite of problems concerning the use of computer, computer is still of more merits than defects.

Production of Radios and TV Sets in Factory A 根据左图，写一篇120字的短文。 Production of Radios and TV Sets in Factory A According to the graph, during the period from 1980 to 1989, there was gradual decline in the production of radios in Factory A. It fell from 1,600 sets per month in 1980 to 1,000 ,sets per month in 1989. Thus, there was a total fall of 600 sets per monthly output during the ten years. On the other hand, there was a marked increase in the product km of TV sets, The factory produced only 200 sets in 1980, but the output rose to 1, 200 sets per month in 1989. Thus. there was a total increase of 1,000 sets per month during the ten years period. The present output appears stable at 1,200 sets per month. Traveling Abroad