2016高考英语-短文改错集训(十二)
2016年高考英语短文改错集训营：短文改错7——做题技巧
2016年高考英语集训营短文改错 7——做题技巧（一）高考英语短文改错是一种综合技术，也是一种微技术，主要在于检测考生发现、判断及纠正文章中错误的能力，以及在语篇中综合运用英语知识正确性的能力。
短文改错与书面表达相同，最能反应一个人的语言功底。
考生在该题上失分最厉害，因为本题而影响英语总成绩的占大部分。
做题技巧：一、短文改错的复习要点1.考生一定熟习设错方式：多词、少词、错词。
2.多词现象大多出此刻冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。
3.少词现象主要出此刻冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号 to、连词等。
4.错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、代词、连词、词形。
5.考平生时应增强基本功训练，用一个“错题集”本把自己或同学在书面表达中出现的错误概括一下，以便考前复习。
二、对全文的宏观掌握学生应把改错容看作一篇小短文来理解，这样能对短文有个宏观掌握，对上下文有全面的认识，在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读，剖析判断，上下兼备，把明显的、拿的准的题先做完，这样能够减小包围圈，也有助于对全文的进一步理解。
三、从语法角度审察1.查察时态能否一致My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team.（N MET ’98）全文都是用的一般此刻时，此句中的 was明显与上下文语境不符，应改为 am.2.查察主谓能否一致Anyone may borrow books， and it cost nothing to borrow them.（N MET ’94） cost 应改为 costs，因其主语是 it（为形式主语），且上下文均为一般此刻时。
3.查指代能否一致The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home（. NMET ’96）句中的主语 the Smiths 表的是 Smith 一家人，所以指示代词his 应改为their.4.查平行构造能否平行一致由 and， or， but， either.。
2016届高考英语二轮复习：短文改错题组---Word版含答案
四、短文改错题组(一）短文改错Passage 1(2015·长春市质检二)Dear manager，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English。
Here I would like to introduce me briefly。
I am a 25－year－old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University. I have been a English guide for two years after graduation。
As a result, my oral English is pretty well。
I have great interest the job. I had much confidence in myself. If I am given to the job, I can assure you I will do my best to do it well。
I’d like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibility of working in your company。
An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.Yours respectfully，Wang Yong答案：Dear manager，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised 错误!as a secretary of English.briefly。
-高考英语全国卷短文改错汇编(word版附答案)
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2016高考英语-短文改错集训(十一)
【专项突破】2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十一）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Passage 1Nowadays, many parents expect too many of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters should study hard in order to admitted into an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict in their children. However, they don’t realize how a great pressure they had put on their children. It is the great pressure that often get their children very anxiously.So I hope that parents can provide a proper environment for our children. Only in this way they try their best and success at last.Passage 2Can you imagine wear a pretty sweater made of garbage? It could not happen! A few companies across the country are making clothes from things those are thrown away by people．For example, the company makes sweaters from old plastic bottles．First, the bottles are cut into small pieces．The pieces is melted．Then the melting plastic is made into long and thin threads．The threads are used to making sweaters which are very soft and light．Believe it not, these sweaters sell well in spite of the fact that they are not expensive at all．Many people think that these recycled clothes can help us cut up on garbage．Passage 3A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. She said a research on neuroscience (神经学) shows stu dents’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in themornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”Passage 4I love camping. It is my favouritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, my families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. We cooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp. What I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.Passage 5Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy be cause these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.Passage 6Last Saturday, Mum gave me two tickets for a film．Although she was too busy to go with me, she told me to sell the extra ticket if possibly．At the gate of the cinema I met a handsome young man who was offered to have them, but he had only an l00-yuan note, He asked me to wait a while for him change it in the cinema's store．Without much thinking, I agreed．He walked so fast that I could hard keep up for him．Soon he disappeared, I stood there without knowing how to do．Suddenly I realized the handsome young fellow has cheated me．He had saved money, but lost his honor．Passage 7Dear Peter,I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged you to stay with.Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you to have a room ofyour own. Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visits difficult. Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoing personalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them. Above all, they hosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience. In addition, the hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food.Hope you enjoy your stay here.Yours,Li Hua2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十一）答案Passage 11. too many 改too much2. in order to admitted…. 在admitted前加be3. …are strict in…. in改为with4. how a great pressure…. how 改为what5. …they had put…. had改为have6. …that often get…. get改为gets7. …very anxiously. anxiously改为anxious8. …our sons 改their sons9. …they try they 前加can 或will10….and success at last success改为succeedPassage 21.wear改为wearing2.去掉not3.those改为that/which4.the改为a5.is melted改为are melted6.melting改为melted7.making改为made8.Believe it or not 9.expensive改为cheap 10.up改为downPassage 3第一句：1. 划去been 2. on the mornings 将on改为in第三句：3. It will become an only school…将an改为the4. start 前加to第四句：5. 将grade 改为grades第五句：6.将She 改为He 7. 将unless 改为if第六句：8. 将that 改为where 9. 将good 改为well第七句：10. 将adds 改为addedPassage 4I love camping. It is my favoritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year,favoritemy families and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the excitedfamily excitingexperiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and took a long walk every day. Weevercooked over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I sawwonderfullovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle windandblowing in the trees, and I feel so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp. What Ifelt muchbelieve it’s the best way to get close ∧nature and enjoy its beauty.toPassage 51. does改为is2. go改为went3. was改为were4. what改为which5. cinema前加the6. but改为and7.去掉been8. moving改为moved9. tear改为tears 10. very改为wellPassage 61.Althou改为As/Because2.possibly改为possible3.was offered改为offered4.them改4.them 为it5.an改为a6.change改为to change7.hard改为hardly8.for改为with 9.how改为what 10.has改为hadPassage 7Dear Peter,I’m very glad to receive your e-mail asking for information about the host family we have arranged∧ you to stay with．forLocating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood, the house was big enough to enable you toLocated ishave a room of your own．Apart from the convenient public transportation, our private car will make your visitstheirdifficult．Because all the family members can speak fluently English and have outgoingeasy fluentpersonalities, I’m sure you will have no trouble to communicating with them．Above all, theyhosted the American student last year, through that they gained lots of experience．In addition, an whichthe hostess cooking will guarantee you a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．hostess’Hope you enjoy your stay here．Yours,Li Hua。
高中英语真题-2016高考英语二轮)短文改错实效训练(1)
2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错实效训练（1）下面短文中有10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running an d knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lyin g in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the m oney up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just pic ked. The old man counted the money again and found that no t a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!【参考答案】1.This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An olddeeplyman was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenl y a young man came running andknocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the peopleworse directions/all 改any around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood the re, not know what to do.rushed knowing Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just pic ked∧. The old man counted theupmoney again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot ofmissing /lostnice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!our that短文改错。
高考英语改错专练14篇-含答案
短文改错专练（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
AMy mom and I were out driving when we saw a car ahead of us slow down sudden and then came to stop as it reached the side of the road. We pulled over and asking the woman inside the car if she needed any helps. She said “Yes, please!” Since we were right next by a parking lot, we tried to push h er car into it. We weren’t very successful, as it is a heavy car. Then a man and his kids came over and offered his help as well as! Together we got the woman’s car into the parking lot, which she was safe and could get the help she needed. We both smiled at each other and then went on our way.BOne morning when I took the bus to meet a friend in town. When I boarded, a young foreigner rushed catch the bus and just made it right behind me. I pay my fare, and started looking for the seat, when I heard the young man ask the bus driver whether he could change a 50-yuan bill for his ticket. I already knew it was possible, as it was writing on the fare box. Being told the driver didn’t have enough changes, the young man seemed very disappointing. I told him I was going to pay his fare. He was relieved and thanked me. Dig in his pocket, he found one euro and insisted on giving it to myself. We both made it into town.CI was in the supermarket queue yesterday when the member of staff came to me and directed me to a checkout where had just opened. When I arrived, the cashier was allowing a little girl to scan through the shopping. My first thoughts were that I’d have got served much quick if I’d just stayed where I was. Eventual it was of my turn. The cashier was sweet and apologized for the delay. We chatted as she packed up my items. Then she explained me that the little girl, a customer from a few days ago, had lost her purse. She, like a cashier, paid for his shopping. And the girl just came to return the money but volunteered to help.DThere was one class that I think I will never forget. It was the piano class. In the last class of that term, each student was required play two tunes on the piano, according to that the teacher, a pretty lady, was going to give us marks. Soon it was my turn. In spite of all the prepareI had done, I was still very nervous. I say at the beginning, “Although as a new learner I don’t play well, but I want to express my love to my parents through the two tunes.” Lucky, everythin g went all right. But the teacher commented, “Actually, Julie, you did great! Therefore, I will just give you 9.5, hopes that you will always remember to believe in yourself.” His words are still reminding me to be self-confident.ETime and tide wait no man. This is everything I learned last year. I have spent so much time fool around that my grades began to suffer. I finally realized that something had to be done. It was time to changing. Now I have a new plan for using my time wise. I have set my alarm clock half a hour ahead. This will give me a head start every day. I have also been decided to keep a record of what I do and when I do it. Look back on which I’ve done will give me some ideas on how to manage my time.FI love English and I do hope that someday I can watch English movies without any difficult. However, it’s never easier to learn about a foreign language. And English is exception. Recently I find it very difficult to remember new words. Therefore, I turned to my teacher for help yesterday. She said the best way to learn new words are to read and use it as often as possible. I think she was right, because we can surely remember a person if seeing every day. Therefore, I had decided to read at least one English article and write a diary with English every day from now on. Hopefully, I will make great progress by the end of a year.GLast Sunday, I went shopping with Mom in the town. I was kind of excited because it have been years the last time I went shopping with her. I followed Mom into a small store sells farm chemicals and seeds. As soon as I stepped into the store, I was surprising by so much singing birds flying freely. Then I noticed there had at least 30 nests in total on the walls and under the ceiling! I turned to the owner, an old man, and told him what amazing it was. He said delighted that the birds were like his babies and he always left the doors open for it. And at night, when he was away, the birds could come in or out through the broken windows at anytime they wanted.HI have a little cousin which name is Angela. In two months she is going to be two year old. Her name is given by her mother who loves her very much and thinks she is his angel. Angela has beautiful eyes and has learned to count to 20 recently! Read children’s b ooks regularly, she knows many animals and plants. She is also a typical little girl, who loves dolls and every night puts them to sleeping before going to the bed! She is also very impatient and can play a fishing game for over half an hour at a time! Now she can walk well and even run, and she is fond playing with me. I feel lucky to have so a lovely cousin.答案：A1. ... slow down sudden ... sudden → suddenly2. ... came to stop ... stop前加a3. ... asking the woman ... asking → asked4. ... needed any helps. helps → help5. ... right next by ... by → to6. ... it is a heavy ... is → was7. ... offered his help ... his → their8. ... as well as! 去掉第二个as9. ... which she was ... which → where或which前加in10. We both smiled ... both → allB1. One morning when ... 去掉when2. ... rushed catch the ... catch前加to3. I pay my fare ... pay → paid4. ... looking for the ... the → a5. ... it was possible ... possible → impossible6. ... as it was writing ... writing → written7. ... enough changes ... changes → change8. ... very disappointing. disappointing → disappointed9. Dig in his ... Dig → Digging10. ... giving it to myself. myself → meC1. ... the member of staff ... the → a2. ... where had just ... where → which / that3. ... served much quick ... quick → quicker4. Eventual it was ... Eventual → Eventually5. ... of my turn. 去掉of6. ... she explained me ... me前加to或去掉me7. ... a few days ago ... ago → before8. ... like a cashier ... like → as9. ... paid for his ... his → her10. ... but volunteered to ... but → andD1. ... the piano class. the → a2. ... required play ... play前加to3. ... according to that ... that → which4. ... all the prepare ... prepare → preparation5. I say at ... say → said6. ... but I want to ... 去掉but7. Lucky, everything ... Lucky → Luckily8. Therefore, I will ... Therefore → However9. ... hopes that you ... hopes → hoping10. His words are ... His → HerE1. ... wait no man. wait后加for2. This is everything ... everything → so mething3. I have spent ... have → had4. ... fool around that ... fool → fooling5. ... time to changing. changing → change6. ... my time wise. wise → wisely7. ... a hour ahead. a → an8. ... been decided to ... 去掉been9. Look back on ... Look → Looking10. ... which I've done ... which → whatF1. ... any difficult. difficult → difficulty2. ... it's never easier ... easier → easy3. ... learn about a ... 去掉about4. ... English is exception. is后加no5. ... new words are ... are → is6. ... use it as ... it → them7. ... seeing every day. seeing → seen8. ... I had decided ... had → have9. ... with English ... with → in10. ... end of a year. a → theG1. ... it have been ... have → had2. ... the last time I ... the前加since3. ... store sells ... sells → selling4. ... I was surprising ... surprising → surprised5. ... so much singing ... much → many6. ... noticed there had ... had → were7. ... what amazing ... what → how8. ... said delighted ... delighted → delightedly9. ... open for it. it → them10. ... at anytime they ... 去掉atH1. ... which name ... which → whose2. ... two year old. year → years3. Her name is ... is → was4. ... is his angel. his → her5. Read children's books ... Read → Reading6. ... them to sleeping ... sleeping → sleep7. ... to the bed! 去掉the8. ... very impatient ... impatient → patient9. ... fond playing ... fond后加of10. ... so a lovely ... so → such短文改错专练（二）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
湛江市培才学校2016届高三年级短文改错精讲(英语)
湛江市培才学校2016届高三年级短文改错精讲英语1高考英语短文改错考点类析·介词一、考点规律分析短文改错对介词的考查主要涉及:介词与其他词的常用搭配、常用介词的基本用法、在及物动词后接宾语时误加介词和在不及物动词后接宾语时漏加介词、习语中的介词用法等。
二、真题单句归纳(1) Bill insisted in staying near the car.(2) Suddenly we caught sight at a car and some men.(3) When I have free time I go a long walk.(4) When they came down the police were angry to them.(5) Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill. (6) …and some books, for example, books for history, science, cooking and gardening are also popular.(7) I never knew about a ride down a river could be so exciting.(8) It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station.(9) In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year.(10) Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday party on Sunday.2高考英语短文改错考点类析·名词一、考点规律分析短文改错的名词考点主要涉及名词的单复数问题，即在该用复数的地方误用其单数，或在该用单数的地方误用其复数。
2016届高考英语短文改错集训(2)及答案解析
2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Passage 1Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’ Union organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident. Then m y English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner. But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize. I’m proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experience.Passage 2As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3Dear Sir/Madam,I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service. A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency. I found a little differences between your advertisement and action. As you say, you will provide a largeair-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner. Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower. In fact, we only bathe in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time. As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen. We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics. Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5Last Sunday I went shopping with my father. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season. Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began tosearch for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7Changes create happiness. Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．2016高考英语-短文改错集训（二）答案与解析Passage 1本文是一篇励志小故事。
2017年高考英语专项---短文改错(含2016年高考真题)
2017年高考英语专项---改错题一、题型解读：短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平，考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。
二、命题特点：1）错误类型相对稳定（错词、多词、缺词三种类型）2）考点覆盖面广、分布合理3）难度保持平稳。
三、考查类型：错词、多词、缺词 四、考点分布近三年高考短文改错考点分布表五、应试技巧：通读全文，掌握大意；分句阅读，整句找错；反复通读，复查验证。
六、解题注意要点：1. 核对错项时，若的确有一时难以改出的地方，可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例。
即多一词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。
2. 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。
因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。
3. 核对答题符号是否规范，位置是否准确，看看有无遗漏符号，忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。
2016年短文改错汇编Passage 1 (2016·全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；冠词 名词 代词 形容词或副词 介词 连词 动词及时态 非谓语动词 主谓一致 2016年全国卷（Ⅰ） 1 1 1 1 1 3 1 1 0 2016年全国卷（Ⅱ） 1 1 3 0 0 1 3 1 0 2015年全国卷（Ⅰ） 1 1 1 2 1 1 3 0 0 2015年全国卷（Ⅱ） 1 1 2 2 1 0 2 1 0 2014年全国卷（Ⅰ） 1 1 0 4 1 2 1 0 0 2014年全国卷（Ⅱ）1112221考查点试卷2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
2016高考英语短文改错集训(一)
2016高考英语-短文改错集训（一）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Passage 1Last Sunday, it was my father’s funny day. After supper, my father went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.Passage 2It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12. In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car. There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.Passage 3September 15, 2013 FineOne week ago, we finished our mid-exams. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down andhurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.Passage 4Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.Passage 5How harmful cigarettes are getting now! My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27, 2009. Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer. She knows smoking was harmful, so she just couldn’t quit. She always hid her addiction, hoped that I would never start smoking. My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much. Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented. Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I live, so that I don’t have to go through which she did.Passage 6Today it was a sunny day. In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neighbor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minutes late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.Passage 7An most interesting thing happened to me last winter. During my winter vocation, I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma. One Friday afternoon, I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phone special designed for seniors. I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend. Upon receive the phone, Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it. I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed. Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away. Under my help, she successfully called her good friend. That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone I bought her. They all praised what thoughtful I was.2016高考英语-短文改错集训（一）答案与解析Passage 1本文是一篇记述了作者与父亲周末看电影时所发生的一件小趣事。
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页 2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十二） 【专项突破】短文改错 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Passage 1 From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted. Passage 2 Dear Mom, The Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you. Hope you good health and much happiness every day! Your little girl, Jennifer Passage 3 Life on the land probably was started about 430 million years ago, though it has existed in the water for perhaps so much as 3,000 million years. When we think of the first thing on the land, we probably think of strange animals come out of the oceans. In fact no animals can have been living if plants had been on land first. Plant had to be on 页
land after animals arrived. They supplied the first land animals with the surroundings and food necessity, since the plants, them are the only form of life who are able to get and store energy.
Passage 4 When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied at all the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then , I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn’t looking at me ,but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand in my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don’t know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance. Passage 5 I went to England last summer as a exchange student, and stayed there for three months. I used to thinking we had pretty various after-school activities. However, I was surprised to find they had even ∧diverse projects. I made friend with the daughter of my home-stay family, which was a college student. He was a member of different kinds of clubs, so I took the chance to join in some clubs, too. Can you believe I make a robot in the Lego Club? I felt very proudly because I got the first prize with my Lego robot. Time spending in England is so memorable that I will treasure it forever. Passage 6 As I was leaving the grocery store this afternoon, I saw a poor family — a mother and her four kid sitting in the cold, it brought back memories from when I was a child. The little girl, about 13, told me he liked my Under Armour sweater. I said, “thank you.” When I am walking to my car, I started to feel sadly. Put the groceries in my car, I suddenly thought the little girl might need a sweater at the school. So I went back to find the little girl, take my sweater off but gave it to her. I knew she would get much use out of it than me.
2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十二）答案 页
Passage 1 1.students后加who/that或去掉are 2.which改为it 3.work改为working 4.have后加a 5.under改为in 6.Poorly改为poor 7.moved改为moving 8.eye-exercise改为eye-exercises 9.But改为And 10.Only后加if/when
Passage 2 1.去掉the 2.your改为you 3.thank改为thanks 4.去掉on 5.by改为for 6.teach改为teaching 7.had改为have 8.may后加not 9.Whenever改为Wherever 10.Hopw改为Wish
Passage 3 Life on the land probably was started about 430 million years ago, though it has existed in the water for perhaps so much as 3,000 million years. When we think of ∧ as the
first thing on land, we probably think of strange animals come out of the oceans. In coming fact no animals can have been living if plants had ∧been on land first. Plant had to could not 或had改成hadn’t Plants be on land after animals arrived. They supplied the first land animals with the before surroundings and food necessity, since the plants, them are the only form of life who they forms that are able to get and store energy.