最新初中作文指导——作文续写
作文续写 1、什么是续写 让我们先来弄清什么是续写。续写就是在原有故事的基础上,将内容继续延伸,成为一篇完整的文章。 续写,是一种比较常见的“给材料作文”,是把不完整的故事继续补充写完整的写作。它有助于培养我们合理想象能力,创造思维能力和语言表达能力。 2、续写的形式 从续写练习的形式来说,主要有两种:一种是给出故事的开头,然后要求续写故事的情节和结尾。在中年级语文考试的试题中出现的续写大多都是这种方式。另一种是根据一篇文章的主要内容和基本情节接着写下去,这是一种读写结合的续写方式,往往要求写出一篇有所发展,情节不同的新故事来。如,阅读了《龟兔赛跑》后,续写《龟兔第二次赛跑》。新故事与原来的故事情节有一定联系,但是故事的中心变了,这次兔子接受教训,顺利获得胜利。这类续写,既要理解原文的主要内容和中心,展开想象,注意与原文保持一定的连续性一致性,还要有新意。 3、续写常用方法 (1)展开想象,合理推测原文内容。 展开想象,就是对原文故事没有写出的情节展开合理的推想,打开思路,多角度地去想象,想象出几种情况,几种结果,然后从中加以选择。譬如,四年级有篇课文《雨中》,写的是在傍晚的雨中,一位姑娘将满载的一箩筐苹果翻倒在马路上,姑娘万分焦急。课文仅仅对傍晚雨中路上的情景,以及姑娘翻倒箩筐的情景进行了描写。许多同学写出了不同的文章。有的续写出人们伸出援助之手的故事,赞颂了社会的文明之风。有的根据自己的生活阅历,写出了路人的冷漠,斥责了这种做法。还有的写出了姑娘为了不堵塞交通,忍痛放弃捡拾苹果的故事。这几种故事的结局都是合理的,这样续写的文章就会内容丰富而有新意。 (2)前后照应,防止自相矛盾。 续写要注意前后照应,防止自相矛盾。特别是给开头的续写,必须要与上文紧密联系,使上下文融为一体。譬如,文章《难忘的一件事》,文章给出的材料是这样的: 每当我看到下雨,脑海里就会出现一位叔叔的身影,而那件事也会浮现在我的脑海里,使我久久难以忘怀…… 那是夏季的一天,放学时下起了滂沱大雨,我和一个小姑娘站在学校门口等人接。天色越来越晚,我们两个都焦急不安。这时,远处隐隐约约一个身影向学校奔来…… 同学们的续写各种各样,大部分同学读懂了材料的内容,写出了叔叔是小姑娘的爸爸。经过合理推想写出这位叔叔看到我的焦急,就主动或步行、或骑自行车、或打出租车、或将自己的雨伞借给我等情节,吻合了前面的材料。但是有的同学写出了叔叔是一个坏人,我机智勇敢地与他进行了斗争,成功脱险的事情。仅看所续写的内容好像也是在情理之中的,但是结合文章已经给出的材料就会发现,续写的内容与题目和开头有些矛盾。这种与坏人斗争的事应该是惊心动魄或者是心有余悸的,而不大可能是久久难以忘怀的,你们说对吗? 例文评析【文题】 体育课上,五(2)班王军同学练习跳远时,不小心把脚扭伤了,不能动弹…… 要求: 1. 根据提供的情节,联系自己的生活实际展开想象,续写一篇记叙文。题目《脚扭伤之后》。 2. 先确定作文的中心,把和中心关系密切的材料写具体。 提示:面对省略号,我们可以引发许多想象。可以想象王军当时痛苦的样子,以及师生的关心;可以想象师生怎样送他上医院治疗,怎样送他回家;还可以想象,王军休养期间同学们怎样探望,怎样帮助他补课;还可以想象不知姓名的司机,怎样帮同学们把王军送往医院;也可以想象王军休养期间不忘班集体,为班级出力量……可想象的内容太多了!同学们要抓住“脚扭伤之后”来展开合理想象,会续写出一篇好文章的。在想象时,一定要注意“合理”,也就是要切合文中所给情节的实际,切合同学们生活的实际。不合情理地“胡编”,会违背了练习续写的意图。 选择怎样的材料要先确定文章的中心。是要赞扬同学之间的友情呢,还是赞颂老师对学生的爱,或是要反映改革大潮中人的真情……中心确定之后,围绕中心去想象,把和中心有关的内容想具体,写具体就行了。 [续写] 脚扭伤之后 体育课上,五(2)班王军同学练习跳远时,不小心把脚扭伤了,不能动弹。只见他手指着右脚,咬着牙说:“疼……疼死我了。”几个身高体壮的男生七手八脚地把他抬出沙坑,小心翼翼地脱下他的鞋袜一看,啊,脚腕已经肿了起来,并且青里透紫地出现了淤血,王军也由于疼痛而汗珠直淌。大家一下子都慌了,有的说:“快送医院吧。”有的说:“快打电话通知他爸妈吧。”更有心急的同学,上前就要为他按摩,恨不得一下子把那个大肿包给揉下去。 就在大家手忙脚乱,心急火燎的时候(由[xszw.org]整理),体育王老师却镇定自若。他制止了要给王军按摩的同学,对大家说:“刚刚扭伤,绝不可以乱动,大家听我安排:冯旭——马上去医务室请校医,并让她带一卷绷带来;肖鹏——你劲大,把王军背到水池边。”肖鹏在老师的帮助下,小心翼翼地把王军背到了水池边。同学们也一齐围了过来。 老师边用水池中的冷水冲洗王军扭伤的脚,边告诉我们,这是防止继续瘀血。一会儿,校医李老师来了,用绷带把王军脚腕上部缠紧。体育老师又告诉我们,这是不让肿胀再扩散。然后,他又叮嘱王军把脚架在高处,保证血液回流畅通。看着老师熟练的操作,听着那头头是道的讲解,再看王军减轻了痛苦的表情,大家都长吁了一口气,一齐向老师投去了敬佩的目光。这时,王老师又推来一辆自行车,让王军坐在后车架上,和校医一起把他送到医院去做进一步检查治疗。 这堂课上得可真有价值,不光锻炼了身体,还增长了急救知识。事后连受伤的王军都开玩笑说:“用我身体的疼痛为你们换来了急救知识,值——”从此,大家更佩服体育王老师了。 【评析】 这篇习作想象非常新颖,小作者写体育老师如何当场“紧急处理”,从而觉得这节体育课不光锻炼了身体,还增长了急救知识,“值”。文中写老师的“镇定自若”,和同学们“一下子都慌了”形成鲜明对比,使体育老师给人们留下深刻的印象。结尾写大家更佩服王老师了,是发自内心的呼声。 [小结] 总之,续写既要注意原有故事情节,合理想象;又要敢于创新,写出新意。 那么怎样续写呢?
一、在读懂原文的基础上,以原文的结局为起点,写出故事情节的发展和变化。 二、展开充分的想象与联想,做到合情合理、真实生动。 三、续写文章要在主要人物思想行为、性格特点、语言特点和风格上与原文保持一致。 下面以《猪八戒吃西瓜》为例谈谈如何进行续写. 唐僧、孙悟空、猪八戒、沙僧一起到西天取经。正值6月天气,烈日当空,他们走得又累又渴。 来到一座荒庙,孙悟空说:“你们在这里休息休息。我出去找点果子来给大家解渴。”猪八戒连忙说:“我也去,我也去!” 猪八戒跟着孙悟空走呀,走呀,脚踏在晒热了的土地上,烫得难受,他心里后悔起来。走了一段路,看见路边有棵白杨树,猪八戒想:“要是能在这树下睡一会儿多好!”他就假装肚子痛,说:“猴哥,我肚子痛,走不动了,就在这里等你。” 孙悟空点点头,一个筋斗翻上天去了。猪八戒来到白杨树下,感到十分凉快。忽然,他看见山脚下有个绿油油的东西,在阳光的照耀下闪闪发光。猪八戒连忙走过去一看,原来是个大西瓜。他心里高兴极了。 他把大西瓜搬到树下,拔出刀来,正要切又放下了,心想:“师父和沙僧在庙里等着呢,我不能一个人吃了这个大西瓜。”他想不吃,可又实在嘴馋,眼睛看着这个又圆又大的西瓜,嘴里直流口水。他忍不住举起刀来,边切边说:“我把这瓜切成四块,我先吃自己的一块,也说得过去。”切好,便拿起一块,大吃起来。 再说孙悟空一个筋斗云十万八千里,来到南海边上。这里到处瓜果飘香。他来不及细看,急忙爬上树去,摘了满满一包果子,往身上一背,又一个筋斗,回到原来的地方。他正要落下,却从云缝里看见猪八戒捧着一块西瓜在吃,吃完一块,又拿起一块,嘴里还不停地在说些什么。 孙悟空便停住细听。只听见猪八戒说:“一块瓜不解渴,我再把猴子的一块吃了吧!留下两块给师父和沙僧,也说得过去。”猪八戒几口就把那块西瓜啃完了,接着又说:“可越吃越想吃了,嘿,我把沙僧的一块也吃了吧,给师父留下一块。”说着又捧起一块吃起来。孙悟空听了心想:“这傻子也真贪吃,但总算还记得师父。”他正想着,不料,猪八戒啃光了这块西瓜,又捧起最后一块西瓜来,说:“师父,师父!不是老猪不留给您吃,一来是老猪实在口渴,二来拿回去一块西瓜也不好意思,就让我老猪代您吃了吧。”说着就把西瓜往嘴里送。孙悟空看得又好气又好笑,便在空中叫了声:“八戒!” 猪八戒听见孙悟空叫他,心慌了。他怕孙悟空看见他吃剩下的西瓜皮,就把它们扔得远远的。接着,猪八戒就跟着孙悟空往回走。 才走几步,猪八戒就踩上一块西瓜皮,摔了一脚,脸都跌肿了。孙悟空连忙把他扶起来。猪八戒站起来一看,原来是自己丢的西瓜皮。 想不到才走了十几步,他又踩上一块西瓜皮,身子一摇,跌倒了。孙悟空把他扶起,叫声:“哎呀,又是哪个家伙?吃了西瓜,把西瓜皮乱丢。” 猪八戒心想:“怎么又碰上一块,真倒霉!可要小心点儿。”他刚想到这儿,忽然脚下一滑,又跌了一跤。孙悟空把他扶起来,说:“八戒!你今天怎么老是摔跤?”猪八戒低头细看,又是一块西瓜皮。他的脸涨得通红,一句话也说不出来。 来到庙前,猪八戒想:“总算到了,让我老猪进去,好好休息休息,这一路摔得我好苦。”心里一急,脚步加快,一不小心,又摔了一跤。 唐僧、沙僧看见八戒脸上青一块、紫一块,肿了一大半,就问他是怎么回事。猪八戒结结巴巴地说:“我不该一个人吃了一个大西瓜,这一路上摔了四跤。”说着大家哈哈大笑起来。
故事梗概:《猪八戒吃西瓜》是一篇略读课文,讲述了唐僧师徒四人在西天取经的路上,猪八戒偷懒、嘴馋,偷吃西瓜的事.表现了他可笑、可爱、笨拙憨厚的人物性格,也批评了这种自私嘴馋、好吃懒做的行为. 读了《猪八戒吃西瓜》的故事,同学们肯定会觉得猪八戒很可笑.可笑过之后,想不想对八戒说点儿什么,或者推测一下八戒吃完西瓜后将会发生的故事.要写这次作文应注意以下几点:
1、承接上文,自然过渡 为了使续写的故事或要对八戒说的话写得生动有趣,而且要保持文章结构的完整性,应简要叙述一下猪八戒吃西瓜时的情景及当时的矛盾心理,但为了突出重点,这部分内容要写得简略些,自然过渡到下一段内容.
负荆请罪续写作文5篇
as long as you try very hard, you can achieve anything.简单易用轻享办公(页眉可删)负荆请罪续写作文5篇负荆请罪续写作文1蔺相如的话传到了廉颇的耳朵里,廉颇站在那静下心来想了想:“蔺相如说的对,我不该为了争一口气,就不顾国家的利益,我应该去给他请罪!”于是廉颇脱下盔甲,解下战袍,光着上半身,背上狠狠的绑着荆条,划的他皮开肉绽,背上多了一道道血痕,人们见了议论纷纷:“我看着都疼。
”“他不怕疼吗?”“他这是要干什么?”“好多荆条,划的他流了那么多的血。
”廉颇心想:“这都是我应该得的,谁让我嫉妒蔺上卿呢?”到了蔺相如家,廉颇跪下,拱手道:“蔺上卿罪臣知错了,请上卿责罚!”蔺相如大为震惊:“将军这是为何?快快请起!”廉颇坚定的说:“罪臣往日嫉妒上卿,为了争一口气,就不顾国安宁,罪臣特来请罪,请蔺上卿责罚!”“哎呀,将军知道自己错了,改了就是了,何必这样请罪呢?”蔺相如边说边搀扶廉颇起来,俩人都感动的泪流满面。
从此俩人成了好朋友,同心协力保卫赵国。
负荆请罪续写作文2自蔺相如与廉颇将相和后,日益强大,招贤纳士,国内人才济济。
秦国。
秦王心中正有所思:“赵国文有蔺相如,武有廉颇,望它国势强大,现已灭了梁国和陈国,该如何是好?”猛然,心生一计,便写了一封信给廉颇。
信中写道:“廉之将,汝与蔺相和如初,吾甚是欢喜。
诺,吾妨直言劝告,蔺相如乃小人之,莫不可信,汝尚可换人前去探听!秦王。
便派人进蔺府做了家仆,此人便是张三。
秦王在宫中沾沾自喜。
廉颇受到这封信,看了半信半疑,信指:当日他负荆请罪,蔺相如与交友,他已是有所疑虑。
意指:此信落笔是敌国国主秦王。
正当他犹豫不决时,只听秦王在信末写道“汝尚可换人前去探听!”,无奈派了李四去蔺府一探究竟。
这李四一进蔺府便望东望西。
张三瞧见,便笑吟吟地上前问:“四爷,来我蔺府有何贵干呀?”李四看了张三一眼,把他拉到一个角落,塞给他一锭银子,细声询问:“张三,我向你打探一事,这……蔺老爷可否对蔺将军有何偏见?“这偏见嘛……”张三挠挠脑门,“还真想不起来。
砥砺前行续写新篇作文范本
砥砺前行续写新篇作文范本 《砥砺前行 续写新篇》 生活就像一场漫长的马拉松,有时候我们跑得气喘吁吁,有时候又能享受到微风拂面的轻松。但无论如何,我们都得咬着牙坚持向前,因为只有砥砺前行,才能续写属于自己的新篇章。
我想起了去年夏天和朋友一起去爬山的经历。那座山不算特别高,但对于缺乏锻炼的我们来说,也绝对是个不小的挑战。
一开始,大家都兴致勃勃,仿佛这山不过是个小小的土坡,轻松就能征服。我们背着鼓鼓的背包,里面装满了零食和水,一路上有说有笑。山路刚开始还算平坦,我们走得很快,感觉自己就像一阵风,能够瞬间到达山顶。
然而,随着路程的推进,情况变得越来越艰难。原本清晰的山路开始变得模糊,杂草丛生,石头也越来越多。我们的脚步渐渐沉重起来,每迈出一步都像是拖着千斤重的石头。汗水不停地从额头滴落,浸湿了头发,衣服也紧紧地贴在了背上,那种难受的感觉,现在想起来都还觉得清晰。
朋友小明喘着粗气说:“哎呀,我不行了,这山怎么这么难爬啊!”我回头看着他那副狼狈的样子,心里其实也打起了退堂鼓。但又一想,都已经走到这儿了,半途而废多可惜啊!于是我鼓励他说:“别放弃啊,咱们再加把劲,说不定山顶就在前面拐个弯的地方!”他听了我的话,咬咬牙,又跟了上来。
这时候,山路变得陡峭起来,几乎要手脚并用才能前进。我紧紧地抓住旁边的树枝和石头,生怕一不小心就滑下去。有好几次,我的脚踩空了,心都提到了嗓子眼,好在及时稳住了身体。旁边的小李吓得脸色发白,嘴里不停地念叨着:“我的妈呀,这可怎么办?”
就在我们累得快要绝望的时候,突然听到了一阵清脆的鸟鸣声。抬头一看,透过树叶的缝隙,居然看到了一小片蓝天。那一刻,仿佛所有的疲惫都消失了,心里只有一个念头:快到山顶了!
我们使出了最后的力气,拼命地往上爬。终于,当我们踏上山顶的那一刻,一种无法言喻的喜悦涌上心头。眼前的景色简直太美了!连绵的山峦在云雾中若隐若现,山下的村庄就像一个个小盒子,排列得整整齐齐。微风拂过脸颊,带来阵阵凉意,吹干了我们身上的汗水。
小蝌蚪找妈妈续写作文(精选7篇)
Don't be so sensitive, and don't be so soft-hearted. People who are too sensitive and too soft-hearted will definitely have an unhappy life. You will have to think about it all day if someone else says anything.简单易用轻享办公(页眉可删)小蝌蚪找妈妈续写作文(精选7篇)小蝌蚪找妈妈续写作文1自从小蝌蚪找到了妈妈后,天天喝妈妈捉虫子,唱歌。
小蝌蚪找到了妈妈以后,它们还开了一个盛大的派对呢,但是又一天……那一天,是个万里无云、天气晴朗的日子,小蝌蚪,嗯还是叫小青蛙吧,和它妈妈一起出去捉虫子吃,发现那一片广大的田野上有好多虫子,小青蛙和它妈妈高兴坏了,扑上去捉、吃那些虫子,吃的“满嘴油香。
”当青蛙妈妈正想带着小青蛙回家去的时的,但是小青蛙不知跑哪里去玩了,这下把青蛙妈妈急的团团转,青蛙妈妈问了小松鼠,小松鼠摇了摇尾巴,说“我要是知道,就会告诉你。
可我不知道,所以你还是问别人吧!”可是青蛙妈妈问了小蚂蚁、小蜘蛛,它们都说不知道,青蛙妈妈使出了它的终极王牌一号绝招,那就是——天灵灵,地灵灵,保佑我的孩子出现吧!突然青蛙妈妈在祈祷的时候,天上掉下了个宝贝,就是小青蛙在前头吃,小青蛙在后面吃,前面一点的虫子吃完了,青蛙妈妈脚一蹬,一不小心把小青蛙踢树上去了,结果小青蛙吃太多了,卡在树枝上下不来,便使劲挣,恰好在青蛙妈妈祈祷的时候落了下来,我希望小青蛙妈妈以后要当心呦!小蝌蚪找妈妈续写作文2小蝌蚪见到妈妈以后,天天跟着妈妈去捉害虫,并告诉是怎么见到妈妈的,在路上遇见了谁,青蛙妈妈听小蝌蚪说,他在路上遇见了鲤鱼阿姨,鲤鱼阿姨说:”妈妈您长着四条腿,宽嘴巴。
“我们游啊游,游了几天,长出了两条后腿,他们又游了几天,长出了两条前腿,他们又看见了乌龟,乌龟告诉我们,妈妈您长着一对大眼睛,披着绿衣裳。
续写改写+交换过后才知道续写作文
交换过后才知道续写作文【篇一:回忆终究是回忆】“有了这个交换器,我就可以交换到我想要的一切了!”我手里拿着一个圆形的器物,爱不释手。
“咦,这是什么?”交换器的左侧有个红色的按钮正闪着红光,我不禁好奇的按了下去。
突然从交换器中射出一束光芒,在我的眼前放映出一个画面,如同在看3D电影一样……我定睛一看,发现画面中有几个熟悉的身影,我不禁走近想要看个清楚,当我走过去后才发现那个身影就是年少时的我,而在“我”的身边的,就是那些已经离散的朋友们。
我心一惊,手不知不觉中的伸向了那个画面,突然,如梦一般,我回到了过去,又一次与那挚爱的好友们站在了一起。
我欣喜若狂,看着的眼前的朋友们,我的眼中不禁激起了泪花,心中有无数想要说的话想对他们说。
此时他们看到我突然做出反常的举动,关心地问了我一句:“怎么了?哭什么呀?”我才意识到眼泪已在我的脸上划出两道泪痕,我赶紧擦去眼泪,缓缓地说“没事,没事……”就这样,我莫名其妙的来到过去,尽管这也正是我想要的,在朋友们一个个搬出去后,曾经热闹的小院变得突然空旷,让我不敢相信这是我们小时候的院子,甚至感到一种陌生。
于是每一天,我都努力回忆,让自己重温儿时与朋友的欢乐时光。
而现在,这一切都实现了,我回到了过去!可是,似乎事情没有想象的那么好,在与朋友们玩耍时,我竟无法感到丝毫的快乐,甚至还认为我们玩的游戏是如此幼稚,慢慢的,我感到厌倦,无聊,尽管如愿以偿的与朋友们重聚,却再也找不到曾经的那份友谊与快乐。
就在这时,周围的世界开始消逝,取而代之的是现实世界,而我还站在原地,手里紧攥着一张旧照片,这是小时候唯一的一张合照了吧。
也许是时候让它们过去了,我将照片好好保存起来,让那些记忆永远保存在我的心中。
过去始终还是过去,要走的拦也拦不住,我不必再回头,因为已经无法挽回。
而我要做的,是从过去脱离出来,面向未来。
【篇二:一场奇妙的旅行】“有了这个交换器,我就可以交换到我想要的一切了!”我的手里拿着一个圆形的器物,爱不释手。
普罗米修斯续写作文(精选9篇)
普罗米修斯续写作文普罗米修斯续写作文(精选9篇)在日常学习、工作和生活中,大家最不陌生的就是作文了吧,通过作文可以把我们那些零零散散的思想,聚集在一块。
你知道作文怎样才能写的好吗?下面是小编为大家收集的普罗米修斯续写作文(精选9篇),仅供参考,大家一起来看看吧。
普罗米修斯续写作文篇1普罗米修斯小心翼翼地把火种带到人间,人们一片欢腾。
瞧,他们围着火堆,兴高采烈地又唱又跳,几个年轻人把猎下的兔、野猪、鹿。
插在树枝上挂在火堆上烧烤,没过一会儿,香味便满了全村。
大家闻着食物的香味儿,再也忍不住了,拿着食物大口大口嚼了起来,香喷喷的,可真好吃!他们举着火把,让普罗米修斯站在中间,围着他跳起了火把舞。
普罗米修斯看着高兴的人们,心里乐开了花。
人们更是从心眼儿里感激普罗米修斯,大家还不时喊着普罗米修斯万岁,普罗米修斯万岁。
喊声回荡在人间。
普罗米修斯续写作文篇2很久很久以前,有一位天神叫普罗米修斯。
他经常来到人间,他发现人类住在山洞里,饥寒交迫,他们实在太可怜了,他说人类必须有火!他决定帮人类取火,来到宙斯面前,让宙斯赐火,宙斯拒绝了,普罗米修斯决定去盗火,他拿着芦苇杆来到太阳居住的地方,用芦苇杆点着,赶快来到地球,他把火赐给了人类,还教人类怎样抵御寒风,怎样教他们用火取暖,开采矿石,冶炼铜铁,制造武器,他把他的本领教给了人类,宙斯知道后,命令他两个侍从,把普罗米修斯,绑在高加索山上,还让鹰啄他的肝脏,可是有奇迹般的长出来了,终于有一天一位英雄海格力斯救下了普罗米修斯。
普罗米修斯有博爱、勇敢、无私的品质。
普罗米修斯续写作文篇3传说地球上没有火种,人类的生活非常困苦,没有火来照明,没有火烧熟食物。
普罗米修斯是个勇敢而极富同情心的天神,他看到人类生活在黑暗中,决心为人类盗取天火。
那天,人类正在大眼瞪小眼地等着明天的到来。
就在这时,一个人看到有个人从天上下来了,便招呼大家都来看。
人们走近一个看,是普罗米修斯,他手里还拿着火。
八下英语志愿者作文unit2续写
八下英语志愿者作文unit2续写Dear Sir or Madam:Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I’d like very much to be a volunteer。
All our citizens are hosts for this special event. Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture. What’s more, as we all know, Eng lish as an international language, will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English。
To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one。
Yours,Li HuaI am willing to join you and become a member of your team to serve the Children's Hospital in summer vacation. It will be a meaningful voluntary activity.There are several reasons make me qualified for your association. I am a warmhearted person with great passion. Also I have manyexperience working as a volunteer before. Most of all, I attach great importance to the sense of responsibility and team spirit.I would appreciate it and be honored if you offer me that chance.Please contact me at Tel:123456。
《农夫与蛇》续写_初二作文
————来源网络整理,仅供参考 1 《农夫与蛇》续写 农夫被救 蛇咬了农夫,农夫悲哀的说﹕“我欲行善积德,但学识浅薄,结果害了自己,遭到这样的报应。”农夫追悔莫及,他感觉黑白无常正拖着他往阴曹地府走去,就在他奄奄一息时,农夫的弟弟发现了他,急忙背着他跑向家去,请了大夫,农夫被他的弟弟救活了。 再遇恶蛇 等到农夫的身体渐渐恢复后,农夫拿着锄头准备去地里干活,出家门口时,看到被石头压住蛇身的蛇在求救,农夫没有理它,准备要绕道走。蛇见农夫将要走,开口道﹕“农夫先生你还记得我吗,我是被你就得那条蛇呀。”农夫见到那条蛇很想咬了他的那条蛇,开口说﹕“哼,你还记得我,若不是你咬了我,我怎么会耽误那么多的庄稼活,怎么会让我承受那么多的痛苦,你现在还想让我救你,简直是痴人做梦,你就在这里自生自灭吧。” 掐蛇七寸 蛇见农夫要走,急忙虚伪的解释道∶“我也不是故意的,我们蛇警惕性特别强,你当时碰到了我,出于防备我才咬了你。”“那你不也是咬完我就走了嘛”,农夫反驳道。正当蛇无言以对时,它看见了一只狗,设想出了一条计策,他开始挑衅狗,狗往石头方向跑,正当狗差点撞到蛇头时,蛇头微微一动,狗撞到了石头上,蛇顺利地逃了出来,迅速的往农夫去的方向爬去。追到农夫后,蛇绕住了农夫的腿,农夫惊慌,使锄头使劲的弄并且不断的甩腿,蛇还是死抓着不放,并————来源网络整理,仅供参考 2
嚷着﹕“谁叫你刚才不救我的,我要咬死你。”就在这千钧一发之际,农夫想起来掐它的七寸,蛇掉落在地上,扭动几下,死去了。 不忍伤蛇 蛇死去的地方正是当初农夫被咬的地方,农夫见有个蛇洞,里面还住着几条小蛇,顿生了怜悯之心,却又怕其他的人受到蛇的伤害,便立了个牌子,写着“谨防蛇咬”,农夫写完后便向他的田地走去。
英语作文续写关于友谊的高极句子
英语作文续写关于友谊的高极句子全文共6篇示例,供读者参考篇1Here's an essay continuation about friendship, written in English from the perspective of an elementary school student, approximately 2000 words long:Friendship is one of the most important things in life. It's like having a special kind of treasure that you can share with someone else. My best friend is Sam, and we've known each other since we were just tiny kids in kindergarten.I remember the first day I met Sam. It was during recess, and I was swinging all by myself on the big kid swings. Sam came over and asked if he could swing next to me. We started talking and found out we both loved dinosaurs and dragon stories. From that day on, we were inseparable friends.Sam and I do everything together. We play at the park, have sleepovers, and even eat lunch together at school every day. Once, we accidentally got locked in the school bathroom after hours. We had to yell really loud until the janitor finally heard usand let us out. It was scary at first, but then we just laughed about it.One of my favorite things about Sam is that he's always there for me, no matter what. Like this one time, I was really sad because my pet goldfish had died. Sam came over with a new fishbowl and some guppies to cheer me up. It meant so much that he wanted to make me feel better.We've had some pretty epic adventures too. There was the times we tried to build a whole fort out of mud and sticks in Sam's backyard. It collapsed on us, but we didn't even care - we just laughed until our sides hurt. Or that day we got super muddy at the creek and Sam's mom had to hose us off in the driveway before we could go inside.I'm really lucky to have a friend like Sam. We have such a blast just hanging out and being kids. We can talk about all our big dreams and ideas without anybody telling us they're silly. Sam wants to be a dinosaur scientist when he grows up, and I want to be a dragon tamer. To us, nothing seems impossible.Some people say guys and girls can't really be best friends, but I don't believe that. Me and Sam have been besties for years, and he's like the brother I never had. We get along so well and always have each other's backs, no matter what.I think friendship is about more than just having fun together, though. It's also about being there for each other through good times and bad. Like when Sam broke his arm last year falling off the monkey bars. I brought him my favorite stuffed animal to keep him company, and made him a big "Get Well Soon" card. Whenever I'm sick or sad about something, Sam always tries to cheer me up too.Having a best friend is the best thing ever. You've got someone to laugh with, play crazy games with, and share your deepest secrets with. Someone who likes you for who you are, weird quirks and all. Someone you can always count on, no matter what.I'm not sure what I'd do without Sam in my life. He's been my buddy through everything so far - losing my first tooth, learning to ride a bike, getting bullied that one time on the playground. No matter how hard things get, I know Sam will be right there by my side.I hope we can stay best friends forever and ever, even when we're all grown up. They say childhood friendships don't always last, but I think me and Sam will be the exception. We've been through so much together already, and I can't imagine going through life without him there.Maybe someday we'll even live next door, and our kids will be best friends too! We could all go on awesome family vacations where the parents and kids are all best buds. Or maybe we'll be eccentric old men living together, still arguing about superheroes and having epic nerf gun battles. Whatever the future holds, I know it'll be an amazing adventure as long as I've got Sam by my side.Some people search their whole lives for their soulmate. Well, I'm lucky - I found my soulmate on the very first day of school. His name is Sam, and he's my best friend in the entire world. Here's to us, buddy! No篇2Friendship: The Unbreakable BondFriendships are the most wonderful connections that bring joy, laughter, and companionship into our lives. True friends are like priceless gems that sparkle brightly, illuminating our paths with their unwavering support and affection. The bond of friendship transcends mere acquaintanceship, blossoming into a deep-rooted, everlasting relationship that withstands the test of time and adversity.As I reflect upon the friendships that have graced my young life, I am filled with an overwhelming sense of gratitude. Friends are the family we choose, the ones who understand us like no other, accepting our quirks and idiosyncrasies with open arms. They are the pillars that hold us upright when the world seems to crumble around us, offering a listening ear and a shoulder to lean on during our darkest hours.The journey of friendship begins with a spark, a shared interest, or a moment of connection that ignites the flame of camaraderie. It could be a simple exchange of smiles on the playground, a mutual love for a particular book or game, or a chance encounter that blossoms into something extraordinary. From that initial spark, a bond is forged, strengthened by shared experiences, laughter, and the creation of cherished memories.True friends are those who celebrate our triumphs as if they were their own, rejoicing in our successes and offering encouragement when we falter. They are the ones who push us to be our best selves, challenging us to step out of our comfort zones and embrace new adventures. With them by our side, even the most daunting obstacles seem surmountable, for their unwavering belief in us fuels our determination and resilience.Friendships are not without their challenges, however. Misunderstandings may arise, disagreements may occur, and conflicts may test the strength of our bond. Yet, it is in these moments that the true depth of friendship is revealed. Genuine friends possess the wisdom to communicate openly, the humility to apologize when necessary, and the willingness to forgive and move forward. They understand that the bond they share is far too precious to be broken by temporary setbacks.Friendships have the remarkable power to shape our characters and mold our personalities. Through the shared experiences and diverse perspectives of our friends, we gain invaluable insights into the world around us. Their unique qualities and traits inspire us to grow, to embrace new perspectives, and to continually strive for self-improvement.As I look towards the future, I am filled with anticipation for the friendships yet to be forged. Each new connection holds the potential to enrich my life in ways I cannot yet fathom. The beauty of friendship lies in its ability to transcend boundaries, unite individuals from diverse backgrounds, and create a tapestry of shared moments that weave the fabric of our lives.In this ever-changing world, where uncertainties abound and challenges present themselves at every turn, the constancy oftrue friendship remains a steadfast anchor. It is a bond that cannot be broken, a sanctuary where we can find solace, acceptance, and unconditional love. Friends are the family we choose, the ones who walk beside us on this incredible journey called life, sharing our joys, bearing our burdens, and creating memories that will forever be etched in our hearts.So, let us cherish our friendships, nurture them with patience and understanding, and never take for granted the rare and precious gift they bestow upon us. For in the embrace of true friendship, we find our strength, our solace, and the unwavering support that empowers us to conquer any obstacle and achieve our wildest dreams.篇3Friendship is the Greatest TreasureMy best friend Sarah and I have been pals since we were just little kids in kindergarten. We first met on the playground during recess and started playing together on the swings. From that day on, we were inseparable! Sarah has always been there for me through thick and thin.When I was being bullied by some mean boys in first grade for having glasses, Sarah stood up for me and told them to stopbeing jerks. She wasn't afraid of them even though they were bigger than us. That's when I knew Sarah was a true friend who had my back no matter what.In second grade, Sarah's parents got divorced and she was really sad about it. I did my best to cheer her up by making her laugh and having sleepovers almost every weekend so she didn't have to be alone. We'd stay up late watching movies, eating popcorn and candy, and just being silly together. Having a best friend to lean on made that tough time a little bit easier for her.There was this one time in third grade when we had the most epic fight ever. I can't even remember what it was about, but we refused to talk to each other for weeks! It was horrible not having my best friend to hang out with. Finally, we both apologized and realized how much we missed each other. We promised never to let something dumb come between our friendship again. Now if we get mad, we work it out pretty quickly.Last summer before fourth grade, Sarah invited me to her lake house for a week. It was the best vacation ever! We went swimming, had bonfires and made s'mores, went tubing behind the boat, and fished off the dock. We caught a huge bass and took about a million selfies with it before letting him go. Ourparents took us for ice cream almost every night. We never wanted that week to end!This year in fourth grade, we tried out for the school play together. Can you believe we both got main roles? I played the prince and Sarah was the princess. We worked so hard, running lines and memorizing our parts after school. On opening night, I was sooo nervous but having my BFF by my side gave me courage. The show was a huge hit and we got a standing ovation! It felt amazing to share that experience with my bestie.Now that we're getting older, some of our other friends have started ditching us to hang out with the "cool" crowd. But Sarah and I don't care about all that cliquey nonsense. We'd way rather just be ourselves and have fun together than stress over being popular. As long as we have each other, that's all that matters.I'm so lucky to have a friend like Sarah. She's kind, loyal, honest, funny, and always there when I need her. We've made so many amazing memories already, and I know we'll make a million more as we keep growing up together. True friendship is the greatest treasure of all, and I'll never take my friendship with Sarah for granted. Best friends forever, through and through!篇4Friendship is the Greatest GiftFriendship is one of the most precious gifts life has to offer. It's a bond that transcends age, gender, or background; a connection that brings joy, comfort, and a sense of belonging into our lives. As a young student, I've already experienced the magic of true friendship, and it has taught me invaluable lessons that I'll carry with me forever.One of the first things I learned about friendship is that it requires effort and nurturing. Just like a delicate flower, a friendship needs to be tended to with care and attention. It's not enough to simply make a friend and then forget about them; true friendship demands that we invest time and energy into the relationship. This means being there for our friends when they need us, listening to their problems, and offering support and encouragement.Another crucial aspect of friendship is trust. When we truly trust someone, we open ourselves up to vulnerability, sharing our deepest thoughts, fears, and dreams without hesitation. It's a beautiful thing to have a friend who will keep our secrets safe, who will never judge us, and who will always have our back, no matter what. Trust is the foundation upon which the strongest friendships are built.However, friendship is not just about taking; it's also about giving. A true friend is someone who will celebrate your successes as if they were their own, who will uplift you when you're feeling down, and who will inspire you to be the best version of yourself. It's a reciprocal relationship, where both parties strive to bring out the best in each other, and where the happiness and well-being of the other person is just as important as one's own.Perhaps one of the most beautiful aspects of friendship is the ability to share laughter and create lasting memories together. Friends are the ones with whom we can be silly, goofy, and completely ourselves without fear of judgment. They are the ones who make even the most mundane activities fun and memorable, and who turn ordinary moments into extraordinary adventures.As I grow older, I know that the friendships I've formed in my youth will continue to shape and enrich my life in countless ways. They will be the ones who will stand by me through the ups and downs, the triumphs and the struggles, and who will remind me of the importance of cherishing the simple joys and moments that make life so precious.In a world that can often feel cold and lonely, true friendship is a warm embrace, a safe haven where we can find solace, encouragement, and unconditional love. It's a reminder that we are never truly alone, and that there are people in our lives who will always have our backs, no matter what life throws our way.So, to all my friends, past, present, and future, I say thank you. Thank you for being a part of my journey, for enriching my life with your laughter, your support, and your unwavering loyalty. You are the greatest gift I could ever ask for, and I will cherish our friendship forever.篇5Friendship is the most magical bond in the whole wide world! It's like having a superpower that makes you happier, braver, and feel like you can conquer anything. My best friend Emma and I have been inseparable since we were just tiny kindergarteners.We first met on the playground during recess on a sunny autumn day. I was swinging all alone, pumping my little legs as hard as I could to go higher and higher. Emma came over and asked if she could have a turn on the swing next to me. "Sure!" I said with a big smile. We took turns swinging for what felt likeforever, laughing and screaming with delight until the recess bell rang.From that moment on, Emma and I were attached at the hip! We did everything together - finger painting vibrant masterpieces, building fortresses out of plastic blocks, dressing up in wacky costumes during pretend play. Our favorite game was princess tea parties, where we'd get all fancied up in shimmery gowns and dazzling tiaras. We'd sip imaginary tea from tiny cups and nibble on air cookies, dreaming about the dashing princes who would one day whisk us away to their castles.As we grew a little older, our friendship only blossomed more beautifully. We became partners in crime, going on endless adventures and making so many magical memories together. That giant oak tree in Emma's backyard was our secret clubhouse where we'd scheme up mischievous plans and swap stories for hours on end. The park was our oasis where we could be carefree, racing through the fields with the warm sun beaming down on our face. The creek was our hidden paradise to go frog hunting and build mud pies. No matter where we roamed, we were fearless explorers conquering the world side-by-side.Emma was always there for me through the good times and the bad. When I struggled with those treacherous math problems, she patiently guided me until they finally made sense. When I was being bullied by a mean kid at school, she courageously stood up for me and didn't back down until they left me alone. She was the first person I told when I lost my first tooth, giddily showing off the new gap in my smile. We made silly promise rings for each other from blades of grass, vowing to be best friends forever and ever.My friendship with Emma taught me more invaluable life lessons than I could have ever learned in a classroom. I discovered the importance of kindness, generosity, forgiveness, honesty and trust. Emma showed me how to be a good listener, a caring friend, and a loyal companion. We laughed until our bellies hurt, but also shared countless tears whether we were overjoyed or heartbroken. We fought like feisty alley cats sometimes, but could never stay mad at each other for long. Our bond was stronger than anything.No matter how old we get or where life takes us, I know Emma and I will cherish our childhood friendship for eternity. The memories of our countless escapades and shenanigans will forever warm my heart and put a smile on my face. Emma is thefirst real friend I ever made, and quite possibly the most meaningful relationship I'll ever have. True friendship is a bond that can never be broken - it's an everlasting magical miracle. Having a best friend is the greatest gift this world has to offer.There's no telling what incredible adventures still await Emma and me in the future. One thing's for certain though - we'll take them on together, side-by-side, as best friends through and through. Maybe we'll travel across the globe and make it our mission to sample every flavor of ice cream under the sun. Or perhaps we'll move to a faraway city to pursue our wildest dreams and ambitions. We might even get hired as spies and save the world from evil villains! Whatever lies ahead, I know Emma and I will conquer it all, hand in hand. That's the true magic of friendship - it gives you a partner in crime and a forever source of courage. I'm so grateful to have Emma as my best friend, and can't wait to see what escapades await us as we grow up together!篇6Friendship - The Greatest GiftFriends are the greatest gift life can offer. They are the sunshine that brightens our days, the laughter that fills ourhearts, and the memories that last forever. To me, friendship is more precious than any material possession or fleeting moment of joy. It is a bond that transcends time and distance, a connection that holds us together through thick and thin.True friends are those who stick by your side, no matter what challenges life throws your way. They are the ones who celebrate your victories with genuine happiness and support you through your failures without judgment. With friends, you never have to pretend or hide your true self; they accept you for who you are, quirks and all.I have been fortunate enough to have a few amazing friends in my life, and each one has left an indelible mark on my heart. There's Sarah, my best friend since kindergarten. We've been through so much together – shared our deepest secrets, comforted each other during tough times, and created countless cherished memories. No matter how much time passes or how far apart we may be, our bond remains unbreakable.Then there's Aiden, the friend who always knows how to make me laugh, even on my darkest days. His infectious positivity and witty humor never fail to lift my spirits. Whenever I'm feeling down, he's the one who reminds me to see the bright side of things and not take life too seriously.And how could I forget about Emma, the friend who constantly inspires me with her unwavering dedication and passion for her dreams? Her determination and resilience in the face of adversity have taught me invaluable lessons about perseverance and never giving up on what truly matters.These friends, and many others, have enriched my life in ways I could have never imagined. They have been my confidants, my cheerleaders, and my anchors in the stormy seas of life. With them by my side, I have learned the true meaning of loyalty, support, and unconditional love.Friendships, however, are not without their challenges. There may be times when misunderstandings arise, feelings get hurt, or distances creep in. But the beauty of true friendship lies in the ability to overcome these obstacles and emerge stronger than before. It's about having the courage to communicate openly, the humility to apologize when mistakes are made, and the willingness to forgive and move forward.As I continue to navigate the winding path of life, I know that my friends will be the constant companions who make the journey worth taking. They will be the ones who celebrate my triumphs, dry my tears during setbacks, and remind me of the incredible power of human connection.To all my friends, past, present, and future, I want to express my deepest gratitude for the immeasurable impact you have had on my life. You have shown me what it means to be truly loved and accepted, and for that, I will forever be grateful. Our bond is unbreakable, our memories everlasting, and our friendship a testament to the profound beauty of human connection.So, let us cherish this extraordinary gift called friendship. Let us nurture it, protect it, and never take it for granted. For in a world that can often feel cold and lonely, true friends are the warmth that reminds us that we are never alone, and that love, in its purest form, resides in the hearts of those who have chosen to walk beside us on this incredible journey called life.。
假如桃花源被找到后来会样续写作文
假如桃花源被找到后来会样续写作文《假如桃花源被找到后来会怎样》篇一:《桃花源的“热闹”灾难》桃花源被发现了。
最开始人们都惊讶于这个如同仙境的地方。
那桃花依然灿烂地开着,像是天边落下的云霞,古旧的屋舍错落有致地分布在桃花林边,老人小孩怡然自乐,就跟书上描述的一模一样。
刚有外人进入的时候,桃花源里的人像看怪物一样瞅着这些拿着各种奇奇怪怪设备的人。
一次,有个摄影师扛着个特大号的摄像机,在一个小孩面前晃来晃去,那小孩没见过这玩意,吓得“哇”一声就哭了,旁边的大人赶紧把孩子护在身后,眼神里满是警惕。
接着大批的游客涌来。
他们在桃花源里到处乱逛,完全没有之前的那种静谧。
有个年轻人,他一边吃着炸鸡,一边随手就把垃圾扔在桃花树下,那油腻的包装纸就那么扎眼地躺在一地花瓣上。
还有一些游客在小径上大声喧哗,比谁的嗓门大,那声音在山谷里回荡,震得几只在树上憩息的鸟儿扑棱棱飞走了。
那些古老的建筑也遭了殃。
有些人非要用手去摸墙壁,还有的人想掰下一块砖来当作纪念。
桃花源里的居民原本平静的生活被彻底搅乱了,以前他们日出而作,日落而息,现在外面世界的人带来了很多他们不懂的观念和行为,一些年轻人开始对外面的世界好奇,不再安心种地或者照顾家庭。
桃花源开始失去它原本的模样,那曾经清澈的小溪里也飘着塑料瓶子,桃花似乎都开得没那么娇艳了,有一种被折腾后的疲惫感。
篇二:《商业化的桃花源》随着桃花源被发现,商人们看到了赚钱的机会。
不久这里就被开发成了一个热门景区。
在入口处,竖起了一个巨大的牌坊,上面用鎏金大字写着“桃花源景区”。
一群小商贩挤在门口,卖着各种各样低劣的和桃花源有关的纪念品,什么塑料桃花枝,印着桃花图案的折扇。
那些折扇一打开,就能闻到一股刺鼻的油墨味。
沿着小路,两边盖起了许多小吃摊,那浓烟滚滚的烤串摊,肉上不知道抹了多少种调料,香料味混合着油烟把桃花的清香都掩盖了。
还有一家打着“桃花源特色美食”幌子的餐馆,进去一看,所谓的特色菜就是把一些常见的菜名前面加上“桃花源”三个字,价格却贵得离谱。
续写故事作文300字,推荐作文
续写故事作文300字,推荐作文全文共9篇示例,供读者参考续写故事作文300字,推荐作文篇1我爱我的家乡。
温暖的春天给大地上的万物带来了无比的恩惠,使大地充满了生机。
家乡里的狮子山上开满了山花,那些山花虽然没有玫瑰的气味浓香;也没有牡丹那样国色天香。
但它显的那样平凡。
那样善良。
那样大方。
我爱我的家乡。
炎热的夏日在烤着大地。
我们在高大的玉兰树下面乘凉,骄傲的知了在“吱吱”地为我们解闷。
小姑娘们捡着地上的花插在头上,举行比美比赛。
我爱我的家乡。
凉爽的秋天给人们带来了温暖的笑容,因为秋天正是丰收的季节。
从远处看那今灿灿的豆谷一块块美丽又高贵的地毯。
使人看到就不舍的离开,还会引你往前走,走近了又像能给人带来致富的金子。
我爱我的家乡。
寒冷的冬天在吹着呼呼响的寒风,想把坚贞不屈的梅花给叫醒。
梅花的清香把勤劳的蜜蜂引来,它们“嗡嗡”的采蜜,好像在说:“啊,梅花我爱你。
在这寒冷的冬天要是没有你我们早被饿死了。
”啊!我爱我的家乡。
续写故事作文300字,推荐作文篇2标题:《蚂蚁搬家》大家好,我是一只很爱干活的小蚂蚁。
说起来可能你们不太相信,我们蚂蚁虽然个头小小的,但是力气可没小!从前,我们一家住在一棵大树边上的一个小洞里。
那时候,生活还是很幸福快乐的。
可有一天,一阵大雨过后,我们发现树根都被冲垮了,小洞也被淹没了。
我们蚂蚁一家只好被迫搬家。
爸爸蚂蚁召集了全家人开会商量,最后决定搬到离这里不远的一片草地上,那里四周环境优美,食物也很丰富。
于是,我们就开始做搬家的准备工作。
首先,最重要的是找好新家的位置。
爸爸带着几个兄弟们,在草地里东拐西绕,终于找到一个合适的地方,就是一个巨大的树根下面,那边离食物很近,又有树根遮挡,再合适不过了。
接下来,我们开始给新家挖洞。
这可真是个体力活儿,要挖出足够大的空间容纳我们全家人住下。
好在我们蚂蚁干活从来都是全力以赴,大家你一锹我一锨的,很快就挖出了一个宽敞的新家。
移居准备工作基本就绪后,就到了最关键的搬家环节了。
