汉译英增词和减词
增减译法

3)省略非人称和强调句中的it. It is time for lunch. 该到吃饭时间了。 It is too early in the season to quote. 季节未到,不能报价。 It is never too late to learn. 活到老,学到老。 It is John who comes first. 约翰来得最早。
3. 发达的浙江省已率先实行这一制度。 The eastern booming province of Zhejiang has taken a lead in employing the system. 4. 其经营活动多限于市场调查、信息沟 通和采购销售等。 Such office’s activities might be limited to market research, communications, sales and purchasing.
Is it hot? (语气词) 它是热的吗? 活到老,学到老。(人称代词) One is never too old to learn. My work, my family, my friends are more than enough to fill my time. (动词) 我做家务,照顾家庭,和朋友交往,这些 占据了我的全部时间。
6. Their host carved, poured, served, cut bread, talked, laughed, proposed health. 7. Keeping the intricacies and complexities out of the picture, let us take the binary opposites of the rich and poor in the global system. 8.前怕狼后怕虎的态度不能造就干部。 9.匪军所至,杀戮人民,奸淫妇女,摧毁 村庄,掠夺财物,无所不用其极。 10.姑娘有点不好意思了,脸上泛起红潮。
汉译英增词和减词

▪ 添加注释性的词语:
▪ 1.班门弄斧
▪ Show off one’s proficiency with the axe before Luban, the master carpenter.
▪ Show off one’s skills with the axe before an expert carpenter.
▪ 2.我们必须坚持社会主义道路,坚持人民 民主专政,坚持共产党的领导,坚持马列 主义和毛泽东思想。
▪ We must adhere to the socialist road, the people’s democratic dictatorship, the Communist Party’s leadership and Marxism-Leninism and Mao Zedong Thought.
your account for July purchases has not yet been settled.
Omission
▪ 一、省译汉语中重复出现的词语
▪ 1我们要忠于党、忠于人民、忠于祖国。 ▪ We should be loyal to our party, to our
people and to our motherland.
▪ 二、为了保证译文意思更加明确。
▪ 文中暗含的意思:
▪ 1.大家都知道朝鲜战场是艰苦些。
▪ Everyone knows that life on the Korean battlefield was rather hard.
▪ 2.要提倡顾全大局。
▪ We should advocate the spirit of taking the whole situation into consideration.
(1)汉译英:增词与减词

• 苏轼 Su Shi (formerly translated as Su Shih, 1037苏轼: 1101),alias Su Dongpo, writer and calligrapher of the Song Dynasty. • 牛郎织女 the Cowherd and the Girl Weaver---two figures in ancient Chinese fairy tale (Later it also refers to husband and wife who live far apart.) • 开绿灯 turn on the green light (provide conveniences for certain affairs, so that they could proceed smoothly) • 八股文 Eighth-part essay prescribed for the imperial civil service examinations-- known for its rigidity of form and poverty of ideas
• 2. 虚心使人进步,骄傲使人落后。 • Modesty helps one to go forward, conceit makes one lag behind. • Modesty helps one to go forward, whereas conceit makes one lag behind. • (增连词)
• 添加总结词
• 在英语中,若需引导一大段文字,最好添加一些引导性的 引导性的 词语,增强上下文的衔接性,同时也使读者有一个阅读大 词语 段文字的心理准备。 • 展望下世纪,我们的目标是,(第一个十年实现国民生产总 值翻一番,使人民的小康生活更加宽裕,形成比较完善的 社会主义市场经济体制;再经过十年的努力,到建党一百 年时,使国民经济更加发展,各项制度更加完善;到世纪 中叶建国一百年时,基本实现现代化,建成富强民主文明 的社会主义国家。)
英语翻译增词与减词

减词法是指原文中某些词在译文中不译出 来。减词不能减意,其目的是为了更忠实 通顺地表达原文的意思。词量的增减必须 防止任意发挥,添油加醋,或避难就易, 随意删减。
词量增减的情况主要有以下几种:
1.为使语义明确而增减词语。
(1)增词: I saw the dull, drilled, docile, brutish masses of the Hun
当我清醒过来时,发觉自己在水里,虽然 浸得半死,却本能地浮着。(吴玉音译)
译文增加了动词“发觉”原文虽无与之相 应的动词,但其含义却可以从上下文得到。
I judge I would saw out and leave that night if pap got drunk enough, and I reckoned he would. (Mark Twain)
A square has four equal sides. 正方形四边相等。 (英语谓语必须用动词,汉语除了动词,还可以直接用名词、形容词、
数词、偏正词组、主谓词组等作谓语。英译汉时可以省略原文的谓语 动词,以求译文简洁流畅。)
There is no cloud in the sky. 晴空万里无云。 (介词在英文里使用率很高,汉语则不然,主要通过语序和逻辑关系
shoulders. 根据英语习惯,增加形容词性物主代词his。 3.再试一次,你就会成功。 Try again and you will succeed. 增加连词and。(王馥芳 见《中国翻译词典》)
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daytime or at night? ?3. 那我们山脚见吧。 ?Let's meet at the foot of the hill.
?1. 虚心使人进步,骄傲使人落后。
?Modesty helps one to go forward, whereas conceit makes one lag behind.
?2. 留得青山在,不怕没柴烧。
?So long as green hills remain, there will never be a shortage of firewood.
?3.村里的男女老少都喜欢那个小超市买 东西。
?Men and women, old and young in the village, all liked shopping in that small supermarket.
?4. 我妈妈来了,我得回去了。 ?My mother has arrived, so I have to leave
?增补冠词
?汉语里无冠词。有冠词是英语的特点之一, 名词前一般都有冠词,汉译英时要增补冠 词。
她不把他当阿公,而当作亲爹。
She considered him not a father-in-law but a father.
?我们对问题要作全面的分析,才能 解决得妥当。
We must make a comprehensive analysis of problem before it can be properly solved.
英译汉常用技巧之增词和减词

1. 6增加表达复数的词
• a. 增加重叠词表示复数 • 1)Flowers bloom all over the yard. • 朵朵鲜花开满了庭院。
• 2)There were rows of houses which he had never seen before. • 一排排的房子,都是他从来没有见过的。
2.4 增补表示逻辑关系的词语
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• • •
①The strongest man cannot alter the law of nature. 即使是最强有力的人也不能改变自然法则
②I am in charge of the depot, only I. People will hold me responsible but not you. 只有我一个人负责管理这个仓库,出了事 情别人找我,找不到你。
1. 4 增加副词
• 有些动词根据原文的上下文可以增加适当 的副词,以确切表示原意。 • 1)As he sat down and began talking, words poured out. • 他一坐下来就讲开了,滔滔不绝地讲个没 完。
• 2)The crowds melted away. • 人群渐渐地散开了。
2)Better be wise by the defeat of others than by your own.
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从别人的失败中汲取教训比从自己的失败中 汲取教训更好。
• 3)The footman were as ready to serve her as they were their own mistress. • 仆人们愿意服侍她,就像他们愿意服侍他们的 女主人一样。
1. Lexical Amplification
英文翻译技巧之增词法与减词法

英文翻译技巧之增词法与减词法英汉两种语言,由于表达方式不尽相同,翻译时既可能要将词类加以转换,又可能要在词量上加以增减。
增词法与减词法在英汉互译中运用相当广泛,但无论增词还是减词,增减的是词,不是意。
一、增词法所谓增词法,就是在翻译时,为了使译文合乎汉语的习惯和表达规律,为了使意思更加明确,从意义、修辞和句法上需要在译文中适当增添一些虽无其词而有其意的词。
增词译法不是凭空想象,必须增之有道,补之有理。
必要的增词对一个句子起着画龙点睛的作用,准确、通顺和完整地表达原文的内容,避免语义模糊。
例1:Packing together with packaging is designed not only as a form of protection but also a form to facilitate handling, storage, to prevent pilferage and what's more to help promote the sales.译文:包装和包装方法不仅仅是为了保护商品,也是为了便利搬运和库存、防止盗窃,更重要的是,有助于促销。
解析:“protection”此处译作“保护商品”,加了“商品”两字,显然比译作“保护”更好。
1.增加原文中省略的部分英语中有省略现象,译为汉语时往往要根据句法需要补出英文中省略的成分,主要包括回答中的省略、动词的省略及比较句中的省略等;另外,为表示态度、逻辑关系等,也需要加词。
(1)增补回答句中省略的词语1例2:—He doesn’t know, does he?—Yes, he does.译文:——他不知道吧?——不,他知道。
例3:—Did you enjoy your time in Beijing?—Yes, I did.译文:——你在北京过得愉快吗?——是的,我过得很愉快。
(2)增补并列结构中省略的词语例4:On average, the economy performs less well in a president's second term than in his first.That pattern probably does not apply to Mr Obama. Since his first term was so difficult, the next, by rights, ought to be better.译文:一般来说,美国总统第二个任期内的经济不如第一任期。
第4讲_英汉翻译中的增词法和减词法(2014)解析

1.1 语法的需要(英汉差异) 1.2 语义的需要(意义表达)
1.3 语用的需要(修辞、文化)
1.1 语法的需要(英汉差异)
1.1.1英语中的名词为复数形式时 (1) I saw bubbles rising from under the water. 译文:我看见一个个水泡从水下升起。 (2) The first electronic computers went into operation in 1945. 译文:第一批电子计算机于1945年投入使用。
1.2 语义的需要(意义表达)
1.2.3 不定式作目的或结果状语
We made transistors by different means only to get the same effect.
我们用不同的方法制造晶体管,结果得到相同的效 应。 当动词不定式和不定式短语表示目的或结果状语时, 通常就可在其前面加:“为了”,“要”,“以 便”,“就”,“从而”,“结果”等词。
逻辑上的混乱:
既然“那件事没有发生过”,又怎么谈得上 “令人吃惊”呢?
What hasn’t happened in the past is a former FBI agent that is charged with colluding with the wise guys in a murder. That doesn’t happen and that’s shocking.
Marry的宾语也可以不直接是人: She married a fortune. “她嫁了个有钱人”,(颇有点“傍大款”的意思。) She married into purple. “她嫁到了一个显赫之家”。
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增补冠词 汉语里无冠词。有冠词是英语的特点之一, 名词前一般都有冠词,汉译英时要增补冠 词。
她不把他当阿公,而当作亲爹。 She considered him not a father-in-law but a father. 我们对问题要作全面的分析,才能 解决得妥当。 We must make a comprehensive analysis of problem before it can be properly solved.
5 The true joy of joys is the joy that joys in the joy of others. 6.It isn’t rum for a woman to want her old husband back, for respectability, though for a man to want his old wife back – well, perhaps it is funny, rather!(Jude the Obscure)
3.村里的男女老少都喜欢那个小超市买 东西。 Men and women, old and young in the village, all liked shopping in that small supermarket. 4. 我妈妈来了,我得回去了。 My mother has arrived, so I have to leave now. 5.送君千里,终有一别。 Although you may escort a guest a thousand miles, yet must the parting come at last.
增译法和减译法
Amplification and Omission
教学目的要求: 教学目的要求 : 在汉译英中能熟 练使用增词法和减词法的翻译技巧。 教学重点: 增词法和减词法(代 教学重点 : 词和连词) 教学难点: 教学难点 : 汉语排比句的翻译, 使用减词法。
一、为了保证语法结构的完整: 代词: 代词:汉语中有许多没有主语的句子,英语 则一般需要主语。另外汉语中很多名词前都 没有代词,需要增补。 1.大作收到,十分高兴。 I am very glad to have received your writing. 2.没有调查就没有发言权。 He who makes no investigation and study has no right to speak. 3.把这些故事看完以后,用你自己的话讲 一遍。 After you have read these stories, tell them in your own words.
二、原文中表示范畴的词:
1. 基于伊拉克目前社会动荡和纷扰不安的局面, 中国驻伊拉克大使馆已经向德国订购了两辆防 弹轿车。 The Chinese embassy in Iraq has ordered two bulletproof cars from Germany due to the social unrest and upheaval in Iraq at present. 2. 在党的领导下,中国人民已经完成了解放事 业。 Under the leadership of the Party, the Chinese people have succeeded in their liberation.
7. 我们的心永远向着祖国。 Our hearts are always motherland. towards our
连词: 连词 : 汉语重意合,英语重形合,把汉语翻译 成英语时,要适当增加连词。
1. 虚心使人进步,骄傲使人落后。 Modesty Байду номын сангаасelps one to go forward, whereas conceit makes one lag behind. 2. 留得青山在,不怕没柴烧。 So long as green hills remain, there will never be a shortage of firewood.
3. 我们不后退,我们从来没有后退过,我们将 来也决不会后退。 We won’t retreat, we never have and never will. 4 There was no snow, but the leaves were gone from the trees and the grass was dead. 译文1:天还未还没有雪,但是叶子已经从树上 落下,草也枯死了。 译文2:雪还没下,但已叶落草枯。
花园里面是人间的乐园,有的是吃不完的 大米白面,穿不完的绫罗绸缎,花不完的 金银财宝。(周而复《上海的早晨》) The garden was a paradise on earth, with more food and clothes than could be consumed and more money than could be spent.
介词:英语中的介词比汉语中活跃得多。
1.我们应该逐步消灭城乡差别。 We should try to eliminate the differences between town and country. 2. 你白天还是晚上飞广州? Do you fly to Guangzhou in the daytime or at night? 3. 那我们山脚见吧。 Let’s meet at the foot of the hill.
三省略可能影响译文修辞效果的词语
汉语中,有时为了语言生动,常用具体形象词语 或成语比喻;有时为了加强语气,可连续使用好 几个短语,在翻译这类句子时,某些词语往往省 译,译出主要的和不可缺少的词语就可以了。 例:匪军所到,杀戮人民,奸淫妇女,焚毁村庄, 掠夺财物,无所不用其极。 Wherever the bandit troops went, they massacred and raped, burned and looted, and stopped at nothing.
1. 多年来那个国家一直有严重的失业现象。
For many years, there has been serious unemployment in that country. 2. 这些新型汽车速度快,效率高,行动灵活。 The new cars are fast, efficient and handy.
4.郭末若同志曾说:“中国人民历来是 勇于探索、勇于创造、勇于革命的。” Comrade Guo Moruo once said, “The people of China have always been courageous enough to probe into things, to make inventions and to make revolution.” Comrade Guo Moruo once said, “The people of China have always been courageous in exploration, innovation and revolution.”
一个)女人为了体面(的关系)而要(她的 从)前(的那个丈)夫回来,这并不(是) 奇怪(的事),虽然(一个)男人要(他 从)前(的那个)妻(子)回来,也许是 很有趣的事。
Omission
一、省译汉语中重复出现的词语 1我们要忠于党、忠于人民、忠于祖国。 We should be loyal to our party, to our people and to our motherland.
2.我们必须坚持社会主义道路,坚持人民 民主专政,坚持共产党的领导,坚持马列 主义和毛泽东思想。 We must adhere to the socialist road, the people’s democratic dictatorship, the Communist Party’s leadership and Marxism-Leninism and Mao Zedong Thought. 3. 质子带正电,电子带负电,而中子既不 带正电,也不带负电。 A proton has a positive charge and an electron a negative charge, but a neutron has neither.
二、为了保证译文意思更加明确。
文中暗含的意思: 文中暗含的意思:
1.大家都知道朝鲜战场是艰苦些。 Everyone knows that life on the Korean battlefield was rather hard. 2.要提倡顾全大局。 We should advocate the spirit of taking the whole situation into consideration.
3. 这对年轻夫妇并不相配,一个是西施, 一个是张飞。 This young couple is not well-matched, one is a Xishi,--a famous Chinese beauty, while the other is a Zhangfei—a well-known illtempered brute. 4. 滥竽充数: pretend to play the yu(an ancient musical instrument) and retain one’s position in the orchestra; (of incompetent people or inferior goods) be there just to make up the number
增加概括性的词语
1. 结婚大办酒席,实在可以免去了。 The practice of giving lavish feasts at weddings can well be dispensed with. 2.也许您忘记了7月份的购货帐还没有 结算。 Perhaps you have overlooked the fact that your account for July purchases has not yet been settled.