2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(十九)写作指导(含范文)

2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(十九)写作指导一、概写原文阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要With limited space for parks and gardens, architects and city planners often find it challenging to include greenery in neighborhoods in cities. One creative solution is to grow plants on unused areas like walls and rooftops. It's a popular idea, and now rooftop gardens and green walls have been sprouting up (大量冒出) in cities around the world.There are many benefits of having green spaces to the urban landscape. Adding gardens to rooftops or walls can create a pleasant environment—what was once a gray cement(水泥) wall can become a colorful, blooming garden. The Caxiaforum art gallery in Madrid, Spain, is a famous example—one of its walls is covered with 15,000 plants from over 250 different species. In other cities, green walls are being used more functionally, to cover up construction sites and empty buildings and to decorate the lobbies of office buildings. Using plants to cover walls and rooftops can also keep cities cooler in the summer. Buildings and roads absorb the sun's heat and hold it, causing a building or neighborhood to stay warmer longer. Plants, on the other hand, provide an enormous amount of shade. There isevidence that growing a roof or wall garden can lower a building's energy costs.In New York City, public schools plant rooftop gardens that can reduce heating and cooling costs. In addition to saving the school money, teachers and parents love the gardens because of their educational value —it's a fun and healthy way for their kids to investigate the world around them. "For the children, it's exciting when you grow something edible (可食用的)," said Lauren Fontana, principal of a New York public school.二、词汇学习1. challenging adj. 艰巨的,具有挑战性的--A challenging task or job requires great effort and determination. Mike found a challenging job as a computer programmer.迈克找到一份做计算机程序员的富有挑战性的工作。

It is an enormous challenge but we hope to meet it within a year or 18 months这是一个巨大的挑战,但是我们希望在1年或18个月之内能够战胜它。

2. greenery n. 绿色植物--plants that make a place look attractive are referred to as greeneryThe little village is covered with greenery.小山村掩隐在绿树丛中。

Greenery has sprouted out in the waste land behind the factory.在工厂后面的荒地上突然长出了草木。

3. a solution to... 解决办法;处理手段--a way of solving a problem or dealing with a difficult situation Attempts to find a solution have failed.试图找到解决办法的种种努力全都失败了。

I had already taken steps to speed up a solution to the problem.我已经采取措施加快解决该问题。

We ought to be able to find a solution to the problem.我们应该能够努力找出解决问题的办法。

4. benefit n 优势;益处;成效--an advantage that sth gives you; a helpful and useful effect that sth hasI've had the benefit of a good education.我得益于受过良好教育。

It's technology that bring benefit to human beings.科学技术确实带给了人类益处。

5. an enormous amount of...大量的,后不用复数名词He spent a large amount of time in New York.他在纽约呆了好长时间。

Worldwide, an enormous amount of research effort goes into technology.在世界范围内,大量的研究精力都投入到技术上。

三、关键词句❶...include greenery in neighborhoods in cities...grow plants...rooftop gardens and green walls have been sprouting up (大量冒出) in cities around the world.--Nowadays, rooftop gardens and green walls have been used worldwide to fill cities with greenery.❷ ...benefits...create a pleasant environment...to decorate the lobbies of office buildings--One advantage is that they can beautify the city environment and decorate office buildings.❸...provide shade...growing a roof or wall garden can lower a building's energy costs.--Another is that they can even help cut energy costs by providing shade for us.❹ ...schools...In addition to saving the school money, teachers and parents love the gardens because of their educational value...kids to investigate the world around them--Additionally, they are of educational value to schools because kids are excited to explore the green world around them.四、参考范文Nowadays, rooftop gardens and green walls have been used worldwide to fill cities with greenery.(要点1)One advantage is that they can beautify the city environment and decorate office buildings. (要点2) Another is that they can even help cut energy costs by providing shade for us. (要点3)Additionally, they are of educational value to schools because kids are excited to explore the green world around them. (要点4) (63字)。

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浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(八)写作指导(含范文)

浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(八)写作指导(含范文)

020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(八)写作指导一、概写原文二、概写步骤第一步:通读理解全文,了解文章结构,明确各段落之间的逻辑关系,提取全文中心词(尤其是名词与动词)。

第二步:细读原文,划出各段的主题句与关键词,关键词以动词与名词为主,涵盖段落全部要点与次要点。

第三步:根据所划内容,结合理解,重新组织语言。

可用中文概括出段落大意,然后用一句话翻译出来。

第四步:通读修改。

修改是一个重要的环节,要考虑连接词的使用;高级词汇的替换;句式的多样;语法是否正确以及字数的多少。

第五步:用自信衡水体抄到试卷上,力求清楚美观。

三、分段概括关键词句已在原文标出,结合理解,用中文概括出一句话并译成英文。

❶确切的估计表明,世界上大约有6000种语言,其中一半现在处于濒危状态。

Accurate estimates indicate that there are approximately 6000 languages around the world, of which half are now in danger of extinction.❷尽管在保护这些濒危语言上存在很在的挑战,可以采取措施让它们获得新生。

Despite the existence of serious challenges in protecting these dying languages, measures can be adopted to revive them.❸例如,Welsh受到法律的保护,Maori受到制度的保护,Kaurna通过记录来保护。

Welsh, for example, is being preserved by law, Maori by a protection system and Kaurna by proper records.❹因此,随着公众的更多关注,我们可以看到濒危语言的逐渐复兴。

浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(十六)写作指导(含范文)

浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(十六)写作指导(含范文)

2020届浙江省新高考高三英语作文“内容概要”模拟练习(十六)写作指导一、试题分析阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

(主题句与关键词已在原文中标出)Look inside any family home in the evening, and you might see a typical enough scene: Mom and Dad, each on their own laptop or tablet, streaming movies, catching up on work or maybe answering emails on their smart phones.Meanwhile, one child is chatting online with one school friend while texting another. The other is playing a video game with a friend on the other side of the city at the same time. Each member of the family is totally absorbed in his or her own piece of technology.According to some experts, the effect of technology on human relationships is worrying as technology becomes a substitute for face-to-face human relationships. It appears to be the case that many people would much rather spend time with their electronic gadgets(电子产品)than with one another. Young people say it isdifficult to get their parents' attention and they have to compete with smart phones, tablets and other technology.However, a report from the Pew Internet and American Life Project offers a more helpful and encouraging view, suggesting that far from replacing human contact, technology can actually better family relationships. Just over half of the 2,253 people surveyed agreed that technology had enabled them to increase their contact with distant family members and 47 percent said it had improved the communication with the people they lived with. Moreover, even the closest members of families need time away from each other at some point to seek their own interests. Family members who might otherwise have sat in separate rooms can now be in the same one while still occupying a different mental space.Look back at our typical family scene above. Is it any different from four people reading their own books? Or is it driving families apart? Where technology will lead us remains to be seen. Yet there is no need to worry. As a matter of fact, how it affects our family relationships depends on our attitude toward technology.二、下水体会把写作比作游泳,要教会别人游泳,教者自己必须会游泳;教者会游泳,也不能只站在岸上指挥,要教运动员游泳,教练必先下水示范,"下水作文"也由此引申过来。

2020高中英语新高考-英语作文:读后续写进阶指导(含模拟作文训练3篇)

2020高中英语新高考-英语作文:读后续写进阶指导(含模拟作文训练3篇)

2020高中英语新高考读后续写的升华:删繁就简三秋树,领异标新二月花引言我在近日提出读后续写的两个概念。

读后续写的内容可以分为:Be a story; Beyond a story.所谓Be a story,就是把故事说完整即可,不一定要突出一定的道理,类似于情景剧《老友记》,娱乐一下;而Beyond a story是基于一定的主旨(theme)去挖掘人物的内心情感,所有情节的拓展都是服务于主旨。

从浙江的历年读后续写材料和提供的范文看,文章并没有突出一定的主旨,纯粹的Be a story。

譬如2016年的妻子赌气和丈夫旅游中分开,然后迷路。

续写也是最后两人又和好。

包括今年的儿子上学,父母给家里的狗又添了一个伙伴,然后儿子回家。

这里面的故事就是单纯地围绕人物线展开,把故事讲完了,就结束了。

我认为无论是be a story还是beyond a story,只要把人物形象刻画出来了,并且续写部分的想象合情合理,都是达到了高考的写作要求。

但有人说,beyond a story对学生来说,太难了。

其实这就误解了我的意思。

就具体写而言,要想写好,都不容易。

甚至be a story对学生的遣词造句要求更高。

因为你完全靠情节胜出,就要在用词上卯足劲,否则这篇文章就干巴巴的。

不仅仅没有思想,而且语言平庸,味同嚼蜡。

而beyond a story,你虽然语言平庸一点,但是你的思想非常动人,这就弥补了语言表达的匮乏。

以浙江作文题为例材料大致是:丈夫和妻子去旅游,来到森林里,二人意见不合,妻子赌气跑开了。

然后突然发现迷路了。

此时看到头上的飞机,估计是找她,但无法让它看到。

续写部分的范文是:天黑了,妻子找了写果实吃了后睡去;天亮,又和丈夫重逢。

我的想法:这几年的续写材料说实话,不知道是不是命题人觉得学生水平有限,选材都没有一定的思想深度,即使和完形填空比都差一截。

作为考生,如果要从思想上拔高,就要如此考虑,由于文章主要写妻子的活动,人物此时就一个:妻子。

浙江省高考新题型概要写作训练指导

浙江省高考新题型概要写作训练指导

纲要写作[考纲解读 ]供给一篇 350 词之内的短文,要求考生鉴于该短文写出一篇 60 词左右的内容纲要。

[原题剖析 ]1.原文资料 350 词之内,纲要写作 40~80 词。

2.原文以说明文、谈论文为主。

3.纲要,基本就是段落粗心。

每段用一句话归纳,或许两段一个粗心,最多用两句话归纳。

4.要侧重训练自己文章要旨粗心和各段段落粗心的归纳归纳能力。

[写作注意事项 ]1.找重点词和主题句,正确理解、剖析原文重点,归纳段落粗心。

2.各重点的表达要相对独立。

3.各重点之间要有适合的连接。

4.句型力争简单,每句话要表意理解,无空泛、抽象、含混之词。

5.尽量使用短句,慎用长难句。

比如,尽量少用关系代词 which,who 等指引的定语从句,而采纳-ing 形式和-ed形式作定语。

6.多使用归纳性词语,少用详细描绘性词语。

[纲要模板及句型 ]1.表示文章的内容以及研究目的①This paper is aimed at/covers/mainly deals with...②The article focuses on the topic of...2.表示研究的结论①The result showed that...②The author found that...③It was concluded that...3.表示介绍、看法或建议The author suggests/considers that...Suggestions are made for...实战操练 1阅读下边短文,依据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容纲要。

As most children return to school, many affluent families are choosing to pull their children out of themainstream education system altogether in favor of having a tutor at home "Around 50 percent of theinquiries we're getting at the moment are for long-term, daily home tutoring," Steve Spriggs, managingdirector of London-based private tutoring service And, he adds, the trend has grown from families asking forpersonal tutors to replicate the classroom environment in their own homes. Many families that were makingthe inquiries for full-time home tutors, Spriggs said, were either travelling so frequently that sending theirchildren to one school was impractical and others did not want their children to go into boarding school.Home tutoring is nothing new, and many tuition firms also offer extra tutoring services to familieswanting their children to have a little extra help learning aheadof entrance exams at competitive privateschools in the U.K., such as Harrow, St. Pauls or Eton."We always make it clear to parents that we will only offer full-time home schooling for a yearthough," Spriggs explained. "Any more than a year and children start to lose out on what a schoolenvironment can give them, such as social skills and that vital interaction they need –although we try tomitigate that anyway in our home tutoring with sports clubs of museum trips as part of the teachingprogram."Spriggs said that the costs of hiring a full-time tutor would exceed the fees of a top boarding school,which usually charge around 35,00£0 ($54,400) a year. Some families employ two full-time tutors, one tocover humanities and the other to cover science and maths. Devising an educational plan for youngsters inthese situations is not a quick process, however, taking up to six weeks to plan, Spriggs said,with a tutorbeing matched to the child to ensure they are compatible.参照范文: Home tutoring isn ’trare in society. Some rich families choose full-time tutors because of frequenttravelling or because they don ’t want their children to go into boarding sch要oo点l.( 1) Meanwhile, to perform betterin entrance exams, some children need extra tutoring services.( 重点 2) Some tuition firms add some activities to improve the social skills of the children .( 重点 3) Although the costs of home tutoring are high, some families still employ two full-time tutors to ensure their children can gain balanced development.( 重点 4)实战操练 2阅读下边短文,依据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容纲要。

2020年浙江高考英语应用文作文题目以及范文

2020年浙江高考英语应用文作文题目以及范文

2020年浙江高考英语应用文作文题目以及范文假如你是李华。

你校爱尔兰外教Peter因病回国休假。

请你给他写一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:1.询问Peter近况;2.告诉Peter班级最新消息;3.表达祝愿。

注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter;I'm Li Hua, a Chinese student from Class Three, Grade Three. I can't tell you how sorry I felt when I heard that you had to return to Ireland on sick leave. I'm wondering if you are getting better now. And I'm writing to show our genuine concern for your health.Through your tireless work, every one of us has made tremendous progress in English, especially in listening and speaking. So don't worry about our study and all you need to do now is have an adequate rest and a healthy diet. Besides, with the approach of the college entrance exams, we are busy making final preparations. Good news is that we have achieved satisfactory results in a mock examination. We are sure that we will live up to your expectations.We earnestly hope you will recover soon and we are expecting your early return to China. Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 亲爱的彼得;我是李华,来自三年级三班的中国学生。

2020浙江高考英语作文题目及

2020浙江高考英语作文题目及

2020浙江高考英语作文题目及目录2022浙江高考英语作文2021浙江高考英语作文2020浙江高考英语作文高考英语作文汇总●2022浙江高考英语作文题目及题目假定你是李华,你校图书馆新设了小组学习室,请你给留学生Michael写邮件,邀请他同去体验。

内容包括:1.位置和开放时间;2,室内设施和功能注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

续写:情节:女高中毕业生由于毕业要完成志愿时长,因为学校要求参加了社区soup kitchen支援服务,为无家可归之人送去食物。

起初她有些害怕,不知道怎么面对他们,她旁边的 lady 安慰她,她心情稍有缓和。

续写第一段:They came into my direction.I put on a bright smile on my face(大致) 。

续写第二段:我的社会服务时间就依靠这个方法达到了。

试题分析●这是一封邀请信:邀请留学生同学Michael去体验图书馆新开设的“小组学习室”●主要内容:位置和开放时间;设施与功能●可以写些什么:位置:图书馆哪个楼层、哪个区域、在什么功能场所旁边或对面开放时间:合理考虑与学习时间同步或差异化开放(一定要合情合理)设施:建议写与教育现代化相匹配的内容,先进性和实用性相结合,满足超前的学习需要,但不一定写的很具体功能:围绕可以供“小组学习”来说明邀请:希望一起去体验一下(既然是邀请信,这一点是必须写的)Dear Michael,Good news for you! Recently, a newly-furnished section, consisting of eight Group Learning Rooms, has been open to us students in our school library. Located on the third floor beside the online reading rooms, it can be accessible from 8 am till 9 pm throughout the weekdays. Those rooms are equipped with modern electronic facilities, all of which are linked to the Internet. It’s really convenient for us to do some group projects. Why not ask our group members to go and experience it?Early reply and we can reserve one room for our project.Yours,Li Hua●2021浙江高考英语作文题目及题目昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。

2020届新高考高三英语书面表达“概要写作”模拟练习(一)写作指导(含范文)

2020届新高考高三英语书面表达“概要写作”模拟练习(一)写作指导一、原文阅读阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Although some people don't like using automatic hand dryers in restrooms, It may actually be argued that motion-sensing(动作感应)hand dryers are a practical alternative to paper towels(纸巾). I believe that our school would benefit from investing in automatic hand dryers in all the restrooms.First of all, the automatic hand dryer Is very sanitary(卫生的). Instead of pulling on a lever(手柄) touched by a large number of students, users can just stick their hands under the air dryer. No bacteria can get on them because there is nothing to touch.In addition, if the school buys automatic hand dryers, we can save money. There is a terrible waste of paper towels in the restrooms. Students continuously pull on the lever for unneeded towels until the dispensers(自动售货机) are empty. An automatic hand dryer costs about $ 500, with very little additional cost over time while paper towels can cost $ 25 a case, or about $ 500 a year. After just one year, it would pay for itself.Finally, our bathroom is a paper towel mess! There are always piles of paper towels on the floor. Sometimes the extras fall from the dispenser unused. Many times kids make their used towel into a ball and aim for a basket. Butif they miss the target, the paper ball stays on the floor. Paper towels leave so much litter in the restrooms that the restrooms are a mess.People use the hand dryers for just a few seconds, and they think that automatic hand dryers don't dry their hands as thoroughly as paper towels. However, studies have shown that when people dry their hands for at least 30 seconds, automatic dryers actually dry much better than paper towels. It is difficult to get every part of your hand dry using paper towels, but the air can if you take a few extra seconds.As you see there are some good points, let's install automatic hand dryers as soon as possible.二、中心句转换❶Motion-sensing(动作感应)hand dryers are a practical alternative to paper towels(纸巾). I believe that our school would benefit from investing in automatic hand dryers in all the restrooms.--Compared with paper towels, hand dryers have more advantages, which will benefit school in four ways.❷First of all, the automatic hand dryer Is very sanitary(卫生的). No bacteria can get on them because there is nothing to touch.--First, they are clean and healthy because bacteria can't touch kids.❸In addition, if the school buys automatic hand dryers, we can save money. There is a terrible waste of paper towels in the restrooms.--Additionally, it can help school save money.❹Finally, our bathroom is a paper towel mess!--Thirdly, our bathroom can be kept clean and neat❺When people dry their hands for at least 30 seconds, automatic dryers actually dry much better than paper towels. It is difficult to get every part of your hand dry using paper towels, but the air can if you take a few extra seconds.--Besides, it can dry our hands more effectively if we take longer time.❻As you see there are some good points, let's install automatic hand dryers as soon as possible.--Therefore, school is advisable to fix the equipment at once.三、参考范文Compared with paper towels, hand dryers have more advantages, which will benefit school in four ways. (要点1) First, they are clean and healthy because bacteria can't touch kids. (要点2) Additionally, it can help school save money. (要点3) Thirdly, our bathroom can be kept clean and neat(要点4). Besides, it can dry our hands more effectively if we take longer time. (要点5) Therefore, school is advisable to fix the equipment at once.(要点6)四、重点单词1. benefit v.n 1. (doing) sth. benefit sb=be beneficial to sb=be of great benefit to sb=be a great benefit to sb…对…有益do sb good=do good to sb/sth=be good for…=have a positive effect on …对…有/好益处harm sb=do harm to sb=be harmful to sb=have a negative/ bad effect on…be bad for…对…有害/坏处2. It is beneficial for sb to do sth.(某人) 做某事是有益的,有好处的。

高中英语新高考-英语作文:读后续写进阶指导(含原创模拟作文训练3篇)

2020高中英语新高考读后续写的升华:删繁就简三秋树,领异标新二月花引言我在近日提出读后续写的两个概念。

读后续写的内容可以分为:Be a story; Beyond a story.所谓Be a story,就是把故事说完整即可,不一定要突出一定的道理,类似于情景剧《老友记》,娱乐一下;而Beyond a story是基于一定的主旨(theme)去挖掘人物的内心情感,所有情节的拓展都是服务于主旨。

从浙江的历年读后续写材料和提供的范文看,文章并没有突出一定的主旨,纯粹的Be a story。

譬如2016年的妻子赌气和丈夫旅游中分开,然后迷路。

续写也是最后两人又和好。

包括今年的儿子上学,父母给家里的狗又添了一个伙伴,然后儿子回家。

这里面的故事就是单纯地围绕人物线展开,把故事讲完了,就结束了。

我认为无论是be a story还是beyond a story,只要把人物形象刻画出来了,并且续写部分的想象合情合理,都是达到了高考的写作要求。

但有人说,beyond a story对学生来说,太难了。

其实这就误解了我的意思。

就具体写而言,要想写好,都不容易。

甚至be a story 对学生的遣词造句要求更高。

因为你完全靠情节胜出,就要在用词上卯足劲,否则这篇文章就干巴巴的。

不仅仅没有思想,而且语言平庸,味同嚼蜡。

而beyond a story,你虽然语言平庸一点,但是你的思想非常动人,这就弥补了语言表达的匮乏。

以浙江作文题为例材料大致是:丈夫和妻子去旅游,来到森林里,二人意见不合,妻子赌气跑开了。

然后突然发现迷路了。

此时看到头上的飞机,估计是找她,但无法让它看到。

续写部分的范文是:天黑了,妻子找了写果实吃了后睡去;天亮,又和丈夫重逢。

我的想法:这几年的续写材料说实话,不知道是不是命题人觉得学生水平有限,选材都没有一定的思想深度,即使和完形填空比都差一截。

作为考生,如果要从思想上拔高,就要如此考虑,由于文章主要写妻子的活动,人物此时就一个:妻子。

2020年 英语概要写作(浙江省高考英语新题型)专项模拟讲义总复习 (2)


评分原则
1. 本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时,先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,
然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于40或多于80的,从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时,应主要从以下4个方面考虑: (1)对原文要点的理解和呈现情况; (2)应用语法结构和词汇的准确性; (3)上下文的连贯性; (4)对各要点表达的独立性情况。
第四档 (16-20)
理解准确,涵盖绝大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误,但完全不影响意义表达 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使所完成的概要结构紧凑 有个别整句抄自原文
第三档 (11-15)
理解较为准确,涵盖大部分要点 所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有些错误,但不影响意义表达 应用简单地语句间的连接成分,使上下文内容连贯 出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
如果是夹叙夹议的文章,作者对故事的内容发表
了议论,或指出了故事给人们的启示的,我们概括 时要加上这一内容。
说明文写:
l.描写某事物的性质功用。即“对象+性质功用+利好 ” : ( In the passage ) the writer introduces (对象 )to us , especially its ...(性质或功用), from which we know...(对象带来的利好) 2.针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即“问题十解决方 法”: The passage tells us...(问题),including...(方法1),二 ,(方法2 ) and...(方法3). 3.介绍某现象及其原因和结果。即“现象+原因+结果” : ( The author/writer said/talks about)…(现象)of 二because /but...(原因/本质1),and.。 二(原因/本质2).

新高考高三英语书面表达“概要写作”模拟练习(四)写作指导(含范文)

2020届新高考高三英语书面表达“概要写作”模拟练习(四)写作指导一、概要写作完全用自己的一段话(60字,不分段)对他人文章(350字)进行概括和转述。

附:各档次的给分范围和要求二、概写步骤1. 确定文章中心① 中心句统领全文,一般出现在首段;② 关注信息词有助于找到中心句,有些出现在however, but等表转折意义的句子中;有些出现在表承上启下的句式中,如:Here is/are…以及There are several ways to do.. 等;有些出现在表示"…表明" 的动词后,如, find, show, suggest, reveal, indicate, conclude等;有些以疑问句的形式出现;③ 通读全文后,关注并划出反复出现,贯串全文的主题词;④ 体裁以说明文与议论文为主。

2. 文章结构理清段落关系,如:总(段几)-分(段几)-总(段几)3. 划出各小段要点(主题句)① 针对每一段落,省略细节与重复,削减例子内容,划出各小段的主题句;② 划出较重要的次要点(或一两个例子)的关键词或短语, 确保要点齐全;③ 以思维导图的形式建立各小段主题句之间以及各主题句与次要点之间的逻辑关系。

4. 改变表达方式1) 根据已划出的主题句与次要点,对可能转换的关键词(单词,短语与句子)进行复述、整合或重构;2) 确保语法结构和词汇的准确性, 要尽可能把多个信息点整合到一个句子里,将从句变成短语或词块;你可以尽情展示你的词汇量、你的词法与句法功底;3) 转述时要忠于原文,不加入其它观点,忌抄袭原文,同时要注意人称与时态的一致。

4) 综合运用以下技巧进行转换:① 同义近义替换;② 词性转换;③ 句型转换;④ 语态转换;⑤ 反向表达与正话反说;⑥ 句子合并重构;将多个句子合并成一个"多枝共干"式的简单句或复合句。

主要通过句法与词汇,减少使用谓语动语的使用来合并重构。

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