英语写作常见语法错误分析精品PPT课件
改为：The public service advertisements catch everyone’s eyes, which enables us to pay more attention about our lives and societies.
例7．The aging of population bring some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors feel lonely and so on.
改为1： You are likely to succeed if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.
改为2： It’s likely that you will achieve success if you are confident, diligent and intelligent. 改为3： It is likely that you are on the
改为2：You can’t obtain success without your efforts.
改为3：You can’t become successful without your efforts.
改为4： Success is no longer out of reach with your great efforts.
Hale Waihona Puke 英语写作常见错误。1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整 或句子成分多余
2． 词性误用 3．主谓不一致 4．根据中文逐字硬译
5. 名词可数与不可数的误用 6.介词to和不定式符号的混淆 7 .动宾搭配不当 8. 词组搭配错误 9．综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态， 语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误
1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子 成分多余。句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文 等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书 面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表 达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后， 笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．
例1．There are large number of people die from the disasters.
改为1：There are a large number of people who die from the disasters. 改为2：There are a large number of people dying from the disasters. 改为3：A large number of people die from the disasters.
way to success if you have
confidence, diligence and
intelligence.
例2．You can’t success without your efforts.
改为1：You can’t succeed without your efforts.
改为： The aging of population brings about some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors’ sense of loneliness and so on.
例8．Children take care of the seniors should meet their material needs, but this is not enough, concerning their spiritual needs is more important.
改为： She learns knowledge by herself.
例4．The driver of the red car was died on the spot.
改为：The driver of the red car died on the spot.
例5．Helping others we also know the significance of life.
例2．There is a fire happened / broke out. There was occurred a fire in Honghua Hotel.
改为：A fire happened / broke out / occurred.
例3．She learn knowledge depend on herself.
改为： When your opportunity comes, it will be easier for you to attain success.
2． 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech) “词性误用”常表现为：介 词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名 词当动词用等．
例１．It’s likely to success if you have confident, diligent and intelligence.
改为： We also realize the significance of life through helping others.
例6．The public service advertisement catch everyone’s eyes, enable us pay more attention about our lives and societies.
改为： When it comes to taking care of the seniors , children should meet their spiritual needs as well as material needs.
例9．When your opportunity coming, you attain success will be easier.
例7．The aging of population bring some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors feel lonely and so on.
改为1： You are likely to succeed if you have confidence, diligence and intelligence.
改为2： It’s likely that you will achieve success if you are confident, diligent and intelligent. 改为3： It is likely that you are on the
改为2：You can’t obtain success without your efforts.
改为3：You can’t become successful without your efforts.
改为4： Success is no longer out of reach with your great efforts.
Hale Waihona Puke 英语写作常见错误。1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整 或句子成分多余
2． 词性误用 3．主谓不一致 4．根据中文逐字硬译
5. 名词可数与不可数的误用 6.介词to和不定式符号的混淆 7 .动宾搭配不当 8. 词组搭配错误 9．综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态， 语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误
1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子 成分多余。句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文 等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书 面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表 达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后， 笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．
例1．There are large number of people die from the disasters.
改为1：There are a large number of people who die from the disasters. 改为2：There are a large number of people dying from the disasters. 改为3：A large number of people die from the disasters.
way to success if you have
confidence, diligence and
intelligence.
例2．You can’t success without your efforts.
改为1：You can’t succeed without your efforts.
改为： The aging of population brings about some problems, such as the lack of labor, seniors’ sense of loneliness and so on.
例8．Children take care of the seniors should meet their material needs, but this is not enough, concerning their spiritual needs is more important.
改为： She learns knowledge by herself.
例4．The driver of the red car was died on the spot.
改为：The driver of the red car died on the spot.
例5．Helping others we also know the significance of life.
例2．There is a fire happened / broke out. There was occurred a fire in Honghua Hotel.
改为：A fire happened / broke out / occurred.
例3．She learn knowledge depend on herself.
改为： When your opportunity comes, it will be easier for you to attain success.
2． 词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech) “词性误用”常表现为：介 词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名 词当动词用等．
例１．It’s likely to success if you have confident, diligent and intelligence.
改为： We also realize the significance of life through helping others.
例6．The public service advertisement catch everyone’s eyes, enable us pay more attention about our lives and societies.
改为： When it comes to taking care of the seniors , children should meet their spiritual needs as well as material needs.
例9．When your opportunity coming, you attain success will be easier.
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70英语写作中的常见错误PPT课件
• 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末.
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• 例2.The story he told at first sounded very interesting.
• 这个句子意思不明确，会让人感到难以理 解。
• 改为：The story he told sounded very interesting at first.
应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是 典型的主谓不一致. • 改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
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• 例2. Every boy and girl in Grade 6 are eager to win the contest.
2020/9/1ntence Fragments)
• 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的 句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不 完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以 后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.
• 例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
• 不定代词anybody, everybody, each, every, anyone, nobody, somebody等，通常都跟单 数谓语动词。
• 改为：Every boy and girl in Grade 6 is eager to win the contest.
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by Wu Joy
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• 例2.The story he told at first sounded very interesting.
• 这个句子意思不明确，会让人感到难以理 解。
• 改为：The story he told sounded very interesting at first.
应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是 典型的主谓不一致. • 改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
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by Wu Joy
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• 例2. Every boy and girl in Grade 6 are eager to win the contest.
2020/9/1ntence Fragments)
• 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的 句子完全可以被理解.可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不 完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以 后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.
• 例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
• 不定代词anybody, everybody, each, every, anyone, nobody, somebody等，通常都跟单 数谓语动词。
• 改为：Every boy and girl in Grade 6 is eager to win the contest.
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英语写作典型错误例析PPT课件
纠正： 1. I have no difficult in finding your home
difficulty
重复累赘
1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 2. I hope to improve your work better. 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能 再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出 现造句累赘的现象。
I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.
3. I don’t know I should do what. I don’t know what I should do.
方法点拨：要减少中式英语必须做到：
关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
^ chairs, a desk and a bed.
but
whose
The children are playing in the distance, their parents
Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
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difficulty
重复累赘
1. The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it. 2. I hope to improve your work better. 有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能 再出现某一单词，如果学生基本功不够扎实，就常常出 现造句累赘的现象。
I like listening to music very much and every day I read some newspapers as well.
3. I don’t know I should do what. I don’t know what I should do.
方法点拨：要减少中式英语必须做到：
关联词用法错误
I am tired, I must go to bed.
^ so
His living room seemed empty, there were only two
^ chairs, a desk and a bed.
but
whose
The children are playing in the distance, their parents
Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army. Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.
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英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)PPT演示课件
③电视的亮度应调到最低。(turn down )
The TV’s brightness should tbuerntudronwend tdowtnhe
mtiontihmeumm.inimum.
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四、典型错误4
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二、典型错误2 在写作中,逻辑思维混乱.
1. Using Ipods can listen to music and read e-books.(用Ipods可以听音乐和看电子书籍） →Using Ipods , we can listen to music and read e-books. →Ipods can be used to listen to music and read e-books. 2. Through reading can obtain various knowledge. (通过看书能够获得各种各样的知识) →we can obtain various knowledge from reading. → Reading can help us obtain various knowledge.
help us make more friends.
②如果能捐赠一些书给这些孩子，他们就能够获得更多的
知识。
→ If donating some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ If we donate some books to these children, they
can get more knowledge.
→ we donating some books to these children, they
写作常见错误与分析-PPT
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例： The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污 染。) 剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物” 误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。 改为：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
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example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio
,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不
连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example
There are many ways through which we can
become acquainted with the outside world 11
八． 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词 语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这 方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写 作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们 往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不 当的错误比比皆是。
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十． 不连贯(Incoherence) 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结
例： The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污 染。) 剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物” 误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)” 应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。 改为：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
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example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio
,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不
连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example
There are many ways through which we can
become acquainted with the outside world 11
八． 措词毛病(Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词 语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这 方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写 作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们 往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不 当的错误比比皆是。
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十． 不连贯(Incoherence) 不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结
英语写作常见语法错误PPT课件
在上一段落中，划线部分属于句子结构方面的错误。
（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词 and。
（2）sentence fragment。这种断句只能使用在英语 口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。
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• (3) First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one
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5. If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible, we can maintain good physical condition.
6. (指代不清。you 与 we 指代不一致。可改 为：If you try … wherever possible, you can maintain …)
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6. In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so. (in my opinion与I think重复累赘。可改为：I think the owner is … 或：In my opinion, the owner is …)
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. (1) Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. (2) Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
（1）两句话之间不能用逗号隔开，应加上并列连词 and。
（2）sentence fragment。这种断句只能使用在英语 口语、某些文学作品或非正式的写作中。
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• (3) First, fast. You can type 90 to 100 words in one
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5. If you try your best to get more aerobic exercise and practice it whenever and wherever possible, we can maintain good physical condition.
6. (指代不清。you 与 we 指代不一致。可改 为：If you try … wherever possible, you can maintain …)
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6. In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so. (in my opinion与I think重复累赘。可改为：I think the owner is … 或：In my opinion, the owner is …)
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In modern society, computers are becoming more and more popular. They are widely used for different uses. (1) Many people use them to type letters, some people still write letters with a pen. I prefer to type letter on the computer. (2) Because it is fast, correct, and clean.
英语写作常见错误PPT课件
Mixed constructions occur in a sentence when the
writer starts out writing one sentence pattern and
ends up writing another. GUCAS English Depart. Hu
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--If you find that writing is hard, it’s because it is hard. It’s one of the hardest things that people do.
Reason: For a group of words to be a complete sentence, it must have an independent clause with a subject and a predicate.
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End-stop error
I asked the guard for directions she told me the time instead.
--I asked the guard for directions. She told me the time instead.
-- Because Hemingway’s style is simple, his writing is accessible to all readers.
Or: Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers.
英语写作常见错误与分析
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英文写作常见错误PPT课件
processed，apologize，grateful，delay，stock，prompt， first-time，would，note，firm，assure，repeat，records，
amend，accept，track
Please return the ___ form asap so that your order can be processed without any ____.
Homework: (5.2-5.9)
1. In my hometown aren’t very busy. People in my hometown aren’t very busy.
2. Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life.
Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
一、主语错误
3. 主谓错位 1) Reading books can acquire
knowledge.
People can acquire knowledge from books.
We _______be _______ if you could supply bank references. Our normal terms for _____customers are 50% ______. I have spoken to my line manager, and we are pleased to
英文写作常见错误
amend，accept，track
Please return the ___ form asap so that your order can be processed without any ____.
Homework: (5.2-5.9)
1. In my hometown aren’t very busy. People in my hometown aren’t very busy.
2. Keep two full-time jobs is simply impossible. Keeping two full-time jobs is simply impossible.
Being rich doesn’t mean a happy life.
Wealth doesn’t ensure a happy life.
一、主语错误
3. 主谓错位 1) Reading books can acquire
knowledge.
People can acquire knowledge from books.
We _______be _______ if you could supply bank references. Our normal terms for _____customers are 50% ______. I have spoken to my line manager, and we are pleased to
英文写作常见错误
英语写作常见十大语法错误省公共课一等奖全国赛课获奖课件
Teamwork is indispensable if you are not an experienced learner or worker.
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三、时态、语态使用错误
a.情态动词后面加动词原形
1.We can do what we should to do, we can do what we could to do
Education has been made available to more people nowadays, however, many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.
Education has been made available to more people nowadays; however, many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.
Raising standards of literacy is the
government’s priority.
2. To rear a child alone are challenging to any parent.
To rear a child alone is challenging to any parent.
2.Someone think it necessary to refuse to buy Japanese goods.
Someone think it is necessary to refuse to buy
Japanese goods.
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c.介词后面一定要加名词、代词或者从句作宾语。 1.People who stick to be against the behavior of
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三、时态、语态使用错误
a.情态动词后面加动词原形
1.We can do what we should to do, we can do what we could to do
Education has been made available to more people nowadays, however, many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.
Education has been made available to more people nowadays; however, many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.
Raising standards of literacy is the
government’s priority.
2. To rear a child alone are challenging to any parent.
To rear a child alone is challenging to any parent.
2.Someone think it necessary to refuse to buy Japanese goods.
Someone think it is necessary to refuse to buy
Japanese goods.
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c.介词后面一定要加名词、代词或者从句作宾语。 1.People who stick to be against the behavior of
SCI英文论文写作常见语法错误PPT课件
Unclear Pronoun Reference
• All pronouns must refer clearly to definite nouns. Be careful with "It", "They", "That", "These", "Those" and "Which"
• Wrong = Because Tom is less interested in the environment than in economic development, he sometimes neglects it.
– Examples: He accepted the gift. (He received it.) – He excepted the twins. (He did not include them.) – Everyone except Bill. (All but Bill.)
i.e. vs e.g.
Misplaceifiers near the words they describe and be sure the modified words actually appear in the sentence
– Wrong = Many tourists visit Arlington Cementary, where military personnel are buried every day from 9:00 am until 5:00 pm.
– Right = Scientists report no human deaths due to excessive caffeine consumption, although caffeine does cause convulsions and death in certain animals.
英语写作中几种常见的经典错误(新)精品PPT课件
The tasks for this lesson: 1.复合句中缺少必要的连接词
2.逻辑性错误
3. be动词用错 4.主语用错 5. There be 句型用错 6.谓语与非谓语混乱
一、典型错误1
在写作中,复合句缺少相应的连接词。
1. You should do is to adjust yourself. (你所应该做
三、典型错误3 Be 动词使用不当
1.We are often blame the teachers for their strict demands. (我们常常会责备老ar师e 的严格要求) 2.However, other students against the idea. (然而, 其他学生都反对这个观点)
的是调整好自己)
→ What you should do is to adjust yourself.
2. My dream is I can become a super sport star just like Lin shuhao. (我的梦想是成为林书豪一样的运动
明星)
→ My dream is that I can become a super sport star just like Lin shuhao.
The TV’s brightness should tbuerntudronwend tdowtnhe mtiontihmeumm.inimum.
What upsets us most is that many people are not aware of its importance.
2.我们最好要保持放松,这对我们的学习有积极的影响。
We had better keep us relaxed, which will have an active effect on our study.