专题05 读后续写(解析版)
2020届高三山东名校好题速递分项汇编（1）之读后续写读后续写【2020届山东省淄博市高三下学期一模】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
续写的词数应为150左右。
There was a rich couple who was throwing a big New Year party at their house. So they went shopping at the market where everything was of high cost and fixed price. They wanted to maintain their level of standard so they didn’t mind paying for it. After purchasing all they needed, they called a porter to carry everything and drop it at their home. The porter who came was of an old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn’t even able to meet his daily needs.They asked the porter about the charges for delivering their goods to their home. The old porter quoted just $20, well below the market price. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the porter and finally settled for $15. The porter was struggling to make even one time’s meal so he needed anything he could earn.The couple was very happy thinking how well they bargained with the poor porter and paid him $15 in advance and left after giving the porter their address for delivery. They reached their home and one hour passed, and two hours passed, but the porter still didn’t deliver their stuff.The wife started to get angry at her husband, “I always tell you not to trust such person, but you never listen to me. I am sure instead of delivering the goods to our home, he must have disappeared with everything. We must immediately go back to the market to inquire and then to the police station to file the complaint against him.”They both left towards the market. On their way near the market, they saw another porter. They stopped him to inquire about the old porter and noticed that he was carrying their goods in his cart! The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our goods and he was supposed to deliver them. It seems you poor thieves are stealing our goods and going to sell them.”Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife asking.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________【答案】Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife asking, he turned back. The porter replied, “Madam, please calm down. I’m not a thief. That poor old man was sick since last month. He couldn’t earn enough to even have a single meal of the day. Therefo re, he fell down and handed me $15, saying, ‘I have taken an advance for this delivery, and you deliver the goods to the couple’s home.’ Madam, he was poor and hungry, but he was an honest man. I was just on the way to completing the old man’s last delivery to your home.”Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the wife felt so ashamed that she had no courage to look her husband in the eyes. Suddenly she rushed to the market. Half an hour later, the wife came back with some food in her hand. She passed the food on to the porter, and said sorry to the porter, saying that she shouldn’t suspect them, and took them as thieves. At last, the porter took the goods to their house, and the rich couple changed their attitude to the man like the porter.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。
通过阅读所给文章可知，一对富人夫妇为了准备新年聚会去市场不惜高价买了许多物品，然后雇佣了一个搬运工把这些物品运回家。
搬运工是一个年老体弱生活拮据的人，他要价$20低于市场价，而富人夫妇讨价还价后只给$15。
富人夫妇高兴地回家等着老人把物品送来，却迟迟不见老人的身影。
妻子认为上了老人的当，一定老人把他们的物品卖掉了。
回去找老人时却发现他们的物品在另外一个搬运工的车上。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：当搬运工听到生气的妻子问题时……，所以应该写他讲述的实情，老人病了又吃不上饭，这次摔倒了，他把$15给了这个搬运工，请求他把物品送到富人家。
第二段开头是：丈夫听了，眼里含着泪水，……。
下文应该写富人夫妇被老人感动，行动和态度都发生了改变。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
按要求完成写作任务。
本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。
如：calm down, taken an advance, Upon hearing, felt ashamed, changed their attitude等高级词汇；Therefore, he fell down and hand ed me $15, saying, ‘I have taken an advance forthis delivery, and you deliver the goods to the couple’s home.’和She passed the food on to the porter, and said sorry to the porter, saying that she shouldn’t suspect them, and took them as thieves.运用了非谓语动词；the wife felt so ashamed that she had no courage to look her husband in the eyes.运用了so……that句型。
读后续写之 精彩结尾 (新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破)高考英语满分作文读后续写高分突破+万能金句
专题05读后续写之精彩结尾--新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破好的开端需要精彩的结尾，精彩的结尾可以吸引读者的眼球，这是获取高分的关键。
一主题升华1 名言警句式结尾升华主题使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采和说服力，同时也能起到深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以抒发感情和渲染氛围，合理运用名言警句可以为读后续写起到画龙点睛的作用。
同时也应当注意具体文本具体分析，使用名言警句合理得当。
【2022年高考浙江卷1月】One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finishe d our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson’s was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.【译文】有一天，我得到消息，他因重病入院。
热点题型05 读后续写-备战高考英语满分作文万能模板
备战高考英语满分作文万能模板（五）读后续写距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。
以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。
做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。
总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。
在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。
英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。
越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。
另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。
【题型分析与写作方法】题型解析：读后续写是写作的一种新题型，顾名思义就是我们在阅读一篇还未写完的文章之后，按照语段所给的开头写出两个语段（约150词），从而把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。
读后续写不仅要求考生准确使用词汇和语言框架，会合理润色语言，更重要的是，它还要求考生能够明白应该如何整理续写内容，以使得其形成和前文统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。
应该说，这种题型是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，它不仅考查了考生在阅读文章的基础上分析文章逻辑的能力，又考查了考生的创造力、想象力，以及运用准确丰富的语言进行表达的能力。
解题方法：下面是读后续写类作文的写作步骤：1.读文精读文章，确定文章线索。
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，比如，是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”完成续写。
2024年高考英语读后续写：肢体动作描写素材积累1(词-句-文)讲义含解析
《2024年高考英语读后续写高分宝典》专题08读后续写肢体动作描写素材积累（词-句-文）讲义（背诵版）01--肢体动作细节描写——头P1 02--肢体动作细节描写——眼P2 03--肢体动作细节描写——嘴P2 04--肢体动作细节描写——手P3 05--肢体动作细节描写——腿P4 06--肢体动作细节描写——脚P5 07--肢体动作细节描写——手臂P5 08--肢体动作细节描写——手指P601—肢体动作细节描写——头一、肢体动作细节类短语①drop/lower/bend/bow/hang one's head低头②put/hold/bury one's head in one's hands双手抱头③nod one's head点头④shake one's head摇头⑤rest one's head on/against把头靠在……上面⑥scratch one's head挠了挠头⑦head for/towards朝……走去二、按要求完成句子1.史蒂文低着头，眼里含着泪，慢慢地向公交车走去。
Steven walked slowly to the bus,his head down,tears in his eyes.(独立主格结构)2.他的朋友John向他点头微笑。
His friend John nodded his head and smiled at him.3.他心情不好，低下头来掩饰，勉强笑了一下。
Though he was in a bad mood,he dropped/hung/lowered his head to hide it and managed a smile.4.回到家中，他把头埋到被子底下，假装睡着了。
When he got home,he buried his head under the quilt,pretending to be asleep.5.他母亲停下了家务活，满眼诧异地抬起头。
专题05读后续写微技能之“腿”高考英语读后续写微技能
“腿”的写作
13.She managed toc_l_im__b__o_n_tiot and waited pationtly.
她尽力爬上去并且耐心地等待着。
14.A man in black is__fo_l_l_o_w_i_n_g__b_e_h_i_n_d___ bill.
一个穿黑衣男子正在尾随比尔。
home.我妹妹买了些冰淇淋，然后慢悠悠地走回家 。
sneaked into
9.The burglar ______________ the kitchen and stole a dozen eggs. 窃贼潜入厨房并偷走了一打鸡蛋。
“腿”的写作
10.Jane always got home at midnight and
2. 她听到这消息时跳了起来。
She jumped to her feet when she heard the news.
3. 她不耐烦地跺着脚。
She was tapping/stamping her feet impatiently.
“脚”
4. 她不情愿地跟着父母走，拖着步子走。
She dragged her feet as she reluctantly followed her parents.
读 后续写
读后续写微技能之“腿”
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“腿”的表达
use accurate verbs
第1类：站
be on one's feet
站起来
rise to one's feet
站起来
spring/ jump to one's feet 腾的站起来
struggle to one's feet
专题052021新高考英语读后续写模拟专练21-25（翻译+范文）
专题052021新高考英语读后续写模拟专练21-25（翻译+范文）专题5 2021新高考读后续写模拟专练21-25（翻译+范文）新高考读后续写模拟专练21读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
had said about Brady saving his life, but that had been a long time ago. Was he still sharp enough to get them through th is? Brady pulled again, urgently. “OK, big guy,” Steve decided.Brady led them back down the slope and into the trees. Several times the big dog stopped to get his escape route. Often he changed direct ion. How long they’d walked Steve had no idea. He just held onto Brady’s leash with one hand and kept putting one foot in front of the other. He was almost numb when he heard the wonderful sound of rushing water. The river! With a yell the boys ran unsteadily forward until they jumped in cool, running water. “Brady, you did it!”[来源:Many years earlier, my mother knew that she could not send me to college and pay for it. She worked in a retail store and made just enough to pay the bills and take care of the other children at home. If I wanted to go to college, it was up to me to find out how to get there.I found that I qualified for some grants because of the size of our family, my mom’s income and my SAT scores. There was enough to cover school and books, but not enough for room and board. I accepted a job as part of a work-study program. Whilenot attractive, it was one I could do. I washed dishes in the school cafeteria.Just when I thought I was going to drop out of my college career, an angel appeared. Well, one of those that are on earth, without wings. “I heard that you need some help,” he said. “What do you mean?” I asked, trying to figure out which area of my life he meant. "Financially, to stay in school.”“Well, I make it okay. I just have trouble working all these hours and finding time to study.”“Well, I think I hav e a way to help you out.”He went on to explain that his grandparents needed help on the weekends. All that was required of me was cooking meals and helping them get in and out of bed in the morning and evening. The job paid fourhundred dollars a month, twice the money I was making washing dishes. Now I would have time to study.I went to meet his grandparents and accepted the job.My first discovery was his grandmother’s great love of music. She spent hours playing her old, off-key piano. One day, she tol d me I didn’t have enough fun in my life and took it upon herself to teach me the art. Grandma was impressed with my ability and encouraged me to continue. Weekends in their house became more than just books and cooking, they were filled with the wonderful sounds of the out-of-tune piano and two very out-of-tune singers.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
读后续写专题训练05-2021届高三英语二轮复习课件(新高考版)
03 Conception
二条四点
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Paragraph 1: A few minutes later, she stood in front of me with her shoes and socks in her hand.
pretend not to notice her rush to rescue my daughter
Paragraph 2: I finally decided to take Meghan to the park.
3. What might happen after I making this decision? I helped her put on her socks and shoes and took her outside. Meghan was no longer downhearted.
高考英语大二轮复习 专题五 写作提升练5 读后续写
写作提升练(五)读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。
Want to know how to survive a plane crash?What about a terrorist attack?To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation,you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items,i.e.a lighter(打火机),alifestraw(生命吸管) and a raincoat.Right off the place full of danger,your first instinct(本能) might be to search for help the minute you realize you’re in trouble.But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you,instead;doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location.What should you do until then,you ask?Prepare to hunker down(盘腿坐下) for the long run.That’s where your three pieces of survival necessities come intoplay,Stewart says.For one,you should have something to start a fire on you at all times.Fire-starting tools are inexpensive to purchase,and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket.But even without a fancy item,all you really need is something to light the first flame.“You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly(凡士林油) as a fire starter,”Stewart told USA TODAY.“They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark.”Second,you’ll need something to make your drinki ng water fit to drink,such as a canteen(饭盒) that can boil water.Stewart recommends buying a $20 lifestraw,which “can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw.” Any doubt?It could still save your life,St ewart says.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
读后续写素材与练专题(5)续写微技能之好句积累 (1)
优质资源——读后续写素材与练专题（5）续写微技能之好句积累情感类1) At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.一看到这只儿狼，我吓呆了，不敢动弹一步。
2) She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.她感到累极了，坐在溪边，让疼痛的腿放松一下。
3) Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.一听到这个坏消息，她心痛，眼泪直流)4) Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad一听到这个坏消息，她感到十分伤心。
5) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心砰砰跳。
6) When Mary heard the bad news, her eyes widened further and his mouth opened.当Mary听到这个坏消息进，她睁大了眼睛，张大了嘴巴。
7) Filled with fury, Sheldon was unable to utter a single word.Sheldon 充满愤怒；说不出话)8) The whole company is gossiping about the reason for his dismissal.整个公司都在谈论他被免职的原因。
9) After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution.当他知道问题是什么时，他大脑飞速运转，尽力想出一个好办法。
高中英语续写素材-环境描写05 Noon and Sun-读后续写素材之环境描写
专题05 The Description of Noon and Sun——本章节聚焦于正午、烈日、夏日等环境的描写•5-1 The sun was at it’s highest, like a vicious unblinking yellow eye stares down at me from the cloudless sky.The heat beat down on my head like I was bacon under the grill. I could almost smell myself cooking.太阳处于最高点，就像一只恶毒的、不眨眼的黄眼睛从无云的天空中凝视着我。
我的头热得像烤架下的熏肉一样。
我几乎能闻到自己被烤熟的味道。
vicious恶毒的，刻薄的unblinking不眨眼的; 目不转睛的beat down on烤炙bacon咸猪肉; 熏猪肉grill烤架; 一盘烧烤食物; 烧烤，炙烤; 烧，烤，焙;·5-2 In England it's usually cold but not this day, today the sun was at full blast, and I just wished that someone would turn it down, I was dripping sweat from my head to my toe.at full blast以最大音量; 以最大功率dripping湿淋淋的; 油; 滴下; 滴出; 滴水; 含有; 充满; 充溢; drip的现在分词from the head to the toe 从头到脚，这里形容浑身是汗的样子·5-3 In the unrelenting glare of midday the only shadow is that which pools at my feet. The strong sun on my white hair will burn me in minutes if I don't find shelter.几分钟后就会把我烧焦unrelenting持续的; 不缓和的; 势头不减的; 不留情的glare怒目而视; 发出刺眼的光; 刺眼的光; 怒视，瞪眼shadow阴影; 影子; 昏暗处; 背光处; 阴暗处;•5-4 In this heat even the trees appear defeated. Leaves that should be firm and upward tilting droop, flaccid as old lettuce. The soil isn't simply dry, but powdery to the touch.在这么热的天气里，连树都显得颓败了。
读后续写素材与练专题(5)续写微技能之好句积累
读后续写素材与练专题（5）续写微技能之好句积累情感类1) At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.一看到这只儿狼，我吓呆了，不敢动弹一步。
2) She felt exhausted and sat by the stream, resting her aching feet.她感到累极了，坐在溪边，让疼痛的腿放松一下。
3) Upon hearing the bad news, her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.一听到这个坏消息，她心痛，眼泪直流)4) Upon hearing the bad news, she felt extremely sad一听到这个坏消息，她感到十分伤心。
5) When the host announced that she won the prize, her heart was thumping with excitement.当主持人宣布她获奖时，她激动得心砰砰跳。
6) When Mary heard the bad news, her eyes widened further and his mouth opened.当Mary听到这个坏消息进，她睁大了眼睛，张大了嘴巴。
7) Filled with fury, Sheldon was unable to utter a single word.Sheldon 充满愤怒；说不出话)8) The whole company is gossiping about the reason for his dismissal.整个公司都在谈论他被免职的原因。
9) After he knew what the problem was, his mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution.当他知道问题是什么时，他大脑飞速运转，尽力想出一个好办法。