2019届高考英语二轮复习与策略讲练:专题2 概要写作

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3专题二 概要写作概要写作作为浙江英语高考新题型,就是对所读过的文章简要概括,写出文章的中心大意,也称之为摘要。写概要时,读者要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来,而不是抄袭文章的原句,更不是把细节性信息作为中心,而是要通过对文章中的单词、词组和句子进行合理转换,对文章的具体信息进行概括,再用合适的语言表述出来。这一题型主要考查学生对文章主旨大意的概括和准确获取关键词的能力,同时考查学生用简洁的语言概括文章重要信息的能力以及对文章整体结构的把握能力。因此,概要写作是基于阅读理解和书面表达的,是二者的有机结合体,是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁。[选材特点]1.所需阅读的短文词数在350以内;2.所选材料体裁没有限制,以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。[评分参考]阅卷时主要考虑以下内容:1.对原文要点的理解和呈现情况;2.应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;3.上下文的连贯性;4.对各要点表达的独立性情况。注意:理解准确,涵盖全部要求,完全使用自己的语言,准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇,得分相应比较高。相反,如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象,得分档次将会大大降低;所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。 23[写作步骤]1.仔细阅读原文,掌握文章的主旨大意。在阅读过程中,要注意搜寻要点,如议论文中的论点、论据,记叙文中的发展、高潮、结局等。2.列出文章的要点和各段落的主题句。可以用下划线标记,也可做笔记,将要点逐一列出。3.分析原文的内容和结构,将内容分项扼要表述,并注意在结构上的顺序。4.写出初稿。根据列出的要点和对原文的理解,用自己的语言组织内容,尝试写出概要。5.修改、定稿。认真阅读初稿,对照原文,检查是否漏掉重要内容。检查并确定拼写、语法、标点正确无误。检查是否符合规定的词数要求。[方法技巧]在掌握一定的解题步骤后,为了顺利完成概要写作,学生在写作时还需要注意以下方法技巧。1.要点齐全。概要写作主要考查学生概括文章主旨大意和准确获取关键信息的能力,关键信息获取不准确往往导致所写概要要点不齐全。要点全面是评分的重要方面,因此学生要训练自己的语篇能力和阅读能力,既把握文本的整体和部分又把握它们之间的逻辑关系。2.精练简洁。精练指的是概括的内容要高度浓缩。学生可以利用概括的方法对文本内容进行提炼,用删略的方法去换不重要或者不必要的细节。简洁指的是所使用的语言简练。学生可以用抽象的、概括性的语言代替具体形象的语言。3.灵活转换。语言转换就是用不同的词或句式来表达与原有表达内容相同的意义,且重新表达后能做到简单易懂。灵活转换包括语言换说和句子重构。语言换说可以通过同义、近义和反义变换来替换需要被替换的词汇;句子重构可以改变原有句子中个别词和词组在句子中充当的语法成分或变换句式来实现。[概要写作四项原则]1.概要写作时,一定要使用第三人称。2

32.概要写作时,一定不可加入自己的观点。3.概要写作时,一定不可对原文内容加以评论。4.概要写作时,一定不要引入与原文内容无关的信息。[写作要求]阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Getting rid of dirt,in the opinion of most people,is a good thing.However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th century,people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease,as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538,the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry Ⅳ,King of France,was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath,the King ordered that,to avoid the attack of disease,the nobleman should not go out.Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long­lived,dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet,it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea:Clothes need to be whiter than white,cloths ever softer,surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt,however,gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first­time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt,which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary,Mary Ruebush,an American immunologist (免疫学家),encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.【经典范文】People have mixed opinions about dirt on our skin.(要点1)For a long time in 2

3history,people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.(要点2)However,people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.(要点3) Yet,some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.(要点4)【范文点拨】(一)要点分析1.文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句,亮明了总的观点:“However,there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.”换句话说:“Different people have different attitudes towards dirt.”再结合下文谈到的主题可知“Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on the skin.”范文中的要点1“People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.”概括非常精练。2.第二段主要谈到了在16世纪,人们认为“dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease”尤以英、法两国的贵族为代表。结合第三段第一句“Though the belief in the merit(好处) of dirt was long­lived,dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.”可知,直到18世纪之前,人们都认为dirt是很“友好的”,有助于预防疾病。范文中的要点2“For a long time in history,people of some European countries believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.”很好地总结了这些要点。3.第三段用“Though”引出人们对dirt观点的转变“...since the 18th century.Scientifically speaking,cleaning away dirt is good to health.”再结合本段最后一部分“Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea...”可得出要点3“However,people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.”4.文章最后一段第一句指出,现在人们对于dirt的态度还是有所不同,“On the contrary”引出专家的观点,一位免疫学家认为dirt有助于增强免疫系统。这一观点得到了一些支持。范文中的要点4“Yet,some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.”表达很恰切。(二)要点连接文章概要,在写完了要点之后,下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的2

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高考英语(浙江专版)二轮复习与策略专题限时集训4 概要写作 训练2

高考英语(浙江专版)二轮复习与策略专题限时集训4 概要写作 训练2

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阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Peter loved to shop used articles.Almost a month ago,he bought a popular word

game that used little pieces of wood with different letters on them.As he was

purchasing it,the salesgirl said,“Oh,look,the game box hasn't even been opened

yet.That might be worth some money.”

Peter examined the box and,sure enough,it was completely covered in factory­sealed plastic.And he saw a date of 1973 on the back of the box.

“You should put that up for auction(拍卖) on the Internet,and see what

happens,” the salesgirl said.

“Yes,you're right.People like something rare,”Peter agreed.“I can't imagine

there being very many unopened boxes of this game still around 40 years later.”

“Don't forget to tell me if you sell it,” the salesgirl smiled.

“No problem,” Peter said.

After he got home,Peter went online to several auction websites looking for his

2019届高三英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习(13)概要写作一

2019届高三英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习(13)概要写作一

概要写作一

1、阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

We all have daily problems with technology, but how many of us can fix them?

Mya Le Thai, a scientist from the University of California, Irvine recently

discovered a process that might result in batteries that could last forever.

Thai said she was frustrated that the batteries for her wireless devices

degraded. Over time, they failed to charge fully. Thai did not like to keep her

wireless laptop connected to an electrical outlet. She decided to do something about

that problem. At first, she and her team at UC Irvine thought about inventing a new

battery. But as they experimented, Thai discovered something that might permit

lithium-ion (锂离子)batteries to last forever. Lithium-ion batteries power most

wireless devices. Over time, the batteries lose the ability to hold a charge. One

2019高考英语二轮练习专项-书面表达写作步骤

2019高考英语二轮练习专项-书面表达写作步骤

2019高考英语二轮练习专项-书面表达写作步骤

新编《英语课程标准》和《考试说明》都对英语的书面表达能力有基本的要求。要求学生根据情景写出百字左右的短文,其形式各异。根据以上的要a求我们在平时的教学中采用了'六步法'的写作模式,收到了良好的效果。

例【三】请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文,词数120字左右。

香港位于中国的东南部,面积1045平方公里,人口600多万,被称为东方明珠。1842年鸦片战争后,当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。现在她已经回到祖国的怀抱,而且前景会更加美好。

1〕仔细审题:本文属于说明性文章。

2〕理清要点:

〔1〕位置、面积和人口

〔2〕鸦片战争后香港的处境

〔3〕97年后回到祖国怀抱

〔4〕其前景美好

生词:明珠pearl鸦片opium

3〕译写单句

a)HongkongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1045km2.Herpopulationismorethan6million.

b)ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.

c)In1997shereturnedtomotherland.

d)Herfutureisverybeautiful.

4〕连句成篇

HongkongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1045km2andpopulationismorethan6million.

ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997shereturnedtomotherland,andherfutureisverybeautiful.

5〕润色或文

HongkongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Shehasanareaof1045km2andhasapopulationofmorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownasthePearloftheEast.

2019版高考英语二轮(江苏专用)教师用书:第1部分 专题5 第2讲 如何写好正文和结尾 Word版含解析

2019版高考英语二轮(江苏专用)教师用书:第1部分 专题5 第2讲 如何写好正文和结尾 Word版含解析

第二讲 如何写好正文和结尾

(对应学生用书第97页)

一、发表看法

1.写作步骤:发表观点→阐述理由或论据→总结、重申观点。

2.注意事项:(1)做这种题型,发表观点或看法后不要马上结束,一般都要说出你持这种观点或看法的理由,否则,文段就没有说服力。(2)列出理由时不一定要直接说because,可以间接地陈述,要不露痕迹地说出理由,因为这是在写作,而不是在回答简答题。

3.常用句式

赞成:

①I maintain/hold the opinion that...我持……观点。

②I am in favour of the idea that...我赞成……这个想法。

③I strongly approve of the idea/view/position/brief/point that...

我强烈地赞成……

④I firmly support the idea/practice that...

我坚定地支持……这个想法/做法。

⑤From my point of view/From my personal perspective/From my personal

angle alone/As far as I am concerned,I prefer...

就我而言,我赞成……

⑥The opinion is both sound and reasonable.

这个想法合情合理。

⑦From my personal perspective,understanding plays an important role in our

daily life.

在我看来,理解在日常生活中扮演着重要角色。

⑧As far as I am concerned,it's essential for people to care about others.

在我看来,关心他人是非常重要的。

反对:

①I am opposed to the idea that...

2019届高考英语(江苏专版)二轮复习与策略讲练:第1部分 专题3 类型4 人物介绍

2019届高考英语(江苏专版)二轮复习与策略讲练:第1部分 专题3 类型4 人物介绍

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3类型4| 人物介绍考查要点方法技巧

1.人物最显著的性格、品德特征。

2.人物的重大、有影响的经历。

3.人物最杰出的功绩、贡献、成

就。4.人物成长的时代背景。1.把握事件发生的时间、空间及顺序。

2.理清事情发生的背景、起因、过程

及结果。3.感悟人物的情感和心理活动。

(2016·全国乙卷·A)

You probably know who Marie Curie was,but you may not have heard of

Rachel Carson.Of the outstanding ladies listed below,who do you think was the most important woman of the past 100 years?Jane Addams(1860-1935)Anyone who has ever been helped by a social worker has Jane Addams to thank.Addams helped the poor and worked for peace.She encouraged a sense of community (社区) by creating shelters and promoting education and services for

people in need.In 1931,Addams became the first American woman to win the Nobel Peace Prize.Rachel Carson (1907-1964)

If it weren't for Rachel Carson,the environmental movement might not exist today.Her popular 1962 book Silent Spring raised awareness of the dangers of pollution and the harmful effects of chemicals on humans and on the world's lakes and oceans.Sandra Day O'Connor (1930-present)When Sandra Day O'Connor finished third in her class at Stanford Law School,in 1952,she could not find work at a law firm because she was a

江苏专用2019高考英语二轮培优复习 专题五 书面表达 第二讲 任务型作文之一写好文章概要习题.doc

江苏专用2019高考英语二轮培优复习 专题五 书面表达 第二讲 任务型作文之一写好文章概要习题.doc

第二讲 │ 任务型作文之一——写好文章概要

从近五年江苏高考分析,高考书面表达主要考查读写任务型作文。读写任务型作文的写作内容一般分为两部分:写作内容一为摘要写作,即概括短文大意;写作内容二,就某个主题发表个人看法。“读写任务”是“读”和“写”的有机结合,“读”的材料是为后面的“写”提供情景;同样,“写”也是对“读”的材料的思考和延伸。

读写任务型作文主要以记叙文和议论文为主。从近五年江苏高考书面表达来看,都是议论性的读写任务型作文。

如何写记叙文概要

记叙文体的阅读材料,在写概要前,除明确文章主题外,还应抓住六个要素:when,where,who,what,why,how。在这六个要素中,所占内容比重较大的是what,学生最容易犯的错误就是把what写得太详细。一般来说,记叙文的故事概要可以用这样的模板来表示:

1.没有寓意只单纯介绍事件的记叙文摘要要素:

人物——事件——结果

2.篇末有表示文章内涵的记叙文摘要要素:

人物——事件——结果——启示

记叙文摘要可以用下列句式开头:

The writer tells us his experience...

The author shares his experiences...

From the passage,we know that...

The passage tells us that...

当然,不是说每个故事概要都包含how或why,有时两者选其一即可。

请阅读下面短文,然后以约30个单词概括下文的主要内容。

A__father__came__home__from__work__late,tired__and__exhausted.He

worked day and night,hoping to earn more money for his only child.His__5-year-old__daughter was waiting for him at the door.

2019届高考英语二轮复习经验交流型写作解题指导(3页,word版)

2019届二轮复习经验交流型写作解题指导

假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文:

参加英语角的益处;

坚持写英语日记的作用;

英文阅读网站(Enjoy Reading)对你的帮助。

注意:1. 词数:120-150;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

1.思路:

1.介绍自己获奖,告知接下来要将自己的学习方法分享给大家。

2.结合信息,把方法分成三点:

参加英语角。(认识很多牛人,提高了词汇和语言组织能力)

坚持写日记。(运用所学的表达方式,正好起巩固作用)

阅读英文网站。(阅读不同的文章,另外读写不分家,还提高了写作能力)

3.总结,希望给予的方法对大家有帮助。

2.词语的表达:

归因于:due to

句子结构:sentence structure

充分利用:make the most of

3.句型的多样性:

我能够跟很多牛人交流想法。

I can exchange my ideas with students who are undoubtedly brilliant

频繁的使用英语可以增加词汇和提高句子结构

Using English frequently helps boosting/improving

/enriching my

vocabulary and improving sentence structure.

多亏英语网站,我可以在不同的层次上阅读不同领域的文章

Thanks to the English reading websites, I have read so many articles

whose contents are in various fields and at different levels

4.连词成句:

2019届高考英语二轮复习 闯关导练 第四部分 写作专项演练 课时29 图表类作文(2)

2019届高考英语二轮复习 闯关导练 第四部分 写作专项演练 课时29 图表类作文(2)

1.命题特点

(1)体裁上多以议论文和说明文为主。

(2)根据图表呈现方式的不同,可分为柱状图、曲线图、数字表格和饼状图四类。

①柱状图多要求学生通过柱状图中的数据和提示内容写一篇短文,属于比较、对照类。也可根据提示写成议论文;

②曲线图常用来表示事物的变化发展趋势。其特点是信息集中,一目了然;

③数字表格是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表;

④饼状图则是以圆内扇形的大小表示总体内部结构的变化。

2.解题关键

(1)认真分析图表的含义,弄清图表中所含的信息及不同信息间的关系。例如:柱状图用来表示各种事物的变化情况及相互关系,要求考生通过宽度相等的柱形的高度或长度差别来判断事物的动态发展趋势,因此考生应密切关注坐标线上的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明与文字。饼状图表示各事物在总体上所占的比例及相互关系,旨在要求考生准确理解并阐述一个被分割成大小不等切片的饼状图所传达的信息。对此考生应清楚掌握部分与整体、部分与部分之间的相互关系,这种关系通常以百分比的数字形式给出。

(2)筛选数据,构思基本框架。从图表中筛选能说明图表主题思想的典型数据,其内容不必全部描述,突出重点,并抓住图表的极端点。例如:最大或最小、最多或最少、最好或最差。要善于抓住总的规律、趋势,归纳增减率。

(3)编列文章的提纲。根据文章的提纲,将各段的提纲内容扩展成段落,然后将各个段落组成文章,注意段与段之间的衔接与过渡。在时态的选择上要注意,特定时间用过去时,经常出现的情况或自己的评述用一般现在时。

3.常用句式

(1)开门见山,点明主题的常用句式:

①Last week, we made/did/carried out a survey on...上周我们进行了关于……的调查。

②As is shown in the chart... has been on the increase/decrease.如图表所示,……一直在上升/下降。

2019届高三英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习:(13)概要写作一Word版含答案

2019届高三英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习:(13)概要写作一Word版含答案

概要写作一

1、阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

We all have daily problems with technology, but how many

of us can fix them? Mya Le Thai, a scientist from the University of

California, Irvine recently discovered a process that might result

in batteries that could last forever.

Thai said she was frustrated that the batteries for her wireless

devices degraded. Over time, they failed to charge fully. Thai did

not like to keep her wireless laptop connected to an electrical

outlet. She decided to do something about that problem. At first,

she and her team at UC Irvine thought about inventing a new

battery. But as they experimented, Thai discovered something

that might permit lithium-ion (锂离子)batteries to last forever.

Lithium-ion batteries power most wireless devices. Over time, the

高考英语二轮复习:概要写作专练(含答案)

2022届高考英语二轮复习:概要写作专练

A

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

With the rising cost of college tuition, many students compete fiercely to win

scholarships each year. There are many scholarship platforms to help students find

good scholarships. These grants help students with tuition, housing, and expenses.

They may be sponsored by the school, donated by an individual, or sponsored by a

corporation. Some are need-based, while others are awarded strictly based on

academic performance.

The most common types of scholarships are those awarded by the college or

university, and most students applying to a college also apply for any scholarships

that are available. Leadership and academic scholarships are the two most common

types of scholarships awarded by colleges. A leadership scholarship is awarded for

participation in school and extra-curricular activities, as well as for academic

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