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美文赏析
Why are they good compositions?
行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 书写规范工整，整体效果好。
小试牛刀
Write at least three complex sentences
7. 他建议学校孩子要避免过度用眼，多做户外活动。
He suggests that school children avoid overusing their eyes and do more outdoor activities.
8. 我越努力，取得的进步就越大。
The harder I study, the more progress I will make.
I make it a rule to take exercise regularly, which is good for my health. 3. 使我高兴的是，我提出的建议被立刻采纳了。 What made me delighted was that the suggestion I put forward was adopted immediately.
近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点
行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 书写规范工整，整体效果好。
火眼金睛
1.
Which one is better? ings while doing her work. （状从省略） (B) She always sings when she does her work. (A)
4. 只有以这种方式， 我们才能进步。 Only in this way, can we make progress. 5.坐在电脑前，我不知道怎样操作电脑。 Sitting/seated in front of the computer, I don’t know how to use it. 6.正如图中所展示的，大部分的学生都戴眼镜。 As can be seen in the picture, most of the students are wearing glasses.
but for your help.
（虚拟语气）
概括总结 What are complex sentences?
1.尽量采用三类从句。
2.变换句式 如祈使句，倒装句，省略句。
3.非谓语， 强调句，虚拟句及其他句式。
熟能生巧
Translate the sentences
1. 通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的。 It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using the Internet. 2.我经常锻炼身体，这样对我的身体很有好处。
（2009 北京）
1.We bicycled to the suburbs to plant talking and laughing all the way trees,______________________ (一路上有说有笑）. Having finished the work 2.____________________________( 在完成工 作之后）， we put up a board reminding With the work finished people to protect the tree. Seeing the lines of trees 3._______________________ (看到一排排的 树），we all have a sense of achievement. 4. We make it our duty to protect and beautify our environment. ______________________________________ （我们把保护环境和美化环境当作是我们的责 任。）
2. 学习收获：了解异国文化，与 外国人直接交流
• Learning English not only increases my awareness of foreign cultures but also helps me to communicate with English-speaking people and to make more new friends． • What I learned is some foreign cultures and customs which are very fascinating. I can also communicate with English native speakers freely, which helps me to make more new friends.
3.__________________________________________________
1. 学习方法：多记有用句型，多 阅读英文报刊;
• I think it useful to memorize some important sentence patterns, which can be used to improve your English writing. • I spend a lot of time reading newspapers and magazines, which helps to enlarge my vocabulary.
3.
(A) If you study hard, you will make rapid progres
(B) Study hard, and you will make rapid progress. (祈使句+ and)
To his surprise, the little girl knows so many (A) things. 4.
After everything was finished, they began to chat with the elderly people.
2.
(B) With everything finished, they began to chat with the elderly people. (with复合结构)
(B) What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. (名词性从句）
(A)
5.
I passed the physics exam because of your help.
(B) I wouldn’t have passed the physics exam
3. 学习困难：经常遗忘所学词汇;
• However，sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have learned． • However, what made me discouraged is that I have difficulty memorizing all the English words I have learned.
Homework
Complete the composition!
Thanks for listening !
Write 3 Complex Sentences according to the key points.
1.__________________________________________________
2.__________________________________________________