初中英语作文写作指导-推荐

中考作文注意事项一、徐老师的忠告：近几年中考英语作文以看图写话的形式为主，重点考察学生运用一般过去时态讲述过去故事的书面表达能力。

因此，be 动词一律使用was , were; 行为动词一律用动词的过去式形式；重点记忆不规则动词的过去式；注意故事的书写要自始至终使用过去时态；不提倡使用直接引语；不提倡使用没见过和没把握的句子；为提高句子水平，尽量使用几个主从复合句，像宾语从句、定语从句、时间状语从句或原因状语从句，并列句和感叹句也会为你的文章增色，但不能因为上难度而出语法错误，得不偿失，看自己的能力而定；怕出错，就全使用小短句子，正确无误是第一追求；注意每张图片的内容都要有专门的句子体现，要点不能漏掉；每个单句句子都要符合简单句的五种基本类型之一：主系表；主语谓语；主谓宾；主谓宾宾；主谓宾宾补；注意主谓一致；注意避免标点符号、大小写、拼写错误等低级失误；字数要足；打草稿是个拿卷面分的好办法，也避免低级失误。

将草稿上的作文抄到试卷上之后，再对照一下，不要漏掉字或出现书写单词不完整的现象。

二、中考作文评分标准：1）本大题共10分。

2）卷面书写潦草不工整，可酌情从总得分中扣1分。

3）拼写错误每两个扣0.5分。

同样错误不重复计算。

4）书面表达可分为四个等级：（1）9-10分语句通顺，内容完整，书写工整，无语法错误，字数符合要求。

（2）7-8分内容较完整，书写较工整，语法错误较少（1-2处），字数基本符合要求。

（3）5-6分语句尚通顺，书写较工整，3-4处语法错误，字数在60词左右。

（4）5分以下作文内容不完整语句不够通顺，语法错误较多，书写一般，字数在50词以下。

三、类型举例：1. 做好事Tom is a good boy who likes helping others/who is always ready to help others. One day , on his way to school/ on his way back home, he found an old man who looked worried. He went upto him and asked him what was wrong./if he could help him. The old man said that he didn’t know how to get back home. Tom helped him to ask the policeman for help. Then Tom took him to his home by bus. He took good care of the old man . At last/In the end, the old man got back home and met his family. They thanked Tom very much. Tom got to shool late/got home late but he was very happy. What a good /kind boy! We should learn from him./ Helping others is to help ourselves.2. 节日：Children’s Day 儿童节；Teachers’ Day 教师节；April Fool’s Day 愚人节National Day 国庆节；New Year’s Day 元旦；Spring Festival 春节；Mid-Autum Day 中秋节；May Day 五四青年节Christmas Day 圣诞节；Thanksgiving Day 感恩节；Mother’s Day 母亲节；Father’s Day 父亲节Tom is a good boy who loves his parents. Yesterday was Women’s Day. He wanted to do something for his mother. He told his father what he thought and his father agreed with him. They began to work. Tom swept the floor and his father did some washing/ washed the clothes. While his father was cooking, he put the dishes onto the table. When his mother came back home, he found some delicious food on the table. How happy she was! She had a wonderful Women’s Day.类似一篇：I have a good friend named Jim. He is a fifteen-year-old boy. Yesterday was Women’s Day, and his mother was busy outside. He made up his mind to do something for her. So he cleaned out the house in order to make his mother happy. At first, he cleaned the floor and made it as clean as possible. He listened to the music that was written by Xu Lang , one of the most popular singers in China. Then he did the dishes after listening. It took him a little time to do it. At last, he cooked something nice. After fifteen minutes, his mother came back home .He said “Happy Women’s Day!”His mother was very happy to see some food on the table. Jim didn't feel tired in the slightest. What a good boy!3.做错事One day，Xiao Ming and his father went to Zhong Shan Park. Xiao Ming was very happy. While they were walking, Xiao Ming’s father found a fence and decided to jump over the fence so that they could get to the zoo quickly . Xiao Ming didn’t agree with his father, but his father jumped over the fence. Xiao Ming was very worried. Then a policeman came to his father and told him that he broke the traffic law. Xiao Ming’s father felt very embarrassed and bowed to the policeman,“Sorry, I won’t do it again.”It’s dangerous to break the traffic law./rules.另一篇：Last Sunday, my father and mother took me to the zoo. It was a very interesting zoo. We took a walk and enjoyed the beautiful sights /flowers in the zoo the whole morning. At noon, we had a picnic on the grass. Finally, I couldn’t finish the cake with cream. I wanted to throw it away. But my mother told me not to do it. Then, I wanted to give it to the monkeys. My mother said it was a good idea. At that time a worker at the zoo came up to us and told us not to do it .Then we realized our mistakes. We should obey the rules and try to protect the animals.4.活动Tom is a good boy who likes playing soccer. Last Tuesday, he was very busy. In the morning ,he got up at six thirty and then had breakfast. He went to school on foot because his house was very near to the school. After he had four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon, he was very tired. After school , he played soccer with his friends. They had a good time. After supper/dinner, he had to do his homework. It took him two hours to finish it. He watched TV and read newspapers. He didn’t go to bed until ten o’clock. He was tired but happy. What a busy day!（如果是周末或假期活动，只需要改变时间和活动内容即可）另一篇：Xiao Ming’s Busy DayLast weekend, Xiao Ming had a very busy day. In the morning, his father told him to get up to read English. After that, he had to practise playing the piano. His mother stood behind him and made him play again and again. In the afternoon, his father took him to an art school. He learned how to paint there. The whole day, Xiao Ming had no time to have a rest. He was so tired that he fell ill in the evening. He was taken to hospital by his parents. What a poor boy！In my opinion, Chinese parents are too strict with their children. They expect their children to become successful in the future. The children are too busy learning all kinds of t hings all day. I think it’s bad for them.四、更多举例：Sunday,May30th Sunny/Fine It was May 30th yesterday. When I woke up, I looked at the clock. Oh, dear! It was 8:00. I got up as quickly as possible. I had no time to eat breakfast, so I went to school without it. With the bag on my back, I quickly went to school by bike. When I got to the school gate, the gate was closed. Oh! I realized that it was Sunday. Howembarrassing it was!。