2018版高考英语二轮专题限时集训：29 短文改错(Ⅳ)

专题限时集训(二十九) 短文改错(Ⅳ)

(对应学生用书第144页)

A

(2017·汕头市教学质量监测)Friendship is very important to everyone，especially to me.Now，I would like to describe one of my best friends whose name are Petou.The first reason why I consider him as my best friend is because he has a very warm personality.

He always smile politely at me, make me absolutely delighted when I meet him.What's more，honest is his good manner—he never lies me.In addition，he is the caring and compassionate friend.He's willing to help me whenever I have in trouble.

The second reason is that Petou is really excellently.He excels at every subject，which makes me admire him very much.

To summarize，Petou has a very good personality.Besides，he has a great ability to help other friends and him.I really like him.

【答案】

Friendship is very important to everyone，especially to me.Now，I

would like to describe one of my best friends whose name are is

Petou.The first reason why I consider him as my best friend is because that

he has a very warm personality.

He always smile

smiles

politely at me，

make

making

me absolutely delighted

when I meet him.What's more，honest

honesty

is his good manner—he never

lies ∧

to me.In addition，he is

the

a

caring and compassionate friend.He's

willing to help me whenever I have ﹨i n trouble.

The second reason is that Petou is really excellently

excellent

.He excels at

every subject，which makes me admire him very much.

To summarize，Petou has a very good personality.Besides，he has a

great ability to help other friends and him

me

.I really like him.

第一处：are→is。考查主谓一致。whose引导的定语从句的先行词是代词“one”，因此谓语动词应该用单数。

第二处：because→that。考查名词性从句。主语为名词reason，表语从句中的连接词要用that。

第三处：smile→smiles。考查动词时态和主谓一致。由后文“which makes me”可知，主句应用一般现在时；主语为第三人称单数，谓语动词应该用单数。第四处：make→making。考查非谓语动词。make与前面的谓语动词之间无连词，故此处应用现在分词短语作结果状语。

第五处：honest→honesty。考查名词。形容词不能作主语，应该用名词。

第六处：lies后加to。考查固定用法。lie to sb.意为“对某人说谎”。

第七处：the→a。考查冠词。此处表示他是一个热心并且有同情心的人，表示

泛指，应该用不定冠词。

第八处：删除in。考查介词。句意：无论何时我有困难，他都愿意帮助我。have trouble意为“有困难”，in多余。

第九处：excellently→excellent。考查形容词。作is的表语应该用形容词。第十处：him→me。考查代词。Petou能帮助别人也能帮助我。

B

(2017·湖南省部分重点中学考前演练)I usually go to school by bike.And this morning I went on foot.On the way to school，I happen to witness an accident.A middle­aged woman was knocked down by a car while crosses the street.Seeing that was happening on the scene，I made rush for the woman to help.One passer­by got out of his cellphone and called the police.I helped to carry the woman to safe and dress her wound. Around ten minutes late, an ambulance arrived and took him to hospital.I continued my way to school，feeling happily that I could offer some help in time.

【答案】

I usually go to school by bike.And

But

this morning I went on foot.On

the way to school，I

happen

happened

to witness an accident.A middle­aged

woman was knocked down by a car while crosses

crossing

the street.Seeing

that what was happening on the scene，I made

∧

a rush for the woman to