2017上海静安高三二模高分作文
【附部分高分作文】如山若水，成就圆融之美一位先哲说，人的一生应努力追求这样的境界：为人如山，处事若水。
山仁，水智；山静，水动。
山，非山，而是一种沉稳厚重，坚毅不拔的人格态度与心灵的安静；水，非水，而是一种忍耐包容，圆润柔和的处事方式与变化的灵巧多端。
为人如山，处世若水，岂不善哉？你可曾记得山涛？曾是竹林七贤之一的他，并没有像其他诸君一样，在与权贵的斗争中，在与世俗的纠缠中被现实磕得头破血流。
他选择了妥协。
他选择如水一般在新的现实中继续他兼济苍生的人生理想，匡扶黎民。
他又用他山一般的意志，使自己的心不受权贵的侵扰。
虽然其余几位竹林“六贤”的精神也值得我们佩服，但我们不禁扼腕叹息：世间再无嵇康的《广陵散》了……其实：山涛进一步便是嵇康，嵇康退一步便是山涛。
老子《道德经》云：上善若水，水善利万物而不争，处众人之所恶……说的不正是山涛？他既有水的圆融又有山的坚毅，成就了圆融之美。
“名乎利乎道路奔波休碌碌，来者往者溪山清静且停停。
”这是清代著名学者李渔为“且停亭”拟就的亭联。
李渔经历宦海沉浮之后，晚年在山中专心于修复花木，烹茶煮酒，获得了内心的平静。
事实上，每个人都会经历起起落落。
奋斗与挫折，如山一般沉静，如水一般保持心的灵动。
且行，且停，才能找到自己的平衡点。
《论语》有云：小不忍则乱大谋。
南怀瑾先生在他的书中曾这样解释：忍，对人，是包容；对事，是果断。
从中，我不免得到很多启示，我将其引申为：对人，我们要像山一样，行“仁”，包容；对事，我们要如水一样拥有果敢的行动力，一往无前，这样，以圆融之力，方能取得成功。
苏轼曾云：人生如逆旅，我本亦是行人。
人生的漫漫长路上，时而引吭高歌，时而辗转低迷，这些都是人生的常态。
然而，如何在如此人生之路上成就圆融之美，获得成功，就要坚持“为人如山，处世若水”的人生哲学。
正如泰戈尔诗歌的启示：铸就鹅卵石之美的不是锤子的击打，而是水的载歌载舞。
卵石，便是人的坚毅品质，水，则是圆融的处事方式。
如山若水，成就圆融之美。
人生中的山水相绕泛舟于漓江之上，我既被那温柔绵长的江水所触动，也被两岸沉稳前立的山峦所震撼，山与水和谐的相互依衬，构成一幅自然美景。
不仅自然中如此，其实人生道理亦如此，一位先哲曾说人生的最高境界就是为人如山，处事如水，且我认为，只有山与水紧密结合，方能构成人生的桂林山水。
为人如山，山是巍峨耸立的，是不会被风雨所击垮的，在我看来，为人中的山那是一个人坚定不移的原则和信仰，且这份信念是不会因为时代发展，流言蜚语所改变的。
若一个人有值得捍卫的信仰，那么他做任何事便有遵循的原则，正如支撑高楼大厦的钢筋结构一般，这份坚定能使他在快速发展的时代中临危不乱，也能使他在面对黑暗与污浊时有守住心中净土的勇气。
而若一个人没有坚守的信念，那么在面对复杂而多变的环境中，他就很容易茫然，如陶土一般被环境随意的改变捏造，从而丢失了“我”的意识。
处事若水，水是轻柔绵长的，是能随机应变的，处事中的水应该是一种灵活多变的思维方式，在面对多变且陌生的问题中能不拘泥于教条经验，而勇于改变，古语云“水之形避高而趋下，兵之形避实而击虚”“兵无常势，水无长形”可见水的智慧与生活息息相关，自古便被运用于军事作战上。
面对问题时我们不妨运用水的思维方式，放下固有的看法，而从具体的问题中找出矛盾的出口，从而灵活应变。
然而，山与水之道不是隔立独出的，相反，它们是相互依托的，山代表的信念是行动准则，而水代表的思维是一种行动方式，虽然水是不断变化的，但它始终傍山而流。
一个人若只有山的势，而无水之变，则会变得刻板，一个人若只有水之变而无山之势，则会变得随变、轻率。
山水之道不仅适用与人，也适用于当今社会发展中的每一个主体，拿现在的传统企业转型来说，它们坚守着老字号的诚信品质，却不懂得把握时代发展中的消费者的心理变化，而新兴企业中却不乏勇于突破创新之势，然而在企业道德素养的建立上却往往不足。
这两种类型的企业都必须认识到自己的优势与不足，将山水相依之道灵活地运用于自身的发展方式上，方能可持续地走下去。
人有坚定的信念和灵活的思维方式是立足于当今社会的重要工具，处事如水，为人若山不仅仅是一句玄妙的道理，更对当今社会具有现世意义。
唯有把握住山水之道才能活出人生独特而隽美的山水之景。
上善若水任方圆，坚毅如山不畏难弗吉尼亚•伍尔芙说：“最伟大的灵魂都是雌雄同体。
”雌性灵魂有如涓涓流水——包容万物，心怀柔情与悲悯；雄性灵魂有如坚毅之山——不屈于生活苦难，刚毅而坚强。
人人都需要这种双重灵魂，因为如伍尔芙在《到灯塔中去》所言：这种灵魂、这种楔形内核给了我们心灵的支撑，从而追逐自我实现。
为人如山的坚毅刚强让我们穿越荆棘路，砥砺灵魂；处事如水的包容、悲悯情怀，让个体与周遭和谐共处。
“岁月不饶我，我亦不曾饶过岁月”，在《云雀叫了一整天》中，木心先生如是说。
文革——那个腥风血雨、晦暗无声的时代，木心先生惨遭不公待遇，在狱中失去三根手指。
然他在狱中却用本该写“交待”的纸，写下洋洋洒洒的感悟与笔记。
若干年后，残缺的手指夹着烟卷的他，走过沧桑，品味江南黄酒与“从前慢”的蕴味——何尝不是为人坚毅如山，不畏苦难的彰显。
越过高山的坚毅，却也有水的灵动。
春风化雨、兼容并包的蔡元培将官僚养成所建成一个文明学堂，而其中既有朴学大师章太炎，又有新文化运动先驱陈独秀、胡适，这样的思想碰撞何尝不是先生品格的体现——涓涓细流，包容思想滋养桃李；海纳百川，包容理念润泽后人，处事如水，教育理念亦如水。
先哲告知我们人生应追求为人如山，处事若水。
我想为人如山是生存智慧，而处事若水则是生活智慧。
生存智慧让我们生活继续，而生活智慧让我们生命灵动。
小林一茶痛失爱女，书写下“我深知生命如露水般短暂，然而，然而”的禅意俳句，如山之坚毅，不畏生活磨难，也有水之柔情，饱含泪水；陀思妥耶夫斯基在《地下室手记》中书写对穷人的悲悯，体现水之柔，然其与世俗价值观的抵抗亦显其如山般刚毅。
无数先贤之例如清流入涸泽，哲人之语如明亮星光照幽路。
我们人类存在的目的不正是承前启后，继往开来，为塑造一个更美好和谐的世界，从整体上实现提升吗？而为人如山、处事若水的意义在于此。
处事若水，故而我们有心灵最柔软的触角，愿意伸向社会隐疾与人性冷漠，有悲悯之情；故而我们有海纳百川的包容，接纳多元思想，为构建陈嘉映理想中的包容国土而前赴后继；为人如山，故而我们有最坚毅、韧劲的灵魂，不为人生烈火、自然摧残而压垮；故而我们刚毅不屈，只顾风雨兼程。
上善若水任方圆，坚毅如山不畏难，山水与为人处事的道理早已渗透在中华民族的血液中代代流传，而每个人不同的理解，便组成了周国平笔下的时代精神家园，包容悲悯、刚毅坚强的时代呼唤延绵不断。
山水相谐材料中提及“一位先哲说，人一生当努力追求的境界是：为人如山，处事若水。
”诚然，山水二字在中华文化中并不少见，从“山长水阔知何处”的佳句，到“智者乐水，仁者乐山”对于人生深刻的见解。
山与水代表两种不同的品性却总是同时出现在诗文中，又意外地匹配相称。
恰如君子，如山水共存，不极端偏颇于其中一个，自性圆明，成为和谐的一体，引以后世慨叹。
“竹杖芒鞋轻胜马，谁怕？一蓑烟雨任平生。
”意气潇洒的苏子背后却是坎坷萧条的一生，屡遭贬谪，空有一身才华与抱负却无法施展。
然而苏子却未甘堕泥泞，他一生坚定爱国的信念从未动摇，坚定如山，不为权力而放弃自己的准则和为百姓谋福祉的初衷，勇而为新派改革直言。
然而他又未因贬谪而自暴自弃，如柳永般只知留恋于勾栏花巷，而是乐观旷达地面对人生，每到一处都积极为民奔走，所以才有“苏堤”之面世……他此刻的乐天精神又如水般轻灵自由，感染他人。
君子当如是，如苏子“山水”相谐。
同样生在大宋王朝的王安石亦如此。
面对家国大计时，他决不显出丝毫的退让，怀揣心中治国齐家的理想与信念，不动如山，常与政治上的对手争辩激战，据理力争，恰如仇敌一般。
不论及政治时，王安石却能视其为知己好友，畅谈诗文，共享野趣，真心地欣赏、赞赏对方，公私分明，不续及怒气，其对待事业友谊的方式恰如水，清澈可见底，予人滋养。
君子如介甫者，孰能讥之乎？莫说悟出“天理即存于人心”的一代心学大师王阳明先生，其忠君护国、实现个人的价值与理想的信念支撑其走完一生，其中艰辛又以忠孝两全之法奋力度过，终于卫国也成，忠孝也成。
精神如山，任狂风暴雨决不倾倒；处事若水，曲折蜿蜒，终奔腾入海。
君子如是，便格物致知十几载，暂不得亲友理解，又何妨？而秦桧、严嵩此类者，偏向极端，空有为水的精明与转移，却未有如山般的准则与信念，为追名逐利放弃自尊与良知，终及祸国殃民，虽有才华却瑜不掩瑕，为人不齿。
君子如竹坚韧，如兰发芳，但君子更如山水，刚柔并重，山之仁之坚，水之灵之柔，相得益彰，成为和谐圆融的一体。
岁月长河中，君子的品格依然如昨夜星辰般璀璨，直入人心。
思及平凡的我们，也应努力追求为人如山，处事若水，追求这样“山水”相谐的境界。
如山坚定，如水柔和先哲说，为人要如山，那是要有坚定的意志，刚强的品格，固守理想与本心；处事要如水，那是要有柔和的手段，变通的方式，顺势而为，巧妙委婉避开艰险，渡过难关。
为人如山，赋予我们前行的方向，坚定的意志，不为外物动摇的品性。
如山，是木心在狱中以写检查为名要来的纸上，以蝇头小字写就的文章，放大六倍也看不清的字迹背后，是他无论如何也不愿放弃与放下的笔。
他说，“你要我毁灭，我不。
”再艰难的环境，再苦难的生活，也不会让他坚挺的身躯折腰，也无法让他放弃自由，放弃梦想。
他永远是坚定的，如山。
有人问他：“你是流亡作家吗？”饱经沧桑的木心却笑着回：“不，我只是散步散得远了，就到了纽约。
”生活的磨难不会毁灭他，他坚定知道家在何方，何处是归宿，什么目标与信仰。
处世如水，是柔和的手段，变通的方法，顺势而为，以退为进。
在那个知识分子人人自危的年代，沈从文也难逃被冷落的命运，他在激进的年代里明哲保身，退而选择从事文物研究，文坛巨匠转为被冷落的研究者，期中选择之艰难可见一斑。
在激进的时代退而求其次，如水般的手腕给了沈从文保全自己在另一领域展示自我的机会。
处事如此，着实是温柔如水，而身为沈从文弟子的萧乾，也有着与恩师如出一辙的温柔处事方式。
在带领客人参观博物时，萧乾遇见了沦为博物馆讲解员的沈从文，他没有上前相认，而是留给老师尊严，暗中托人相助，不求回报，只求以委婉的手段为老师换得一些便利、一点尊严。
在这个利益驱使的时代，为人如山、处事如水的君子似乎已销声匿迹。
更多人的理想不堪一击，在物欲面前一碰就碎。
在就业率面前，冷门专业似乎已无存在必要，处事手腕却只会硬碰硬，不撞南墙心不死，学不会顺应规则，只妄想规则适应一己私欲。
易卜生说：“社会如同一条船，每个人都要做好掌舵的准备。
”在我看来，为人如山，是无论如何都坚守本心，不为所动；处事如水，是顺应规则，变通而动，两者缺一不可。
2017年上海各区高三二模作文题汇编及简析
2017年高三二模作文题汇编黄浦区27．随着国门打开，经济发展和文化交流的不断增强，现代生活方式层出不穷；传统生活方式面临种种挑战，人们处于难以抉择的境地。
对“传统生活方式面临种种挑战”的现象谈谈你的看法。
要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。
写作提示：立意做加法：“现代生活方式”；解构后建构。
王小波：这个世界永远在惩罚那些一成不变的人。
嘉定区26.有人说，中国人之间几乎没有辩论，只有争吵。
这是因为“中国式辩论”忽略了辩论的两个最基本要素：事实和逻辑，而专注于姿态与声势。
“中国式辩论”中的常见问题如：偏离论点、情绪激动、攻击对方人品、滥用比喻、使用嘲笑和反问句等等。
对此，你有怎样的思考？请自拟题目，写一篇不少于800宇的文章。
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事件视频在网络上发布后，人们先是对男司机张某下手之狠表示震惊。
然而，当张某行车记录仪的视频出来以后，舆论又转而谴责女司机卢某开车太没规矩、太危险。
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几乎所有的“暴民”都有一个共同的特点，没有独立思考的欲望和能力。
他们普遍喜欢在智力上偷懒，喜欢接受现成的结论，不愿意自己寻找答案。
静安区27.阅读下面的文字，请自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章（不要写成诗歌）。
一位先哲说，人的一生应努力追求这样的境界：为人如山，处事若水。
写作提示：方与圆；刚与柔；伸与屈等闵行区28.阅读下面材料，根据要求作文。
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但随着网购的迅速普及和扩展，中华老字号受到巨大冲击，它们大多前景黯淡，有的甚至倒闭。
2017上海高三二模作文范文(一)
2017上海高三二模作文范文（一）“霍金热”的冷思考65一年前，霍金在新浪开通微博,并对中国人发布了问候之语,不到一天的时间，他就成了网红.“网红"顾名思义就是在网络上倍受关注的人，那么霍金为什么会有这么大的吸引力呢？首先是因为我国对霍金事例的普及吧.各中小学的语文教材里想必总有提及霍金的地方，高中教材中不还有篇《邂逅霍金》吗?先不论这些文章中是否有神化霍金之嫌,单从提高其“知名度”功用来看，如此庞大的粉丝量就显得理所当然了。
其次,抛开可能在霍金头上的光环，人们关注霍金，是否也体现了在这个科技高速发展的时代，人们对科学，对科技更为重视了呢？这应是件值得欣慰的事。
科技带给我们生活的影响是巨大的，我们也逐渐意识到了它的巨大影响力。
对于“未知"我们选择探索，而非像从前那般“闭关锁国",这应是我们的一种进步。
我想,之所以在语文教材中提及霍金,也是想让大家重视科学，当然，还要注重科学背后的那份严谨和冷静。
最后,将目光聚焦于霍金本身，或许他成为“网红”是人们出于欣赏他的意志品质的缘由。
至少大多数人眼中的霍金，大概就是教材中那样的，坚强、执着.他的那种不畏艰难的、勇往直前的精神,是很少有人能做到的,所以许多人景仰他，所以关注他。
然而，即使有无数多的原因使霍金成为网红,但似乎也仅此而已了.到了今年，霍金的粉丝数依然可观，可谁知道其中有多少“僵尸粉”呢？仅仅关注而已，就再没了后文，或许更甚者，都已经忘了自己关注过这个人了.那么这样的“热”，是否名存实亡呢？况且，随着这“冷"，我们也不免开始思考之前的“热”是否真的是“热”.先前提及国人对科学的关注有所提高，然而若只是关注一下便没了后文,这提高似乎又有些苍白无力了。
说句玩笑话，这或许还要怪罪到霍金没有发一些浅显易懂的传播科学的文字上.但玩笑过后，更多的“罪罚”还应加诸于大众身上.关注但不去了解，那这关注又算是什么呢？盲目追捧紧跟“潮流"？还是说关注一个霍金会使自己显得很有学识？思想很有深度？既然这样，不如再动动手指,去了解《时间简史》《果壳中的宇宙》黑洞理论等相关知识，了解课本之外的霍金，也了解一下我国的宇宙科学的发展状况，将这种种冲动关注变为开阔眼界，似乎也是一件不错的事呢！去年，霍金成了网红,今年或者明年后年等，霍金能否成为人们心中真正的“网红”呢?科学能否渗透进千家万户，飞入寻常百姓家？拭目以待吧。
上海市2017届高三英语二模汇编-作文
2017年二模作文汇编1.宝山（长宁）区VI. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.古人云：“儿行千里母担忧。
”你今年暑期计划与朋友结伴出国旅游，但是你母亲对此担心不已，未予准许。
现请你给母亲写一封电子邮件以消除母亲对你的种种担忧，具体要求如下：①陈述你出国旅游的理由；②通过事例说明你对生活和困难有应对能力。
文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称2.崇明区VI. Guided WritingDirections: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某电视台计划推出一个新的电视综艺节目（variety programme），但为了更好地迎合观众的需求，该电视台向观众广泛征求意见。
假设你是观众陈方，写一封电子邮件给该电视台的负责人王先生，表达你对新的电视综艺节目的建议，并陈述你的理由。
邮件内容应包括：➢综艺节目的名字、针对的观众群体、主要内容及形式等；➢提出这些建议的理由。
注：邮件中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
3.奉贤区VI. Guided WritingDirections:Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.为了激发同学们读书的热情，你校将在2017年4月23日“世界读书日”（the World Book and Copyright Day ）当天举行一个读书节活动，今日学校正向全体学生征询活动方案。
静安区高三上学期语文第二次模拟考试试卷
静安区高三上学期语文第二次模拟考试试卷姓名:________ 班级:________ 成绩:________一、现代文阅读 (共3题；共27分)1. （6分） (2017高二下·鞍山期末) 阅读下面文字，完成下列各题。
作为生物的社会①不过，让一个旁观者不这样看是很难的。
蚂蚁的确太像人了，这真够让人为难。
它们培植真菌，喂养蚜虫做家畜，把军队投入战争，动用化学喷剂来惊扰和迷惑敌人，捕捉奴隶。
织巢蚁属使用童工，抱着幼体像梭子一样往返窜动，纺出线来把树叶缝合在一起，供它们的真菌园使用。
它们不停地交换信息。
它们什么都干，就差看电视了。
②最让我们不安的是，蚂蚁，还有蜜蜂、白蚁和群居性黄蜂，它们似乎都过着两种生活。
它们既是一些个体，做着今天的事而看不出是不是还想着明天，同时又是蚁冢、蚁穴、蜂窠这些扭动着、思考着的庞大动物体中细胞样的成分。
我认为，正是由于这一层，我们才最巴不得它们是异己的东西。
我们不愿看到，可能有一些集体性的社会，能够像一个个生物一样进行活动。
即使有这样的东西，它们也决不可能跟我们相关。
③不管怎么说，这些东西还是存在。
野地里一只独行的蚂蚁，不能设想它头脑里想着很多。
当然，就那么几个神经元，让几根纤维串在一块儿，想来连有什么头脑也谈不上，更不会有什么思想了。
它不过是一段长着腿的神经节而已。
四只或十只蚂蚁凑到一起，围绕着路上的一头死蛾，看起来就有点意思了。
它们这儿触触，那儿推推，慢慢地把这块食物向蚁丘移去。
但这似乎还是瞎猫撞着死老鼠的事。
只有当你观看聚在蚁丘边的、黑鸦鸦盖过地皮的数千蚂蚁的密集群体时，你才看见那整个活物。
这时，你看到它思考、筹划、谋算。
这是智慧，是某种活的计算机，那些爬来爬去的小东西就是它的心智。
④建造蚁丘的时候，有时需要一批一定规格的细枝，这时，所有成员立刻都着魔般搜寻起正合规格的细枝；后来，外墙的建筑就要完成，要盖顶，细枝的规格要改变，于是，好像从电话里接到了新的命令，所有的工蚁又转而寻找新型号的细枝。
2017届静安区高三二模考作文
2017届静安区高三二模考作文【作文题目】一位先哲说, 人的一生应努力追求这样的境界: 为人如山, 处事若水。
【评分细则】1. 原则: 敢打高分, 慎打低分, 合理拉开分数。
基准分（平均分）: 49分。
2．写作大致方向：在整体理解的基础上, 抓住关键词进行合理转化。
第一关键词: 如山——若水这种对举式的词句, 对应的词语往往是对立互补、相辅相成的关系；还要根据虚实转换的要求, 通过相似联想, 抓住与“山、水”的内在联系和相似性进行转化；第二关键词: 为人——处事；第三关键词: 人生追求的境界。
抓住第一、二关键词即可。
【关于立意】（1）深刻的立意:“为人如山, 处事若水”是一体两面的关系, 要整合到一起写。
例如：谈两者的对立统一, 辩证统一, 以及和人生追求的高境界的关系；两者的和谐作用, 中庸之道等等。
（2）较深刻的立意：能对应着写“山”“水”各自的特点, 最后能整合起来, 写到对人的共同作用之类。
（3）一般的立意:能围绕第一关键词“如山, 若水”展开类似联想转化, 没有整合到一起；或者只是泛泛而谈各自的好处……【学生范文】如山若水, 成就圆融之美一位先哲说, 人的一生应努力追求这样的境界: 为人如山, 处事若水。
山仁, 水智；山静, 水动。
山, 非山, 而是一种沉稳厚重, 坚毅不拔的人格态度与心灵的安静；水, 非水, 而是一种忍耐包容, 圆润柔和的处事方式与变化的灵巧多端。
为人如山, 处世若水, 岂不善哉？你可曾记得山涛？曾是竹林七贤之一的他, 并没有像其他诸君一样, 在与权贵的斗争中, 在与世俗的纠缠中被现实磕得头破血流。
他选择了妥协。
他选择如水一般在新的现实中继续他兼济苍生的人生理想, 匡扶黎民。
他又用他山一般的意志, 使自己的心不受权贵的侵扰。
虽然其余几位竹林“六贤”的精神也值得我们佩服, 但我们不禁扼腕叹息: 世间再无嵇康的《广陵散》了……其实: 山涛进一步便是嵇康, 嵇康退一步便是山涛。
上海市2017届高三英语二模汇编-summary
2017年高三英语二模汇编——SummaryHopeNothing in my life had prepared for what I had to do.Choosing my words carefully, and fighting to stay calm,I told my 4-year-old daughter that her grandmother had suffered a stroke (中风),that she was unconscious,and that the doctors said she would probably never wake up.As she moved closer to me,Amelia looked at me,eyes bright,and said,“Maybe Grandma will be okay. “Maybe she will,”I said,keeping back the tears.But I knew better.I was flying up to Mytle Beach, South Carolina,from our Florida home in the morning to say good-bye to my mom.The rest of that awful week,I joined my brother and father sitting by my mother’s side in the hospital room.I held her hand and talked to her.I told her that we still needed her.I told her that it wasn’t time to leave yet.I told her how much I loved her.And I told her that her little granddaughter,Amelia,believed that she’d get better.The doctors,with all years of training and experience,offered no hope for recovery.The damage was simply too extensive.A couple of weeks later,an odd thing happened.Mom woke up! And then she preserved through a long and tough process of restoration to health,during which she had to learn to walk,read,and write all over again,and eventually returned home to Dad.The only one who wasn’t shocked was Amelia.The doctors couldn’t explain it.Amelia didn’t need to.Hope came as naturally to her as possible.So why are we so afraid to hope sometimes?Maybe it’s because over the years,life’s disappointments can turn us to disillusionment(理想破灭).How many times have you heard someone say, “Hope for the best, expect the worst?”That’s not really hope at all.Hope is being able to look at our world with all of the joy and wonder of a child.Doctors were pessimistic about my mother’s stroke while my little daughter, Amelia, full of hope. I passed on Amelia’s hope when our family gathered to bid farewell to her in hospital. Incredibly, she recovered and came back home after a period of restoration. Everyone was astonished except Amelia. Hope does bring people in trouble amazement. (55 words)Fun Offices Make Workers Happier?In order to make their employees happier,companies around the world have been busy installing play equipment in the workplace.Table football,computer games and action figures have become common in some workplaces.A study shows work still upsets people though companies are trying to make workplaces fun.Forcing employees to be happy is useless because being unable to express negative feelings is always harmful and always looking for happiness deliberately will make people less happy.Rather,the effective way to make employees happy is not to interrupt employees with meaningless tasks.(58words)For thousands of years,people have sailed across the oceans to trade,explore and transport goods.However,not every ship arrives at its port of destination.Weather,war,navigation mistakes and bad luck have caused many ships to sink to the bottom of the ocean.These shipwrecks,which are estimated to number more than three million,have long fascinated us.In addition to being historically important,they sometimes contain great riches.Historical research is a key motivator for shipwreck hunters.Ships carrying documents and artifact can teach us about ancient civilizations and important events.For instance,in 1997 the Pandora,which sank in 791,was discovered off the coast of Australia.The findings from the ship helped us understand the events surrounding the famous mutiny (暴动) on another ship ----- the Bounty.Another important discovery off the US coast in 1996 is widely believed to be the Queen Ann’s Revenge,the flagship of the private Blackbeard.Profit is another motive for shipwreck exploration,as companies use advanced sonar,robots and retrieval equipment to find treasure ships.One such firm is Odyssey Marine Exploration.The company has found hundreds of ships,including,in 2007,a Spanish sailing ship containing 500,000 silver coins.The ship,which sank 200 yearsago in the Atlantic Ocean,carried a treasure estimated to be worth $500 million.Soon after the discovery,a long legal battle over ownership rights took place between the company and the Spanish government.Cases like these are part of an ongoing debate about protecting historically important ships from treasure hunters.Historical importance and profit are the two main driving forces for shipwreck explorations . Key information about ancient civilizations and important events can be obtained from the wreckage . Besides , huge treasures can also be found by using advanced equipment . However , the finding of the treasure sometimes sparks legal debate over ownership .How Safe Is Your Bed?Do you consider your bed a safe place of rest and calm?Do you sink into a mattress (床垫) after a hard day’s work and feel tension and stress drain away as you rest your weary head on a soft pillow?Well,you might not feel so relaxed if you knew that tiny pests were hiding there! It seems that beds may not be such a good place for our health and happiness ---- they could actually be making us ill!Recent studies have shown that bacteria,fungi and dust mites(螨虫),some smaller than the diameter of a hair,live in our bedding.When we move around in our sleep,we disturb them and they are bounced up into the air -- which we then breathe in as we sleep.According to the American Lung Association,four out of five households in the United States now have high levels of dust mites,although it’s not the mites themselves that cause the problems,but their droppings. These are “highly allergenic(致敏的)” according to Dr William Berger,a fellow with the American Academy of Allergy,Asthma and Immunology. “Even if you aren’t allergic---they can still irritate you,the way pepper would if it blew into your nose and eyes.”Brendan Boor,Assistant Professor of Civil Engineering, who carries out bed research,also found that bed dust in the air leads to allergies --causing watery eyes,sneezing,coughs and asthma. He has recommended ways to limit our exposure to these boring allergens:Firstly,he suggests vacuuming your mattress regularly – weekly,or even daily.He also recommends doing away with carpets and washing ing allergen-proof bed covers,he says, can reduce the risk of getting allergies. In addition,washing bedding and pillows frequently can help,as can a portable air cleaner placed near the bed.If you do as Brendan Boor suggests,you will breathe in cleaner air as you sleep … or will you? Is it really safe for you to go back in your bed?Studies show that beds aren’t a good place for your well-being and they can even make you sick. Mites, bacteria and other tiny living things in your beds can cause illness or irritate you. Therefore, experts suggest that cleaning carpets, washing floors, using allergen-proof bed covers, and washing bedding and pillows frequently can make your bed safe.Moustache（胡子）for Cash“Movember”,as the annual event is known,sees men in countries including the UK,US and Australia grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money from friends,family and colleagues,with the money going to cancer charities.The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003,when a pair of men from Australia persuaded their family to join them in growing a moustache in order to encourage men to get themselves checked for cancer,which is seen as distasteful by some males.A year later,the group decided to set up the Movember Foundation,asking friends and colleagues to offer donations of money to support their efforts,and raised a massive A$54,000 which was shared between a number of health projects.With thanks most likely to social media,Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide,having raised over £440 million since 2004.The effects of the founraising are wide-reaching,which had made a significant discovery in the treatment of cancer.The issue of some men being too self-willed to visit their doctor for a checkup,or perhaps being raised in a culture of “tough it out”,has led some males to neglect their health,which may mean it could be too late if something potentially deadly did develop.However,Movember is helping to break down the shame of male health by making it more accessible,meaning that men are more likely to visit their doctors.They found a way to appeal to men in a way that other campaign just don’t - with a sort of blokey jokiness.①blokey: behaving in a way that is supposed to be typical of men, especially men enjoy themselves in a group.Movember is an annual event that men grow moustach to collect donation money for cancer charities. Initiated in 2004, Movember Foundation raised much money for health projects. Movember then went global and foundraising had active influence on cancer treatment. Men are less likely to care health check-up. Movember started an accessible way to attract men for checking health without shame.Moving My CurfewFor some time now,I have had an 8:00 p.m. curfew ---the time by which I have to be at home,even on weekends.When I was younger,I didn’t really complain.But now I have reached an age when this curfew is no longer suitable.For several reasons,it is clearly time to move my curfew to 10:00 p.m. on weekends.First of all.I ’m soon going to be an adult,like all teenagers,I need practice handling the greater freedom that goes along with being an adult.When teenagers don’t get practice handling freedom,they often make many serious mistakes.For example,some teenagers go away to college and suddenly they don’t know how to handle it,and they get into trouble.I believe it is better to increase freedom gradually.That may the teenager learners howto handle freedom responsibly.I believe I could handle a later curfew without making serious mistakes in judgment.A later curfew is also important to me because I’m an active student.As you know,I am often on the committee in charge of running extra-curricular activities.Because of my present curfew,I have to finish school activities over an hour before they are over.Others students must take over for me when I leave.A 10:00 curfew would allow me to stay until the end of school functions and give me enough time to get home without rushing .Finally,I am a teenager who can be trusted to handle a 10:00 p.m curfew.I know that many teenagers cannot handle much responsibility.However,I am clearly not that kind of teenager. I have proven myself to be a very responsible person.For example,I have never been in serious trouble,either at school or in the company.I also hold a part-time job and still manage to maintain a “B” average in school.In other words,I am a person who uses my time wisely,meets responsibilities an stays out of trouble .Though still a teenager, the writer demands to come home later, especially at weekends for the following reasons. More time is needed greater freedom to achieve smooth transition to an adult. Besides, the writer can perform various duties at school without hurrying. Moreover, unlike others, he is responsible and can assign time wisely. (55 words)Why do we read poetry?First obvious one: because we enjoy it.The only other reason is for academic purposes,and that's not why this is here.Many of us read poetry simply because we often feel depressed and hopelessly lost,and in poetry we see how beautiful and strange everything is.So in that way poetry calms our anxiety.There are many different kinds of poems.They are not all calming.Some poems make me anxious,angry,scared,and sad,which is why I value them.As a reader,I want a full meal,not just dessert.I want the sweet and the bitter.Often,I read poetry when I’m already relaxed.In fact,I read more when I'm not stressed out.Here are the main reasons I respond to poetry,as far as I can tell.Metrical (格律的) poems are about setting up rules and then bending ually this is done by setting up a rhythm and then breaking it or almost breaking it,and then returning to it again.This satisfies my desire for order and also my desire for testing boundaries.Poetry plays with language and often puts words together in surprising ways,which is thrilling the way that food can be,when the chef has paired ingredients you never thought would taste good together but somehow do.Many poems are dense.Words mean two or three things at once and lots of suggestions are packed between the lines.This is intellectually inspiring and it allows me to read the same poem over and over,always finding new things in it.And,of course,there’s the subject matter.It interests me just as it would if the same subject was explored in a storyor essay.Not all poems interest me in this way, but then not all stories and essays do,either.People read poems for enjoyment as well as academic purpose.Unlike many other people, the author reads different kinds of poems not only for calmness but also for other emotional experience,and the main reason for it is their fixed rules to be followed or challenged, surprising word combination,richness in meaning and interesting subjects.Every year, more and more parents complain to their children’s schools about PE.They believe that their children shouldn’t have to participate in physical activity if they don’t want to.Supporters of PE,however,believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our society’s well-being.They insist PE in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic exercise.Firstly,they believe that participation in sport promotes health.In fact physical education is a springboard for involvement in sport and physical activities throughout ernment is,or should be,concerned with the health of its citizens. Encouraging physical activity in the young through compulsory PE fights child obesity and contributes to forming lifelong habits of exercise. This doesn’t have to be through traditional team sports;increasingly schools are able to offer exercise in the form of swimming,gymnastics,dance,etc.Besides, physical education helps to develop character and the mutual（相互的）respect required to succeed in an adult environment.Playing team sports builds character and encourages students to work with others,as they would be expected to do in most business or sporting environments.Sport teaches children how to win and lose with good grace and builds a strong school spirit through competition with other institutions.It is often the experience of playing on a team together that builds the strongest friendships at school,which endure for years afterwards.Finally,the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools.If schools don’t have compulsory PE,it is much harder to pick out, develop and equip athletes to represent the country on a wider stage.However,it’s much easier to find suitable individuals with a full sports program in every school.概要写作，共10分内容要点：五个点都包含到，给5分，缺一点扣一分1. Parents complain about the necessity of PE.2. Supporters of PE believe it is important.3. Taking part in sports helps improve health.4. PE helps to develop character and mutual respect.5. PE in school is the foundation of national sporting achievement.…cultivate / discover potential athletes for the country字数超三个以内不扣分，超过三个到五个单词扣一分，超过五个单词扣2分。
2017年静安区高三语文二模试卷
浦东新区2016学年度第二学期教学质量检测高三语文试卷2017.4考生注意：1．本考试设试卷和答题纸两部分，试卷包括试题和答题要求，所有答题必须涂（选择题）或写（非选择题）在答题纸上，做在试卷上一律不得分。
2．答卷前，务必用钢笔或圆珠笔在答题纸正面清楚地填写姓名、准考证号，并将核对后的条形码贴在指定位置上。
3．答题纸与试卷在试题编号上是一一对应的，答题时应特别注意，不能错位。
4．答题时间150分钟，试题满分150分。
一积累应用10分1．按要求填空。
（5分）（1）脚著谢公屐，。
（李白《》）（2），则凡可以得生者何不用也？（孟子《鱼我所欲也》）（3使，寄与陇头人。
江南无所有，聊赠一枝春。
”和“客从远方来，遗我双鲤鱼。
呼儿烹鲤鱼，中有尺素书”两则典故。
2．按要求选择。
（5分）（1）某校举行了一场小型义卖活动，当地报刊记者对此进行采访，发表了一篇新闻稿，以下标题最恰当的一项是（）（2分）A．《义卖活动如期举行》B．《今天增是因吹斯汀》C．《情满天下爱溢乾坤》D．《赠人玫瑰手有余香》（2）小明顺利通过了春考，被自己心仪的大学录取，以下诗句最适合他此时心情的一项是（）（3分）A．若教仙桂在平地，更有何人肯苦心。
B．升平时节逢公道，不觉龙门是险津。
C．万事早知皆有命，十年浪走宁非痴。
D．年年下第东归去，羞见长安旧主人。
二阅读70分（一）阅读下文，完成第3—7题。
（16分）①“社会性别”一词最早是由美国人类学家盖尔·卢宾提出的，主要是指自身所在的生存环境对其性别的认定，它在社会环境的反应中形成，并在社会文化的变化中不断改变。
社会性别不仅因时间而异，而且因民族地域而异，是一种特定的社会构成。
自上世纪70年代以来，社会学者普遍采用这种视角来研究社会问题。
②近年来，社会性别与公共政策制定的相关性受到越来越多的社会学者重视。
为了考察社会性别因素在量化层面上如何影响公民对公共政策制定的关注程度，社科院的一份调查问卷设计了“你对公共政策制定的关心情况”的问题。
2017届上海市各区高三英语二模试卷题型分类专题汇编--摘要写作(Summary Writing)--学生版(已校对)
IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.How Safe Is Your Bed?Do you consider your bed a safe place of rest and calm? Do you sink into a mattress (床垫) after a hard day’s work and feel tension and stress drain away as you rest your weary head on a soft pillow? Well, you might not feel so relaxed if you knew that tiny pests were hiding there! It seems that beds may not be such a good place for our health and happiness ---- they could actually be making us ill!Recent studies have shown that bacteria, fungi and dust mites (螨虫), some smaller than the diameter of a hair, live in our bedding. When we move around in our sleep, we disturb them and they are bounced up into the air -- which we then breathe in as we sleep. According to the American Lung Association, four out of five households in the United States now have high levels of dust mites, although it’s not the mites themselves that cause the problems, but their droppings. These are “highly allergenic(致敏的)” according to Dr William Berger, a fellow with the American Academy of Allergy, Asthma and Immunology. “Even if you aren’t allergic… they can still irritate you, the way pepper would if it blew into your nose and eyes.”Brendan Boor, Assistant Professor of Civil Engineering, who carries out bed research, also found that bed dust in the air leads to allergies -- causing watery eyes, sneezing, coughs and asthma. He has recommended ways to limit our exposure to these boring allergens: Firstly, he suggests vacuuming your mattress regularly –weekly, or even daily. He also recommends doing away with carpets and washing floors. Using allergen-proof bed covers, he says, can reduce the risk of getting allergies. In addition, washing bedding and pillows frequently can help, as can a portable air cleaner placed near the bed.If you do as Brendan Boor suggests, you will breathe in cleaner air as you sleep … or will you? Is it really safe for you to go back in your bed?IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Moustache（胡子）for Cash“Movember”, as the annual event is known, sees men in countries including the UK, US and Australia grow out their facial hair while collecting sponsorship money from friends, family and colleagues, with the money going to cancer charities.The month of no shaving began unofficially in 2003, when a pair of men from Australia persuaded their family to join them in growing a moustache in order to encourage men to get themselves checked for cancer, which is seen as distasteful by some males. A year later, the group decided to set up the Movember Foundation, asking friends and colleagues to offer donations of money to support their efforts, and raised a massive A$54,000 which was shared between a number of health projects. With thanks most likely to social media, Movember soon went global and the foundation now operates worldwide, having raised over ￡440 million since 2004. The effects of the fundraising are wide-reaching, which had made a significant discovery in the treatment of cancer.The issue of some men being too self-willed to visit their doctor for a checkup, or perhaps being raised in a culture of “tough it out”, has led some males to neglect their health, which may mean it could be too late if something potentially deadly did develop. However, Movember is helping to break down the shame of male health by making it more accessible, meaning that men are more likely to visit their doctors. They found a way to appeal to men in a way that other campaigns just don’t – with a sort of blokey① jokiness.①blokey: behaving in a way that is supposed to be typical of men , especially men enjoying themselves in a group.IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Every year, more and more parents complain to their children’s schools about PE. They believe that their children shouldn’t have to participate in physical activity if they don’t want to .Supporters of PE, however, believe that it is a crucial element of all-round schooling and our society’s well-being. They insist PE in schools remains one of the few places by which the youth can be forced to participate in aerobic exercise.Firstly, they believe that participation in sport promotes health. In fact physical education is a springboard for involvement in sport and physical activities throughout life. Government is, or should be, concerned with the health of its citizens. Encouraging physical activity in the young through compulsory PE fights child obesity and contributes to forming lifelong habits of exercise. This doesn’t have to be through traditional team sports; increasingly schools are able to offer exercise in the form of swimming, gymnastics, dance, etc.Besides, physical education helps to develop character and the mutual（相互的）respect required to succeed in an adult environment. Playing team sports builds character and encourages students to work with others, as they would be expected to do in most business or sporting environments. Sport teaches children how to win and lose with good grace and builds a strong school spirit through competition with other institutions. It is often the experience of playing on a team together that builds the strongest friendships at school, which endure for years afterwards.Finally, the pursuit for national sporting achievement begins in schools. If schools don’t have compulsory PE, it is much harder to pick out, develop and equip athletes to represent the country on a wider stage. However, it’s much easier to find suitable individuals with a full sports program in every school.IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.HopeNothing in my life had prepared me for what I had to do. Choosing my words carefully, and fighting to stay calm, I told my 4-year-old daughter that her grandmother had suffered a stroke（中风），that she was unconscious, and that the doctors said she would probably never wake up. As she moved closer to me, Amelia looked at me, eyes bright, and said,“Maybe Grandma will be okay.”“Maybe she will,”I said, keeping back the tears, But I knew better. I was flying up to Myrtle Beach, South Carolina, from our Florida home in the morning to say good-bye to my mom.The rest of that awful week, I joined my brother and father sitting by my mother’s side in the hospital room. I held her hand and talked to her. I told her that we still needed her. I told her that it wasn’t time to leave yet. I told her how much I loved her. And I told her that her little granddaughter, Amelia, believed that she’d get better. The doctors, with all their years of training and experience, offered no hope for recovery. The damage was simply too extensive.Then, a couple of weeks later, an odd thing happened. Mom woke up. She regained consciousness. Persevered through a long and tough recovery, during which she had to learn to walk, read, and write all over again, and eventually returned home to Dad. The only one who wasn’t shocked was Amerlia. The doctors couldn’t explain it. Amelia didn’t need to. Hope came as naturally to her as breathings.So why are we so afraid to hope sometimes? Maybe it’s because over the year, life’s disappointments can turn us to disillusionment（理想破灭）. How many times have you heard someone say:“Hope for the best, expect the worst”?That’s not really hope at all.Hope is being able to look at our world with all of the joy and wonder of a child.IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Meet The Member Who Quit SugarWhen I was 15, I weighed 100 kg.I was a size 20+ and hated the way I looked. I was a serial big eater and quite depressed. I would sit in front of the fridge, eat something, move to the cupboard, eat a packet of chips, and move back to the fridge.It was a heartbreaking cycle of hate and food. I didn’t feel confident, pretty, or worthwhile.Shopping made me cry, I avoided mirrors, and my social life came to an end. I actually lost friends because they told me I was antisocial. It became so bad that I wanted to abuse myself; my skin and my mind became my enemy.But then, I turned my life around. I quit sugar.It started with my mum. She staged an intervention(干预) that made me cry. I wanted to change - I needed to change - and she could see how unhappy I was.She put me onto a diet that mostly aimed to schedule meals, and - to my shock horror - cut out all processed sugar. It was so hard at first. I remember the shame of sneaking chocolate and candies when the three o’clock hunger hits.But the weeks kept coming and it just got easier. I stopped eating sugar, and I stopped loving it; simple as that.I substituted chips and biscuits for fruit and nuts, and had cup-of-soups after school when I was hit by the desire. I also had more energy, having a 20-minute walk with my dog into my everyday routine; I began to love that personal time.Cutting out sugar gave me so much more control over my body, and my outlook on life improved. So many people are intimidated by the words “quit sugar”. It’s not true. Fruit, honey, et cetera are natural sugars, and believe me, they fuel you better than chocolate bars ever could.Now I’m 17, turning 18, and I weigh 70 kg. I still struggle with my weight, but this is w here I sit naturally, and I am very proud of myself. I never thought I would be confident enough to wear dresses or skirts, and take leadership roles to put myself out there and develop my social skills.I could never have done it without the support of my friends and family, and I urge everyone who wants to do right by themselves and change their diet - quitting sugar or otherwise - to share their decision with people. Develop a support network, online or offline, which can offer you advice or pick you up when you’re down. And I can assure you, from my own personal experience, your body will thank you, and you will thank yourself too.IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.There are various means consumers can do if they find that an item they bought is faulty or in some other way does not live up to the manufacturer’s claims. A simple and common method used by many consumers is to complain directly to the store manager. In general, the “higher up” his or her complaint, the faster he or she can expect it to be settled. In such a case, it is usually settled in the consumer’s favor, assuming he or she has a just claim.Consumers should complain in person whenever possible, but if they cannot get to the placeof purchase, it is acceptable to phone or write the complaint in a letter.Complaining is usually most effective when it is done politely but firmly, and especially when the consumer can demonstrate what is wrong with the item in question. If this cannot be done, the consumer will succeed best by presenting specific information as to what is wrong, rather than by making general st atements. For example, “The left speaker does not work at all and the sound coming out of the right one is unclear” is better than “This stereo does not work”. The store manager may advice the consumer to write to the manufacturer. If so, the consumer should do this, stating the complaint as politely and firmly as possible. If a polite complaint does not achieve the desired result, the consumer can go to a step further. She or he can threaten to take the seller to court or report the seller to a private or public organization responsible for protecting consumer’s rights.IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Why do we read poetry? First obvious one: because we enjoy it. The only other reason is for academic purposes, and that's not why this is here.Many of us read poetry simply because we often feel depressed and hopelessly lost, and in poetry we see how beautiful and strange everything is. So in that way poetry calms our anxiety.There are many different kinds of poems. They are not all calming. Some poems make me anxious, angry, scared, and sad, which is why I value them. As a reader, I want a full meal, not just dessert. I want the sweet and the bitter. Often, I read poetry when I’m already relaxed. In fact, I read more when I'm not stressed out.Here are the main reasons I respond to poetry, as far as I can tell. Metrical (格律的) poems are about setting up rules and then bending them. Usually this is done by setting up a rhythm and then breaking it or almost breaking it, and then returning to it again. This satisfies my desire for order and also my desire for testing boundaries.Poetry plays with language and often puts words together in surprising ways, which is thrilling the way that food can be, when the chef has paired ingredients you never thought would taste good together but somehow do.Many poems are dense. Words mean two or three things at once and lots of suggestions are packed between the lines. This is intellectually inspiring and it allows me to read the same poem over and over, always finding new things in it.And, of course, there’s the subject matter. It interests me ju st as it would if the same subject was explored in a story or essay. Not all poems interest me in this way, but then not all stories and essays do, either.IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Wearable technology can reportedly tell you a lot more than just the number of calories you’re burning or how many steps you’ve walked… That clever smartwatch can actually tell that you’re about to get a cold, days before you start feeling poorly. As New Scientist reports, researchers at Stanford University in California have discovered that wearable tech can now detect when you’re about to fall prey to (感染) a frightening winter bug, simply by tracking your vital statistics.After monitoring 40 smartwatch users for up to two years, the team has demonstrated that the devices can be used to detect the first signs of coming illness. The particip ants’ pulse and skin temperature were continuously monitored throughout the period, with the scientists noting that their smartwatches recorded unusually higher heart rates and skin temperatures up to three days before the volunteers began displaying symptoms of cold or flu.Study leader Michael Snynder said: “Once these wearables collect enough data to know what your normal baseline readings are, they can get very good at sensing when something goes wrong. We think that if your heart rate and skin temperat ure are elevated for about two hours, there’s a strong chance you’re getting sick.” “Continuous tracking of your vital signs is more informative than having a doctor measure them once a year and comparing them with population averages,” he added.The team now hopes to create an algorithm (算法) that will let smartwatches notify you when you’re about to get sick. Well, at least that might give us the chance to stock up on vitaminsand wrap up warm before the germ attacks!IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Fun Offices Make Workers Happier?In order to make their employees happier, companies around the world have been busy installing play equipment in the workplace. Table football, computer games and action figures have become common in some workplaces.Despite all this effort, unfortunately, work still makes people unhappy. According to a study by the London School of Economics, the place where people feel most miserable is work.To proceed with an emphasis on being happy, however, other emotions are crowded out. Anger, sadness, anxiety and uncertainty all become a no-no. Such a ban on negative emotions can be emotionally bad for employees. A number of studies have shown that being able to express a range of positive and negative emotions is important, particularly when people are dealing with difficult experiences.Besides, being constantly on the lookout for happiness may actually drive happiness away from us. Scientists have found that when we talk about how important happiness is, we become less likely to find it, even when we have experiences that usually make us happy.Wanting to be happy at work is fair enough, but being forced to be happy at work can be troubling. If companies were genuinely interested in making their employees happy, they would perhaps look at some more “down-to-eart h” interventions (务实的干预). A simple step would be to stop interrupting workers with all sorts of pointless demands such as long emails and unnecessary forms. A study by Harvard Business School found workers felt most satisfied on days when they were able to focus on a piece of work and make meaningful progress on it.In short, if companies really want to make their employees happier, they should think long and hard before pointless restructuring.IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Chaco Great HouseAs early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest were notable for their "great houses," massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms and often stand three or four stories high. Archaeologists have been trying to determine how the buildings were used. While there is still no universally agreed upon explanation, there are three competing theories.One theory holds that the Chaco structures were purely residential, with each housing hundreds of people. Supporters of this theory have interpreted Chaco great houses as earlier versions of the architecture seen in more recent Southwest societies. In particular, the Chaco houses appear strikingly similar to the large, well-known "apartment buildings" at Taos, New Mexico, in which many people have been living for centuries.A second theory contends that the Chaco structures were used to store food supplies. One of the main crops of the Chaco people was grain maize, which could be stored for long periods of time without spoiling and could serve as a long-lasting supply of food. The supplies of maize had to be stored somewhere, and the size of the great houses would make them very suitable for the purpose.A third theory proposes that houses were used as ceremonial centers. Close to one house, called Pueblo Alto, archaeologists identified an enormous mound formed by a pile of old material. Excavations of the mound revealed deposits containing a surprisingly large number of broken pots. This finding has been interpreted as evidence that people gathered at Pueblo Alto for special ceremonies. At the ceremonies, they ate festive meals and then discarded the pots in which the meals had been prepared or served. Such ceremonies have been documented for other Native American cultures.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.For thousands of years , people have sailed across the oceans to trade , explore and transportgoods . However , not every ship arrives at its port of destination . Weather ,war , navigation mistakes and bad luck have caused many ships to sink to the bottom of the ocean. These shipwrecks , which are estimated to number more than three million , have long fascinated us . In addition to being historically important , they sometimes contain great riches.Historical research is a key motivator for shipwreck hunters . Ships carrying documents and artifact can teach us about ancient civilizations and important events . For instance , in 1997 the Pandora , which sank in 791, was discovered off the coast of Australia . The findings from the ship helped us understand the events surrounding the famous mutiny (暴动) on another ship ----- the Bounty . Another important discovery off the US coast in 1996 is widely believed to be the Queen Ann’s Revenge , the flagship of the private Blackbeard.Profit is another motive for shipwreck exploration ,as companies use advanced sonar , robots and retrieval equipment to find treasure ships . One such firm is Odyssey Marine Exploration . The company has found hundreds of ships , including , in 2007 , a Spanish sailing ship containing 500,000 silver coins. The ship , which sank 200 years ago in the Atlantic Ocean , carried a treasure estimated to be worth $500 million . Soon after the discovery , a long legal battle over ownership rights took place between the company and the Spanish government . Cases like these are part of an ongoing debate about protecting historically important ships from treasure hunters.Directions: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Moving My CurfewFor some time now , I have had an 8:00 p.m. curfew ---the time by which I have to be at home , even on weekends. When I was younger , I didn’t really complain . But now I have reached an age when this curfew is no longer suitable . For several reasons , it is clearly time to move my curfew to 10:00 p.m. on weekends.First of all , I ’m soon going to be an adult , like all teenagers , I need practice handling the greater freedom that goes along with being an adult . When teenagers don’t get practice handling freedom , they often make many serious mistakes. For example , some teenagers go away to college and suddenly they don’t know how to handle it , and they get into trouble . I上海市各区2017届高三英语二模试卷题型分类专题汇编：摘要写作Summary Writingbelieve it is better to increase freedom gradually . That may the teenager learners how to handle freedom responsibly . I believe I could handle a later curfew without making serious mistakes in judgment.A later curfew is also important to me because I’m an active student . As you know , I am often on the committee in charge of running extra-curricular activities .Because of my present curfew , I have to finish school activities over an hour before they are over. Others students must take over for me when I leave . A 10:00 curfew would allow me to stay until the end of school functions and give me enough time to get home without rushing .Finally , I am a teenager who can be trusted to handle a 10:00 p.m curfew . I know that many teenagers cannot handle much responsibility . However , I am clearly not that kind of teenager. I have proven myself to be a very responsible person . For example , I have never been in serious trouble , either at school or in the company . I also hold a part-time job and still manage to maintain a “B” average in school . In other words , I am a person who uses my time wisely , meets responsibilities an stays out of trouble .11。
上海市各区2017年高考语文二模试卷分类汇编写作专题
上海市各区2017年高考二模语文试卷分类汇编：写作专题宝山（青浦、长宁、金山）区27.作文2016年4月12日，物理学家“大牛”史蒂芬·霍金在新浪网开通微博，并发布了对中国人的第一句问候语。
此后不到一天时间，他的粉丝数量突破了200万，评论，转发和点赞达数百万，由此，霍金也成了“网红”。
“霍金也‘网红’”，引发了你怎样的思考？请自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章。
崇明区27.当今社会有一种现象，人们往往习惯首先用怀疑的眼光看待他人，而不是首先思考需不需要怀疑。
请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这一现象的思考。
要求：（1)自拟题目，自选角度；(2)不少于800字。
奉贤区29.不只在数学里，人生也处处在做加减法，有人为之所累，有人为之所乐，有人甚至尝到了别样的味道……对“人生中的加减法”你有怎样的认识和思考，请自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章。
虹口区根据以下材料，自选角度，自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章（不要写成诗歌）。
锤子的打击造就了宝剑的锋芒，而溪水的欢歌却使鹅卵石臻于完美。
黄浦区27．随着国门打开，经济发展和文化交流的不断增强，现代生活方式层出不穷；传统生活方式面临种种挑战，人们处于难以抉择的境地。
对“传统生活方式面临种种挑战”的现象谈谈你的看法。
要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。
嘉定区26.作文。
有人说，中国人之间几乎没有辩论，只有争吵。
这是因为“中国式辩论”忽略了辩论的两个最基本要素：事实和逻辑，而专注于姿态与声势。
“中国式辩论”中的常见问题如：偏离论点、情绪激动、攻击对方人品、滥用比喻、使用嘲笑和反问句等等。
对此，你有怎样的思考？请自拟题目，写一篇不少于800宇的文章。
静安区27.作文阅读下面的文字，请自拟题目，写一篇不少于800字的文章（不要写成诗歌）。
一位先哲说，人的一生应努力追求这样的境界：为人如山，处事若水。
闵行区28.阅读下面材料，根据要求作文。
中华老字号是中国商业对民族品牌特有的称谓，它们从形成到发展大都经历了几十年甚至数百年的时间，因此被人们称为“活文物”。
2017上海高三二模作文-视吾家之所寡有
2017上海高三二模作文-视吾家之所寡有多年前，一句“视吾家之所寡有”，震荡了历史烟尘，令人心动，接着便是焚券市义的美谈不胫而走，似乎冥冥之间道出了不证自明的真理，即我们尚未拥有之物决定了个体生命的富有程度。
“富有”一词，在现代语境下往往被滥用，被曲解，被化为炫耀的工具手段，人们固执地将富有的定义局囿于金钱名利等已得之物，殊不知古典理性的告诫。
何谓之富有？顾名思义，富有指向丰盈与饱满。
所得之物，固然带来了物质上的富足，但沉静沉淀之后，心灵却只落得空虚寂寞，那叮叮当当的黄金声，嬉笑喧闹的歌声，仿佛印证了莎士比亚的话，充满了声音与狂热，里面却空无一物，得之物终究是过眼云烟。
过度执迷沉溺反而让我们一无所有。
真正使心灵富有的是吾家之寡有者，它启迪我们缺少什么？应该求索追寻什么？不同人目力所及，所思所想的“吾家之所寡有”断然不同，某种程度上像面镜子映射了你的生命形态。
登高而望，志士仁人痛拍栏杆，思国之未复，中原之未收；而多情女郎望极春愁，思佳人之未回，天伦难叙。
当然，每一种生活形态都无可厚非，但我以为热血方刚的我们，理应把生命交给更高的存在，思道之未复，天地之心未得，仁义之未行，生民之命为立，诸如此类。
我们不该将自己束缚在物质享受的果壳中，而应追求我们所尚未拥有的金刚本性，自性恒常。
我们要成为赫尔曼黑塞笔下对生命有更高要求的一群人，对自己的粗野与鄙陋不甘心。
当我们认清了我们尚未拥有之物，并将其化为意志不断追求时，那些尚未拥有之物反过来深化了我们的生命形态。
海子一生都在追求至纯至真至善，他用诗寻找隐在社会中的太阳，最后他经历了一次美妙的变幻，死于太阳，并进入了太阳。
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