2020_2021学年高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤGuidedWriting课件新人教版必修1
4 ． In the end ， I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful.
5．I hope you will take my advice into account. 6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.
建议 交朋友 做……有困难 和……同甘共苦 需要 全心全意
第三步：由词扩句雏形现 1．知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉(宾语从句)
I am sorry to know _th_a_t _y_ou__ar_e_h_a_v_in_g_t_ro_u_b_l_e _in_m__a_ki_n_g_f_ri_e_nd_s_．
二、注意事项 1．开门见山，直入主题。在书信正文的开头找准话题的切入点， 自然而然地引出自己想要谈的主题。写信时要充分了解情况，有的放 矢，以提高书信的针对性。 2．给出希望对方采取或者终止某种行为的理由。在陈述理由的 过程中要换位思考，尽量为对方考虑。要用事实说话，以增强说服力。
3．语气要和缓，让对方考虑你的想法或者建议，以理服人是关 键，不能把自己的想法强加于人。
结尾段常用的句型： 1 ． I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/useful/helpful. 2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more details. 3．I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.
4．你要和朋友同甘共苦。
You should _s_h_ar_e_h_a_p_p_in_e_s_s_a_n_d_s_o_r_ro_w__w_i_th__y_o_u_r _fr_ie_n_d______．
5．患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。
A friend _i_n_n_e_ed__ is a__fr_ie_n_d_i_n_d_e_ed_____．
To begin with，why not be a friend first if you want to make
friends？In addition，wouldn't it be a good idea if you share happiness
and sorrow with your friend？Just as a saying goes，“A friend in need is a
2．用 Wouldn't it be a good idea if.改写句 4
_W__o_u_ld_n_'_t _it_b_e_a__g_o_od__id_e_a_i_f_y_o_u_s_h_a_re__h_ap_p_i_n_e_ss__an_d__so_r_r_o_w_w__it_h_ _y_o_u_r_fr_i_en_d_?__________________________________________
1．确定体裁：本文为_建__议__信_； 2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应用_第__二__人_称__； 3．确定时态：主要使用_一_般__现__在__时__。
二、构思 第一段：点出写信的目的； 第二段：正文列出所提的建议； 最后一段：写出写信人的希望。
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．_ti_p_/a_d_v_ic_e_/_su_g_g_e_s_ti_o_n_____ 2．_m_a_k_e_f_r_ie_n_d_s__ 3．_h_a_ve__tr_o_u_b_le_/_d_if_fi_c_u_lt_y_i_n_d_o_in_g_._.._______ 4．_s_h_ar_e_h_a_p_p_i_n_es_s_a_n_d_s_o_r_ro_w__w__it_h_..._____ 5．c_a_l_l _fo_r_/n_e_e_d____ 6．p_u_t_o_n_e_'s__h_ea_r_t _in_t_o______
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇 (注意使用 however，to begin with，in addition，last but not least 等关联词) ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________
2．如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种处境是很容易的。(be＋adj. ＋to do)
The situation __is_e_a_s_y_t_o_c_h_a_n_g_e___ if you take my advice.
3．要交朋友首先要做一个朋友。(主谓结构)
If you want to make friends，_y_o_u__sh_o_u_l_d_b_e_a__fr_ie_n_d_f_i_rs_t_______．
Unit 1 Friendship
Section Ⅴ Guided Writing
写作 技法 指导
[文体指导] 本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。这种题目要求 我们就有关问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。
一、基本框架 1．开头(beginning)——开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(state your idea)。 2．主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着 提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)。 3．结尾(ending)——呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion)。
【参考范文】 Dear Su Ru， I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends.However ， the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tips to help you.
6．友谊需要时间和投入。(主谓宾结构)
Friendship _c_a_ll_s_fo_r_/_ne_e_d_s_t_im__e_a_n_d_e_f_fo_r_t ________．
第四步：句式升级造亮点 1．用 why not 改写句 3
__W_h_y__n_o_t _b_e_a_f_ri_e_n_d_f_ir_s_t _if_y_o_u_w__a_n_t _to_m__a
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours，
Li Hua
3．用 just as a saying goes 来丰富句 5
J_u_s_t_a_s_a_s_a_y_in_g_g_o_e_s_，__“__A_f_r_ie_n_d_i_n_n_e_e_d_i_s_a_f_ri_e_n_d_i_n_d_ee_d_._”_____ ___________________________________________________
friend indeed.”Last but not least，it would be a good idea if you put your
heart into making friends.It is well-known to us all that friendship calls
for time and effort.
满分 佳作 构建
[写作任务] 假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请 根据下面提示给她写一封信。词数：100 左右。 1．要交朋友首先要做一个朋友； 2．要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友； 3．友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。
第一步：审题构思很关键 一、审题
4．给出合理建议，通过提建议让对方明确行动的方向，从而达 到写信的最终目的。
[亮点句式] 首段常用的句型： 1．I'm sorry you have trouble in... 2．I am writing to share some advice with you. 3．You have asked me for my advice about... 4．I am writing to express my views on/concerning... 5．You have asked for some advice concerning...and I will try to give you my suggestions.
提出建议时常用的句型： 1．I think it would be a good idea if... 2．In my opinion it would be wise to... 3．I suggest that you should... 4．In my opinion，you'd better... 5．I advise you to... 6．If I were you，I would... 7．Why not...？/Why don't you...? 8．How about...？/What about...?
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2019_2020学年高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤWriting课件新人教版必修1
③Turn to me whenever you feel puzzled，and I am more than willing to give you some more advice. 当你困惑的时候就来找我吧，我很乐意给你一些更多的建议。 ④Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions to help you. 这里有能帮助你的一些建议。
1．你建议的路线； 2．你的理由； 3．你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数 100 左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim， _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________
③Third(ly)，it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to music.By doing this，you will calm yourself down. 第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做， 你会使自己平静下来。 ④Last but not least，you should talk with her first. 最后但同样重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。
高中英语必修一Unit1《Friendship》教学课件
4.go through
5.set down
合计
参加;加入
love (with) 相爱;爱上
经历;经受
记下;放下;登记
6.get along/on with
与……相处;进展
基础自主梳理
be+形容词+介词
7.get/be tired
of
对……厌烦
其他
8.
on purpose 故意
9.
at
dusk 在黄昏时刻
night
face to face…
……这是我一年半以来第一次
目睹夜晚……
记公式(公式这样记)
仿句子(高考这样考)
It is/was the first
timethat+sb+have(has
)/had done sth. 某人第
一次做某事。
2.这将是你第二次帮我了。
It will be the second time
2. 表示“能力;力量”的名词荟萃
①power 能力;力量;权力 ②ability 能力 ③competence 能力;胜任
④energy 精力;能源 ⑤force 武力 ⑥strength 力量
基础自主梳理
3. dis-否定前缀词汇大荟萃
①disagree vi.不同意 ②disappear vi.消失
__________________that
I'm
him again
particularly interested in this
position.
基础自主梳理
背句型(课本这样讲)
2.… it was the first timein a
2019_2020学年高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤWriting——建议信课件新人教版必修1
3．我希望我的建议对你有帮助。(be of＋n.) I hope my tips will be helpful to you. → I hope my tips will be of help to you.
[妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】 Dear Wang Qiang， I know you are feeling upset these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively.Let me tell you my ideas about it. I notice some people around us are not good at communication，so you haven't got to be concerned about it too much.However，good communication can add to our chance of success.That is why I would like to offer you some tips on how to settle the problem.
结尾段常用的句型： 1．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/ useful/helpful. 2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more details. 3 ． I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 4．In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful. 5．I hope you will take my advice into account. 6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.
[妙笔成篇]
【参考范文】 Dear Wang Qiang， I know you are feeling upset these days because you are not able to communicate with others effectively.Let me tell you my ideas about it. I notice some people around us are not good at communication，so you haven't got to be concerned about it too much.However，good communication can add to our chance of success.That is why I would like to offer you some tips on how to settle the problem.
结尾段常用的句型： 1．I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/tips practical/ useful/helpful. 2．I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in more details. 3 ． I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 4．In the end，I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/helpful. 5．I hope you will take my advice into account. 6．I will be glad if you will consider my tips.
Unit1 Friendship写作课课件 2021-2022学年人教版高中英语必修一
野生动物的数量在不断减少的原因： 1.人们滥伐树木以修建房屋,导致一些动物没有了栖息地, 2.农民滥用农药,害死了一些动物 3.为了赚钱,人们滥杀一些珍稀野生动物.
行之有效的几点建议： 1.不要乱砍滥伐,要保护环境； 2.爱护动物,不去伤害他们； 3.建立更多的自然保护区
要求：不要逐句翻译.词数：120左右 参考词汇：农药：pesticide 自然保护区：natural reserve
（最底层的圆面包）
The 3-paragraph writing style for an advice letter:
1.Para.1：Why do you give advice? 2.Para. 2：Focusing on the question, you
give some persuasive advice properly.
give you some suggestions / advice / tips on ... • Here are some tips to help you.
Usually-used expressions:
Beginning： • I’m sorry to hear / learn that ... However, the
enjoy doing sth. Teenagers enjoy gossiping about others. I enjoy teaching class at class 20 and 21.
假如你是李华,你刚刚学过一篇关于野生动物的文章,于是你打算给某报社写一封信, 指出野生动物面临的危机,并提出你认为行之有效的几点建议,呼吁人们都来保护野生 动物.
ideas
to ask people their likes and dislikes ...
行之有效的几点建议： 1.不要乱砍滥伐,要保护环境； 2.爱护动物,不去伤害他们； 3.建立更多的自然保护区
要求：不要逐句翻译.词数：120左右 参考词汇：农药：pesticide 自然保护区：natural reserve
（最底层的圆面包）
The 3-paragraph writing style for an advice letter:
1.Para.1：Why do you give advice? 2.Para. 2：Focusing on the question, you
give some persuasive advice properly.
give you some suggestions / advice / tips on ... • Here are some tips to help you.
Usually-used expressions:
Beginning： • I’m sorry to hear / learn that ... However, the
enjoy doing sth. Teenagers enjoy gossiping about others. I enjoy teaching class at class 20 and 21.
假如你是李华,你刚刚学过一篇关于野生动物的文章,于是你打算给某报社写一封信, 指出野生动物面临的危机,并提出你认为行之有效的几点建议,呼吁人们都来保护野生 动物.
ideas
to ask people their likes and dislikes ...
2019_2020学年高中英语Unit1FriendshipSectionⅤWriting课件新人教版必修1
9． best
10. built
4. at 8.to decorate
篇章导读：本文是一篇说明文，狮子对中国人来说是
2．主体部分常用表达 ①First(ly), why not join a club? If you do this, you can make friends. 首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的 话，就会交到朋友。 ②Second (ly), you should/can try to talk with others. Then/That way, you will feel better. 其次，你应该/可以试着与人交谈。那么/这样，你会感 觉好点。
5．共患难的朋友才是真正的朋友。 A friend in need is a friend indeed. →Just as a saying goes, “a friend in need is a friend indeed”．(升级句)
连句成篇 Dear Su Ru，
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
[精彩范文]
The lion is a special animal to Chinese people. A pair of stone lions, a male and a female, are 1 (common) seen in front of the gates of Chinese traditional buildings.
人教版高中英语必修一《Friendship》课件
honest, friendly, helpful, kind, brave, open-minded, generous, patient, goodtempered(好脾气的）, trustworthy, careful, full of love, caring, responsible, interesting, easygoing（易相处的）, warm-hearted, selfless, intelligent, dedicated（奉献的）
Search and collect the sayings about friendship
Playing happily together
Getting on quite well with each other
Taking good care of each other or getting ready to help each other
Cooperating and improving together
selfish（自私的）, dishonest, bad-tempered, mean（吝啬的）, impatient, narrow-minded, noisy, lazy, gossipy(爱说闲话的）…
8-12 points: You are a good friend but you sometimes let your friendship become too important, or you fail to show enough concern for your friend’s needs and feelings. Try to strike a balance between your friend’s needs and your own responsibilities.
Search and collect the sayings about friendship
Playing happily together
Getting on quite well with each other
Taking good care of each other or getting ready to help each other
Cooperating and improving together
selfish（自私的）, dishonest, bad-tempered, mean（吝啬的）, impatient, narrow-minded, noisy, lazy, gossipy(爱说闲话的）…
8-12 points: You are a good friend but you sometimes let your friendship become too important, or you fail to show enough concern for your friend’s needs and feelings. Try to strike a balance between your friend’s needs and your own responsibilities.
高中英语人教版必修一《Unit 1 Friendship》课件
re most special and difficult to find .True friends are ready to share happiness and sadness and exchange views honestly. You can consider yourself very lucky if you have one true friend. This friend is eager to help you whenever necessary. He or she knows you would do the same for them. You and your true friend have good understanding of each other. True friends support you, take your side, and build up your confidence.
人教版 英语 高中 必修一
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人教版 英语 高中 必修一
Unit 1 Friendship
教学课件
• How to choose a good friend
• Friends play a very important part in everyone's life. Friendship usually develops during childhood. New friends are made when you progress through school. Those friends that you make as a student can usually last long. Friends influence your development, maturity and sense of responsibility.
人教版 英语 高中 必修一
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教学课件
人教版 英语 高中 必修一
Unit 1 Friendship
教学课件
• How to choose a good friend
• Friends play a very important part in everyone's life. Friendship usually develops during childhood. New friends are made when you progress through school. Those friends that you make as a student can usually last long. Friends influence your development, maturity and sense of responsibility.
2019_2020学年高中英语unit1friendshipsectionⅤwriting_建议信课件新人教版必修1
(二)句式升级 升级一：用并列连词 so 连接 1、2 两句 I notice some people around me are also not good at communication, so you don't have got to be concerned about it too much. 升级二：用 which 引导的非限制性定语从句连接 3、4 两句 Good communication is important for us to create a pleasant relationship with others，which can add to our chance of success.
4．它能增加成功的机会。 It can add to our chance of success .
5．与别人交谈，要坦率、真诚。 Be direct and honest to those you talk to.
6．他们能很容易地理解你。 They can understand you easily.
feel upset communicate with others be concerned about add to some tips/advice on ...
settle the problem express oneself exchange ideas with ...
第二步 巧用单元句型、语法 (一)完成句子 1．我注意到我周围的人也不擅长交流。
积“黄金”词句，写高分文章 一、常用的开头语 1．I know you are now having trouble communicating with others,
and you may often feel lonely. 我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到 孤独。 2．I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on ... 很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。 3．Here are some tips to help you./Here are a few suggestions. 这里有帮助你的一些建议。 4．I think you can make it if you follow the advice below. 如果你听从以下建议，我认为你会做到的。
Unit1FriendshipP1课件-2020-2021学年人教版高一英语必修一
new life. Correctly speaking, I 3._su_f_f_er_ed (遭受) a lot at first. 4.I_n_o_r_d_e_r_to(为了)get a good mark, I got up very early to study.
But for the first exam, all my scores 5._a_d__d_u_p__t_o_ (加起来总计) 500, which really 6._u_p_s_e_t_(使心烦) me. My 7.partners(伙伴们) were 8. concerned (担心) about me while my parents tried to comfort me, but I 9.ignored(不理)
them. My head teacher advised me to keep myself 10._ca_l_m__ (镇静). 11._W__i_th___ her help, I listed my strengths and weaknesses, and
managed to make a new plan.
✓ Pay attention to your handwriting.
1. We should be_c_o_n_c_e_r_n_ed__ about issues c_o_n_c_e_r_n_in_g_the
protection of the environment, which should be one of our top__c_o_n_c_e_r_n_s__ . (concern)
coffee.
8. The two __G__er_m__a_n_s__claimed to be born in __G_e_r_m_a_n_y__, and that they knew no other language but__G__e_rm__a_n___.( German)
But for the first exam, all my scores 5._a_d__d_u_p__t_o_ (加起来总计) 500, which really 6._u_p_s_e_t_(使心烦) me. My 7.partners(伙伴们) were 8. concerned (担心) about me while my parents tried to comfort me, but I 9.ignored(不理)
them. My head teacher advised me to keep myself 10._ca_l_m__ (镇静). 11._W__i_th___ her help, I listed my strengths and weaknesses, and
managed to make a new plan.
✓ Pay attention to your handwriting.
1. We should be_c_o_n_c_e_r_n_ed__ about issues c_o_n_c_e_r_n_in_g_the
protection of the environment, which should be one of our top__c_o_n_c_e_r_n_s__ . (concern)
coffee.
8. The two __G__er_m__a_n_s__claimed to be born in __G_e_r_m_a_n_y__, and that they knew no other language but__G__e_rm__a_n___.( German)
2020年高中英语 新人教版必修第一册 Welcome Unit SectionⅤWriting_如何写自我介绍 课件
写自我介绍时，首先应写出自己的姓名、年龄、所在的学校、 班级等基本信息；然后介绍你最想让别人知道的关于你的信息，比如 自己的爱好、最喜欢的科目、喜欢的食物和不喜欢的食物以及家庭情 况等；最后对以上内容进行总结或表达自己的美好愿望等。
英语
写自我介绍时能表达出自己的真实情况，给他人呈现出一个真 实的自我，无须过多华丽的辞藻。写作时应注意连词的使用，表达应 符合英语习惯，符合语法结构。
英语
4．家庭：There are... (number) people in my family. They are.../My family has... (number) people./I live with my.../I am the only child./I don't have any siblings (兄弟姐妹)．/I have... (number) brother(s) and... (number) sister(s)．
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英语
[写作模板] My name is ________. I come from a beautiful city named ________. I like making friends with others, doing exercise and reading. I am open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of history. In my spare time, I like ________， especially ________. Besides, I have a good knowledge of ________. I am able to ________ well. I am skillful at ________. I am a football fan for years. The Italian team is my favorite. I am proud to study with everyone in my class for the coming years. My greatest dream is ________. To make my dream come true, I must ________.
英语
写自我介绍时能表达出自己的真实情况，给他人呈现出一个真 实的自我，无须过多华丽的辞藻。写作时应注意连词的使用，表达应 符合英语习惯，符合语法结构。
英语
4．家庭：There are... (number) people in my family. They are.../My family has... (number) people./I live with my.../I am the only child./I don't have any siblings (兄弟姐妹)．/I have... (number) brother(s) and... (number) sister(s)．
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[写作模板] My name is ________. I come from a beautiful city named ________. I like making friends with others, doing exercise and reading. I am open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of history. In my spare time, I like ________， especially ________. Besides, I have a good knowledge of ________. I am able to ________ well. I am skillful at ________. I am a football fan for years. The Italian team is my favorite. I am proud to study with everyone in my class for the coming years. My greatest dream is ________. To make my dream come true, I must ________.