大学英语四级写作【突讲义破英语考试资料】
四级基础写作讲义
四级基础写作写作流程:破题,选词,组句,成段,谋篇题目格式练:1.my view on fake commodities2. on-campus marriage3. should the university campus be open to tourists?4.a letter in reply to a friend选词(一)选词要求✧准确贴切,避免重复✧切忌生造✧语体单一练习:1.客人们在共进晚餐后都放松下来,也随便多了。
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A Her answer was short but accurate.B Her answer was short but hit the nail on the head.(二)常见用词错误✧拼写unversity eviroment concluson argument phanomenonsugestion government polution technology✧赘词1)I will return back as soon as possible.2)No one wants to repeat it again.3)Everyone wants to lead a rich and wealthy life✧搭配Eg. crowded traffic expensive pricestudy/learn knowledge small opportunity✧误用Eg. industrial VS industrious effect VS affectecnomic VS economical continuous VS continualefficient VS effective considerate VS considerable(三)选词标准✧具体表抽象✧名词中心论✧应急措施a. 试用笼统词b. 试用解释性语句练习:1.He is dumb.2.He refused.3.I have never seen such a stubborn person.(四)用词替换&升级(五)题材语料库四级选题特点:1.校园热点话题—在校生活,学习,实践,人生观等2.普通市民关心话题—环境,疾病与健康,社会弊端,休闲娱乐等附一:升级词汇替换about—approximatelyalways—invariablyamount—quantityas a result—consequentlyable—capable, in a(ny)positionall the time--continually, continuously, constantlya lot of-- considerable, substantial, an abundance of(opportunities, sources etc.) basically--essentially, in essence, substantiallybuy—purchaselet, allow--permitbe amount to—constitutebecome smaller--be on the decline ,decrease, decline, diminishbecome worse--deterioratebefore--prior tobegin--commencebetter--superiorbe(come/get) used to --be(come/get) accustomed tobig--major, significant, substantialby means of—by virtue ofcarry out--conduct, execute, implementchange--alter, alteration, modify, modification communication—exchange, interactioncommon—universalcompetitor—rival,opponentconsider—allow for, take into considerationdeal with-- tackledo--conductdo not--fail toend--conclusion(to bring sth. to a conclusion)enough-- sufficient, adequate(grounds, evidence, preparation, resources etc) every year—annuallyexplain—account forfairly--comparatively, moderatelyfamous-- distinguishedfind out-- discover(the cause of, factors behind sth etc)have-- be equipped with, possesshelp--accommodateif--in the event of, in case(of)important—crucial,essential,necessary,vital,indispensable,significantin the end--eventually, ultimatelyin the future—in the days aheadlater--subsequent(ly)less and less--decreasing(ly)keep(doing)-- persist inlong--extensive(coverage, passages, scope)explore-- investigate(possibility),observe(behaviour)more and more--increasinglymuch--considerably, substantiallyneed--demand, requirenow--at present, for the time being, at this momentnowadays-- currentlyoften--frequent(ly)opinion--perspectivequick(ly)--rapid(ly),prompt(ly)realize--be aware ofremember—bear in mind thatright--appropriate, correct, properset up--establish(a newstate,a government,abusiness),sharp--abrupt, drastic(rise and falls)show—demonstrate,betrayside--aspect(of a problem)small--minor/insignificant (problems, differences etc)stop-- ceasesuitable--proper, appropriatetherefore--consequentlything--element, aspect, object, factor, considerationthink—assume, believe,consider, deem, emphasize,hold, maintain,reckon,supporttoo--excessively, undulytoo many/ too much --excessive(ly)try –endeavor , striveunderstand--appreciatevery--extremely, immensely, intensely附二:题材语料库永恒话题:经济增长,科技进步,人民生活水平提高极力推荐:英语学习1.学习:素质/应试/终身教育,必修/选修课,学位,留学,文化交流,启发性2.就业:人才市场,面试,工作经验,创业,房地产3.品质:谦虚,幽默,自信,随和,勤奋,忠诚,创造性,道德,智慧,耐心,毅力4.团队:合作,竞争,团队精神,求同存异5.健康:身体,心理,压力,情绪,乐/悲观,积/消极6.社会:政府,改革政策,爱国,与时俱进,抗震救灾,弱势群体,和谐,发展,繁荣,革新7.环境:环保,全球变暖,拼车,生存8.经济:金融危机,富裕,贫穷,商业,股市,利润9.科技:电子,手机,触屏10.休闲:娱乐,大片,健身,减肥,脱口秀组句⏹基本句型之“简单句”1.主谓结构Eg I gazed./ He lies. / I came, I saw, I conquered.Eg Our existence can only be proved by our sufferings.Lover departs, future dims, exam tortues, life pains.But all this sadness proves one thing: we are still alive.To everybody, in sad days, happiness is everywhere, for we have nothing to lose.2.主系表结构Eg “I think, therefore I am.”—DescartesParody “I pod, therefore I am.”—ipodEg “ Knowledge is power.”– Francis Bacon3. 主谓宾结构Eg “Change begets change.”—Charles Dickens4. 主谓宾补结构Eg I find you pretty.5. 主谓双宾A job interview offers the employers a lot of advantages.⏹组句基本要求a 成分完整性1. While waiting for my turn brought me to nervousness.2. Outlines are especially helpful if you want to see the details explain or develop the main idea,and to put these parts into a whole.(如果你想了解这些细节怎样来解释或拓展主要观点,并想把这些细节组合成一个整体,写好提纲事非常有帮助的)3. Being the yougest child, mother hates to see me leave home.b 成分一致性1. They want to keep freshmen from having a car on campus.2. The lecturer leaves time for the audience to ask them questions.3. Those who are imprisoned find it hard to find a job after they have been released.⏹扩展句子方法1.增添法2.并列法a 分句Ⅰ,并列词+分句Ⅱb 分句Ⅰ;并列副词,+分句Ⅱ✧并列连词(7个):for, and, nor, but,or, yet, so✧并列副词:furthermore, besides, moreover, also, however, nonetheless, nevertheless,still, otherwise, therefore, consequently, thus, accordingly, hence等3.排比结构Eg It is important for government leaders to think logically, to analyse carefully, and to make decisions practically.Eg Studies serve for delight, for ornament,and for ability.-- Francis BaconEg …and that the government of the people,by the people, and for the people, shall not perish from the earth.—Abraham Lincoln4.从属法✧名词性从句✧定语从句✧状语从句练:大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪得工作事不可能的。
专四写作冲刺讲义
专业英语四级写作冲刺讲义第一部分:专业英语四级写作题型1)旧题:Direction-Write2)新题:Read-Summarize-CommentRead carefully the following except on term-time holiday arguments in the U.K. and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:•summarize the main message of the except, and then•comment on whether parents should take children out of school for holiday during term time in order to save money.第二部分:不变1)题材●环保、社会经济发展、诚信、文化●教育择业、人生哲理(价值观)、时尚●爱心和伦理、健康、网络电讯2)核心内容(开篇点题-关联词-核心例证)第三部分:变●第一段●做题流程第四部分:做题流程1)阅读:首尾、转折、否定2)归纳主旨、看出写作题材3)第一段:模板+主题词●不能没有模板(原创的危险性)●也不能只背模板句●模板和文章指向内容相融合4)第二段:提供相应例证对于主题进行支持5)第三段:呼应第一段第五部分:怎么套第一段1)第一句话:5-8秒2)第二句话:抓住议论文的特点,用模板句过渡3)总结文章的主题,形成填空The essay mainly discusses the issue of a fully automatic automobile in Mountain View, California. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and an in-depth analysis, the author states that a driverless car can change the traditional idea that human wisdom can be superior to the machines, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.54 words4)如何填空●定名词,不要乱换●换动词,换(消)形容词●换句型和语序第六部分:定住第一段,才能写好第二段1)如何进行头脑风暴物质金钱责任爱心作息娱乐健康方便快捷沟通安全时尚素质成功违法文化发展环保趋势管制2)背诵顺序●先宏观题材●再微观题材●注意人生哲理和教育择业(和八级考试类似)第七部分:先宏观、再微观1)先宏观参考范文The essay above mainly discusses the advantages (benefits) and disadvantages (drawbacks) of tourism development. By providing concrete facts, complete statistics and in-depth analysis, the author holds that tourism industry is of great importance (indispensable) for a nation under rapid economic growth. In this process, the importance of environmental protection cannot be ignored, as can be seen in the following paragraphs.There’s no denying the fact that (Evidently/Beyond doubt/Undeniably,) there exist some problems such as air quality degradation and water pollution. The most serious ones even include the loss of local ecological balance (a terrorist attack), while the minor ones are the commuting inconvenience to the local residents. This statement does have a grain of truth at the first glimpse. But it must be pointed out that the social and economic return of tourism is attractive. For one thing, in the process of developing this industry, a tourist city can not only pool its various resources, but also adjust its industrial structure. In this way, infrastructure construction can be greatly strengthened, hence providing a solid basis to the sustaining urban growth. For another thing, tourism growth will provide new incentive to the local economy, because its boom often becomes a source of government revenue as well as a provider of job opportunities. To conclude, the influence of encouraging tourism industry is far reaching, in terms of social development and economic reward (international image).To sum up, it is essential that a country provide mechanism for the development of tourism industry. To bring its negative influence under control, the government department can make plans for the environmental conservation. In this way, a tourist city can impress the outside world with its new image: a place with beautiful scenes, meanwhile, with a high level of civilization.译文:上面的文章主要讨论的是,旅游业发展的优势(优点)和不利(不足)。
20XX年6月英语四六级考试写作讲义精选(五)
20XX年6月英语四六级考试写作讲义精选(五)作文的出题方式有:命题作文,看图画或图表作文,根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,给出关键词作文等,为了提高广大考生写作能力,整理了以下写作讲义:第一节19. Car Accidents Declining in Walton CityAccording to the graph, the rise and fall of the rate of car accidents in Walton City varies withthe seasons. From January to March last year it increased by 45%, from March to June it dropped by about half the previous rate; and from June to August there was a steep rise of 50%. After that, however, there was a steady decrease, and this makes us optimistic that caraccidents are declining in Walton City.注:rise 升;fall 降;drop 掉下来;decline 下降;soar v 大幅度上升rocket v 大幅度上升;previous 以前的,前面的;steep 大幅度的(相当于sharp) steady 稳定的,逐步的;At the same time 同时图表题的写作思路:1、描述变化2、说明原因3、总结20XX年6月Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Changes of the Ownership of Houses.[WTBZ] You should write a t least 150 words, and base your composition on the chart and outline (given in Chinese) below:1.请描述图表中房屋产权的变化。
大学英语四级写作真题精讲
四级写作真题精讲讲义并非老师授课的逐字稿,难免有错漏,如有不符,请以课程讲解为主,有任何疑问可以到知识堂进行提问四级写作真题精讲图画作文:教育文化类:教育(读书): (2013年6月第一套)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of reading literature. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.第一段:As is symbolically portrayed in the cartoon, when a teacher assigns her student to read aliterature book, she tells him to think of it as a long text-message. It reminds me of the significance of reading literature while most of the people are spending much more time reading text-messages than literary works.第二段:Since reading literature can not only broaden our horizon but also enrich our mind, it isimperative for us to read literature. To be specific, reading classic works is a real eye-opener, from which we can acquire theoretical knowledge of different historical events and cultural traditions. In addition, the moral outlooks and views of life revealed in great works offer great nourishment and contribute to our growth and wisdom.第三段:To demonstrate, whenever I am confronted with obstacles, I will reflect on the books Ihave read, imagining what the heroes would do if they were in my situation. Then normally I will get the power and overcome any difficulties. To conclude, reading literature regularly is crucial to a more colorful and wiser life. (176 words)漫画中象征性的表明,当老师在布置文学作品阅读任务时,她告诉学生将它当作长篇手机短信对待。
四级写作辅导讲义
四级写作辅导讲义赵鹤兰写作是四级考试的最后一项,用来检验学生综合运用英语的能力,其中包括词汇、语法层面的语言技巧以及篇章结构方面的写作技巧。
一、测试内容及形式这部分考试采用主观试题,要求考生在35分钟内,根据所给题目、提纲或图表、数据等,写一篇200个单词左右的作文。
作文要求中给出导语及作文提纲,或者是命题作文,或者是考生自主命题作文。
作文题材与学生的学习或日常生活密切相关,与时代相符。
二、测试要求《高校英语专业四八级考试大纲》规定如下:1.能根据所给题目及要求撰写各类体裁的文章,文章长度约200个单词;2.能做到内容充实、语言通顺、用词恰当、表达得体。
三、评分标准四级考试作文评分采用整体评分法(holistic scoring),要求阅卷者按照对文章的总体印象打分。
四、应试技巧1.审题考生审题时要正确地把握文章体裁、题目含义、写作范围和要求、表达方法。
通过对题目信息的深入了解,考生就可以锁定所要写的内容,利用写作技巧,开拓自己的思维。
考试时的审题只能是几分钟,这是一个快速的思考过程。
但是这几分钟的思考往往决定后面几十分钟的写作,所以,作为写作中至关重要的环节,考生一定要慎重审题。
2.构思考生应该构思整篇文章的框架:#第一段提出观点:提出观点要明确,切忌模棱两可,可以用较经典的复合句提出自己的观点。
#第二段阐述论据:可以从不同方面论述自己的观点。
#第三段自然得出结论,进行总结:要用精辟的语言得出结论,加深读者对本文论点的印象。
3.段落写作1)段落的展开○1引言段落提出问题时,可以用开门见山的方式,或用提问或引语的方式引出观点,还可用驳论的方式先提出错误的观点,在亮出自己的观点。
但是要注意,引言段的写作要简洁、高效,使读者能很快抓住你的思维,切忌繁琐冗长,让人不知所云。
○2正文段的写作要注意其中的结构问题,要按照一定顺序、有条理地展开。
具体地说,就是按照重要性、时间性,或者按照所涉及的话题的顺序,先用一句主题句表述所要阐明的要点,然后列出支持主题句的证据。
大学英语四级写作专项突破
大学英语四级写作专项突破Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid toSay“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your position on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的害处[]Don’t Be Afraid to Say “No”Sometimes we have to say “No” to others when they ask us for help. Why? One situation may be that we are not capable of doing the things they ask us to do. The other situation may be that we are unwilling to do what they ask us to do, because their requests may be unreasonable or even illegal. On both oasions we should say directly to them: “No”.But the case is not always the same in our daily life. Some people are afraid to say “No” when they should say so. On the one hand, they are afraid of losing their faces. On the other hand they don’t want to hurt others, such as their family members, relatives, friends or colleagues.To say “Yes” when you should say “No” will eventually do you some harm. If you say “Yes” but fail tohelp them in the end because of lack of the ability, they may think you are not worthy of trust. If you help them do something bad or illegal, you will be punished for what you have done. So, don’t be afraid to say “No” if necessary.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutesto write a position on the topic: Reading selectively or extensively? You should write at least 100 words, and base your position on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的看法[范文]Reading Selectively Or Extensively?Reading selectively or extensively? What is your choice? Perhaps each of us has our choice.Some people think we should read selectively, for there are so many books for us to read. Thousands of new booksare published every day. How can we cover all these booksin our limited time? Besides, not all the books are worth reading.Some people, on the contrary, choose to read extensively. They think that reading extensively can broaden their horizons. Through reading extensively theycan learn something about their ancestors; through reading extensively they can get insight of great men.Readingextensively can also enable us to adapt to the fast developing society. Because we are living in a knowledge瞖xploding society, if we don’t read extensively, we can’t get enough information about the modern world, and wecan’t keep pace with the society.In my opinion, we should read both selectively and extensively. By reading extensively, we can enrich our knowledge of aspects. By reading selectively, we can focus on and learn well the academic knowledge we’ll need in our future work.Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a position on the topic How I Finance My College Education? You should write at least 100 words, and base your position on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1. 上大学的费用可以通过多种途径解决2. 哪种途径适合我(说明理由)[范文]How I Finance My College Education?Every year, thousands of young men enter universities and colleges. It has been a problem for the students and their families how to finance their college education. In fact, the problem can be dealt with in many ways. The most mon way is to get all the money from the parents.If their parents can’t produce the tuition and the fees, studentscan apply a loan from the bank. There is still another way. Students can finance their education by doing some part瞭ime jobs in their spare time.As for me, my parents can pay the greater part of the tuition and fees for me. So, I won’t have a heavyfinancial burden, and I can put all my heart into study. I would like to pay the rest by doing a part瞭ime job. Although my parents are able to pay all the tuition and fees for me, I just want to know more about the society by my own working experience. Therefore, I choose this way to finance my college education.。
大学英语四级讲义--词汇作文
第一部分:分类词性,突破语法一、分类句中词性,突破相关语法动词部分1、谓语动词1)关于时态A、一般现在时代替一般将来时:a. 在时间状语从句、条件状语从句或让步状语从句中e.g. Even if she doesn ' t come this Saturday, I ' ll go fishing by myself.b. 少数表示动作起止的动词有时也可用一般现在时代替一般将来时,表示一个按规定、计划或安排要求发生的动作。
e.g. The plane for Beijing takes off at 10:30 a.m..B、在时间、条件或让步状语从句中:a. 用一般过去时代替过去将来时e.g. He said he would not go out if it rained.b. 用现在完成时代替将来完成时,强调从句的动作先于主句的动作。
e.g. Don ' t get off the bus until it has stopped.C、在下列句型中常用一般现在时:a. 用现在时代替现在进行时。
e.g. There he comes! Here comes the bus!b. It is + (多久的时间)+ since…的句型可用is代替现在完成时:e.g. It is five years since I moved here.D 、现在完成时:a. 现在完成时表示动作过去已经完成,但对现在仍有影响,常与for 或since 短语连用。
e.g. He has been in China since his graduation (for a decade).b. 由终止性动词等构成的完成时不能与for 或since 引起的时间状语连用。
但终止性动词等构成的完成时的否定式却可以和for 或since 引导的时间状语连用。
e.g. I haven ' t seen him for three years.c. 现在完成时可用在表示时间或条件的状语从句中,表示将来某时间将已完成的动作。
四级写作全方位讲解啊有例句模板历年的作文范例ppt课件
Sample writing
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health 1. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的益处。 2. 分析体育锻炼给我们带来的坏处。 3. 给出如何参加体育锻炼的建议。
Reference model
The Effects of Exercise on Our Health
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which are quite misleading. Finally, new technical inventions do not necessarily lead to progress in learning. Diligence is always the decisive factor, because “There is no royal road to learning”.
• The biggest advantage of …. What’s more….
• However, the negative effects are obvious. To begin with, …. In the second place,…. Finally,….
• Up until now, we can see it clearly that…. The key lies in the user--- so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects.
1) As is known to all, exercise does bring a lot of benefits to our health. 2) First, it can greatly strengthen our hearts, lungs, bones and muscles, thereby changing our whole health for the better. 3) Besides, it can make our brains better able to react to what is going on around us. 4) And best of all, it can help us breed optimism about our tough life.
大学英语四级考试写作真题+范文(2019-2022)
大学英语四级(作文)历年考题汇总第三段:总结全文,提出解决办法。
解决问题。
【范文1】Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of the most serious problems is the school health system.More students are suffering from mental illness which appeals to the reflection on school clinic.A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon.One of the most common factor is the insufficient attention paid to mental health problem.A considerable number of emphasis usually focus on disease prevention and contagion, which are heavily weighted in favor of physical illness; however, mental problems are overlooked regarding the more obvious physical sickness. Another contributing cause is the reduced budgets and shortages of physicians and nurses distributed to the school health system. A close examination reveals that nurses in school clinics reportedly performed a narrow range of services than in public clinics.Thus, students'health cannot be fully taken care of, andprofessional medical resources cannot bewell-matched.In view of the seriousness of the problem above mentioned, effective measures should be taken. First and foremost,the government should move more public budgets to school clinics. What's more, people should value and pay prompt attention to teenagers' mental problems. After all,it is necessary to create a healthy and harmonious environment for the young generations.(随着社会的发展,越来越多的问题被引起我们的注意,其中最严重的问题之一是学校卫生系统。
英语四级备考资料作文
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